Bard39 Experienced Joined Aug 8, 2011 Posts 53 Aug 10, 2011 #1 I'm new to all this and I'd like feedback so i can improve. Only one story so far but i wan't to do more so all help would be appreciated!
I'm new to all this and I'd like feedback so i can improve. Only one story so far but i wan't to do more so all help would be appreciated!
PennLady Literotica Guru Joined Mar 26, 2009 Posts 9,413 Aug 10, 2011 #2 Bard39 said: I'm new to all this and I'd like feedback so i can improve. Only one story so far but i wan't to do more so all help would be appreciated! Click to expand... Best bet is to provide a link to the story, and specify what kind of feedback you'd like. Grammar? Plot? Characters?
Bard39 said: I'm new to all this and I'd like feedback so i can improve. Only one story so far but i wan't to do more so all help would be appreciated! Click to expand... Best bet is to provide a link to the story, and specify what kind of feedback you'd like. Grammar? Plot? Characters?
