LindsayRae
Fuck Off
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Hi there! Welcome.
I am working on an incest series involving a father and (eventually) his three of-age daughters. The story is slowly unfolding as the first three chapters are about the oldest daughter, alone. However, the installments seem to be under 9,000 words, each, so far.
I am writing this in a "series of baby cliffhangers" and I wish to keep it that way. If it rubs you wrong, no offense, but oh well. If readers do not like it, I'll learn soon enough. However, it is still how I wish to write it.
The story jumps with * * * marking the differences.
So, if you are not squeamish around incest and virginity taking, and evenually anal, and would like to eventually edit 5 + chapters (only two are finished right now) please reply here or PM me.
I'm looking for checks on grammatical and syntax errors. I do run a spell check on my Open Office word processor, however my downfall is oftentimes TYPOS that can create other real words! I do not mind opinions or suggestions towards the flow of the story or "eventual" plot, however, like I said there's plenty that I just will not change as I wish to see if that "style" will be "accepted" by readers!
Thank you for taking the time to read this thread!
I am writing this in a "series of baby cliffhangers" and I wish to keep it that way. If it rubs you wrong, no offense, but oh well. If readers do not like it, I'll learn soon enough. However, it is still how I wish to write it.
The story jumps with * * * marking the differences.
So, if you are not squeamish around incest and virginity taking, and evenually anal, and would like to eventually edit 5 + chapters (only two are finished right now) please reply here or PM me.
I'm looking for checks on grammatical and syntax errors. I do run a spell check on my Open Office word processor, however my downfall is oftentimes TYPOS that can create other real words! I do not mind opinions or suggestions towards the flow of the story or "eventual" plot, however, like I said there's plenty that I just will not change as I wish to see if that "style" will be "accepted" by readers!
Thank you for taking the time to read this thread!