Shy, wondering what you think?

[youngleo]

I wish I was there to was your back.

 

[thesweetsweetness]

Very nice

oh i would love to! would love to wash more than your back!

I'd wash anything you'd like

I wish I was there to was your back.

So nice of everyone to help, perhaps we need to bring back the roman bath houses?

 

[thesweetsweetness]

My first story

My first story at Literotica has been approved and published.

http://www.literotica.com/s/his-gift-2

 

[boo56]

My first story at Literotica has been approved and published.

http://www.literotica.com/s/his-gift-2

Good for you! We'll have to take a look.

 

[youngdom81]

My first story at Literotica has been approved and published.

http://www.literotica.com/s/his-gift-2

Awesome first story!

 

[countrysinger1]

Congratulations!

My first story at Literotica has been approved and published.

http://www.literotica.com/s/his-gift-2

I'll give it a read later today. Gotta run toa n appointment in a few. Just a quick stop to gawk at naked lady parts to make sure I stay focused.

 

[thesweetsweetness]

fyi

.......

 

[thesweetsweetness]

Good for you! We'll have to take a look.

Hope you enjoy it.

Awesome first story!

Thank you!

I'll give it a read later today. Gotta run toa n appointment in a few. Just a quick stop to gawk at naked lady parts to make sure I stay focused.

Good deal, don't want to lose sight of the important things..lol.

 

[the_apocalypse]

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=762361

I opened a thread for my story and to discuss non-consent and rape as a gift. Curious as to what others think and feel on the subject.

Just read your first story and I left you a comment as I really liked it. Hopefully you continue to write and post

 

[thesweetsweetness]

Just read your first story and I left you a comment as I really liked it. Hopefully you continue to write and post

Thank you apocalypse, I see your comment, much appreciated. I do have some other story ideas I would like to write out someday.

 

[the_apocalypse]

Thank you apocalypse, I see your comment, much appreciated. I do have some other story ideas I would like to write out someday.

The sooner the better is all I can say. You definitely have the talent

 

[boo56]

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=762361

I opened a thread for my story and to discuss non-consent and rape as a gift. Curious as to what others think and feel on the subject.

Sweetness:

It is completely, politically incorrect. It is and should be illegal just about everywhere. And, as piece of erotic fiction it is very much a cock-stiffener, which I trust was the intent.

I would not try this at home, or even at a hotel on the other side of my real home town, but it makes a good read for those with a taste for the forbidden. You have a talent for erotic writing. Good work.

 

[thesweetsweetness]

The sooner the better is all I can say. You definitely have the talent

Sweetness:

It is completely, politically incorrect. It is and should be illegal just about everywhere. And, as piece of erotic fiction it is very much a cock-stiffener, which I trust was the intent.

I would not try this at home, or even at a hotel on the other side of my real home town, but it makes a good read for those with a taste for the forbidden. You have a talent for erotic writing. Good work.

Thank you both, apocalypse and boo. I must confess I have only ever read a handful of erotica stories. I was not sure if I could even do it myself and if I did, I didn't know if it would be any good. I am pleased with it, and I am loving the feedback I have received thus far.

 

[thesweetsweetness]

Because I care...

"A study supposedly published in the New England Journal of Medicine said that staring at women's breasts for just 10 minutes a day can improve a man's health and add four to five years to his life. The German study was carried out by a certain Dr. Karyn Weatherby who said that ogling at busty beauties is equivalent to a 30-minute aerobics workout. She said this gets the heart pumping and improves blood circulation, cutting the risk of stroke and heart attack by half!"

-http://www.buzzle.com/articles/bizarre-breast-facts.html

 

[krsmaddriver1420]

.....

 

[touristen]

what if we stare on them for...hmm..let's say 30 minutes, instead of 10?

 

[Surfin]

"A study supposedly published in the New England Journal of Medicine said that staring at women's breasts for just 10 minutes a day can improve a man's health and add four to five years to his life. The German study was carried out by a certain Dr. Karyn Weatherby who said that ogling at busty beauties is equivalent to a 30-minute aerobics workout. She said this gets the heart pumping and improves blood circulation, cutting the risk of stroke and heart attack by half!"

-http://www.buzzle.com/articles/bizarre-breast-facts.html

what happens if we kiss them for 10 minutes a day

that is a fricken marvellous cleavage, I'm sure I have something I'd love to slip in between there, just can't think what

 

[thesweetsweetness]

Well I could look at your sexy breast for ten minutes a day.

Thank you.

what if we stare on them for...hmm..let's say 30 minutes, instead of 10?

If you think 30 minutes would be better...

what happens if we kiss them for 10 minutes a day

that is a fricken marvellous cleavage, I'm sure I have something I'd love to slip in between there, just can't think what

Now, kissing and slipping something between my breasts is where I believe my health benefits of multiple orgasms would come into play.

 

[Surfin]

Now, kissing and slipping something between my breasts is where I believe my health benefits of multiple orgasms would come into play.

if I got my hands on you, you'd be the healthiest you'd ever been , if a little sticky

 

[krsmaddriver1420]

.....

 

[the_apocalypse]

"A study supposedly published in the New England Journal of Medicine said that staring at women's breasts for just 10 minutes a day can improve a man's health and add four to five years to his life. The German study was carried out by a certain Dr. Karyn Weatherby who said that ogling at busty beauties is equivalent to a 30-minute aerobics workout. She said this gets the heart pumping and improves blood circulation, cutting the risk of stroke and heart attack by half!"

-http://www.buzzle.com/articles/bizarre-breast-facts.html

fantastic boobs and nipples

 

[thesweetsweetness]

if I got my hands on you, you'd be the healthiest you'd ever been , if a little sticky

LOL!!

 

[Surfin]

LOL!!

just think of me as your personal trainer, with benefits

good story btw, naughty girl

 

[backyardbbq]

Great tits. There is now way I could only look at those for 10 minutes a day!!

 

[Archangel1978]

My first story at Literotica has been approved and published.

http://www.literotica.com/s/his-gift-2

Congrats! I'll take a gander and let ya know.