Help With the Title of the Next Story in my Series (Incest)

[adorablebaseballgirl]

First off, it's an incest story.
Two out of the four for this series have been published.
I'm writing the third chapter right now, but I'm having trouble coming up with a title.

I kind of wanted it to be something like "The Confrontation" but I don't like that because it seems to simple and the second chapter's title is kinda of clever, I think.

So, can anyone come up with some thing a little more creative, I will credit that person of course.

But this chapter is about a father and daughter coming home to the mom who found out about them.

 

[PennLady]

Might help if you put a link to the stories. Then we could see the other titles and see what kind pf thing you like to do.

 

[adorablebaseballgirl]

Might help if you put a link to the stories. Then we could see the other titles and see what kind pf thing you like to do.

I can't link them.

 

[PennLady]

I can't link them.

Why not? Are they not posted? :?

 

[estragon]

SA Penn Lady

They are, and here are the links:

http://www.literotica.com/s/father-daughter-frieday

http://www.literotica.com/s/old-friends-reunite-2

Candidly, neither of these is my kind of story, so I pass.

 

[PennLady]

Incest/Taboo isn't what I care for either. I'm not in the best mood and since titles are not my favorite thing, I'll pass a well. But I know there are clever people out there who can help.

 

[lovecraft68]

First off, it's an incest story.
Two out of the four for this series have been published.
I'm writing the third chapter right now, but I'm having trouble coming up with a title.

I kind of wanted it to be something like "The Confrontation" but I don't like that because it seems to simple and the second chapter's title is kinda of clever, I think.

So, can anyone come up with some thing a little more creative, I will credit that person of course.

But this chapter is about a father and daughter coming home to the mom who found out about them.

"Just wait until your mother gets home."

Kind of cheesy but the best I could do without reading. Now as to why I did not read I saw non consent which I abhor but would like to commend you on putting it in the authors note so I did not "blunder in". That is a good way to do it as a lot of people do not read tags and in my case seeing as I just followed the link I would not have seen the tags anyway so good job on the warnings.

 

[Guest]

couple of ideas

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[estragon]

No. 3 "If Momma Ain't Happy". No, I didn't read beyond the first paragraph, and scanned through enough of the rest to know it wasn't my kind of story.

 

[adorablebaseballgirl]

Mama is a devil to pay

A Mother Scorned

What Secrets Reveal

Who's afraid of Mama

Just out of curiosity, if it is a series why are you changing the title for each chapter?

Not a huge fan of the whole chapter thing.

Example:

"Caught! Ch. 1"
"Caught! Ch. 2"
"Caught! Ch. 3"

I dunno, I just don't feel it.

 

[adorablebaseballgirl]

"Just wait until your mother gets home."

Kind of cheesy but the best I could do without reading. Now as to why I did not read I saw non consent which I abhor but would like to commend you on putting it in the authors note so I did not "blunder in". That is a good way to do it as a lot of people do not read tags and in my case seeing as I just followed the link I would not have seen the tags anyway so good job on the warnings.

Well, thanks. I'm glad someone appreciated the warning. I didn't like people complaining about it, so therefore, before reading they would know beforehand what was going on.

 

[sr71plt]

Not a huge fan of the whole chapter thing.

Example:

"Caught! Ch. 1"
"Caught! Ch. 2"
"Caught! Ch. 3"

I dunno, I just don't feel it.

Did you give any thought to what the readers "feel"? How are they going to follow the progression of the story? The chapter title thing isn't for the author's sake, it's for the reader's sake.

For you, though, it also would have saved being stuck for a title and needing to try to get someone else to do your creative work for you.

 

[lovecraft68]

Did you give any thought to what the readers "feel"? How are they going to follow the progression of the story? The chapter title thing isn't for the author's sake, it's for the reader's sake.

For you, though, it also would have saved being stuck for a title and needing to try to get someone else to do your creative work for you.

That is a very good point. You can never assume readers check your story page (some will favorite you and they probably do but most incest fans are anon) they just search te new stuff daily so they may see your name but not realize this is what they have been waiting for. If I were you I would think about picking a title and edititing the current ones to be ch 1 etc... you can use your tag lines to put things like "A mother scorned" or just "Mom finds out and she's not happy"
This is how you build a readership with continuity. I should have noticed it before but jumped off the story when I was the noncon so just looked at your initial question.