Looking for fans of mind control stories...

SubTrainer

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I'm contemplating writing a story involving mind control and am considering a number of plots and characters. If there are any fans of this type of story, please let me know what you'd like me to write about... specific turns ons, preferences for female or male characters and what you want to see happen to them, etc.
 
I'm contemplating writing a story involving mind control and am considering a number of plots and characters. If there are any fans of this type of story, please let me know what you'd like me to write about... specific turns ons, preferences for female or male characters and what you want to see happen to them, etc.

I have read a few, and most of those that I have read to be honest have been very predictable.

To stand out, the situation has to be plausiable yet unusual..

Try my "Amber Pendant"

I must write the sequel one day

Miranda
 
You'd probably get more response posting this to the "Story Ideas" board. This board is primarily visited by writers looking for feedback on stories they've written themselves.
 
I'm contemplating writing a story involving mind control and am considering a number of plots and characters. If there are any fans of this type of story, please let me know what you'd like me to write about... specific turns ons, preferences for female or male characters and what you want to see happen to them, etc.

I like the genre when the mind control is not "all powerful." When the protagonist just snaps fingers or whatever and the subject of desire becomes a robot, the story becomes one of sadistic victimization and is no longer appealing to me.

Possible scenarios that I have considered writing include the following:
- Guy or gal who is unintentionally/uncontrollably so appealing to representatives of the target gender that he/she must work to separate the truly interesting liaisons from the multitude of potential random ones. The mind control aspect becomes the suggestion that "you don't really want me right now..."

- Guy or gal uses a glamor/psychic disguise that must be carefully crafted to appeal to the chosen target. Protagonist is master of illusion, but it takes so much effort that the target must be worth it. Even then, becoming appealing does not assure romance, it merely enables it.

- Guy or gal is ale to exchange bodies only while target is distracted by orgasm. The target's brain needs to shut down defenses for the 'power' to work. Therefore, the protagonist must first get into a situation to provide/induce orgasm before even using the power. However, past uses have put the protagonist in a very appealing body. Note also that in a heterosexual context, gender changes with every exchange. Exchanges may also provide more than sexual advantages. Protagonist assumes the life of rich mogul for example...

- The power is a voluntary "do over" like "Ground Hog Day." Keep trying until protagonist succeeds. Do things with impunity knowing that it will all be forgotten tomorrow.

- The power is to induce spontaneous orgasm with any skin to skin touch. Protagonist must wear gloves to avoid untenable social situations in professional life etc. In this scenario, protagonist is a do-gooder. He/she seeks out people who need or deserve the orgasms and never exploits the power for personal gain. Nevertheless, some beneficiaries are bound to be grateful. Maybe the protagonist also experiences orgasm when the target person does.

- The protagonist was born with a psychic connection to an unknown other person and can see through that other's eyes. There are lots of voyeuristic possibilities, but the protagonist's goal is to find, meet, and romance the person to whom he/she is connected.
 
The best mind control story I have read is "accidental master", where the male dominant is completely unaware of his power and the female "victims" are completely willing, (at least after the fact). Something about the whole ying and yang aspect about it is great.
 
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