squarejohn
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How much thought do you give to naming your characters, giving them a name that can size them up neatly before any other characteristic about them is mentioned? I suppose I should say, "stereotyping" by name. For a crude example:
Peanuts stepped through the open door of the office and said, "Boss, there's some guy going around asking a lot of questions about you."
Carlo, in the act of lighting a long black cigar, completed that ritual before replying, "Send Joey and Red to go talk to him."
As opposed to:
Mr. Peabody stood at the open door of the office, and made a soft coughing sound to get his employer's attention.
His employer, Mr. Charles, put down the object he was examining with a jeweler's loupe and looked at Mr. Peabody with an inquiring smile.
"The man you expected called, and said he is staying at the Drake, sir, and that he has the photos," Mr Peabody announced.
"Would you ask Michael to call on him? And tell him to bring Raymond along." Mr. Charles directed.
What phantasms do each of these above examples invoke in you?
I often have a difficult time selecting a name for a character and when I do finally select what I think is the suitable name, when the story is finished, the name doesn't really "fit" the character. Anybody else have this problem? Thank God for Find and Replace.
Peanuts stepped through the open door of the office and said, "Boss, there's some guy going around asking a lot of questions about you."
Carlo, in the act of lighting a long black cigar, completed that ritual before replying, "Send Joey and Red to go talk to him."
As opposed to:
Mr. Peabody stood at the open door of the office, and made a soft coughing sound to get his employer's attention.
His employer, Mr. Charles, put down the object he was examining with a jeweler's loupe and looked at Mr. Peabody with an inquiring smile.
"The man you expected called, and said he is staying at the Drake, sir, and that he has the photos," Mr Peabody announced.
"Would you ask Michael to call on him? And tell him to bring Raymond along." Mr. Charles directed.
What phantasms do each of these above examples invoke in you?
I often have a difficult time selecting a name for a character and when I do finally select what I think is the suitable name, when the story is finished, the name doesn't really "fit" the character. Anybody else have this problem? Thank God for Find and Replace.