quoththeraven
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- Joined
- Feb 1, 2011
- Posts
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Hello,
I'm a complete newb here, message-board wise, but have been reading the stories here for quite a while and finally came out of my shell enough to write and submit my own story.
The story is called "The Gaming Group Ch. 1", which is currently pending approval, but when it finally comes up, I would definitely appreciate feedback. It's my first erotic story whatsoever, and I was kinda scared of reading to many guides and such and decided to just "go for it" and see how it landed.
I'm adult enough that if the comments you have for me are less than flattering, I'll understand as long as they're constructive criticism and not open attacks; but I feel I'll get the first, anyway.
The story is inspired by an event that happened at one of the rpg sessions that I ran where one of the players began to strip suggestively while "playing" her character. While nothing happened in real life, I'd always played with the "what if" in my head.
Anyway, thanks in advance!
I'm a complete newb here, message-board wise, but have been reading the stories here for quite a while and finally came out of my shell enough to write and submit my own story.
The story is called "The Gaming Group Ch. 1", which is currently pending approval, but when it finally comes up, I would definitely appreciate feedback. It's my first erotic story whatsoever, and I was kinda scared of reading to many guides and such and decided to just "go for it" and see how it landed.
I'm adult enough that if the comments you have for me are less than flattering, I'll understand as long as they're constructive criticism and not open attacks; but I feel I'll get the first, anyway.
The story is inspired by an event that happened at one of the rpg sessions that I ran where one of the players began to strip suggestively while "playing" her character. While nothing happened in real life, I'd always played with the "what if" in my head.
Anyway, thanks in advance!
