Finished, at last!

[JackLuis]

I published the last chapter of my "Spreading Seeds" today. For two years since I began on Lit I have pretty much just worked on this. Learning as I went.

Chapter #41 was released today and seeing it provided me with a kind of relief.

18 H's in all and #41 is doing well too.

Now I can work on Horny Springs, without the distraction of "Seeds."

"Spreading Seeds"is M/F, M/F/F and M/F/M/F/F at times but pretty tame really, although the MC Josh does over forty women in the 41 Chapters and many of them a second time, so it's mostly a wanker.

Ha Ha, Finished! A great feeling, though, the story is far from over. It was time to put away a story line that had consumed me for the last four years.

I think I'll have a drink!

 

[sr71plt]

Congrats. On to the next.

 

[JackLuis]

Congrats. On to the next.

Thanks sr71plt. I know that it's a small thing to the AH'rs who finish off stories left and right but to me it was, beautiful, the feeling that I don't have to stay in that first person character. Two years of Me, Me, I, was driving me crazy.

Now I can write in third person and it feels so liberating. I had another drink to enjoy the feeling.

Now I can't write, but it still feels good.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

What sort of thrill is there from posting a story to a board that accepts anything? To my way of thinking its a baby-step up from writing a poem for Ma.

 

[JackLuis]

What sort of thrill is there from posting a story to a board that accepts anything? To my way of thinking its a baby-step up from writing a poem for Ma.

You try putting up a story Jimbo. You know just to see how it feels? Or are you afraid that you'll be one bombed to oblivion for your attitude?

Being a Dick is it's own reward, isn't it?

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

You try putting up a story Jimbo. You know just to see how it feels? Or are you afraid that you'll be one bombed to oblivion for your attitude?

Being a Dick is it's own reward, isn't it?

I finished a story this AM, as a matter of fact; but I plan to send it to a magazine that pays real money NOT plastic trophies and half-wit brownie points.

To each his own.

 

[JackLuis]

I finished a story this AM, as a matter of fact; but I plan to send it to a magazine that pays real money NOT plastic trophies and half-wit brownie points.

To each his own.

We each have our own reasons for being at Lit. I am just trying to cultivate my muse.
Why are you here? Your contributions are pitifully stupid Jim. Although I did get a kick out of you new AV. It sure beats the Monkey.

 

[lovecraft68]

We each have our own reasons for being at Lit. I am just trying to cultivate my muse.
Why are you here? Your contributions are pitifully stupid Jim. Although I did get a kick out of you new AV. It sure beats the Monkey.

Congrats on the big finish!! I myself am writing chapter 28 of mine with 40 planned as the last and then an epilogue. Your post made me feel good as there are times that I swear I am never going to finish and other times I can almost taste it. I am enjoying writing but see where it becomes real work at times as of course you have to be aware of. My series is sometimes like my baby and other times like a monkey on my back.

Pay no attention to JBJ he doesn't get the fact that he posts constantly on the very site he blasts all the time. maybe if we give him the plastic trophy for spewing vitriolic comments he'll leave us alone.

Seriously though congratulations! And best of luck with your next endeavor. Sounds like another long one. Me personally when I am done am going to do a few "one shot" stories before taking on my next long one.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

We each have our own reasons for being at Lit. I am just trying to cultivate my muse.
Why are you here? Your contributions are pitifully stupid Jim. Although I did get a kick out of you new AV. It sure beats the Monkey.

I come by for the same reason people go to the zoo.

 

[lovecraft68]

What sort of thrill is there from posting a story to a board that accepts anything? To my way of thinking its a baby-step up from writing a poem for Ma.

You know JBJ I started posting with the agreement with myself that I would not take anything here personally. I would not get into name calling (well not with real malice anyways) and not get into a clique or a faction or believe what anyone says about anyone unless I experience it first hand. Kind of an extension of my day to day life. I also told myself that if I saw something that ticked me off i would avoid it. You will be happy to know that you're going to make me break that rule.

You ask what sort of thrill it is to post here? and mention you're way of thinking.
Well in order to tell you that you really shouldn't always be that disparaging to others I'l break my other rule and tell you a little bit about myself on a personal level so you know why it is a thrill for me to be here.

I came from an extremely alcoholic and violent family where my mother and I were severely abused. My old man eventually sobered up but by then I was 14 with the nastiest mean streak that you could find. I got in a ton of trouble and of course did the inevitable and quit school at 15. when i was 19 I settled down some (a little clink time can help with that) sought counseling and got my GED. I then started taking a couple of creative writing courses as since I was a kid reading comic books I had two dreams; own a comic book store and write a novel. Shortly after my third course (while working two jobs and having my own apartment) i met a woman with just as piss poor of a back ground. We hooked up she got knocked up and we married because of it. I then spent years in a loveless dysfunctional marriage that we stayed in "for the kids" she was a bi polar alchy and I once again began having serious rage issues. Long story short when i caught her cheating I walked away from her and started over yet again at this point 31 and back living with the folks so i would have a decent place for my two daughters to visit me. after afew months of sinking into drinking and fucking 20 year old goth girls who i wowed with my occult knowledge and general bad attitude. I met a wonderful woman who had as opposite of a back ground as you could find. Positively Brady Bunch. We got married and my life has never been better after three years I borrowed against the house and opened the comic book store. I ran the store and worked 40-50 hrs a week in addition to as did my wife. after 5 years the economy dropped and we were exhausted so we closed it. The entire time my wife told me that I would start writing and fulfill my other dream I would say yeah write i have a GED and can barely type. We are very sexual and role play constantly one day when I was trying to map out and S&M scenario she wanted to play I decided to sit down and type it out. I found myself making up names and characters describing the back ground and it turned into what on May 13th 2010 was my debut story on Lit. Almost Perfect.
Since then I have 37 stories up 26 from the same series that when done will be my first novel whether e-book or self publish it doesn't matter it will happen.
Writing was always my dream I am fulfilling it here. Obviously it's a free site that will publish almost anything but excuse me if I don;t have all your fancy degrees and accomplishments. I am doing the best i can. someday I will be even better. But from where and what I came from i cannot describe to you the thrill I get when one of the "wankers" as you call them e-mails me and says how much they loved my story. I get comments all the time about ho detailed my series is and how they "worry" about the characters.
People getting involved in and concerned about something that I created. 1,000's of people anxiously awaiting my next story. 36 out of 37 hot ratings. I am proud of my work. It is a privilege for me to write here. It is an honor ot have people tell me they like my stuff.
So excuse me if this is the best my drop out street rat ass can come up with. I am sorry my enthusiasm offends your educated stuck up high and mighty ass.
One of the books that my underachieving (in your eyes anyways) ass read a long time ago was Paradise Lost this is one of my favorite quotes
“Long is the way And hard, that out of Hell leads up to light”

It describes my life and as cheesy as it sounds the response and pleasure and pride I take from my writing is my light.
In closing i am sure I am not the only one with a similar story many of us here are amateurs and always will be unlike you who are supposedly a professional. We all take pride in our work and if you don't want to read it. Don;t if you think the site is for hacks fine but find another way to get your old dried up dick off other than trying to crush others. For me pricks like you will ultimately make me better. Others are more sensitive. I have no issues with you this is your opinion I gave you my reason that it sucks using my situation as an example.
For my last statement I will ask you to go to my link and if you have the time in between flattering yourself and disparaging others read my SWB series. you will find the grammar weak but i dare you to read it and honestly tell me it's "drivel"
In closing I suppose that I and the rest of the authors on this site insult your superior intelligence and force you to wallow amongst our ignorance. Oh wait that is probably why you post here. The "professional" publishers kicked you off of their site.
In the future make an "attempt" not to spoil others fun. It;s not our fault your to old to enjoy anything but your next trip to the proctologist

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

LOVECRAFT

I sampled a few of your stories.

If I had the power to make you do anything I wouldnt waste the power merely pissing you off; I'd influence you to send me money. If I was THAT powerful. I dont believe I control your feelings, I think you control your feelings. I think you drive your bus, not me.

I drive my own bus. If I disparage others it werent the Devil making me do it. It wasnt the wrong time of the month nor a chemical imbalnce. I said it and meant every word of it. I like being a rabid dog.

 

[lovecraft68]

LOVECRAFT

I sampled a few of your stories.

If I had the power to make you do anything I wouldnt waste the power merely pissing you off; I'd influence you to send me money. If I was THAT powerful. I dont believe I control your feelings, I think you control your feelings. I think you drive your bus, not me.

I drive my own bus. If I disparage others it werent the Devil making me do it. It wasnt the wrong time of the month nor a chemical imbalnce. I said it and meant every word of it. I like being a rabid dog.

Trust me short of my wife when I give her the wheel when I'm being irrational no one drives my bus. As I said I spoke for two reasons; one because I meant what I said as in I don't understand belittling people for just the hell of it. And the second in some lame desire that you might realize that there are people proud of their accomplishments that unfortunately still have low enough self esteem that comments like yours can derail them. At that point it's not your fault their wired that way. I just don't get what almost amounts to the bully mentality you're not a kid by any means I figured that at some point you;d grow out of that behavior. Personally i meant what i said getting pissed pushes me to try to be better as I still have a lot of Oh yeah? Menatality but try to be constructive with it.
As far as sampling my stories if you "jumped" around SWB you will be lost or i would think you would be I can't keep track anymore.
For the record feel free to abuse it if you can actually lend something in a constructive fashion I would be open to hear your thoughts. (or just say you suck that what anon tells me all the time)

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

LOVECRAFT

I dont need to read the entire series to gauge your performance.

Piece of advice: What others think of your writing is irrelevant, what matters is your mastery of the craft. And there is a craft to writing. The more I learn the more OH SHIT moments my writing gives me. And rarely its so sublime I wonder if lil fairies didnt edit it while I slept.

Let me be clear, I dont care an iota what people feel; what they feel is their own doing and business.

I swear my editor is more unsparing of my feelings than I am critical of others. Inorder to improve its often necessary to man-up to the criticism and profit from it. My best teachers always ripped me a new asshole and poked holes in my inflated self-esteem. The best never suffer affirmative action for a moment.

 

[sr71plt]

I finished a story this AM, as a matter of fact; but I plan to send it to a magazine that pays real money NOT plastic trophies and half-wit brownie points.

To each his own.

I'll be looking for your story (since you say you write in true name). Thus far all I've seen that you've written anywhere are volunteered book reviews on Amazon.com--which are different from writing volunteered short stories for Literotica (or in a letter to your Ma) exactly how, please?

 

[lovecraft68]

LOVECRAFT

I dont need to read the entire series to gauge your performance.

Piece of advice: What others think of your writing is irrelevant, what matters is your mastery of the craft. And there is a craft to writing. The more I learn the more OH SHIT moments my writing gives me. And rarely its so sublime I wonder if lil fairies didnt edit it while I slept.

Let me be clear, I dont care an iota what people feel; what they feel is their own doing and business.

I swear my editor is more unsparing of my feelings than I am critical of others. Inorder to improve its often necessary to man-up to the criticism and profit from it. My best teachers always ripped me a new asshole and poked holes in my inflated self-esteem. The best never suffer affirmative action for a moment.

You still didn't actually give me an honest opinion of it. I'm on the site for feedback and practice. If you think it blows say it. If you think it's okay but...
Just express an opinion you do it about everything else. I write incest trust me I've been scorched many times over. For everything from fear of the comma to I'm a sick twisted fuck. So just chuck something out there. Just tell me what chapter you're speaking of because this far in they really are blurring together.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

LOVECRAFT

You got an honest 'no opinion rendered' opinion.

I write incest, I write underage, I write non-consent etc. I recently wrote a tale of a student and his tutor. People harpoon you for everything, so a thick skin is good to have. LIT writers are notorious for toting their issues along for the ride to these boards, and their issues often do most of the talking and veggie throwing.

My preference is this: I'll post some general topics of the writing craft, and if any of them interest you youre welcome to my thoughts, then you can see if they apply to your work, or dismiss them as fetid mind drool.

 

[sr71plt]

I write incest, I write underage, I write non-consent etc.

Prove it. Until then, you are all "tell" and no "show."

 

[lovecraft68]

Prove it. Until then, you are all "tell" and no "show."

You know I'm starting to think he didn't "read" anything I wrote. "my opinion was a firm no opinion" he should be in politics.
Funny as opinionated as he is I figured I could at least get "don't quit the day job"

 

[lovecraft68]

LOVECRAFT

You got an honest 'no opinion rendered' opinion.

I write incest, I write underage, I write non-consent etc. I recently wrote a tale of a student and his tutor. People harpoon you for everything, so a thick skin is good to have. LIT writers are notorious for toting their issues along for the ride to these boards, and their issues often do most of the talking and veggie throwing.

My preference is this: I'll post some general topics of the writing craft, and if any of them interest you youre welcome to my thoughts, then you can see if they apply to your work, or dismiss them as fetid mind drool.

Your dodging is leading me to believe you read nothing. "a no opinion rendered" sounds like the answer I try to give the wife when she puts on a godawful dress.
Prove to me you read something. No "opinion" just throw out a detail. Of course you could just click on something now to do it but I will take you at your word if you give me something other than the Brother and sisters first name.

 

[JackLuis]

I come by for the same reason people go to the zoo.

LOL You twisted Fuck.

 

[sr71plt]

You know I'm starting to think he didn't "read" anything I wrote. "my opinion was a firm no opinion" he should be in politics.
Funny as opinionated as he is I figured I could at least get "don't quit the day job"

No, I don't think he can bring himself to read it. Because, in his own strange way, I think he feels bound to be objective in his reviewing--and he doesn't want to have to approve of what you write.

If that sounds weird, I still think it is true to JBJ. I think that book reviewing is the only thing he takes truly seriously--and I don't think he writes anything but volunteered book reviews for Amazon.com.

 

[lovecraft68]

No, I don't think he can bring himself to read it. Because, in his own strange way, I think he feels bound to be objective in his reviewing--and he doesn't want to have to approve of what you write.

If that sounds weird, I still think it is true to JBJ. I think that book reviewing is the only thing he takes truly seriously--and I don't think he writes anything but volunteered book reviews for Amazon.com.

My opinion is it impossible not to have an opinion. I admittedly have not read any of your stories. Between work/daughters/wife(who is tewn years younger) and my own writing I sadly have little time to read other peoples material. However if I do read one of your tails. I can;t see not having an opinion. I will either enjoy it, think "nah it's not for me" or even if it doesn;t push me one way or another a "it was alright"
I know JBJ well enough to think that if it blew he would say it in some mocking way, I think if it was good he would give a prop I think he is full of crap.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Your dodging is leading me to believe you read nothing. "a no opinion rendered" sounds like the answer I try to give the wife when she puts on a godawful dress.
Prove to me you read something. No "opinion" just throw out a detail. Of course you could just click on something now to do it but I will take you at your word if you give me something other than the Brother and sisters first name.

You have it wrong and PILOT is half right.

In your case 'no opinion' means I dont have enough time to autopsy the story and comment on all thats remarkable about it. Nothing really tipped the scale one way or another in my head. I'm looking for obvious diamond or fool's gold without mining it.

PILOTs 1/2 right. I skim the words for fire and twinkle or the aroma of old manure. I want an easy way to be excited.

I sent a story out yesterday. I call it A GIRL FOR ALL SEASONS. Its a blend of sci-fi, horror, and underage. I doubt its long enough for LITs length requirements. But why post it here for free if I can sell it for $50? Only a total fucking fool posts a good story for free, to expose it to the sort of abuse it would attract.

 

[lovecraft68]

You have it wrong and PILOT is half right.

In your case 'no opinion' means I dont have enough time to autopsy the story and comment on all thats remarkable about it. Nothing really tipped the scale one way or another in my head. I'm looking for obvious diamond or fool's gold without mining it.

PILOTs 1/2 right. I skim the words for fire and twinkle or the aroma of old manure. I want an easy way to be excited.

I sent a story out yesterday. I call it A GIRL FOR ALL SEASONS. Its a blend of sci-fi, horror, and underage. I doubt its long enough for LITs length requirements. But why post it here for free if I can sell it for $50? Only a total fucking fool posts a good story for free, to expose it to the sort of abuse it would attract.

Would you send me your story so I can read it or would I have to pay for it? I would like to see how you write.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Would you send me your story so I can read it or would I have to pay for it? I would like to see how you write.

I wrote a shorty today that runs about 400 words...horror tale. I cant imagine anyone buying it, so maybe I'll post it here after I fuck with it a little. Its a complete story with conflict, crisis, and resolution.

LIT limits manuscripts to no less than 750 words. More of the Brady BS.