some feedback wanted

[lauren26f]

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[rhox5_5]

nice good read

 

[lauren26f]

nice good read

Thanks.

 

[Vincent7]

I like d story line..but try someting interracial..or u can try with me...a roleplay.....i am dark....and quite well endowed..check my pic...

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Please can you delete your first post. Anything suggesting sex under 18 is not allowed on the site and your first sentence blows that out of the water.

I would say you need to change the ages but I think your story needs more wok than that.

 

[LindsayRae]

Please can you delete your first post. Anything suggesting sex under 18 is not allowed on the site and your first sentence blows that out of the water.

I would say you need to change the ages but I think your story needs more wok than that.

The sad thing is, she did submit said story with the creepy under aged vibe to it. It's been reported to Laurel on more than one occasion, but her story is still up.