First time lucky!

I'm pretty psyched. My first story for literotica has been published! I'm ready to start the next installment, and I'm wondering if anyone would like to let me bounce ideas off of them as the story begins to develop and give me honest feedback. Story is here http://www.literotica.com/s/just-the-end-of-the-world-again and if you like HP Lovecraft, I'd recommend you take a look! ;)

Ya Al Misr!

Oh do I like lovecraft? not only the handle but take a look at the pic in my profile! I will definitely check this bad boy out!
 
Oh Geez, now I'm going to get raked over the coals for mixing my elder gods up!

Oh no my friend you rocked it! And as far as mixing the elder gods the only thing that would upset me is please don't ever go down that stupid Derleth path of dividing them into good and bad that shit pissed me off.
 
Oh, don't worry. I'd sooner go with Stuart Gordon than August Derleth.

Good man? or woman your bio doesn't say but I think your a guy. anyway we owe a lot to Derleth for keeping HP's writing alive but when he started doing the collaborations he ticked me off. using a few lines fro HP and going to town on it. Watchers out of time and Lurker at the threshold sucked big time.
 
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