Seeking feedback for incest story

[MzDeviancy]

I feel like it's going along well, but I want to make sure it's set up in a believable way. And the other usual issues, like if any crap grammar jumps out at you, or stilted dialogue, etc., I'd also like to hear about that.

If you're interested, PM me and I'll send you the doc.

 

[EllaLaJefa]

I get the feeling you are looking more for an editor and not feedback on an already submitted story. Please correct me if I am wrong.

Try seeking an editor, clean it up, submit it, then post a link and you will be sure to get feedback on your work.

 

[MzDeviancy]

I get the feeling you are looking more for an editor and not feedback on an already submitted story. Please correct me if I am wrong.

Try seeking an editor, clean it up, submit it, then post a link and you will be sure to get feedback on your work.

Either works, and I've gotten a bunch of PMs, so I'm good to go. But thanks for the advice ;o)