Need help with an idea

[BardsLady]

Okay, basis of the story in my head:

Woman finds gargoyle statue in curio shop, takes it home.

Statue is cursed/enchanted being who turns into a gargoyle dildo and secretly fucks woman.

Woman finds out and freaks, trying to get rid of statue, only to have it turn up on her dresser no matter what she does.

Here's the dilemma.

I need ideas on what sort of curse/enchantment/ect would turn a statue like that into something like what I described.

Perhaps a piece of a destroyed Gothic mansion where Marquis De Sade was held? I dunno.

This is an as of yet unnamed F/F BDSM story that I'm going to be writing after November. So, Any help would be greatly appreciated.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Clive Barker already did it. Gay prostitute services archaeologist with Roman gladiator statue in bathtub. Statue follows rentboy home and everywhere. Some homophobe niggaz attack rentboy and the statue takes care of them.

LJ? Are you paying attention?

 

[BardsLady]

*chuckles* good one.

But think of this statue as about the size of a book end. You know..tabletop design. No archeologists here... My leading lady is an Architect.. well known for incorporating gothic design into new buildings.

 

[GinaTina]

Gargoyle is lesser demon who is now 'attached' to said woman.

Each night of the secret sex makes it a bit stronger until finally it can become a physical being.

And then she'll be really screwed - so to speak.

 

[BardsLady]

Did I mention this was a F/F BDSM story?

She's going to be hooking up with another woman who is...something more than she seems. Not sure what yet, but she likes hanging around Cyber Goths.

 

[Weird Harold]

Okay, basis of the story in my head:

Woman finds gargoyle statue in curio shop, takes it home.

Statue is cursed/enchanted being who turns into a gargoyle dildo and secretly fucks woman.

Statue is an Incubus, not a gargoyle -- Gargoyle is an architectural term for a rainspout carved as a grotesque figure. Captured and stoned in some ancient prehistorical civilization his sentence is nearly up, but he can, as yet, only get unstoned when it is dark and/or in the presence of a beautiful/innocent woman.

Statue might be a succubus -- since you're writing a F/F story -- cursed to an existance in the form of a particularly ugly male statue after being caught seducing some ancient virgin by a powerful magician/priest.

 

[HeyAll]

I need ideas on what sort of curse/enchantment/ect would turn a statue like that into something like what I described.

The gargoyle belonged to a 15th century female soccerer who used it as a sex toy for herself. It (gargoyle) comes to life on late nights when it senses the owner needs it's sexual needs meet.

The Architect (who is a book worm) has no idea about it's powers, she's only interested in it's historical value and asthetics.

Later on, a gothic female dom sees the Architect with that gargoyle. The gothic dom knows EXACTLY what that gargoyle was meant for and knows about it's sexual powers. The dom assumes that the Architect knows about it as well and uses it to take care of her sexual needs- therefor, the dom assumes the Architect is familiar with, and part of the gothic sex scene.

The female dom sees the Architect at the store trying to sell it back, or maybe through it in the river, so then she goes up to her and strikes a conversation. They talk about history and gargoyle stuff and what not, and become friends. They head back to the Architects house, where the dom takes over and have nasty nasty BDSM sex- the two of them plus the gargoyle.

My leading lady is an Architect.. well known for incorporating gothic design into new buildings

Or perhaps the female dom is someone who owns a sex shop or one of those sex dungeons; she hires the Architect to incorporate gothic designs into her building. She sees the sexually enchated gargoyle in the backseat of her car knowing full well what it is and what's its for and thinks "Well, well, well...I never would have thought this book worm would be interested in such a thing" as she assumes the architect is a sex freak. Sex follows shortly after against the lead character's will- which she grows to love.



just a suggestion

 

[Guest]

another thought

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[BardsLady]

Okay, *evil grin* I just had this idea...

BTW, Gargoyles weren't JUST the downspouts of Gothic buildings, they adorned the insides of churches as well, as decorations representing the 7 Deadly Sins. Trust me, I looked it up.

Now:

How about this... Victorian Era woman who is a Sorceress, comes across the Marquis de Sade's castle and makes off with an appropriate sized chunk of brick. Using a ritual, she uses the sexual energy of the castle to reform the stone into a gargoyle which can fold it's wings around itself and turn into a smooth, thick dildo.
The Sorceress, having been found out, is forced to be committed for.. ahem.. "female hysterics" as they were called at the time...
Said item is lost for a time, then winds up in a curio shop.. and is bought by my leading lady.
Enter the decendant of said Scorceress... who feels the energy of said toy.. and 'calls' both woman and gargoyle to her... hiring the lady in question to re-design her home.. Ort he gothic night club she owns *this is up for grabs also* in order to have the best of both worlds with the toy and her own personal slave.

As I said, t his is all made up on the fly.. It's subject to change on the whims of my Muse.

 

[HeyAll]

Okay, *evil grin* I just had this idea...





As I said, this is all made up on the fly.. It's subject to change on the whims of my Muse.

Really? I could have sworn some of those were my ideas.

 

[BardsLady]

True, they are, my apologies, I typed it in without thinking.

I was sorting through the stories involving the Marquis De Sade and my Muse said, "What If..."

Again, my apologies for taking your idea. My Muse tends to start running away with me and I type out loud.

The reason I asked here is that it's the only place I c an come to and discuss a topic on this level without either being banned for adult content.. or considered a bit perverted.

Thankfully, my publisher loves me the way I am, but I need help from people like you, HeyAll.. and, well, I bungled t he ball. Mia culpa.

*grovelling artfully at your feet* We're Not Worthy.. We're Not Worthy...

 

[TE999]

True, they are, my apologies, I typed it in without thinking.

I was sorting through the stories involving the Marquis De Sade and my Muse said, "What If..."

Again, my apologies for taking your idea. My Muse tends to start running away with me and I type out loud.

The reason I asked here is that it's the only place I c an come to and discuss a topic on this level without either being banned for adult content.. or considered a bit perverted.

Thankfully, my publisher loves me the way I am, but I need help from people like you, HeyAll.. and, well, I bungled the ball. Mia culpa.

*grovelling artfully at your feet* We're Not Worthy.. We're Not Worthy...

I wrote a story five years ago about a cursed statue for a Halloween contest entitled 'Statuary Rape'.

Here it is: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=278460

Good luck with your writing.

 

[BardsLady]

Nice one TE999.

 

[TE999]

Nice one TE999.

Thanks. I think your basic concept has merit and you should continue to develop it further.

Since there are supposedly only eight basic plots in literature, originality often lies in the story details, character development or sequence of events. When you're satisfied with something you've written, post it.

 

[HeyAll]

No worries. It does sound like it's shaping up to be a very erotic story. Can't wait to read it.

 

[BardsLady]

I'll let you guys know if and when the publisher likes it. Right now, I'm waiting for the edits ofmy other F/F book called Egyptian Moon, which is slated for an April Release.

 

[oggbashan]

Thorne Smith used a similar idea in his fantasy novel Turnabout.

Decadent uncle gives married couple ancient statue of a minor Egyptian God. Statue has the power to grant wishes, if it wants to. During marital argument husband claims that stay-at-home wife is lazy; wife claims that she could do his job standing on her head.

Overnight the statue swaps their bodies so he is now in her body, and she is in his. She, as him, has to go to the office and flirt with the female staff. He, as her, has to do the domestic chores and entertain her toy-boy...

She (as him) makes love to him (as her). Towards the end of the book he, as her, has to give birth but God relents and she produces their baby.

Og

 

[TheeGoatPig]

BTW, Gargoyles weren't JUST the downspouts of Gothic buildings, they adorned the insides of churches as well, as decorations representing the 7 Deadly Sins. Trust me, I looked it up.

Actually, yes they are. Gargoyles are the downspouts, Grotesques are the statues adorning any areas that don't require drainage.

Going by that, the Disney cartoon show should have been called Grotesques, not Gargoyles, though the title they used was a bit more catchy