Topless Jen Chapter 1 Revised

[ShirtlessMike05]

This is the revised version of the first chapter of my Topless Jen story. Enjoy.

Chapter 1: First Time Topless

Jen wakes up, she rubs her eyes as she sits up and looks down at her naked body. Her pale white breasts and shaved pussy stand out in stark contrast to her slender tanned body. It doesnt take Jen long to get out of bed as she doesnt have any covers on. Jen feels so good being naked at home, especially when she sleeps. Jen hears her phone ring and goes to pick it up. Crystal, Jen's best friend is on the other end.

"Hey girl, what have you got planned today?"

"Nothing really, just going to relax here at home. i dont have to work for a few days"

Crystal isnt impressed and is not about to let her best friend just lay around all day, especially since she has something better in mind.

"How about we go down to the beach and get some sun?"

"Sure, ive got this new blue string bikini I want to try out."

"Great, im going to wear my white bikini with the thong bottoms"

Jen had often thought of wearing a thong on a public beach but fears people seeing her ass and pussy so she opts for a full string bikini instead.

"That will look great on you Crystal."

"You should try it sometime girl."

"Maybe sometime, im gonna stick with these ones for now"

"Oh okay, your loss. See ya in a bit." Crystal hangs up the phone.

Jen has a smile on her face as she walks to her dresser. She opens the dresser and inside are lots of different brightly colored clothes. Most of them are bikinis because since she lives near a beach town whenever shes not going to work or someplace formal she wears one of her favorite bikinis.

She pulls her blue bikini out and holds it up to her naked body in the mirror. Since she is always active Jen has a slim figure. Jen takes the bottoms and sticks her feet inside as she slides them up her slender legs. She pulls them up to her waist over her pussy and makes sure they are straight. Jen doesnt want to accidentally flash her pussy at anyone. Her bikini bottoms are so small they barely cover her pussy in the front and in the back cover just her ass leaving her entire legs bare. Jen models them topless in the mirror looking at her slender body.

She notices her small white breasts with her soft pink nipples that stand out from her tanned torso. Jen would prefer to just forego the bikini top and go topless so she could rid herself of her tanlines at least on her breasts but being relatively new to this town since she moved out of her parents home at 18 she doesnt want to take any chances of being arrested for indecent exposure.

So Jen reluctantly takes her bikini top and slides the cups in place over her breasts which barely cover her areolas and nipples and ties the strings behind her back and neck. Its a smaller bikini than she wore when living with her parents but now that shes on her own she loves it because she can show more with it and thats why its her favorite bikini. This means of course much of her boobs on the sides are still white but she hopes to change that soon.

Jen knows Crystal will be there soon to pick her up and take them to the beach so she muddles around trying to decide what else to wear. Since Jen and Crystal will probably spend most of the day at the beach and not do anything else she decides not to wear a shirt over her bikini and just wear the top. She does decide to wear some jean shorts over her bottoms on the ride to the beach though not wanting to take any chances with the bottom half. Jen likes these jeans because they are so small and barely cover her ass in the back and her crotch in the front leaving almost all of her legs bare.

Before leaving Jen decides whether she should wear any shoes or not but knowing she wont be wearing them very much anyways just opts to go barefoot. Jen loves to go barefoot because she hates shoes and only wears them to work She only has one pair for work and the rest are just flip flops or sandals.

Soon Crystal arrives at the door and knocks on it. Jen grabs her small purse. She answers the door and open it. On the other side Crystal stands there in her white thong bikini. Jen is astonished.

"Wow Crystal, thats all you wore here?"

Crystal gives her a funny look and says "Sure why not? We're just going to the beach."

"Well I didnt want to push my luck until I was sure about things around here but people seem pretty liberal."

Crystal just shrugged her shoulders "Yeah pretty awesome isnt it? You could probably just skip wearing the shorts and just wear the bikini. Im in my thong after all."

"Thats okay, not this time I would rather have something to put on in case I lose my bottoms. You know how I feel about my pussy being exposed in public."

"Whatever floats your boat girl. You ready to roll?"

"Yes, lets go"

Jen closes her door and follows Crystal downstairs to her car. Jen loves the feeling of the carpet against her bare feet. She feels so excited knowing that she is going outside finally just wearing her bikini and her favorite shorts and nothing else.

When they get outside Jen is amazed at the sight of Crystal's car.

"When did you get this?"

"I got this last year when I moved here. My parents wanted to get rid of it since they have this new SUV now."

"Thats cool. Must be fun to ride around and feel the warm air and the sun on your body."

"It sure does. Alot of the time I like to go to the beach or out shopping in it." The two bikini clad girls hop into Crystal's blue convertible.

Soon Crystal and Jen are off driving along the road towards the beach. The warm air whooshing past them as Crystal drives the car fast down the street. Jen loves the feeling of the wind against her body and feels it tug against the straps of her bikini top. She has to grab it to hold it in place so it doesnt come loose and blow away. Part of her wishes her top would come off so she could have an excuse to go topless but she is still nervous about getting in trouble with the cops.

Crystal's bikini is more full on top so she doesnt have as much trouble keeping it on as she concentrates on driving. Jen envies her a bit but likes the freedom her bikini offers even though she has to constantly adjust it to keep her firm white tits from popping out. Crystal sees Jen trying to adjust her bikini and attempts to get her mind on something else.

"So Jen meet any cute guys here yet?"

"No, not yet. I havent been here long enough to meet any."

"We'll have to do something about that. Maybe youll run into some at the beach. Should be some real studs there."

Jen shrugs her shoulders and catches her bikini just as one of her perky nipples pops out. She quickly readjusts it.

"Maybe, all I really want to do is relax and enjoy the beach."

"Dont worry, we will have a good time there together. I promise." Crystal grabs Jen's hand before she can touch her bikini top again.

"You really should just leave your top alone, its not like your boobs are gonna pop out suddenly and even if they do, who cares, just go with it."

"I will I just dont want to get in any trouble with the law." Jen winks her big blue eyes.

"Dont worry about them. Not enough of them at this beach anyways and in any case ill keep an eye out for you. We're almost there."

Crystal pulls off the road and into a small parking lot. Theres only a few cars in it and not any people. Jen breathes in the cool ocean breeze as Crystal turns off the convertible and opens the door.

"Now that we're here do you want to leave your shorts in the car?"

Jen knows she wants to wear as little as possible but is still skittish about having so little covering her bottoms.

She sees Crystal get impatient and decides "what the hell" and promptly drops her shorts. Jen steps out of them and leaves them in the trunk of the car. Now theres no turning back as Crystal locks it.

"There, feel better now? Nothing to worry about the trunk will be locked so nobody will steal your shorts."

They both grab their purses and some towels as they walk down the stairs to the beach. When they reach the beach the two see lots of beachgoers laying out in the sun and splashing around in the water. Most are wearing bikinis and in the guys case just speedos. Alot of the women have thongs on but none are topless yet.

"See, all these girls are wearing thongs. You couldve done it too."

Jen seeing all the thongers feels a little better but still is glad at least "this" time that she has her full bikini bottoms on, even if they are just strings with a couple of small patches on them. She wishes there were some topless women here. Crystal and Jen lay out their towels and sit down on them.

Crystal sticks her head back and smiles. Jen decides to lay down on her stomach to start getting a tan. Crystal watches Jen lays there.

"Eager to get your tan today?'

"Yeah I want to be able to keep this golden brown tan of mine."

"Im surprised you have one."

"Ive still gone to the beach in my bikini a few times and I like to sun out by the pool at my apartment alot."

"Bet youre glad to realize that you can wear that skimpy bikini all the time now that you live on your own."

"It does feel good to be out on my own so now I can just wear the bikini top wherever I please."

"You look better in the bikini."

"I feel much better. I prefer wearing a bikini top during the summer when its hot out. I would go topless more places if I thought I could."

"That would be a sight to see for sure. I dont think I could do that. Im more of a thonger myself."

"Oh well maybe someday."

"Why not right now? We're on the beach and nobodys around. Just untie your top and lay there. Youve done that before."

Jen looks around and doesnt see too many people. So she reaches behind her and unties the strings on her back and her neck and lets them fall to her sides. Her back bare and tan except for the thin lines where her bikini strings covered.
Crystal looks over at Jen with her bare torso. She notices the thin lines on Jen's back.

"Oh my! girl! You havent got much time out in the sun without a top have you? Need to do something about those tan lines."

"I havent really got around to tanning outside without a top yet. Im still getting used to being in my bikini most of the time."

Jen lifts up off the towel slightly to let her small firm breasts hanging from her body with her soft pink nipples poking out at the end.

"Seems like youre getting into the swing of things with going topless."

"Yeah it feels good to finally be without the top even if its just to lay here and tan."

Jen pulls the bikini top from under her and sets it next to herself. Crystal looks impressed with how Jen is so casual about going topless when before she never wore anything less than a bikini outside. It took her quite a while just to get up the guts to wear thongs in public. She decides to up the ante a bit.

"Hey Jen, want to go for a swim?"

"Yeah sure, ill grab my top." Jen turns to her side and covers her small titties with her arm as she reaches for her bikini top.

Crystal decides this isnt the reaction she was hoping for and tries to say something before Jen loses her stride.

"Dont bother, just go topless. Its only a quick dip."

Jen feels nervous. She knows this is the response she wanted to have someone actually urge her to go topless but she wonders how people will react to her going topless in public.

Before she changes her mind Jen stands up and thrusts her breasts out proudly with her pointy nipples sticking straight out, hard with anticipation. Jen tries not to think of the people around her as she walks towards the sea. Crystal smiles as they walk calmy down to the ocean. One of them in a white bikini with a thong and one of them topless with only a small blue bikini bottom on. Jen fights the urge to put her hands over her breasts to cover her perky pink nipples but keeps them at her sides. She doesnt want to show any hesitation.

They finally reach the water and Jen quickly jumps in until her breasts are below the water. Crystal jumps in with her and splashes around in the water almost getting knocked over by a wave. When she gets up she has to readjust her bikini top so her breasts dont pop out. Even though Crystal has a more full bikini top she also has slightly bigger breasts than Jen so she has more trouble keeping them in because they bounce around alot while Jen's are smaller and more firm. Jen laughs at Crystal as she tries to keep her breasts covered.

"Why dont you just remove the top and go bare like me?"

"Oh no, im not adventureous like you, the most I can do is wear a thong but topless is too much for me. This bikini top is daring as it is."

"Youre the one who encouraged me to bare all here and now im topless with my tits hanging out and my full perky nipples for all to see." Jen pulls her slender body above the water so her pale white breasts are exposed.

"Thats because I knew youd love it. You have the body for it and wouldnt mind not wearing a top here." Crystal tells her.

Jen puts her hands on her sides as she stands there teasing Crystal with her ample breasts almost in her face. While she is doing this Jen doesnt notice this huge wave hit both of them and knock them down. Crystal catches herself but Jen being smaller and more petite gets slammed by the wave and falls in the water. She gets up and tries to get the hair out of her face and the water from her eyes. Jen takes Crystal's hand as she stumbles and tries to catch her balance.

"Are you alright?" Jen sees Crystal standing there staring at her with a shocked expression in her eyes. Jen cant understand why shes looking at her that way.

"Whats wrong? Why are you look at me like that?" Jen crosses her arms in front under her breasts leaving them bare.

"Jen I dont know how to tell you this girl but......youre naked."

"What?"

Jen gazes down and realizes that Crystal is right. Her entire body is bare down to her feet. Jen's shaved pussy is exposed for all to see and her bikini bottoms are at her feet.

"Oh my god!" Jen immediately takes a hand and puts it on her pussy covering her little pink clit with her hand still leaving her untanned boobs completely exposed.

"Girl you should pull your bottoms up before the next wave hits and you lose them." Crystal says worriedly.

"Right......"

Jen thinks about how shes gonna do this without giving everyone a show. Of course shes already done that since shes been standing here for the past few seconds with her pale white titties and her completely shaved pussy totally exposed for anyone to see. She knows she doesnt have all day as the next wave approaches Jen can see its a big one that will probably make her lose her bottoms completely. Then she would be naked, something which she just cannot handle. So horrified she moves her trembling hand from her clit and reaches down to grab her bottoms.

Theyre wet and soggy so it takes some effort to pull them up. Jen tugs on them as she tries to get them up her legs. Her pussy is totally exposed for anyone to see as she gets her bikini over her knees and tries to pull it up to her crotch. Finally she gets her bikini up and over her hips and gets her pussy and her ass covered. Some of her crotch in the front is still exposed but her clit is still covered so she doesnt worry about the rest of her white areas being shown and of course since she doesnt have her bikini top her breasts remain uncovered.

Jen immediately puts her hand on her chest to contain her beating heart as she tries to calm down from her first nude exposure in public. Just after she got her bottoms safely up the next wave hits, luckily its smaller than the last one and only shakes her up a bit but she still grabs her bottoms with her other hand to make sure they stay up. Crystal doesnt even flinch during that wave.

Jen looks at Crystal with her hand still over her chest. "I think thats enough fun in the sea for one day." Crystal agrees, not wanting to shock her friend with another ordeal of that nature.....at least for now.

With luck noone saw her little nude moment and Jen walks back with Crystal to her towel. Jen looks around nervously, being consciously aware more now how exposed she really is and how vulnerable. Jen is happy to be topless but at the same time knows how close she is to being completely naked. Secretly it was a thrill for her flashing her white pussy with her pink clit exposed like that but on the outside she is trembling because those are her most intimate parts and she is just not ready to take that leap yet.

Safely at their towel, Jen sits down and pulls her knees up to her breasts as she wraps her arms around them.

"that was the most humilating experience ever."

"Yeah that was pretty intense for me too. I mean I just looked over at you and saw that everything was out there clear as day and you could easily tell your breasts and pussy from everything else since theyre still so white."

"I really need to spend more time topless getting rid of my tanlines."

"I think we can take care of that."

"Really?"

"Yes, to start I think we should put your bikini top in the car so you can spend the day topless and not get tempted to put it on." Crystal takes Jen's bikini top and folds it up.

Jen looks at her nervously as she takes away her only other peice of clothing she has besides her shorts which are in the car. She knows that Crystal is trying to push her limits and that once she puts the top away Jen will be commited and wont be able to cover her breasts for the rest of the day.

"I really do want to go topless and its something ive been waiting for a long while to do its just this is a big step for me."

"Dont worry, going topless is perfectly legal here, I checked and lots of girls do it. I havent seen any yet today but im sure more will come in the next few days."

Jen just shrugs her shoulders and lays down on the towel on her back as she sticks her breasts out and her now hard nipples point straight up. "Im going to get some rays and rest a bit here."

"Thats okay, im gonna go to the car and put this away and then we can get a bite to eat." Crystal says as she trots off with Jen's top.

Jen cringes a bit as she doesnt even know what Crystal means by that but she puts it out of her mind as she gets some sleep.

Soon Jen wakes up and she turns her head just as this hot guy in a pair of blue swim trunks walks over and smiles as he looks at her topless body. Jen resists the urge to cover her breasts as she gets up just as the guy stops in front of her.

"Hi there, here for some sun and a nice tan?"

"Yeah, im here with my friend Crystal and we came to enjoy a day at the beach."

"Thats cool, I came with some other guys we were doing some surfing andwe saw you and your friend in the water earlier."

"OMG! You didnt see me naked did you?"

"Naked? No it looked like you were wearing a white bikini then..."

"You mean you were actually naked on the beach?"

"Yeah we got hit by a wave and my bottoms fell down."

"Thats gotta be freaky. Good thing you got them back up before the next wave hit."

"Totally, I couldnt imagine losing my bikini and being bottomless with my pussy exposed."

"I understand, dont worry I wasnt close enough to see any details like that. What happened to your top? Did you lose it?"

"No, I took it off so I could tan. I walked with my friend down to the water so we could enjoy the waves."

"Youre very brave to do that. I dont know many girls who would leave their towels topless and go down to the water."

"Im a bit adventureous that way."

"Cool, my name is Dan by the way."

"My name is Jen, nice to meet you Dan."

"Likewise. Heres my number in case youd like to chat later. I gotta get back to my pals just thought id come over and say hi. Theyre gonna be so thrilled when I tell them I got to talk to a topless chick. Love ya, see you later."

"Bye Dan. Thanks for the chat, it was fun."

Dan walks away as Jen slips his number into her bikini bottom. He sees her do it and is really excited as he runs over to where his friends are with their surfboards. Jen is once again alone, standing topless next to her towel.

Jen looks around for Crystal. Shes nowhere to be seen. Jen has a million thoughts going through mind about Crystal leaving her here topless in just her bikini bottoms to walk all the way home with only a tiny bikini bottom on. She keeps looking around and finally sees Crystal waving to her and gesturing her to come across the beach to where she is.

Jen runs topless across the beach to where Crystal is and brings her purse with her so nobody takes it. She reaches into her bikini and takes Dan's number so she can put it in her purse for safe keeping.

"Good thing you brought your purse." Crystal takes her hand and walks her to the street near the boardwalk. Jen gets nervous as she walks further from the beach and is still topless with her nipples poking out. Shes not sure what Crystal has in mind. Jen is happy she brought her purse.

"I just didnt want anyone to take my purse since I had to walk all the way here and I wasnt sure what we had planned." Jen tells her.

"I told you we could grab a bite to eat after I went back to the car."

"Why didnt you just let me keep my top then?" Jen puts her hands on her hips as her breasts point outwards towards the street.

"Because you wont need it and besides im trying to help you with your tan."

"Crystal, the beach is one thing but if im going to get lunch with you I cant just walk in with my boobs hanging out like this, ill get thrown out." Jen points to her bare breasts as they jiggle slightly with her movement..

"Sure you can, its by the beach and besides im in my thong."

Crystal points at her thong waiting impatiently wanting to get some grub.

"Thongs are one thing, my nipples are here for all to see." Jen covers her nipples with her hands as people start walking by down the street.

"Oh stop being such a baby, you know youve always wanted to do this." Crystal looks at her with a smile full of mischeif and grabs her hand as she pulls her towards the street. Crystal pulls Jen so quickly her hands fall from her breasts leaving her ample nipples exposed again with no way to cover them. Deep down Jen knows she is right so she follows Crystal across the street with her breasts bare for all to see. Crystal lets go of Jen now she knows shes got her hooked. As she walks across the street Jen can see everyone looking at her breasts and nipples that are now hard as rocks. She tries to look confident and get across the street quickly as possible.

Soon they arrive at the restaurant which is actually a little snack shop with a indoor eating area. Jen sees two girls in bikinis and a shirtless guy walk out. She feels a little better but to her theres a difference between a shirtless guy and her being topless as she looks down at her bare breasts. Theyre quite small but still big enough for people to know shes a girl and is topless. Since her top is locked in Crystal's car Jen knows she cant back out now so she reaches out and opens the door.

A big gust of wind from the a/c blows on her naked torso as she opens the door and she wraps her arms around herself as she realizes how cold it is inside. Now she definitely wishes she kept her top, not that it would do much about the cool air inside. The cold air hits her bare tits reminding her how exposed she is. Still it feels good since its so hot outside. Jen quickly gets used to the cool breeze inside and puts her arms down leaving her body on display for everyone inside. Crystal comes in behind her and quickly guides Jen to the counter.

The cashier a lady in her 30's stands there in awe taking in the topless beauty before her. She cant beleive a topless woman finally came into her store. The woman looks Jen up and down noting her tan body that stands in stark contrast to her still pale white tits with her soft pink nipples that are now harder and more pronounced because of the air inside Jen notices that this woman is staring at her as she bares all.

"Wow, never thought someone would have the guts to come in here like that." The cashier told Jen. "You look beautiful. Especially with your white tits and pink nipples on display. You must not get much sun there huh?"

Jen blushes a bit and says "well actually I was afraid that youd ask me to put a top on or make me leave."

"Put a top on? Of course not, this is the beach and ive got no problem with you topless in here. In fact alot of girls come in here not wearing much more than you are now." She points at two girls sitting at a table wearing bikinis that are so small the tops barely cover their nipples.

"If you ask me those tops are silly, they show so much the girls might as well just go topless and leave their nipples uncovered."

"I always thought so too and in the end when you think about it its really quite silly." Jen leans forward so her breasts hang out in front of her.

"Youre gonna be a trend setter girl." Crystal walks up behind her.

"Damn right. My name is Teri, So what can I get you hon?"

"We'll have a couple of sandwiches with some fries and sodas." Jen reaches down to get her money and forgets she isnt wearing any pants and thus doesnt have pockets.

"That will be $14 hon."

Jen fumbles around in her purse for a few minutes all the while her pale breasts jiggling around slightly in front of her. Finally she pulls some money out and hands it to Teri.
Teri hands Jen some change and Jen just to be a little naughty sticks the money in her bikini bottoms.

"Nice place to put it, itll be real safe there." Teri smiles as she gets a breif glimpse of Jen's bare pussy.

Jen looks down and sees her pussy exposed to Teri where the money causes her bikini to stick out a bit. Jen normally doesnt do that but since Teri was so nice to her and accepting of her topless state she figured shed show how much she appreciated that. Besides shes sure that Teri has seen alot more in her day.

Jen still cant beleive that she is in the middle of the little restaurant without any top. Jen pulls the money out of her bottoms and puts it in her purse then walks to a table with Crystal to sit down. The floor tiles are cool beneath her bare feet. They sit right behind the girls in the bikinis. Jen can hear the girls talk as they eat.

"Did you see that topless chick that came in here with her friend? I cant beleive she came in here without a top."

"I wish I had the nerve to do that, totally."

"Well why dont you?, it is the beach after all and that other skinny chick came in here not even wearing one. I dont even think she had a top with her to put on. "

"I cant do that, my boobs are too big, everyone will see them with my huge areolas and nipples."

"Girl they can see all of that anyways your bikini top is a joke, it doesnt even cover anything."

"I guess youre right, ive just never exposed my breasts in public before."

The red thonger removed her bikini top and stuffed it in her purse. Her huge boobs popped out of their barely concealing top. They were more tan than Jen's breasts were because they were bigger and more of them was showing in that top but still quite a bit of her breasts were still white as day. She immediately put her hands over her large nipples.

The girl in the pink bikini undid her top and removed it. Her breasts being smaller than her friends huge melons they were still quite big compared to Jen's. She put her bikini top in her bag. Both of them now sat there topless with just their tiny bottoms on, especially the one in the red thong who might as well have been naked. Teri looked over at them and gave them an approving nod.

"Shit!, see Teri doesnt mind."

"Bout damn time you girls got those tiny peices of dental floss off."

The girl in the red thong continued to hold her huge breasts out of fear someone might see. Her friend thought she was nuts.

"Woman, put your hands down. Your bikini covered less than your hands do and you look embarassing." Her busty friend complied and puts her hands down so her huge brown nipples are on display.

"Good, you cant eat that way anyways." The pink girl chows down on her sandwich totally unfased by her ample tan breasts with her tiny nipples hanging out there in front of her as she eats.

Jen looks back from hearing all the commotion and sees the two girls in the bikinis now topless and eating their meal. She smiles knowing now that shes not the only topless person here.

Crystal looks up from her meal and sees the two girls behind her topless friend and notices too that theyre also both quite topless.

"See I told you that youd be a trend setter today." Crystal puts her hand on Jen's bare shoulder.

"I guess youre right, im really getting into this topless thing." Jen smiles as she proudly sticks her breasts out not caring who might see them.

The two girls behind Jen notice her sitting there behind them and excited about her brazeness with going topless get up from their seats and come over to Jen's table.

"Wow girl! That took some guts. We didnt think anyone had the nerve to just walk in here without their bikini top on with their tits and nipples bare like you."

" I didnt have a top and I was hungry so I thought I might as well go for it. I didnt want to put on something that really covers nothing anyways just to go get something to eat. Seems like you two got brave and took the plunge." Looking at the two topless girls Jen just loves how despite their bigger breasts and more prominent nipples both of the girls seems so comfortable now that they werent wearing their tops anymore.

"Yeah I dont know why we didnt do this years ago."

"Hell I coulda told you that!" Teri shouts across the room.

"Hey, would it be possible for us to sit and eat with you and your friend here?"

"Sure, have a seat." Jen scoots over and lets the pink girl in while Crystal moves over on the other side so her big boobed friend in the red thong could sit next to her.

"Did you even bring a top with you to the beach today?" The red thong girl asks Jen.

"Yes but my friend had me put it in the trunk of her car so I could enjoy being topless all day without the temptation to put it on so now im completely topless and couldnt put one on even if I wanted to which I can say honestly now I dont." Jen says as she cups her breasts and holds them together.

"If I had the damn thing I wouldve probably just chickened out and put it on. Then I wouldve missed out on this wonderful experience."

"What are your names?" Jen looks at the two girls.

"Oh my name is Kathy and this is Jill."

"Nice to meet you two. What brings you here?"

"We're just here to enjoy the beach and do some shopping."

"Same thing with us, although im not sure how much shopping we'll do." Jen opens her arms and shows her bare breasts.

"Oh dont worry about that. No shop here is gonna hassle you about that. We've seen a few girls go into some of the shops topless we just never got the courage to do it ourselves until now."

"Took ya long enough."

"Youre just jealous you couldnt get us to do it first Teri. It took our perky little friend here to get us to go for it."

"Bah!"

"Actually now that you inspired us to remove our tops we might just continue our shopping bare breasted and not even put our tops back on."

"I dont know about that..." Jill sheepishly tries to hide her breasts a bit.

"Oh cmon itll be fun and besides where else can you show your breasts everywhere without anyone caring? You already took your top off in front of these two fine ladies and one of them is already bare."

Jill reluctantly agrees and so they decide after their meal to do some shopping. Jen gives Crystal a curious look as she eats. Crystal stops eating wondering why Jen is staring at her like that.

"Whats wrong? Why are you staring at me like that?"

"Oh I was just wondering if youd like to join us and go topless since we're all doing it?"

Crystal doesnt know what to do. She has three topless girls looking at her in her white two peice bikini and suddenly feels out of place.

"I dont usually do the topless thing....I like thongs and showing off my curvy ass...but when in Rome." Crystal unties her bikini top and puts it on the table.

Jen likes what she sees. Crystal has medium sized breasts, not as small as Jen's but not as big as Jill's or Kathy's. Before Jen can take Crystal's top she puts her hand on it.

"Only while we're here on the beach and then im putting it back on." Jen knows better than to argue with Crystal about it now but thinks she will convince her friend to go topless more in the future.

"I was wondering when youd get your attractive friend there to take off her top. She looked outta place with the rest of you ladies letting it all hang out like that. Hell I thought gettin Kathy and Jill there to get their damn tops off was hard!"

"You just like seeing bare boobies in your shop Teri."

"Damn straight, gotta have something to liven this place up."

The girls finish their meals and thank Teri for the food. Then they take their purses and walk outside. When they open the door Jen is the first to feel the heat hit her for the first time since they walked in to the snack joint.

"Damn its gotten hot out here. Good thing I got you girls to take your tops off."

"Youre right, it feels alot better now that we're all bare, thanks Jen." Kathy looks at the 3 of them and enjoys how pretty they look with their breasts loose without being restricted by any cloth.

They walk down the street a ways watching other people go by them on the sidewalk and take double glances at them when they realize all 4 of the girls are topless without a top in sight. Several cars honk their horns as they go down the street. Jen grabs her breasts and shakes them as one car drives by a guy yells out the window at her. She jumps and stick her arms in the air joyfully at the guy's excitement seeing her topless.

"I love being topless!" Jen exclaims. The others look at her like shes a changed woman.

"So, ready to burn all your tops and go topless completely from now on?" Kathy looks at Jen with a curious eye.

"I dont know if id go quite that far...yet but I would definitely leave the tops at home most of the time." Jen holds her breasts together and smiles at the girls.

They all laugh as they continue walking past a few stores until they reach a bikini shop with some interesting suits in the window.

"Wow, I like that thong in the window!' Jen she sees a yellow thong bikini hanging there. She has been wanting to get up the nerve to wear a thongi in public since she started wearing bikinis exclusively in the summer but because of her bottom-phobia she just hasnt got up the courage to do it.

"If you like that thong so much you should go in and buy it." Crystal and her friends all look at Jen like theyre eager to go in and shop around too.

"Its interesting we're all topless and here we are going to shop for bikinis. Thats certainly a twist." Jen crosses her arms over her body leaving her small breasts bare.

"Lets go in and see what else theyve got. Ive been wanting to get another bikini to go along with this one." Kathy looks at Jen and the others.

Jen grabs the door and they walk inside. The shopkeeper looks up and is surprised to see 4 topless beauties walking in at the same time. He knows this is his lucky day.

"Hello ladies, can I help you today? We have an excellent set of bikini tops on sale."

"Oh thats okay, we're just fine topless. We really want to see what bottoms you have on sale. Specifically what thongs you have."

"Excellent and my name is Joe by the way."

"Nice to meet you, Joe."

Joe leads the 4 bare breasted ladies over to the window and pulls out a couple of bottoms for them to look at. One of them is the yellow thong Jen was eyeing.

"Here, we have this lovely yellow thong that is really good for those of you who love minimal swimwear which I can tell from you very busty ladies that you do. Also we have this beautiful green bikini bottom in case you want a little more coverage of your....assets!"

Jen takes the yellow thong and places it against her blue bikini bottom. The thong seems to fit quite nicely over her shaven patch. Jen smiles as shes eager to try it on. Kathy looks at the green bikini and loves how shiny it is. They both look at Joe.

"So ladies have you made your decision?"

"Yes we have, I want to try on the yellow thong and Kathy there wants the green bikini." Jen holds her hands behind her back totally unconcerned about the fact that her chest is totally bare in front of Joe.

"Wonderful choice ladies. We have a single changing room back here. Since we're such a small store we only have one room. You ladies can go in one at a time."

"Do you have any matching tops for this bikini?"

Joe looks at Kathy puzzled seeing her bare breasts hanging there. He stays professional though.

" Well yes we do, but for that bottom theyre sold seperately. We have the tops over there on the wall."

Kathy walks over and looks at the tops. When she sees the prices her heart sinks. "Damn, theyre too much! Oh hell im already topless and I really dont need one down here anyways so ill just get the bottoms." Kathy walks back to the changing rooms.

Jen walks up to Kathy and says "If you help me get this thong ill help pay for a top for you. Im not going to buy a top with mine since I like going topless and wont need it."

Kathy ponders her suggestion. As much as Kathy enjoys going topless she thinks she should at least have a matching top in case she goes somewhere she feels like wearing a full bikini.

Its a deal." Kathy shakes Jen's hand.

"Wonderful. Kathy you can change first."

Joe hands her the green bikini and she goes inside to change. While Kathy is changing Jen decides she wants to try on the yellow thong. She gets adventurous.

"Would it be alright if I just changed back here? Nobody's here and I want to try my new thong out. I figured itd go faster this way." Jen looks at him with her cutest puppy dog eyes.

"Umm...well normally girls dont change on the floor here but since nobody else is here and I could never turn down eyes like that......sure you can change here. Just do it in the back of the store so nobody sees you naked."

"I think we can both agree on that!" Jen walks to the back of the store and grabs the bikini at her hips. Jen smiles as she quickly pulls down her blue bikini and slips it off her long legs leaving her completely naked with her small clit in full view of everyone in the store. She turns her back to the front of the store so if anyone comes in all they see is her white ass and they dont get a full frontal. Jen is still afraid of anyone besides her friends here and maybe the store owner Joe seeing her pussy.

Crystal looking around the store for bikinis didnt notice the most recent series of events. She looks to the back of the store and sees her 3 friends talking with Joe but then something catches her eye, one of them seems to be missing her bottoms. Crystal gasps in shock.

"Jen! Youre naked! In the store!" She looks at Jen and eyeballs Jen's bare pussy as she turns around in response to Crystal's comment and stands there with her pale white breasts hanging out and her throbbing clit standing out against her white crotch.

Jen quickly puts her hand between her legs to cover her pussy.

"Crystal, im trying on my new thong!" Jen says as she tries to hide her nudity from the front window.

"Shouldnt you use the changing room for that? Everyone can see your clit."

"Thats why I had my back to the window so people would only see my ass. I dont want them to see my naked pussy anymore than you do. Kathy is in the changing room trying on her green bikini. There was nowhere else to change."

Jen quickly takes the thong and slides it on. She pulls it up her legs and slides the string along her ass and into her crack as it rides up her butt. She tries to pull up the patch in front to cover her slit. The front comes up shorter than she thought and it barely covers her pussy but luckily since she shaved it the material covers her pink clit from view.

Jen turns around and models it for them all to see. Jen has to keep adjust it to ensure the front stays over her pussy. Besides the small patch in front she is essentially naked.

"Damn girl! That thong doesnt cover much, might as well be naked." Crystal tells her. "I mean I wear thongs but damn that thing is brief. Hey Jen I thought you didnt like thongs since they show off too much of your ass and almost your pussy?"

"Well im not too crazy about anyone seeing my ass but id rather them oogling my ass than my pussy. I wanted something daring to wear places I couldnt go completely naked."

"I certainly couldnt wear that, im too big for it and my pubes would be all hanging out if I did." Jill looks at them.

"You could always shave like me."

"Nah, I like my red bikini just fine."

Joe walks over and looks at Jen in her new thong. He likes what he sees and enjoys the fact that Jen is almost naked except for a small patch of fabric over her clit.

"Do you like your new thong?"

"I really do. It does require some attention in the front to make sure my pussy isnt exposed but its really comfortable and I think the color goes well with me. I want to buy it." Jen adjusts it just before her clit pops into view again.

"Well I need to scan the tag on the side so if you want to buy it youll need to remove it for a moment so I can read the barcode."

"Damn!" Jen had hoped Joe could complete the purchase and let her walk out of the store with the thong without needing to remove it. Jen shrugs her shoulders and turns around to take it off for Joe. She just hopes that he can scan it quickly or she can put her blue bikini back on.

Jen removes the thong and hands it to Joe leaving her naked in the store again. She looks for her blue bikini and cant find it. Jen almost panicks as she fears having to stay naked in the store.

Jen remembers she put the bikini in her purse. It would take her too long and too much fumbling around to get it out so she just stands behind the counter and decides to remain naked until Joe finishes the transaction and then hopefully she can put the thong on, at least until she can change back into her blue bikini bottom.

"I hope nobody comes in while im purchasing my thong and sees me naked with my pussy hanging out like this."

"Aw damn!" Joe spurts out as he tries to scan the thong. Jen looks at Joe across the counter with her hands on her hips not caring that her pussy is in full view of Joe. "Whats wrong?"

"Im missing a peice of this bikini." Joe says as he fumbles around inside of a box. Finally he pulls out a bright yellow triangle string bikini top that matches the thong and hands it to Jen.

"I dont want the top, just the thong!"

"Im sorry miss but its part of the package." Joe takes the top and scans the barcode on it .

Jen sighs and just hopes it doesnt cost too much. Joe hands the bikini top back to her.

"Itll cost $28 for the whole outfit."

Jen really wants the thong and while she doesnt want another top since she probably wont be wearing one anytime soon she realizes that buying it is the only way for her to get the thong. Finally she agrees.

Before Joe rings up the final purchase though he suggests Jen try on the bikini top. Jen looks down in dismay, she doesnt want to put a top on but figures the sooner she tries it on the sooner she can get it off her boobs and leave them bare again. Her pussy is already exposed and she wants to put her thong on.

Jen hangs the bikini top over her chest as she wraps the strings around her and ties them behind her. She pulls the cups over her pale breasts and soft pink nipples. Then she adjusts it so everything is in place. Once again the top is just a bunch of strings with two small cups over her breasts and unlike her blue bikini top this one doesnt even cover her areolas completely, it only goes over her nipples and even then just barely.

Jen thinks to herself "what a joke! This bikini doesnt even cover everything and yet I have to buy it with this thong in order to get it. I couldnt even wear this anywhere besides here because it doesnt even cover whats legally required in most places. Im just lucky I live where its legal to go topless everywhere."

Jen continues to ponder the bikini as she stands there naked with her pussy exposed and the only thing shes wearing is this ridiculous bikini top that only covers her nipples!

Jen decides to accept the bikini top just so she can get the thong and put it on. Then hopefully she can find someplace to rid herself of the bikini top. Jen takes it off and puts it on the counter for Joe so he can finish the transaction. Jen reaches into her purse and pulls out two $20 bills and gives them to Joe. He punches up the purchase and gives her the change and her receipt. Joe cuts off the tags and hands Jen the bikini top and thong. She quickly puts the thong on and pulls it over her pussy. Then she stuffs the top in her bag. Joe looks at her odd.

"Areint you going to wear the top?"

"Ill wear it later when we leave the beach." Jen tells him. In reality she has no intention of wearing the top but isnt about to tell Joe that. "I like my breasts and nipples being bare now. Thanks for the top and thong though."

"Youre welcome sweetie, come back anytime."

Jen turns her back to Joe and smiles as Kathy comes out in her green bikini. She has both the top and bottoms on. Jen and her friends give Kathy the thumbs up and she goes back in to change and comes back out topless wearing her pink bikini bottoms again. Kathy goes over to Joe to pay for her bikini. Jen gives her some money so she can buy the top. She mumbles to herself "at least that bikini had a full top that actually covers something. Least I dont have to bother with the bloody things anymore."

"How do you like your thong?"

"Its great Kathy, ive always wanted one like this I also got a top with it. They came together so I had to buy both."

"Oh well, its not like youre gonna wear it anyways, you seem quite happy going topless."

"I might wear it later." Jen lies to Kathy in front of Joe, mostly for his benefit since he is in earshot. She would tell Kathy the truth later.

Crystal and Jill rolled their eyes knowing damn well Jen was never gonna put that ugly top on ever again.

"Thanks Joe!"

"Anytime ladies, come again."

The girls walk out topless. Jen quickly pulls them down the street as she hurries to the nearest trash can and takes the yellow top and quickly dumps it inside. Jen smiles as she thrusts her breasts out proudly and is so glad to be topless again.

"I am never wearing a bikini top again..."

"damn right youre not."

"Well I dont know about Jill and me. We love going topless with you gals but I dont know if we're ready to give up wearing tops at the beach completely or not."

"Thats okay, im not a big topless person either. Jen is the real topless trooper here." Crystal cups one of Jen's boobs and squeezes it gently.

"Im proud of my breasts and want to be able to show them off everywhere the guys can." Jen puts her arm around Crystal.

"So I take it you didnt like the top Jen?

"No Kathy, I didnt. I only said I did in the store so I wouldnt upset Joe."

"I understand, that top was ridiculous anyways. What a ripoff!"

"Hey gals want to head down to the music store?'

"Sure, but first I want to find someplace to change out of this thong." Jen hurries over to an alley between the stores and quickly slides her thong off leaving her naked again out in broad daylight as she looks for her blue bikini in her purse.

Crystal and her new friends stand guard as Jen changes behind an old dumpster. Jen pulls out the blue bikini and quickly slides it on over her pussy.

"its a shame you didnt want to keep that thong on, then we couldve matched."

"Sorry Crystal, I like the thong but its too big of a step for me today and besides I dont want to have to be constantly adjusting the thing inside the store while im looking around." Jen pulls up her blue bikini seeing that she didnt fully adjust it when she put it on and her clit almost came into view.

"I dont know why you bothered hiding to change. You were practically naked as it was you couldve just whipped that thing off and put your bikini on and nobody wouldve known the difference. With that white patch down there anyone from far away wouldve just thought you had a white bikini on."

"Im still nervous about people seeing me totally naked in public."

"I dont see why, youre already topless and you dont have much down there for anyone to see."

"Still going naked in public is alot different than just being topless." Jen scratches her itching nipple.

"Not really, I do it all the time."

"What do you mean?"

"Sometimes when im at the beach and they dont have a changing room I just change out of my wet thong in the parking lot and quickly put on a new one. I brought a few just in case this one gets really yucky. I dont like riding in my car wearing a wet swimsuit. Sometimes I change the top too but I usually wait until im in the car for that. Im not as much a trailblazer there as you are. I prefer being bottomless more but theres no way im doing that out here like you do with your breasts."

"Why not? I thought you said being naked was the same as being topless."

"Being topless on the beach is legal. Being fully naked is okay if youre changing quickly and then nobody cares." Crystal tells her.

"Oh okay, I understand."

"Youll see later when we go home."

Jen wonders what she means by that but doesnt have time to ponder it now.

"Hey ladies, are you done in there yet? We wanna go to the music store." Jill stands at the end of the alley waiting as Crystal and Jen come towards her with Jen's thong stuffed in her purse.

"Yeah we're ready." Jen lifts her hand to cover her eyes from the sun.

The four of them walk topless and barefoot down the street to where the music store is. Its one of these huge stores that has a little bit of everything in it. Not as many people go in wearing swimsuits. Some guys are shirtless and a few ladies have bikinis on but alot of the people are clothed and are wearing shoes or at least flip flops. This makes Crystal nervous and she grabs her bikini top out of her purse and puts it on. Jen looks at her in shock.

"Crystal, what are you doing?" Jen watches her friend pull the cups of her top over her tanned breasts.

"I told you im not a big topless person. I went topless with you in the snack shop because everyone else was and in the bikini shop it just seemed normal but.....this is just uncomfortable for me." Crystal adjusts her bikini top to cover her nipples.

"Me and the other girls are topless and I dont even have a top to put on!" Jen says as she points to the still very topless Kathy and Jill.

"its okay Jen, if Crystal would feel better we can always grab our tops from our purses and put them on." Kathy and Jill look for their tops.

Crystal puts up a hand before they can put them on. "No its alright, I dont mind you three being topless I just dont feel up for it in here."

"Just as well since I dont have a top anyways..." Jen looks at Kathy and Jill who seem to still be thinking about what to do and finally just decide to go topless anyways.

The three of them with the now fully covered Crystal walk towards the entrance to the music store. When they reach the entrance they go to open the door but a guard outside stops them.

"You cant come in here without a top on, ladies!"

Damn! Kathy and Jill think as they fumble around for their tops in their bags and quickly put them on.

Jen looks at him hysterically..."What the hell am I supposed to do? I dont even have a top!" Jen covers her breasts with her hands in disgust and goes and stands up against the wall. "i guess ill have to wait for you gals out here...have fun." Jen stands there with her arms over her chest to satisfy the guard.

The girls look at her sadly, wishing they could convince the guard to let her in. They turn to go in. Just after they do Jen still stands there pouting with her arms over her breasts when the guard starts laughing...

"ha ha ha! ooooh you fell for it! They always fall for the ol you cant come in here without a top gag!" The guard laughs uncontrollably and looks at Jen as her jaw hangs open. He walks over to Jen.

"Its okay miss, you can come in like that. I was just messing with you." Jen lowers her arms."Thank you! I was almost afraid I wouldnt be able to go in with my friends. Im new to this whole topless thing and I wanted to see where I could go without a top so and I thought I might have to come back some other time with a top on."

"Nah! We dont get them that often but every now and then some topless chick comes in to buy some cds or whatnot and nobody bats an eye. Sometimes we play that joke on them when theyre an easy mark. We dont do it to everyone because we dont want to piss the wrong person off. Go in and have fun. Its an unofficial rule but usually when a topless chick comes in we give her a discount because she had the guts to come in here with her breasts uncovered."

"Thanks! Im your girl then, I love being topless and dont plan on wearing one when I come here." Jen runs past the guard excitedly as she rushes to the door to catch up with her friends.

Jen feels the cool blast of the air conditioner as she enters the store. By now she has gotten used to that but her nipples still stand at attention every time. She finds her friends by the rack with the new cds on it. They look over at her astonished to see their bare breasted friend inside.

"Jen! Its so good to see you in here. I guess you talked that guard into letting you come in here with your tits uncovered." Crystal gives her a big hug. Shes so glad to see Jen that she didnt care that she was topless.

"Nah, it was just some joke the guard plays on some topless girls who come in. Actually they give discounts to women who come in here without their tops on."

"Really?" Kathy overhears their conversation.

"Yes its true." Jen shakes her tits. "Means another reason im gonna keep coming her bare breasted so I can get stuff cheap. You three should take your tops off so you can get a discount."

"Sorry, me and Jill are done being topless for today. After that scare at the door it was just too much. Maybe next time sweets. You can stay topless though, doesnt seem like you mind. Im glad that guard didnt scare you."

"Wouldnt matter if he did, I hadnt any top to put on anyways. Even if I had one I wasnt about to put it on just to satisfy him. I dont want to put a top on here. Im getting used to being topless. Im almost forgetting I dont have one on." Jen looks down at her breasts and notices that they are getting slightly pinker from her tan but are still quite white compared to the rest of her that was a dark brown.

"Cmon you topless woman you, lets go find some cds!" Kathy takes Jen's hand as they walk through the store. Three girls in bikinis and one in a small blue bikini bottom. Crystal walks behind Jen and decides to make things more exciting since Jen thought Crystal should go bottomless in public more.

While Jen is looking at some music on a rack, Crystal quickly grabs at Jen's bikini and pulls it down, exposing her cute white ass. Jen continues looking at the cds like nothing has happened. Crystal was surprised Jen didnt feel the breeze or sudden movement of her depantsing her in the store but was curious to see how long it would last before she noticed and pulls her bottoms up. Jen actually turns and steps out of her bikini as she walks away from it, exposing her pussy to the whole store. Luckily for her most of the people are walking by quickly or looking the other way. Jen walks to another rack as Crystal picks up Jen's bikini and sticks it in her purse. Jen continues to look at some country cds with Kathy and Jill in another aisle looking at some rock cds.

Crystal walks up to Jen and asks her how she is doing. Jen tells her that she found some cds by some of her favorite artists and is going to buy a few. Jen thinks she feels something funny as someone walks by her. Jen looks down as she is going through her cds when she notices something weird. Jen moves the cds and finds herself looking right at her pussy! Jen shrieks and immediately puts her hand between her legs to cover her bare pussy!

"OMG! Im naked! Where is my bikini? How long have I been bottomless?" Jen asks Crystal desperately, almost with tears in her eyes. Jen now has one arm across her breasts and another with hand over her pussy.

"Damn! I need to find my bikini! I have to get dressed!" Jen panicks as she tries to look around on the floor without uncovering her bits.

Now Jen wishes she had her top or at least something to put on, not that it would help with her bottom, her pussy would still be bard and she would still be naked. Jen really doesnt give a damn about her top at this point and uncovers her breasts so she can put both hands on her pussy as she continues to look for her bikini.

Crystal feels really bad now as a harmless prank turned into something more serious. She wants to end this before it gets crazy and they all get kicked out. People are starting to come over and see what is going on and some store employees start to notice too.

Crystal wants to do something before anyone sees her friend naked. Topless is one thing, there are still some shirtless guys here and several girls in bikinis so Jen's bare breasts areint a problem but naked is another thing. If anyone saw her pussy, theyd all be in trouble.

Crystal hands Jen her bikini saying she found it on the floor. Jen quickly lifts her leg to slide it up so she can get it to cover her pussy before anyone sees that she is naked. Just before she can cover her pussy though a store employee comes by and sees her bottomless state.

"Hey, you cant be naked in here!"

"Im so sorry! I dropped my purse and when I went to get it my bikini fell so after I picked up the purse I was trying to pull my bottoms up when you arrived."

He looked at her questioningly. The guy wasnt sure if he buys her story or not but doesnt want to cause a scene in the store as more people are coming by to see what the ruckus is. So he just says "alright ma'am, just be careful next time. Its okay if you come in here topless but we dont want any nudity in here otherwise we'll have to ask you to leave."

"Thank you! Im sorry I wont cause anymore trouble." Jen tries to collect herself thinking about what just happened. She wants to talk to Crystal and find out how it happened.

"How did my bikini fall without me noticing it? I didnt even know I was naked for so long. "

Crystal feels a rock in her gut. She knew what she did but isnt sure if she wants to mention it in here or not in fear of what her friend might say. Jen keeps looking at her with no intention of changing the subject until she gets an answer. Crystal finally decides to spill the beans and tell her.

"I remember how dissapointed you were at almost not being able to come in here topless so I thought id see how far I could push things since you thought I should go bottomless more so I kind of pulled down your bikini to see how long itd take for you to notice you werent wearing it. Honestly I thought that youd notice it right away and just pull it up and see it was a harmless prank. I was actually quite surprised when you just stepped out of them and walked away."

"I almost got thrown out of here for real! You know how I dont like having my privates exposed in public! I understand what you were trying to do though. You just wanted to heat things up a bit. Dont worry youre my friend, I forgive you. " Jen gives her friend a big topless hug and puts her hands on her hips as she looks at Crystal.

"Sometimes I do wish I could go bottomless and just walk completely naked through here but im content now just being topless and being able to have my breasts uncovered. I think we should just find Kathy and Jill so we can buy our cds and go before we overstay our welcome." Jen and Crystal walk around a few aisles until they find their other two bikini clad friends.

"Hey girls. Where were you? Some big ruckus happened a few minutes ago. There was this big crowd and someone mentioned something about a naked girl."

"Oh dont worry, that was me. Crystal tried to pull a prank on me by depantsing me in the store. I managed to get them back on but not before giving a few people a show. Anyways I just want to get these cds before anything else happens."

"Alright hon. Im just glad youre okay, you too Crystal. Im real glad we met up with you two, especially you Jen. Ive never met someone who is so confident and enthusiastic about going topless as you are. Youre a real inspiration to us."

Since Jen is the only one of their group still topless and that is the only way to get the discount she takes all their cds to the front of the store with some money that Kathy and Jill gave her for their stuff and she walks up to the counter with all of it. The cashier was very happy to see her.

"May I help you miss?"

"Yes id like to buy these cds. I heard that topless women get a discount. Am I topless enough?" Jen asks as she shakes her bare breasts in front of the cashier.

"Oh most certainly miss and yes we do give discounts to topless women. I heard about a topless woman being in here and in fact even heard a rumor that someone was naked in the back of the store for a short time. Is that true?"

Jen gulps not sure weither to tell him or not. He doesnt seem upset about it though and she figures he probably knows more about it than he is letting on so she thinks its better to come clean with him.

"Yes I was naked for a brief time. My friend pulled my bikini down as a prank and I walked around shopping without realizing I was naked and showing my pussy off. I do apologize for any inconvience I caused your store."

"Not at all miss, on the contrary. We have never had a naked woman in here before. We havent even had a topless woman for a while. Some young perky girl came in topless with her friends a while back but nothing like you. I'm going to give you a 50% discount on everything youve purchased here today."

Jen's eyes go wide. "Really?"

"Yes of course miss. We encourage our customers to come as they are and be comfortable so they can enjoy themselves and want to purchase things in our store. So few people come into our store anymore and we have troubles turning a profit so we have to do something to get people incentive to come here. So we give discounts discreetly to people who come in wearing little or nothing, usually topless women or in your case fully naked!"

"Ive never been to a store that does this."

"Its not something we publicly announce but we need to do something to get by."

"Thank you, ill be sure to let my friends know."

Jen pays for her cds, which come to a grand total of $19.95, not bad for almost 10 practically newly released cds.

"Just curious, if you have that rule why did that other employee get upset because of my nakedness?"

"Oh that was Benny, hes new here, I apologize. He was not aware of our new rules. I didnt think he would say anything but it seems someone mentioned your lack of clothing to him and he decided to take it upon himself to investigate. I promise you we will update him on the rules so this sort of unfortunate thing doesnt happen again. Good day to you."
The cashier put the change in her hand and kissed it.

"Youre welcome." Jen takes the change and walks towards the front door where her friends are.

"So howd it go?"

"it went great, we got a 50% discount because I was naked in the store."

"What about that nasty employee?"

"Dont worry about him, hes a new guy. He was unaware of the unofficial rules here and thought it was against the rules for me to be naked in here. The guy at the desk is gonna have a talk with him to update him on the rules here so there shouldnt be anymore problems."

"Thats wonderful. Do you think youll come here again naked?"

"I dont know, im definitely going to come back again topless. I get a discount either way so I guess it just depends on how I feel. Im still kind of nervous of being naked in public that much with my pussy exposed like that but you never know. " Jen told her.

"I guess its a thrill enough just going topless in a place like this. Letting all these guys see your bare torso with your breasts and nipples exposed. Thats quite a rush!"

"Yeah, im more of a topless chick." Jen shows off her firm titties.

The guard outside the door waves bye to them and wishes them a good day, hoping theyll come back again.

"Hey ladies wanna join me and the topless wonder here for a quick dip in the sea?"

"Thats tempted but me and Jill have to get back home, we're roomates and we need to do some errands and stuff. Heres our number, call us later and maybe we'll plan something together." Kathy gives Crystal her number and gives both her and Jen a big hug.

"It was great meeting both of you and I hope we see you topless around town Jen. Have a good one, bye." Kathy and Jill get in the car and drive away.

Jen waves bye and makes sure to wiggle her tits towards them as they drive away. Finally when they are gone Jen dashes across the beach towards the ocean. When she gets there she jumps in letting the waves just roll over her. She has to be careful not to let her only peice of clothing wash away but she enjoys the feel of the cool water on her body. Crystal jumps in too and splashes around with Jen for a bit. Crystal even gets a bit naughty and slips her thong off under the water and walks around a bit bottomless under the waves. She knows noone can see her bottomless under the water so she wasnt worried about being naked.

Suddenly a huge wave hits them and Jen gets tossed around in the water and Crystal has to desperately try to hold on to her thong which is trying to get washed away. Finally before their luck changes Crystal puts her thong back on and Jen adjusts her bikini bottoms before they both get out and walk towards their towels to pick up their stuff for the long walk back to their car.

Jen and Crystal walk back to the car sitting in the parking lot. Crystal opens the trunk and puts the towels they brought inside and gets Jen's shorts out.

"Here you go Jen, I figured youd want to wear these on the way back. I know how you are with your bottom." Crystal hands the shorts to Jen. Crystal then slips her thong off and looks for another one in the trunk.

"My god Crystal, youre naked!" Jen looks at her friend, bottomless with her pussy and ass bare for all to see.

"I do this all the time. Now you know what I meant earlier." Crystal finally fishes her thong out of the trunk and slips it on. Jen notices that it doesnt cover much but at least her pussy is covered even though her ass is still out there since the string just goes up inside her crack.

Jen decides she better get her "bottoms" on so they can leave. She takes the shorts and tries to slide them on but realizes her bottoms are still wet.

"I cant wear these over my bottoms, theyre soaked."

"So take them off."

"Well show me where the restrooms are and ill be right back."

"Im sorry hon, there are no restrooms. You have to change into your shorts here."

"I cant do that, ill be naked again."

"Noone will see you, itll be real quick and besides all you gotta do is just face the car and the only thing people will see is your pale ass. They can already see most of that anyways. They'll just think youre wearing a white bikini with a thong."

Jen stands there and ponders what Crystal has told her. She can either quickly slip the bottoms off and put the shorts on, breifly exposing her smooth clit and white ass for a few seconds or she can just slip the shorts on over her wet bottoms and be uncomfortable the rest of the trip.

"Cmon girl, hurry up and decide or youll just have to go naked. Theres no way youre wearing those wet things in my car like that."

"Oh hell" Jen quickly slides the bottoms off her hips and down her slender legs, bringing her pussy into view again. She struggles to get the bottoms off as she wiggles her ass in the air for all to see reminding her that shes naked and everyone is getting a show. Theres not too many people around but still Jen doesnt want them to see anymore of her lower bits anymore than necessary.

Jen puts her hand between her legs to cover her pussy as she takes her shorts and tries to pull them up her legs. She knows she will have to remove her hand to finish pulling the shorts up so she quickly pulls it away and brings the shorts up over her hips finally covering her ass and pussy from view. Jen sighs with releif and puts her wet bottoms in a bag as she goes to grab her bikini top when Crystal slams the trunk door.

"What are you doing? I need my bikini top!"

"No you dont, you wanted to be topless and get rid of your tanlines and thats what im gonna help you do."

"Thats alright for the beach, even the snack shop or other stores on the boardwalk but if we're gonna drive home in your convertible I need to wear a top." Jen practically begs Crystal to let her in the trunk for her bikini.

"Why? Its legal to go topless here and youve always wanted to do this. Everyone else wears bikinis and nobody bats an eye. So stop worrying and lets go." Crystal puts her foot down and gets in the car.

Jen knows she is defeated so she gets in the car topless and puts her back to the seat. She loves the feeling of the leather on her bare torso. It feels so much better without those bikini straps getting in the way. Jen smiles as she realizes that its actually better this way.

"You know I actually like this. Ive never been topless in a car outside before." Jen says confidently as she leans back and puts her arms behind her head as she thrusts her chest out and feels the cool wind as it goes past her bare nipples.

Jen looks at her friend as they drive away from the beach and go down the street through the town. Now that she has been topless almost all day Jen starts to feel really relaxed and doesnt even care as they drive by and countless people can see her bare breasts and soft pink nipples.

"Are you hungry for some dinner?"

"Sure, can we stop by your place and have something?"

"I dont have anything to eat hon. Would you like to stop by and get something?"

"Some fast food would be nice. Can we go through the drive thru?"

"Nah, I thought we would just sit and eat it there."

"Crystal! Im not dressed for that. Im topless! This isnt the beach, they wont let me in without a shirt."

"Of course they will its still a beach town, lots of girls eat at these places in their bikinis."

"With bare breasts?"

"Maybe not but youll be a trend setter again."

"Well its not any worse than anything else ive done today."

They pull up to the restaurant which is a small burger joint and they get out of the car. One of them wearing a two peice bikini and one bare from the waist up with just some breif jean shorts on with bare feet. Jen looks around to see if anyone is watching her as she walks towards the entrance.

Jen thinks about how excited she is to go topless into a real restaurant this time. Its someplace thats not near the beach so its not as normal for a girl to come in wearing what shes got on. Jen feels a bit more nervous wearing the shorts and being topless since going topless in the bikini is more normal where its not everyday you see a topless girl just wearing shorts going around town. She figures its better that shes topless than bottomless though. Jen would freak out if anyone in there saw her pussy.

When they get to the door Jen gets a little scared because she sees the small sign on the door that says "No Shirt, No Shoes, No Service." She turns towards Crystal and covers her breasts with her hands.

"See I told you they wouldnt let me in without a top on."

Crystal just rolls her eyes. "those places put up those signs all the time. Its policy. Nobody here is gonna actually bother you about what youre wearing."

"You mean what im *not* wearing." Jen uncovers her bare white tits to prove her point.

"Well im hungry so you can either come in and eat with me or stay out here with your bare titties and wait till im done and ill grab you something. Youre always talking about enjoying finally being topless in public well now you are so just go with it."

Jen looks down and can feel her stomach rumbling as she puts her hand on it. Her desire for food overwhelms her fleeting desire to cover her breasts. Besides Crystal is right Jen does love being topless in public.

Not wanting to bother with her scant top just to grab a bite to eat she hurries and opens the door and walks brazenly inside. Again Jen feels the cold air from inside hit her body as she enters. Her nipples are like rocks once again.

"Wow, your nipples sure do get hard fast." Crystal looks at her friend and sees her pink nipples stick out from her smallish breasts like daggers.

"Imagine what itd be like in the frozen food section at the grocery store!"

Jen places her nipples between her fingers and rubs them and sure enough they feel quite hard.

"Maybe ill have to try that sometime."

Crystal thinks about all the interesting ways that could work out as she walks with Jen further into the restaurant.

As she walks towards the counter the light hits her and the whiteness of her breasts really stand out from the rest of her tanned body. She looks down and really notices this and realizes how out of place she looks but she likes it because shes always wanted to be able to go topless to places she normally wouldnt.

When Jen gets to the counter she waits for the person to come take their order. Soon a guy walks up and does a double take as he sees a topless girl standing in front of him. He cant beleive his eyes and his jaw just drops. He is amazed by how small and firm her breasts look and he loves her tanlines. He quickly regains his composure though.

"Ma'am are you okay? Where's your top?"

"Oh, we just came from the beach, I took my top off to work on my tan. I hope its okay that im topless in here. if its a problem we can go somewhere else." Jen worriedly goes to cover her breasts.

The guy quickly tries to calm her before she leaves and he is denied his chance to serve a goddess. "Oh no its fine ma'am. We get lots of beachgoers here, we dont have any rules about shirts or shoes or things like that despite the sign on the door which we had to put there despite our lack of a dress code.. Many guys come in shirtless and barefoot and alot of girls come in wearing bikinis although I have to say youre the first to come here topless. I just thought since you were topless you were in some sort of trouble. Especially since you dont look like you usually go topless." The guy pointed to her tanlines.

"Youre right I dont usually go topless until now but thats why im working on my tan because I want to go topless more." Jen uncovers her breasts and lets the guy look at them.

"Wow, thats a releif. Most girls wouldnt be caught dead in here topless unless they were in some sort of trouble."

"You dont need to worry about little ol me im just here to get my....meal" Jen winks at him and shakes her breasts at him teasingly.

"Very well ma'am, what would you like?"

"A couple of burgers and some fries with two cokes. You can call me Jen."

"Right away ma'am.....uh Jen." The cashier still trying to get used to a topless chick in his place.

"Whats your name?" Jen leans on the counter smiling at the guy with her breasts hanging bare just mere feet from his face.

"My name is Jake." He rings up her order. "The total comes to $8.75" Jake looks at Jen as she is still leaning on the counter, her lovely tan topless body glowing in the soft lights on the ceiling.

"Wow, what a discount." Jen hands Jake the money.

"Well youre special customers, we dont usually get such pleasant people in here." Jake handed her the change and receipt with her cups. Inside one of the cups was a paper. Jen pulled out the paper and read it. The paper had Jake's number on it,

"Thats my number, whats yours?"

Jen writes her number down on another paper he gave her and she hands it back to him.

"Im gonna have to keep that handy for later." Jake slips the paper in his pocket. Jen takes the paper Jake gave her and sticks it in a better place, right in her bikini bottoms! Jake likes that, especially since he thinks he saw a breif hint of her pussy as she did it, for all he knew it was intentional.

"You really worked that guy over, hes kinda cute. You should call him later." Crystal teases Jen by playing with her nipple. Its her way of driving Jen nuts.

"Maybe I will."

Jen and Crystal go to fill their drinks as their food is put on the counter for them. They take the trays and walk to a table. Most of the people in the restaurant are beachgoers so alot of them have swimsuits on so Jen isnt too uncomfortable being topless in a place like this although she secretly wishes there were more clothed people here so she could push her boundaries a bit but she is already doing that since this is the first place off the beach she has been topless and most girls dont go bare in a restaurant like this. Jen is no ordinary girl though.

Jen and Crystal sit down to eat their meal. Crystal looks at Jen and envies her sitting there topless wishing she has the courage to do that.

"How do you feel being topless here away from the beach Jen?"

"Its a bit unsual but I like it and im getting very comfortable going topless, even places away from the beach now. You should try it. You did well with going topless in the snack bar and the bikini shop. We even got Kathy and Jill to try it."

"They were cool, I hope we run into them again. Maybe we'll get them to go topless again with us. About me though I dont know I mean it was cool going topless in the snack bar and the bikini shop because it was on the beach and there was other people doing it like you and Kathy and Jill but now that its just us and we're away from the beach its just a bit odd for me. Im not like you ready to whip the top off at a moment's notice and just go bare on top for hours on end going everywhere without a car in the world that they can all see your tits."

Crystal smiles as she reaches down and slips her thong off leaving her bottomless in the seat across from Jen.

"What are you doing? Youre bottomless! Your pussy is bare inside of the restaurant!"

"So what? Nobody can see it under the table and ill put it back on before we leave. Besides what do you care? Youre here with your tits hanging out, I want my pussy and ass to have some freedom. We all get comfortable in our own ways." Crystal breifly flashed her pussy at Jen to show her she was really naked under the table.

"So where do you want to go tommorow?"

"I was thinking of going to this cool amusement park they have in the city near the beach. I heard about it the other day."

"Thats awesome, we should wear our bikinis there. Itll be another day of fun in the sun."

"Just make sure you remember your thong." Jen points to Crystal's naked bush under the table.

"You gonna wear your bikini top there this time?"

"I dont know, those places are usually lax about those sorts of things so I might just go topless. Ill have to see when we get there. At most ill wear the bikini top and I can always take it off later."

"I guess thats better than nothing." Crystal strokes her pussy under the table. She notices how wet she is and realizes that being essentially naked in the restaurant has gotten her more excited than she thought.

The two girls finish their meal and Crystal slides her thong back on When they get up Crystal leaves a small puddle on the seat from her juices when she was so excited whilte naked. Crystal figures itll be a nice souvenir for whoever comes to clean the tables. The two throw their trash away and go back out to the car. When they get in the car, Crystal immediately slides her thong off and puts it on the seat as they drive away. Jen looks over and sees Crystal's bush. Besides her bikini top, Crystal is naked from the waist down.

"Wow, youre naked Crystal! You must be really getting into the whole bottomless thing." Jen looks at her friend.

"I try to go without the thong whenever I can, obviously I cant go the same places bottomless that you do without a top though." Crystal looks at Jen's bare breasts.

"Since your pussy is already bare, why do you even bother with the top? It looks silly without the thong on." Jen cups her breasts in my her hands.

"Besides the fact that I like the support my top offers, it allows people driving by to think im fully clothed when really im naked on the bottom. If I was topless everyone would know I had nothing on down there." Crystal spreads her legs as she continues to drive.

"Thats interesting, everyone seems to love it that im topless. I think its more sexy to be topless than fully naked because it gives people a sense of wondering whats under the bikini down there instead of just having it all hang out and leave nothing to the imagination." Jen holds her breasts together and rubs her bare nipples.

"You are just too much, girl."

They pull into Jen's appartment and Jen hops out to go back and get her stuff out of the trunk. Crystal gets out with her not bothering to put her thong back on. Jen sees her.

"Hey Crystal your bush is showing, areint you worried about someone seeing you?"

"Not really, everyone here knows you go topless alot and theyve seen me in my tiny thong before so its not like theres anything they havent seen before."

"I do think I should take the top off though. Its one thing to have it on in the car but yeah I think out here it does look a little ridiculous without the thong on." Crystal unclasps her top and throws it in the car. Now she is fully naked.

Luckily we are here in the back so noone will see us from the street. Lets get your stuff out of the trunk. They open the trunk and get Jen's towel and her beach stuff out and Crystal hands her the bikini top.

"Guess you really didnt need that today huh?" Crystal hands the small string top to Jen. Jen looks at it and holds it up to her now almost tanned breasts.

"I guess I didnt, maybe next time ill just leave it here and go topless the whole time. Seems like everything worked out better that way." Jen takes the bikini top and shoves it in her purse.

The two ladies walk in to her building and up the stairs, one of them topless in just a tiny pair of bottoms and one completely naked. When they get to her door, Jen unlocks it and walks inside. Crystal follows her in.

"Do you want anything to eat or drink?" Jen walks into the kitchen. She slides her bikini bottoms off and puts them on the chair. "I dont need these anymore." Jen continues to walk naked to the fridge.

Crystal walks in and says "I guess ill have a soda." She sees Jen standing naked there and is excited. "Finally got out of those bottoms and naked like me huh?"

"Since we're here and its just us girls I didnt see any sense in wearing them. I like being naked at home although I think its more fun being topless outside."

"You look great naked Jen but yeah I can see the appeal of going topless outside." Crystal continues to look Jen's naked body over.

"I love it that you completely shaved your bush off down there."

"Yeah it feels great not to have any hair down there. It feels like im really naked and from far away you cant even tell I dont have something on down there, especially with the tan."

Crystal notices how white Jen's ass and pussy are compared to the rest of her body, including her breasts which are now becoming more tan although theyre still whiter than the rest of her.

"So what are you gonna do the rest of the day?"

"Oh probably just do some errands and then go home. What are you gonna do?"

"Just take a shower and watch some tv for a while and then go to bed."

"Make sure you put the thong on if you go anywhere though."

"Oh dont worry, I will."

"Im sure we're gonna have some fun tommorow."

"Yeah another day of us wearing our bikinis and doing crazy stuff together. Although im sure youre gonna just be topless and barefoot again. With as little as you wear you might as well go naked."

"I dont think I could do that there, im gonna be lucky just to be able to go topless. Being fully naked on those rides would be kind of pushing it."

"Ill be lucky if I can get in wearing my thong."

"If you cant just wear regular bikini bottoms or shorts like me."

"I think its sexy going topless wearing the shorts sometimes instead of the bikini bottoms because then you realize more that youre topless and theres a certain mysteriousness to the whole thing."

"I do think im going to go nude under the shorts though. Itll be fun knowing that those shorts are the only things between me and being naked."

"Then you could always just take the shorts off in the car and go naked, although unlike me you wouldnt have a top on so everyone would know you were naked."

"I think ill just keep the shorts on. As much as id like to go naked in the car I dont want anyone to see my pussy."

"Well see ya tommorow girl. I hope you sleep well." Crystal takes her soda and kisses Jen on the cheek before she walks out naked back to her car and drives away not even bothering to put her top or thong back on again.

Jen hops in the shower and quickly rinses off thinking about her day and realizing how hard her nipples are and how moist her pussy is because her clit is just throbbing from the excitement of her day. Never has she been topless that long and in so many places in one day. Jen vows never to put a top on again for the rest of her time off unless absoulutely necessary.

When Jen gets out she doesnt bother to put any clothes on she just dries off and plops herself down on the couch to watch some tv. After a few hours of watching tv she gets up and goes into the bedroom to get some sleep for her big day tommorow.

To Be Continued

 

[Silverbullet01]

Great job. I enjoyed reading it and hope you continue to write more

 

[PacoFear]

Hiya Mike,

Congrats on your story. Why not post it in the main section of Literotica? It'll get more views there. I think the general idea is to put the stories there and have the discussion about them here.

G'luck,

-PF

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

That was my intention, I wanted to make sure it was something good before I posted it there so I wouldnt be posting a story that turned out to be garbage. I want people to see my story and be able to read it and give lots of input about it.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I posted a updated version of the above story in the exhbitionist/voyeur category in the stories area. Im still waiting for it to be approved but it should be there soon. I tried to post it there before but I had to go back and make some changes.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

This is the up to date version of my story.


Topless Jen

Chapter 1: First Time Topless

Jen wakes up; she rubs her eyes as she sits up and looks down at her naked body. Her pale white breasts and shaved pussy stand out in stark contrast to her slender tanned body. Jen doesn’t take long to get out of bed as she doesn’t have any covers on. She feels so good being naked at home, especially when sleeping. Jen hears her phone ring and goes to pick it up. Crystal, her best friend is on the other end.

"Hey girl, what have you got planned today?"

"Nothing really, just going to relax here at home. I don’t have to work for a few days"

Crystal is not impressed and is not about to let her best friend just lay around all day, especially since she has something better in mind.

"How about we go down to the beach and get some sun?"

"Sure, I’ve got this new blue string bikini I want to try out."

"Great, I’m going to wear my white bikini with the thong bottoms"

Jen had often thought of wearing a thong on a public beach but fears people seeing her ass and pussy so she chooses a full string bikini instead.

"That will look great on you Crystal."

"You should try it sometime girl."

"Maybe sometime, I’m going stick with these ones for now"

"Oh okay your loss. See you in a bit." Crystal hangs up the phone.

Jen has a smile on her face as she walks to her dresser. She opens the dresser and inside is lots of different brightly colored clothes. Most of them are bikinis because since she lives near a beach town whenever she’s not going to work or someplace formal she wears one of her favorite bikinis.

She pulls her blue bikini out and holds it up to her naked body in the mirror. Since she is always active Jen has a slim figure. Jen takes the bottoms and sticks her feet inside as she slides them up her slender legs. She pulls them up to her waist over her pussy and makes sure they are straight. Jen doesn’t want to accidentally flash her pussy at anyone. Her bikini bottoms are so small they barely cover her pussy in the front and in the back cover just her ass leaving her entire legs bare. Jen models them topless in the mirror looking at her slender body.

She notices her small white breasts with her soft pink nipples that stand out from her tanned torso. Jen would prefer to just forego the bikini top and go topless so she could rid herself of her tan lines at least on her breasts but being new to this town since she moved out of her parent’s home at 18 she doesn’t want to take any chances of being arrested for indecent exposure.

So Jen reluctantly takes her bikini top and slides the cups in place over her breasts which barely cover her areolas and nipples and ties the strings behind her back and neck. It’s a smaller bikini than she wore when living with her parents but now that she is on her own she loves it because she can show more with it and that’s why it’s her favorite bikini. This means of course much of her boobs on the sides are still white but she hopes to change that soon.

Jen knows Crystal will be there soon to pick her up and take them to the beach so she muddles around trying to decide what else to wear. Since Jen and Crystal will probably spend most of the day at the beach and not do anything else she decides not to wear a shirt over her bikini and just wear the top. She does decide to wear some jean shorts over her bottoms on the ride to the beach though not wanting to take any chances with the bottom half. Jen likes these jeans because they are so small and barely cover her ass in the back and her crotch in the front leaving almost all of her legs bare.

Before leaving Jen decides whether she should wear any shoes or not but knowing she won’t be wearing them very much anyways she just decides to go barefoot. Jen loves to go barefoot because she hates shoes and only wears them to work She only has one pair for work and the rest are just flip flops or sandals.

Soon Crystal arrives at the door and knocks on it. Jen grabs her small purse. She answers the door and opens it. On the other side Crystal stands there in her white thong bikini. Jen is amazed.

"Wow Crystal, that’s all you wore here?"

Crystal gives her a funny look "Sure why not? We're just going to the beach."

"Well I don’t want to push my luck until I'm sure about things around here but people seem pretty liberal."

Crystal just shrugs her shoulders "Yeah pretty awesome isn’t it? You could probably just skip wearing the shorts and just wear the bikini. I'm wearing my thong."

"That’s okay, not this time I would rather have something to put on in case I lose my bottoms. You know how I feel about my pussy being exposed in public."

"Whatever floats your boat girl you ready to roll?"

"Yes, let’s go"

Jen closes her door and follows Crystal downstairs to her car. Jen loves the feeling of the carpet against her bare feet. She feels so excited knowing that she is going outside finally just wearing her bikini and her favorite shorts and nothing else.

When they get outside Jen is amazed at the sight of Crystal's car.

"When did you get this?"

"I got this last year when I moved here. My parents wanted to get rid of it since they have this new SUV now."

"That’s cool. Must be fun to ride around and feel the warm air and the sun on your body."

"It sure does. A lot of the time I like to go to the beach or out shopping in it." The two bikini clad girls hop into Crystal's blue convertible.

Soon Crystal and Jen are off driving along the road towards the beach. The warm air whooshing past them as Crystal drives the car fast down the street. Jen loves the feeling of the wind against her body and feels it tug against the straps of her bikini top. She has to grab it to hold it in place so it doesn’t come loose and blow away. Part of her wishes her top would come off so she could have an excuse to go topless but she is still nervous about getting in trouble with the cops.

Crystal's bikini is fuller on top so she doesn’t have as much trouble keeping it on as she concentrates on driving. Jen feels a bit jealous but likes the freedom her bikini offers even though she has to constantly adjust it to keep her firm white tits from popping out. Crystal sees Jen trying to adjust her bikini and attempts to get her mind on something else.

"So Jen meet any cute guys here yet?"

"No, not yet I haven’t been here long enough to meet any."

"We will have to do something about that. Maybe you will run into some at the beach. Should be some real studs there"

Jen shrugs her shoulders and catches her bikini just as one of her perky nipples pops out. She quickly covers it.

"Maybe, all I really want to do is relax and enjoy the beach."

"Don’t worry; we will have a good time there together. I promise." Crystal grabs Jen's hand before she can touch her bikini top again.

"You really should just leave your top alone, it’s not like your boobs are going to pop out suddenly and even if they do, who cares, just go with it."

"I will I just don’t want to get in any trouble with the law." Jen winks her big blue eyes.

"Don’t worry about them. Not enough of them at this beach anyways and in any case will keep an eye out for you. We're almost there."

Crystal pulls off the road and into a small parking lot. There are only a few cars in it and not any people. Jen breathes in the cool ocean breeze as Crystal turns off the convertible and opens the door.

"Now that we're here do you want to leave your shorts in the car?"

Jen knows she wants to wear as little as possible but is still nervous about having so little covering her bottoms.

She sees Crystal get impatient and decides "what the hell" and promptly drops her shorts. Jen steps out of them and leaves them in the trunk of the car. Now there’s no turning back as Crystal locks it.

"There, feel better now? Nothing to worry about the trunk will be locked so nobody will steal your shorts."

They both grab their purses and some towels as they walk down the stairs to the beach. When they reach the beach the two see lots of people laying out in the sun and splashing around in the water. Most are wearing bikinis and in the guys case just Speedos. A lot of the women have thongs on but none are topless yet.

"See, all these girls are wearing thongs. You could have done it too."

Seeing all the thongers makes Jen feel a little better. She is still glad at least "this" time that she has her full bikini bottoms on, even if they are just strings with a couple of small patches on them. Jen wishes there were some topless women here. Crystal and Jen lay out their towels and sit down on them.

Crystal sticks her head back and smiles. Jen decides to lie down on her stomach to start getting a tan. Crystal watches Jen lay there.

"Are you eager to get your tan today?'

"Yeah I want to be able to keep this golden brown tan of mine."

"I’m surprised you have one."

"I still go to the beach in my bikini a few times and I like to sun out by the pool at my apartment a lot."

"Bet you are glad to realize that you can wear that skimpy bikini all the time now that you live on your own."

"It does feel good to be out on my own so now I can just wear the bikini top wherever I please."

"You look better in the bikini."

"I feel much better. I prefer wearing a bikini top during the summer when it’s hot out. I would go topless more places if I thought I could."

"That would be a sight to see for sure. I don’t think I could do that. I’m more of a thonger myself."

"Oh well maybe someday"

"Why not right now? We're on the beach and nobody is around. Just untie your top and lay there. You’ve done that before."

Jen looks around and doesn’t see too many people. So she reaches behind her and unties the strings on her back and her neck and lets them fall to her sides. Her back bare and tan except for the thin lines where her bikini strings covered.
Crystal looks over at Jen with her bare torso. She notices the thin lines on Jen's back.

"Did you get much time out in the sun without a top? Need to do something about those tan lines."

"I haven’t really got around to tanning outside without a top yet. I’m still getting used to being in my bikini most of the time."

Jen lifts her body up off the towel slightly to let her small firm breasts hang from her body with her soft pink nipples poking out at the end.

"Looks like you’re getting into the swing of things with going topless"

"Yeah it feels good to finally be without the top even if it’s just to lay here and tan."

Jen pulls the bikini top from under her and sets it next to herself. Crystal looks impressed with how Jen is so casual about going topless when before she never wore anything less than a bikini outside. It took her quite a while just to get up the guts to wear thongs in public. She decides to up the ante a bit.

"Hey Jen, want to go for a swim?"

"Yeah sure, ill grab my top." Jen turns to her side and covers her small titties with her arm as she reaches for her bikini top.

Crystal decides this isn’t the reaction she was hoping for and tries to say something before Jen loses her stride.

"Don’t bother, just go topless. It’s only a quick dip."

Jen feels nervous. She knows this is the response she wanted to have someone actually urge her to go topless but she wonders how people will react to her going topless in public.

Before she changes her mind Jen stands up and thrusts her breasts out proudly with her pointy nipples sticking straight out. Jen tries not to think of the people around her as she walks towards the sea. Crystal smiles as they walk calmly down to the ocean. One of them in a white bikini with a thong and one of them topless with only a small blue bikini bottom on. Jen fights the urge to put her hands over her breasts to cover her perky pink nipples but keeps them at her sides. She doesn’t want to show any fear.

They finally reach the water and Jen quickly jumps in until her breasts are below the water. Crystal jumps in with her and splashes around in the water. While they’re splashing around Crystal almost gets knocked over by a wave. When she gets up she has to readjust her bikini top so her breasts don’t pop out. Even though Crystal has a fuller bikini top she also has slightly bigger breasts than Jen so she has more trouble keeping them in because they bounce around a lot while Jen's breasts are smaller and more firm. Jen laughs at Crystal as she tries to keep them covered.

"Why don’t you just remove the top and go bare like me?"

"Oh no, I’m not brave that way like you are, the most I can do is wear a thong but topless is too much for me. This bikini top is daring as it is."

"You’re the one who encouraged me to bare all here and now I’m topless with my tits hanging out and my full perky nipples for all to see." Jen pulls her slender body above the water so her pale white breasts are exposed.

"That’s because I knew you’d love it. You have the body for it and wouldn’t mind not wearing a top here."

Jen puts her hands on her sides as she stands there teasing Crystal with her ample breasts almost in her face. While she is doing this Jen doesn’t notice this huge wave hit both of them and knock them down. Crystal catches herself but Jen being smaller and more petite gets slammed by the wave and falls in the water. She gets up and tries to get the hair out of her face and the water from her eyes. Jen takes Crystal's hand as she stumbles and tries to catch her balance.

"Are you alright?" Jen sees Crystal standing there looking at her with a shocked expression in her eyes. Jen can’t understand why she’s looking at her that way.

"What’s wrong? Why are you looking at me like that?" Jen crosses her arms in front under her breasts leaving them bare.

"Jen I don’t know how to tell you this girl but......you’re naked."

"What?"

Jen gazes down and realizes that Crystal is right. Her entire body is bare down to her feet. Jen's shaved pussy is exposed for all to see and her bikini bottoms are at her feet.

"Oh my God!” Jen immediately takes a hand and puts it on her pussy covering her little pink clit with her hand still leaving her untanned boobs completely exposed.

"Girl you should pull your bottoms up before the next wave hits or you'll lose them."

"Right......"

Jen thinks about how she is going to do this without giving everyone a show. Of course she has already done that since she’s been standing here for the past few seconds with her pale white titties and completely shaved pussy totally exposed for anyone to see. Jen knows she doesn’t have all day as the next wave approaches and it’s a big one that will probably make her lose her bottoms completely. Jen would be totally naked then, something which she just cannot handle. So scared she moves her shaking hand from her clit and reaches down to grab her bottoms.

Her bikini bottoms are wet and soggy so it takes some effort to pull them up. Jen tugs on them as she tries to get them up her legs. Her pussy is totally exposed for anyone to see as she gets her bikini over her knees and tries to pull it up to her crotch. Finally she gets her bikini up and over her hips and gets her pussy and her ass covered. Some of her crotch in the front is still exposed but her clit is still covered so she doesn’t worry about the rest of her white areas being shown and of course since she doesn’t have her bikini top her breasts remain uncovered.

Jen immediately puts her hand on her chest to contain her beating heart as she tries to calm down from her first nude exposure in public. Just after she got her bottoms safely up the next wave hits, luckily its smaller than the last one and only shakes her up a bit but she still grabs her bottoms with her other hand to make sure they stay up. Crystal doesn’t even blink during that wave.

Jen looks at Crystal with her hand still over her chest. "I think that’s enough fun in the water for one day." Crystal agrees, not wanting to shock her friend with another ordeal of that nature.....at least for now.

With luck nobody saw her little nude moment and Jen walks back with Crystal to their towel. Jen looks around nervously, being aware more now how exposed she really is and how vulnerable. Jen is happy to be topless but at the same time knows how close to being completely naked she is. Secretly it was a thrill for her flashing her white pussy with her pink clit exposed like that but on the outside she is trembling because those are her most intimate parts and she is just not ready to take that leap yet.

Safely at their towel, Jen sits down and pulls her knees up to her breasts as she wraps her arms around them.

"That was the most embarrassing experience ever."

"Yeah that was pretty intense for me too. I mean I just looked over at you and saw that everything was out there clear as day and you could easily tell your breasts and pussy from everything else since they are still so white."

"I really need to spend more time topless getting rid of my tan lines."

"I think we can take care of that."

"How?"

"To start off I think we should put your bikini top in the car so you can spend the day topless and not get tempted to put it on." Crystal takes Jen's bikini top and folds it up.

Jen looks at her nervously as she takes away her only other piece of clothing she has besides her shorts which are in the car. She knows that Crystal is trying to push her limits and that once she puts the top away Jen will be committed and won’t be able to cover her breasts for the rest of the day.

"I really do want to go topless and it’s something I have been waiting for a long time to do its just this is a big step for me."

"Don’t worry, going topless is perfectly legal here, I checked and lots of girls do it. I haven’t seen any yet today but I’m sure more will come in the next few days."

Jen just shrugs her shoulders and lies down on the towel on her back as she sticks her breasts out and her now hard nipples point straight up. "I’m going to get some rays and rest a bit here."

"That’s okay, I’m going to go to the car and put this away and then we can get a bite to eat." Crystal walks off with Jen's top.

Jen cringes a bit as she doesn’t even know what Crystal means by that but she puts it out of her mind as she gets some sleep.

Soon Jen wakes up and she turns her head just as this hot guy in a pair of blue swim trunks walks over and smiles as he looks at her topless body. Jen resists the urge to cover her breasts as she gets up just as the guy stops in front of her.

"Hi there, are you here for some sun and a nice tan?"

"Yeah, I’m here with my friend Crystal and we came to enjoy a day at the beach."

"That’s cool, I came with some other guys we were doing some surfing and we saw you and your friend in the water earlier."

"OMG!!! You didn’t see me naked did you?"

"Naked? No it looked like you were wearing a white bikini then..."

"You mean you were actually naked on the beach?"

"Yeah we got hit by a wave and my bottoms fell down."

"That’s got to be freaky. Good thing you got them back up before the next wave hit."

"Totally, I couldn’t imagine losing my bikini and being bottomless with my pussy exposed."

"I understand. Don’t worry I wasn’t close enough to see any details like that. What happened to your top? Did you lose it?"

"No, I took it off so I could tan. I walked with my friend down to the water so we could enjoy the waves."

"You’re very brave to do that. I don’t know many girls who would leave their towels topless and go down to the water."

"I’m a bit adventurous that way."

"Cool, my name is Dan by the way."

"My name is Jen, nice to meet you Dan."

"Likewise here’s my number in case you’d like to chat later. I have to get back to my pals just thought I’d come over and say hi. They’re going to be so thrilled when I tell them I got to talk to a topless girl. Love you, see you later."

"Bye Dan. Thanks for the chat, it was fun."

Dan walks away as Jen slips his number into her bikini bottom. He sees her do it and is really excited as he runs over to where his friends are with their surfboards. Jen is once again alone, standing topless next to her towel.

Jen looks around for Crystal. She’s nowhere to be seen. Jen has a million thoughts going through mind about Crystal leaving her here topless in just her bikini bottoms to walk all the way home with only a tiny bikini bottom on. She keeps looking around and finally sees Crystal waving to her and gesturing her to come across the beach to where she is.

Jen runs topless across the beach to where Crystal is and brings her purse with her so nobody takes it. She reaches into her bikini and takes Dan's number so she can put it in her purse for safe keeping.

"Good thing you brought your purse." Crystal takes her hand and walks her to the street near the boardwalk. Jen gets nervous as she walks further from the beach and is still topless with her nipples poking out. She’s not sure what Crystal has in mind. Jen is happy she brought her purse.

"I just didn’t want anyone to take my purse since I had to walk all the way here and I wasn’t sure what we had planned."

"I told you we could grab a bite to eat after I went back to the car."

"Why didn’t you just let me keep my top then?" Jen puts her hands on her hips as her breasts point outwards towards the street.

"Because you won’t need it and besides I’m trying to help you with your tan."

"Crystal, the beach is one thing but if I’m going to get lunch with you I can’t just walk in with my boobs hanging out like this, I’ll get thrown out." Jen points to her bare breasts as they jiggle slightly with her movement...

"Sure you can, it’s by the beach and besides I’m wearing my thong."

Crystal points at her thong waiting impatiently to get some food.

"Thongs are one thing; my nipples are here for all to see." Jen covers her nipples with her hands as people start walking by down the street.

"Oh stop being such a baby; you know you’ve always wanted to do this." Crystal looks at her with a smile full of mischief and grabs her hand as she pulls her towards the street. Crystal pulls Jen so quickly her hands fall from her breasts leaving her ample nipples exposed again with no way to cover them. Deep down Jen knows she is right so she follows Crystal across the street with her breasts bare for all to see. Crystal lets go of Jen now she knows she’s got her hooked. As she walks across the street Jen can see everyone looking at her breasts and nipples that are now hard as rocks. She tries to look confident and get across the street quickly as possible.

Soon they arrive at the restaurant which is actually a little snack shop with an indoor eating area. Jen sees two girls in bikinis and a shirtless guy walk out. She feels a little better but to her there’s a difference between a shirtless guy and her being topless as she looks down at her bare breasts. They’re quite small but still big enough for people to know she’s a girl and isn’t wearing a top. Since her top is locked in Crystal's car Jen knows she can’t back out now so she reaches out and opens the door.

A big gust of wind blows on her naked torso as she opens the door. Jen wraps her arms around herself as she realizes how cold it is inside. The cold air hits her bare tits reminding her how exposed she is. Now she definitely wishes she kept her top, not that it would do much about the cool air inside. Still it feels good since its so hot outside. Jen quickly gets used to the cool breeze inside and puts her arms down leaving her body on display for everyone inside. Crystal comes in behind her and quickly guides Jen to the counter.

The cashier a lady in her 30's stands there taking in the topless beauty before her. She can’t believe a topless woman finally came into her store. The woman looks Jen up and down noting her tan body that stands in stark contrast to her pale white tits with her soft pink nipples that are now harder and more noticeable because of the air inside. Jen looks at her and sees that this woman is staring at her bare breasts.

"Wow, never thought someone would have the guts to come in here like that." The cashier told Jen. "You look beautiful; especially with your white tits and pink nipples on display. You must not get much sun there huh?"

Jen blushes a bit and says "well actually I was afraid that you’d ask me to put a top on or make me leave."

"Put a top on? Of course not, this is the beach and I have no problem with you topless in here. In fact a lot of girls come in here not wearing much more than you are now." She points at two girls sitting at a table wearing bikinis that are so small the tops barely cover their nipples.

"If you ask me those tops are silly, they show so much the girls might as well just go topless and leave their nipples uncovered."

"I always thought so too and in the end when you think about it it’s really quite silly." Jen leans forward so her breasts hang out in front of her.

"You’re going to be a trend setter girl." Crystal walks up behind her.

"Damn right. My name is Teri, So what can I get you, hon."

"We'll have a couple of sandwiches with some fries and sodas." Jen reaches down to get her money and forgets she isn’t wearing any pants and doesn’t have pockets.

"That will be $14 hon."

Jen fumbles around in her purse for a few minutes all the while her pale breasts jiggling around slightly in front of her. Finally she pulls some money out and hands it to Teri.
Teri hands Jen some change and Jen just to be a little naughty sticks the money in her bikini bottoms.

"Nice place to put it, it will be real safe there." Teri smiles as she gets a brief glimpse of Jen's bare pussy.

Jen looks down and sees her pussy exposed to Teri where the money causes her bikini to stick out a bit. Jen normally doesn’t do that but since Teri was so nice to her and accepting of her topless appearance she figured she’d show how much she appreciated that. Besides she’s sure that Teri has seen a lot more in her day.

Jen still can’t believe that she is in the middle of the little restaurant without wearing a top. Jen pulls the money out of her bottoms and puts it in her purse then walks to a table with Crystal to sit down. The floor tiles are cool beneath her bare feet. They sit right behind the girls in the bikinis. Jen can hear the girls talk as they eat.

"Did you see that topless chick that came in here with her friend? I can’t believe she came in here without a top."

"I wish I had the nerve to do that, totally."

"Well why don’t you? This is the beach after all and that other skinny chick came in here not even wearing one. I don’t even think she had a top with her to put on. "

"I can’t do that, my boobs are too big, everyone will see them with my huge areolas and nipples."

"Girl they can see all of that anyways your bikini top is a joke, it doesn’t even cover anything."

"I guess you’re right, I’ve just never exposed my breasts in public before."

The red thong girl removes her bikini top and stuffs it in her purse. Her huge boobs pop out of the barely concealing top. They are more tan than Jen's breasts are because they are bigger and more of them were showing in that top but quite a bit of her breasts are still white as day. She immediately put her hands over her large nipples.

The girl in the pink bikini unties her top and removes it. Her breasts being smaller than her friend’s huge melons they were still quite big compared to Jen's. She puts her bikini top in her bag. Both of them now sit there topless with just their tiny bottoms on, especially the one in the red thong who might as well be naked. Teri looks over at them and gives them an approving nod.

"Shit! You see; Teri doesn’t mind."

"Bout time you girls got those tiny pieces of dental floss off."

The girl in the red thong continues to hold her huge breasts out of fear someone might see. Her friend thinks she is nuts.

"Woman, put your hands down. Your bikini covers less than your hands do and you look embarrassing." Her busty friend complies and puts her hands down so her huge brown nipples are on display.

"Good, you can’t eat that way anyways." The pink girl chows down on her sandwich totally not affected by her ample tan breasts with her tiny nipples hanging out there in front of her as she eats.

Jen looks back from hearing all the commotion and sees the two girls in the bikinis now topless and eating their meal. She smiles knowing now that she is not the only topless person here.

Crystal looks up from her meal and sees the two girls behind her topless friend and notices too that they are also both quite topless.

"See I told you that you’d be a trend setter today." Crystal puts her hand on Jen's bare shoulder.

"I guess you’re right, I’m really getting into this topless thing." Jen smiles as she proudly sticks her breasts out not caring who might see them.

The two girls behind Jen notice her sitting there behind them and excited about her bravery with going topless get up from their seats and come over to Jen's table.

"Wow girl! That took some guts. We didn’t think any girl had the guts to just walk in here without a bikini top on with her tits and nipples bare like yours are."

“I didn’t have a top and I was hungry so I thought I might as well go for it. I didn’t want to put on something that really covers nothing anyways just to go get something to eat. Seems like you two got brave and took the plunge." Looking at the two topless girls Jen loves how despite their bigger breasts and more prominent nipples both of the girls seem so comfortable now that they are not wearing their tops anymore.

"Yeah I don’t know why we didn’t do this a long time ago."

"Hell I could have told you that!" Teri shouts across the room.

"Hey, would it be possible for us to sit and eat with you and your friend here?"

"Sure, have a seat." Jen scoots over and lets the pink girl in while Crystal moves over on the other side so her friend in the red thong could sit next to her.

"Did you even bring a top with you to the beach today?" The red thong girl asks Jen.

"Yes but my friend had me put it in the trunk of her car so I could enjoy being topless all day without the temptation to put it on so now I’m completely topless and couldn’t put one on even if I wanted to which I can honestly say now I don’t." Jen says as she cups her breasts and holds them together.

"If I had the damn thing I would have probably just chickened out and put it on. Then I would have missed out on this wonderful experience."

"What are your names?" Jen looks at the two girls.

"Oh my name is Kathy and this is Jill."

"It’s nice to meet you two. What brings you here?"

"We're just here to enjoy the beach and do some shopping."

"Same here, I’m not sure how much shopping we will do though." Jen opens her arms and shows her bare breasts.

"Oh don’t worry about that. No shop here is going to hassle you about that. We've seen a few girls go into some of the shops topless we just never got the courage to do it ourselves until now."

"It took you girls long enough."

"You’re just jealous you couldn’t get us to do it first Teri. It took our perky little friend here to get us to go for it."

"Bah!"

"Actually now that you inspired us to remove our tops we might just continue our shopping bare breasted and not even put our tops back on."

"I don’t know about that..." Jill sheepishly tries to hide her breasts a bit.

"Oh c’mon it will be fun and besides where else can you show your breasts everywhere without anyone caring? You already took your top off in front of these two fine ladies and one of them is already bare."

Jill reluctantly agrees and so they decide after their meal to do some shopping. Jen gives Crystal a curious look as she eats. Crystal stops eating wondering why Jen is staring at her like that.

"What’s wrong? Why are you staring at me like that?"

"Oh I was just wondering if you’d like to join us and go topless since we're all doing it."

Crystal doesn’t know what to do. She has three topless girls looking at her in her white two piece bikini and suddenly feels out of place.

"I don’t usually do the topless thing....I like thongs and showing off my curvy ass...but when in Rome." Crystal unties her bikini top and puts it on the table.

Jen likes what she sees. Crystal has medium sized breasts, not as small as Jen's but not as big as Jill's or Kathy's. Before Jen can take Crystal's top she puts her hand on it.

"Only while we're here on the beach and then I’m putting it back on." Jen knows better than to argue with Crystal about it now but thinks she will convince her friend to go topless more in the future.

"I was wondering when you’d get your attractive friend there to take off her top. She looked out of place with the rest of you ladies letting it all hang out like that. Hell I thought getting Kathy and Jill there to get their damn tops off was hard!"

"You just like seeing bare boobies in your shop Teri."

"Damn straight, we needed something to add some excitement to this place."

The girls finish their meals and thank Teri for the food. Then they take their purses and walk outside. When they open the door Jen is the first to feel the heat hit her for the first time since they walked in to the snack joint.

"Damn it’s gotten hot out here. Good thing I got you girls to take your tops off."

"You’re right; it feels a lot better now that we're all bare, thanks Jen." Kathy looks at the 3 of them and enjoys how pretty they look with their breasts bare without being restricted by any cloth.

The topless girls walk down the street a ways watching other people go by them on the sidewalk and take double glances at them when they realize all 4 of the girls are topless without a top in sight. Several cars honk their horns as they go down the street. Jen grabs her breasts and shakes them as one car driven by a guy yells out the window at her. She jumps and stick her arms in the air joyfully at the guy's excitement seeing her topless.

"I love being topless!" Jen exclaims. The others look at her like she’s a changed woman.

"So, ready to burn all your tops and go topless completely from now on?" Kathy looks at Jen with a curious eye.

"I don’t know if I’d go quite that far...yet but I would definitely leave the tops at home most of the time." Jen holds her breasts together and smiles at the girls.

The girls all laugh as they continue walking past a few stores until they reach a bikini shop with some interesting suits in the window.

"Wow, I like that thong in the window!' Jen she sees a yellow thong bikini hanging there. She has wanted to get up the nerve to wear a thong in public since she started wearing bikinis exclusively in the summer but because of her bottom-phobia she just hasn’t got up the courage to do it.

"If you like that thong so much you should go in and buy it." Crystal and her friends all look at Jen like they’re eager to go in and shop around too.

"This is interesting we're all topless and here we’re going shopping for bikinis. That is certainly a twist." Jen crosses her arms over her body leaving her small breasts bare. "At Least I won’t need to find a matching top this time."

"Let’s go in and see what else they’ve got. I’ve wanted to get another bikini to go along with this one." Kathy looks at Jen and the others.

Jen grabs the door and they walk inside. The shopkeeper looks up and is surprised to see 4 topless beauties walking in at the same time. He knows this is his lucky day.

"Hello ladies, can I help you today? We have an excellent set of bikini tops on sale."

"Oh that’s okay. We are just fine being topless. We really want to see what bottoms you have on sale. Specifically what thongs you have." Jen stands in front of the man as he gazes back at her bare white breasts and down at her blue bikini as it hangs in front of her giving him a brief glimpse of her shaved clit.

"Excellent and my name is Joe by the way."

"It’s nice to meet you, Joe." Jen reaches out and shakes his hand making her unrestrained breasts wobble a bit.

Joe leads the 4 bare breasted ladies over to the window and pulls out a couple of bottoms for them to look at. One of them is the yellow thong Jen was eyeing.

"Here, we have this lovely yellow thong that is really good for those of you who love minimal swimwear which I can tell from you very busty ladies that you do. Also we have this beautiful green bikini bottom in case you want a little more coverage of your....assets!"

Jen takes the yellow thong and places it against her blue bikini bottom. The thong seems to fit quite nicely over her shaven patch. Jen smiles as she is eager to try it on. Kathy looks at the green bikini and loves how shiny it is. They both look at Joe.

"So ladies have you made your decision?"

"Yes we have, I want to try on the yellow thong and Kathy there wants the green bikini." Jen holds her hands behind her back totally unconcerned about the fact that her chest is totally bare in front of Joe.

"A wonderful choice ladies we have a single changing room back here. Since we're such a small store we only have one room. You ladies can go in one at a time."

"Do you have any matching tops for this bikini?"

Joe looks at Kathy puzzled seeing her bare breasts hanging there. He stays professional though.

“Well yes we do, but for that bottom they’re sold separately. We have the tops over there on the wall."

Kathy walks over and looks at the tops. When she sees the prices her heart sinks. "Damn, they are too much! Oh hell I’m already topless and I really don’t need one down here anyways so ill just get the bottoms." Kathy walks back to the changing rooms.

Jen walks up to Kathy and says "If you help me get this thong ill help pay for the top. I’m not going to buy a top with mine since I like going topless and won’t need it." Jen cups her small perky breasts in her hands.

Kathy ponders her suggestion. As much as Kathy enjoys going topless she thinks she should at least have a matching top in case she goes somewhere she feels like wearing a full bikini.

It’s a deal." Kathy shakes Jen's hand.

"Wonderful. Kathy you can change first." Jen hands Kathy a green top to go with her bottoms.

Joe hands her the green bikini and she goes inside to change. While Kathy is changing Jen decides she wants to try on the yellow thong. She gets an idea.

"Would it be alright if I just changed back here? Nobody is here and I want to try my new thong on. I figured it would go faster this way." Jen looks at him with her cutest puppy dog eyes.

"Umm...well normally we don’t have girls changing out on the floor here but since nobody else is here and I could never turn down eyes like that......sure you can change out here. Just do it in the back of the store so nobody sees you naked."

"I think we can both agree on that!" Jen walks to the back of the store and grabs the bikini at her hips. Jen smiles as she quickly pulls down her blue bikini and slips it off her long legs leaving her completely naked with her small clit in full view of everyone in the store. She turns her back to the front of the store so if anyone comes in all they see is her white ass and they don’t get a full frontal. Jen is still afraid of anyone besides her friends here and maybe the store owner Joe seeing her pussy.

While Crystal is looking around the store for bikinis she doesn’t notice the most recent series of events. She looks to the back of the store and sees her 3 topless friends talking with Joe but then something catches her eye, one of them seems to be missing her bottoms. Crystal gasps in shock.

"Jen!”

“You’re naked in the store!"

She looks at Jen and eyeballs Jen's bare pussy as she turns around in response to Crystal's comment and stands there with her pale white breasts hanging out and her throbbing clit standing out against her white crotch. Jen quickly puts her hand between her legs to cover her pussy.

"Crystal! I'm trying on my new thong!" Jen says as she crouches down behind the counter and tries to hide her nudity from the front window.

"Shouldn’t you use the changing room for that? Everyone can see your clit."

"That’s why I had my back to the window so people would only see my ass. I don’t want them to see my naked pussy anymore than you do. Kathy is in the changing room trying on her green bikini. There is nowhere else to change."

Jen quickly takes the thong and slides it on. She pulls it up her legs and slides the string along her ass and into her crack as it rides up her butt. She tries to pull up the patch in front to cover her slit. The front comes up shorter than she thought and it barely covers her pussy but luckily since she shaved it the material covers her clit from view.

Jen turns around and models it for them all to see. Jen has to keep adjusting it to ensure the front stays over her pussy. Besides the small patch in front she is essentially naked. Crystal stares at the small patch covering Jen's pussy from view.

"Damn girl! That thong doesn’t cover much; you might as well be naked. I mean I wear thongs but damn that thing is brief. I thought you didn’t like thongs since they show off too much of your ass and this one almost shows your pussy?"

"Well I’m not too crazy about anyone seeing my ass but I’d rather have them ogling my ass than my pussy. I wanted something daring to wear places I couldn’t go completely naked. Just because I don’t want people seeing my pussy doesn’t mean I like wearing a lot down there."

"I certainly couldn’t wear that, I’m too big for it and my bush would be hanging out everywhere if I did." Jill looks at them.

"You could always shave like me."

"Nah, I like my wearing red bikini just fine."

Joe walks over and looks at Jen in her new thong. He likes what he sees and enjoys the fact that Jen is almost naked except for a small patch of fabric over her clit. From the back you can’t even see that Jen is wearing anything.

"Do you like your new thong?"

"I really do. It does require some attention in the front to make sure my pussy isn’t exposed but it is really comfortable and I think the color goes well with me. I want to buy it." Jen adjusts it just before her clit pops into view again.

"Well I need to scan the tag on the side so if you want to buy it you’ll need to remove it for a moment so I can read the barcode."

"Damn!" Jen hoped Joe could complete the purchase and let her walk out of the store with the thong without her needing to remove it. Jen shrugs her shoulders and turns around to take it off for Joe. She just hopes that he can scan it quickly or she can put her blue bikini back on.

Jen removes the thong and hands it to Joe leaving her naked in the store again. Jen places her hand over her pussy again as she looks around to see where she put her blue bikini but after glancing around on the floor she can’t find it. Jen almost panics as she fears having to stay naked in the store while she makes her purchase...

Its then Jen remembers she put the bikini in her purse. It would take too much time and a lot of fumbling around in her purse to get it out so she just stands behind the counter and decides to remain naked until Joe finishes the transaction and then hopefully she can put the thong back on.

"I hope nobody comes in while I’m purchasing my thong and sees me naked with my pussy hanging out like this." Jen moves her hand briefly so her friends can see how naked she really is.

"Aw damn!" Joe spurts out as he tries to scan the thong. Jen looks at Joe across the counter with her hands on her hips not caring that her pussy is in full view of Joe. "What’s wrong?"

"I’m missing a piece of this bikini." Joe says as he fumbles around inside of a box. Finally he pulls out a bright yellow triangle string bikini top that matches the thong and hands it to Jen.

"I don’t want the top, I just want the thong!" Jen moves to stand in front of the counter and looks directly at Joe totally uncaring at this point that her naked body is in full view of the store.

"I’m sorry Ma'am but it is part of the package." Joe takes the top and scans the barcode on it.

Jen sighs and just hopes it doesn’t cost too much. Joe hands the bikini top to her.

"It’ll cost $28 for the whole outfit."

Jen really wants the thong and while she doesn’t want another top since she probably won’t be wearing one anytime soon she realizes that buying it is the only way for her to get the thong. She looks down at her bare pussy and looks around the store realizing how exposed she really is. Finally she agrees.

"Before I ring up the final purchase you should try on the bikini top to see how it fits."

Jen looks down in dismay, she doesn’t want to put a top on but figures the sooner she tries it on the sooner she can get it off her boobs and leave them bare again. Her pussy is already exposed and she desperately wants to put her thong back on.

Jen hangs the bikini top over her chest as she wraps the strings around her and ties them behind her. She pulls the cups over her pale breasts and soft pink nipples. Then she adjusts it so everything is in place. Once again the top is just a bunch of strings with two small cups over her breasts and unlike her blue bikini top this one doesn’t even cover her areolas completely, it only goes over her nipples and even then just barely.

Jen thinks to herself "what a joke! This bikini doesn’t even cover everything and yet I have to buy it with the thong in order to get it. I couldn’t even wear this top anywhere besides here because it doesn’t even cover what’s legally required in most places. I’ am just lucky it’s legal to go topless everywhere here." She looks down at her bare white breasts hanging out of the top with her nipples barely covered in the minimal material.

Jen continues to ponder the bikini as she stands there naked with her pussy exposed and the only thing she’s wearing is this ridiculous bikini top that only covers her nipples! She looks towards the door and sees some people starting to come in!

Jen decides to accept the bikini top just so she can get the thong and put it on. Then hopefully she can find someplace to rid herself of the bikini top. Jen takes it off and stands naked once again in front of Joe as she puts the top on the counter so he can finish the transaction. Jen reaches into her purse and pulls out two $20 bills and gives them to Joe. He punches up the purchase and gives her the change and her receipt. Joe cuts off the tags and hands Jen the bikini top and thong. She quickly puts the thong on and pulls it over her clit. Now that her pussy is finally covered she stuffs the top in her bag. Joe looks at her odd.

"Are you going to wear the top?"

"I’ll wear it later when we leave the beach." Jen tells him. In reality she has no intention of wearing the top but isn’t about to tell Joe that. "I like my breasts and nipples being bare now. Thanks for the top and thong though." Jen smiles now that she is topless once again and her pussy is covered.

"You’re welcome sweetie, come back anytime."

Jen turns her back to Joe and smiles as Kathy comes out of the changing room in her green bikini. She has both the top and bottoms on. Jen and her friends give Kathy the thumbs up and she goes back in to change and comes back out topless wearing her pink bikini bottoms again. Kathy goes over to Joe to pay for her bikini. Jen gives her some money so she can buy the top. She mumbles to herself "at least that bikini had a full top that actually covers something. Least I like going topless so I don’t have to bother with the bloody things anymore."

"How do you like your thong?"

"It’s great Kathy; I’ve always wanted one like this I also got a top with it. They came together so I had to buy both. The top is in my purse though."

"Oh well, it’s not like you’re going to wear it anyways, you seem quite happy going topless."

"I might wear it later." Jen lies to Kathy in front of Joe, mostly for his benefit since he is in earshot. She would tell Kathy the truth later.

Crystal and Jill rolled their eyes knowing damn well Jen was never going to put that ugly top on ever again.

"Thanks Joe!"

"Anytime ladies, come again."

The girls walk out topless. Jen quickly pulls them down the street as she hurries to the nearest trash can and takes the yellow top out of her purse and quickly dumps it inside. Jen smiles as she thrusts her breasts out proudly and is so glad to be topless again.

"I am never wearing a bikini top again..." Jen turns and bares her breasts to the street.

"Damn right you’re not." Crystal says looking at her topless friend.

"Well I don’t know about Jill and me. We love going topless with you gals but I don’t know if we're ready to give up wearing tops at the beach completely or not."

"That’s okay; I’m not a big topless person either. Jen is the real topless trooper here." Crystal cups one of Jen's boobs and squeezes it gently.

"I’m proud of my breasts and want to be able to show them off everywhere the guys can." Jen puts her arm around Crystal.

"So I take it you didn’t like the top Jen? Kathy looks at the trash can and then back to Jen.

"No Kathy, I didn’t. I only said I did in the store so I wouldn’t upset Joe."

"I understand. That top was ridiculous anyways. What a rip-off!" Kathy puts her hands on her hips.

"Hey gals want to head down to the music store?' Jill asks as she points down the street.

"Sure, but first I want to find someplace to change out of this thong." Jen hurries over to an alley between the stores and quickly slides her thong off leaving her naked again out in broad daylight as she looks for her blue bikini in her purse.

Crystal and her new friends stand guard as Jen changes behind an old dumpster. Jen pulls out the blue bikini and quickly slides it on up her legs.

"It’s a shame you didn’t want to keep that thong on, then we could’ve matched." Crystal points at her white thong.

"Sorry Crystal, I like the thong but it’s too big of a step for me today if we're going to the music store. I don’t want to have to be constantly adjusting the thing inside the store while I’m looking around." Jen pulls her bikini over her hips and adjusts it so her pussy is covered.

"Still I don’t know why you bothered hiding back here to change. You were practically naked already you could’ve just whipped that thong off and put your bikini on and nobody would’ve known the difference. With that white patch down there anyone from far away would’ve just thought you had a white bikini on."

"I’m still nervous about people seeing me totally naked in public."

"I don’t see why, you’re already topless and you don’t have much down there for anyone to see."

"Still going naked in public is a lot different than just being topless." Jen scratches her itching nipple.

"Not really, I do it all the time."

"What do you mean?"

"Sometimes when I’m at the beach and they don’t have a changing room I just change out of my wet thong in the parking lot and quickly put on a new one. I brought a few just in case this one gets really yucky. I don’t like riding in my car wearing a wet swimsuit. Sometimes I change the top too but I usually wait until I’m in the car for that. I’m not as much a trailblazer there as you are. I prefer being bottomless more but there’s no way I’m doing that out here like you do with your breasts."

"Why not I thought you said being naked was the same as being topless."

"Being topless on the beach is legal. I don’t know about being fully naked unless you’re changing quickly and then nobody cares." Crystal tells her.

"Oh okay, I understand."

"You’ll see later when we go home."

Jen wonders what she means by that but doesn’t have time to ponder it now.

"Hey ladies, are you done in there yet? We want to go to the music store." Jill stands at the end of the alley waiting as Crystal and Jen come towards her with Jen's thong stuffed in her purse.

"Yeah we're ready." Jen lifts her hand to cover her eyes from the sun.

The four of them walk topless and barefoot down the street to where the music store is. It’s one of these huge stores that have a little bit of everything in it. Not as many people go in wearing swimsuits. Some guys are shirtless and a few ladies have bikinis on but a lot of the people are clothed and are wearing shoes or at least flip flops. This makes Crystal nervous and she grabs her bikini top out of her purse and puts it on. Jen looks at her in shock.

"Crystal, what are you doing?" Jen watches her friend pull the cups of her top over her tanned breasts.

"I told you I’m not a big topless person. I went topless with you in the snack shop because everyone else was and in the bikini shop it just seemed normal but.....this is just uncomfortable for me." Crystal adjusts her bikini top to cover her nipples.

"I and the other girls are topless and I don’t even have a top to put on!" Jen says as she points to the still very topless Kathy and Jill.

"It’s okay Jen; if Crystal would feel better we can always grab our tops from our purses and put them on." Kathy and Jill look for their tops.

Crystal puts up a hand before they can put them on. "No it’s alright, I don’t mind you three being topless I just don’t feel up for it in here."

"Just as well since I don’t have a top anyways..." Jen looks at Kathy and Jill who seem to still be thinking about what to do and finally just decide to go topless anyways.

The three of them with the now fully covered Crystal walk towards the entrance to the music store. When they reach the entrance they go to open the door but a guard outside stops them.

"You can’t come in here without a top on, ladies!"

Damn! Kathy and Jill think as they fumble around for their tops in their bags and quickly put them on.

Jen looks at him hysterically..."What the hell am I supposed to do? I don’t even have a top!" Jen covers her breasts with her hands in disgust and goes and stands up against the wall. "I guess I’ll have to wait for you out here...have fun." Jen stands there with her arms over her chest to satisfy the guard.

The girls look at her sadly, wishing they could convince the guard to let her in. They turn to go in. Just after they do Jen still stands there pouting with her arms over her breasts when the guard starts laughing...

"ha ha! Ooooh you fell for it! They always fall for the old you can’t come in here without a top gag!" The guard laughs loudly and looks at Jen as her jaw hangs open. He walks over to Jen.

"That’s okay Ma'am. You can come in like that. I was just messing with you." Jen lowers her arms and stands in front of him with her breasts bare again."Thank you! I was almost afraid I wouldn’t be able to go in with my friends. I’m new to this whole topless thing and I wanted to see where I could go without a top. I thought I might have to come back here some other time with a top on."

"Nah, we don’t get them that often but every now and then some topless girl comes in to buy some cds and nobody bats an eye. Sometimes we play that joke on them if they’re an easy mark. We don’t do it to everyone because we don’t want to piss the wrong person off. Go in and have fun. It’s an unofficial rule but usually when a topless girl comes in we give her a discount because she had the guts to come in here with her breasts uncovered."

"Thanks! I’m your girl then, I love being topless and I don’t plan on wearing a top when I come here." Jen runs past the guard excitedly as she rushes to the door to catch up with her friends.

Jen feels the cool blast of the air conditioner as she enters the store. By now she has gotten used to that but her nipples still stand at attention every time. She finds her friends by the rack with the new cds on it. They look over at her surprised to see their bare breasted friend inside.

"Hi Jen, It is so good to see you in here. I guess you talked that guard into letting you come in here with your tits uncovered." Crystal gives her a big hug. She’s so glad to see Jen that she didn’t care that she was topless.

"Nah, it was just some joke the guard plays on some topless girls who come in. Actually they give discounts to women who come in here without their tops on."

"Really?" Kathy overhears their conversation.

"Yes it’s true." Jen shakes her tits. "Means another reason I’m going to keep coming her bare breasted so I can get stuff cheap. You three should take your tops off so you can get a discount."

"Sorry, me and Jill are done being topless for today. After that scare at the door it was just too much, maybe next time sweetie. You can stay topless though, doesn’t seem like you mind. I’m glad that guard didn’t scare you."

"Wouldn’t matter if he did, I didn’t have a top to put on anyways. Even if I had one I wasn’t about to put it on just to satisfy him. I don’t want to wear a top on here. I’m getting used to being topless. I’m almost forgetting I don’t have one on." Jen looks down at her breasts and notices that they are getting slightly pinker from her tan but are still quite white compared to the rest of her that was a dark brown.

"C’mon you topless woman you, let’s go find some cds!" Kathy takes Jen's hand as they walk through the store, three girls in bikinis and one in a small blue bikini bottom. Crystal walks behind Jen and decides to make things more exciting since Jen thought Crystal should go bottomless in public more.

While Jen is looking at some music on a rack, Crystal quickly grabs at Jen's bikini and pulls it down, exposing her cute white ass and pussy. Jen continues looking at the cds like nothing has happened. Crystal is surprised Jen didn’t feel the breeze or sudden movement of her being stripped in the store but is curious to see how long it would last before she noticed and pulls her bottoms up. Jen actually turns and steps out of her bikini as she walks away from it, exposing her bare pussy to the whole store, luckily for her most of the people are walking by quickly or looking the other way. Jen walks to another rack as Crystal picks up Jen's bikini and sticks it in her purse. Jen continues to look at some country cds with Kathy and Jill in another aisle looking at some rock cds.

Crystal walks up to Jen. "How are you doing?"

"I found new cds by some of my favorite artists and I’m going to buy a few."

Jen feels something funny as someone walks by her and looks down as she is going through her cds. Jen notices something weird. Moving the cds she finds herself looking right at her pussy! Jen yelps and immediately puts her hand between her legs to cover her bare pussy!

"OMG! I’m naked! In the middle of the store! Where is my bikini? How long have I been bottomless?" Jen asks Crystal desperately, almost with tears in her eyes. Jen now has one arm across her breasts and another with hand over her pussy.

"Damn! I need to find my bikini! I have to get dressed!" Jen panics as she tries to look around on the floor without uncovering her tits or pussy.

Now Jen wishes she at least had her top to put on, not that it would help with her bottom, her pussy would still be bare and she would still be naked. At this point though Jen really doesn’t give a damn about her top and uncovers her breasts so she can put both hands on her pussy as she continues to look for her bikini.

Crystal feels really bad now as a harmless prank turned into something more serious. She wants to end this before it gets crazy and they all get kicked out. People are starting to come over and see what is going on and some store employees start to notice too.

Crystal wants to do something before anyone sees her friend naked. Topless is one thing, there are still some shirtless guys here and several girls in bikinis so Jen's bare breasts aren’t a problem but naked is another thing. If anyone saw her pussy, they’d all be in trouble.

Crystal hands Jen her bikini bottom saying she found it on the floor. Jen quickly lifts her leg to slide it up so she can get it up over her hips to cover her pussy before anyone sees that she is naked. Just before she can cover her clit a store employee comes by and sees her bottomless state.

"Hey, you can’t be naked in here!"

"I’m so sorry! I dropped my purse and when I went to get it my bikini bottom fell off so after I picked up the purse I was trying to pull my bottoms up when you arrived."

He looked at her questioningly. The guy wasn’t sure if he bought her story or not but doesn’t want to cause a scene in the store as more people are coming by to see what the ruckus is. So he just says "alright Ma'am, just be careful next time. It’s okay if you come in here topless but we don’t want any nudity in here otherwise we'll have to ask you to leave."

"Thank you! I’m sorry I won’t cause any more trouble." Jen tries to collect herself thinking about what just happened. She wants to talk to Crystal and find out how it happened.

"How did my bikini fall without me noticing it? I didn’t even know I was naked for so long. “Jen finishes pulling up her bottoms to cover her bare pussy.

Crystal feels a rock in her gut. She knew what she did but isn’t sure if she wants to mention it in here or not in fear of what her friend might say. Jen keeps looking at her with no intention of changing the subject until she gets an answer. Crystal finally decides to spill the beans and tell her.

"I remember how disappointed you were at almost not being able to come in here topless so I thought I’d see how far I could push things since you thought I should go bottomless more so I kind of pulled down your bikini to see how long it takes for you to notice you weren’t wearing it. Honestly I thought that you’d notice it right away and just pull it up and see it was a harmless prank. I was actually quite surprised when you just stepped out of them and walked away."

"I almost got thrown out of here for real! You know how I don’t like having my pussy exposed in public! I do understand what you were trying to accomplish though. You just wanted to heat things up a bit. Don’t worry you are my friend, I forgive you. “Jen gives her friend a big topless hug and puts her hands on her hips as she looks at Crystal.

"Sometimes I do wish I could go bottomless and just walk completely naked through here but I’m content now just being topless and being able to have my breasts uncovered. I think we should just find Kathy and Jill so we can buy our cds and go before we over stay our welcome." Jen and Crystal walk around a few aisles until they find their other two bikini clad friends.

"Hey girls, where were you? Some big scene happened a few minutes ago. There was this big crowd and someone mentioned something about a naked girl." Kathy looks at Jen and Crystal.

"Oh don’t worry, that was me. Crystal tried to pull a prank on me by pulling my bikini down in the store. I managed to get them back on but not before giving a few people a show. Anyways I just want to get these cds before anything else happens."

"Alright hon. I’m just glad you’re okay, you too Crystal. I’m real glad we met up with you two, especially you Jen. I’ve never met someone who is so confident and enthusiastic about going topless as you are. You’re a real inspiration to us."

Since Jen is the only one of their group still topless and that is the only way to get the discount she takes all their cds to the front of the store with some money that Kathy and Jill gave her for their stuff and she walks up to the counter with all of it. The cashier was very happy to see her.

"May I help you Ma'am?"

"Yes I’d like to buy these cds. I heard that topless women get a discount. Am I topless enough?" Jen asks as she shakes her bare breasts in front of the cashier.

"Oh most certainly Ma'am and yes we do give discounts to topless women. I heard about a topless woman being in here and in fact even heard a rumor that someone was naked in the back of the store for a short time. Is that true?"

Jen gulps not sure whether to tell him or not. He doesn’t seem upset about it though and she figures he probably knows more about it than he is letting on so she thinks it’s better to come clean with him.

"Yes I was naked for a brief time. My friend pulled my bikini down as a prank and I walked around shopping without realizing I was naked and showing my pussy. I do apologize for any inconvenience I caused your store."

"Not at all Ma'am, on the contrary. We have never had a naked woman in here before. We haven’t even had a topless woman for a while. Some young perky girl came in topless with her friends a while back but nothing like you. I'm going to give you a 50% discount on everything you’ve purchased here today."

Jen's eyes go wide. "Really?"

"Yes of course Ma'am. We encourage our customers to come as they are and be comfortable so they can enjoy themselves and want to purchase things in our store. So few people come into our store anymore and we have troubles turning a profit so we have to do something to get people incentive to come here. So we give discounts discreetly to people who come in wearing little or nothing, usually topless women or in your case fully naked!"

"I’ve never been to a store that does this."

"It’s not something we publicly announce but we need to do something to get by."

"Thank you, I’ll be sure to let my friends know."

Jen pays for her cds, which come to a grand total of $19.95, not bad for almost 10 practically newly, released cds.

"Just curious, if you have that rule why did that other employee get upset because of my nakedness?"

"Oh that was Benny, he is new here, and I apologize. He was not aware of our new rules. I didn’t think he would say anything but it seems someone mentioned your lack of clothing to him and he decided to take it upon himself to investigate. I promise you we will update him on the rules so this sort of unfortunate thing doesn’t happen again. Good day to you."
The cashier put the change in her hand and kissed it.

"You’re welcome." Jen takes the change and walks towards the front door where her friends are.

"So how did it go?" Crystal asks her as she walks towards them with her breasts bouncing happily.

"It went great; we got a 50% discount because I was naked in the store."

"What about that nasty employee?"

"Don’t worry about him, he is a new guy. He was unaware of the unofficial rules here and thought it was against the rules for me to be naked in here. The guy at the desk is going to have a talk with him to update him on the rules here so there shouldn’t be any more problems."

"That’s wonderful. Do you think you’ll come here again naked?" Kathy looks at Jen's bikini.

"I don’t know. I’m definitely going to come back again topless. I get a discount either way so I guess it just depends on how I feel. I’m still kind of nervous being naked in public with my pussy exposed like that but you never know. "

"I guess it’s a thrill enough just going topless in a place like this. Letting all these guys see your bare torso with your breasts and nipples exposed. That’s quite a rush!"

"Yeah, I’m more of a topless chick." Jen shows off her firm titties.

The guard outside the door waves bye to them and wishes them a good day, hoping they’ll come back again.

"Hey ladies want to join me and the topless wonder here for a quick dip in the sea?" Crystal puts her arm around Jen's bare shoulder.

"That’s tempted but me and Jill have to get back home, we are roommates and we need to do some errands and stuff. Here is our number, call us later and maybe we'll plan something together." Kathy gives Crystal her number and gives both her and Jen a big hug.

"It was great meeting both of you and I hope we see you topless around town Jen. Have a good one, bye." Kathy and Jill get in the car and drive away.

Jen waves good bye and makes sure to wiggle her tits towards them as they drive away. Finally when they are gone, Jen dashes across the beach towards the ocean. When she gets there she jumps in letting the wave’s just roll over her. She has to be careful not to let her only piece of clothing wash away but she enjoys the feel of the cool water on her body. Crystal jumps in too and splashes around with Jen for a bit. Crystal even gets a bit naughty and slips her thong off under the water and walks around a bit bottomless under the waves. She knows no one can see her bottomless under the water so she wasn’t worried about being naked.

Suddenly a huge wave hits them and Jen gets tossed around in the water and Crystal has to desperately try to hold on to her thong which is trying to get washed away. Finally before their luck changes Crystal puts her thong back on Jen has to pull up her bikini bottoms which are around her legs. Luckily her pussy is underwater so nobody could see that she has nothing on. Jen adjusts her bikini bottoms before they both get out and walk towards their towels to pick up their stuff for the long walk back to their car.

Jen and Crystal walk back to the car sitting in the parking lot. Crystal opens the trunk and puts the towels they brought inside and gets Jen's shorts out.

"Here you go Jen; I figured you’d want to wear these on the way back. I know how you are with your pussy." Crystal hands the shorts to Jen. Crystal then slips her thong off and looks for another one in the trunk.

"My god Crystal, you’re naked!" Jen looks at her friend, bottomless with her pussy and ass bare for all to see. Crystal bends over naked and looks through the trunk for her thong.

"I do this all the time. Now you know what I meant earlier." Crystal finally fishes her thong out of the trunk and slips it on. Jen notices that it doesn’t cover much but at least her pussy is covered even though her ass is still out there since the string just goes up inside her crack.

Jen decides she better get her "bottoms" on so they can leave. She takes the shorts and tries to slide them on but realizes her bottoms are still wet.

"I can’t wear these over my bottoms, they’re soaked."

"So take them off."

"Show me where the restrooms are and I’ll be right back."

"I’m sorry hon. there are no restrooms. You have to change into your shorts out here."

"I can’t do that, I’ll be naked again." Jen puts her hands on her hips and looks around to see if anyone is watching.

"No one will see you, it’ll be real quick and besides all you got to do is just face the car and the only thing people will see is your pale ass. They can already see most of that anyways. They'll just think you’re wearing a white thong bikini."

Jen stands there and ponders what Crystal has told her. She can either quickly slip the bottoms off and put the shorts on, exposing her smooth white pussy for a few seconds or she can just slip the shorts on over her wet bottoms and be uncomfortable the rest of the trip.

"Hurry up and decide or you’ll just have to ride home naked. There’s no way you’re wearing those wet things in my car like that."

"Oh hell" Jen quickly slides the bottoms off her hips and down her slender legs, bringing her pussy into view again. She struggles to get the bottoms off as she wiggles her ass in the air for all to see reminding her that she’s naked and everyone is getting a show. There are not too many people around but still Jen doesn’t want them to see anymore of her lower bits anymore than necessary.

Jen puts her hand between her legs to cover her pussy as she takes her shorts and tries to pull them up her legs. She knows she will have to remove her hand to finish pulling the shorts up so she quickly pulls it away and brings the shorts up over her hips finally covering her ass and pussy from view. Jen sighs and puts her wet bottoms in a bag. She then goes to grab her bikini top when Crystal slams the trunk door.

"What are you doing? I need my bikini top!" Jen covers her breasts with her hands.

"No you don’t, you wanted to be topless and get rid of your tan lines and that’s what I’m going to help you do."

"That’s alright for the beach, even the snack shop or other stores on the boardwalk but if we're going to drive home in your convertible I need to wear a top." Jen practically begs Crystal to let her in the trunk for her bikini. Her back turned to the street so nobody can see her bare breasts.

"Why? It’s legal to go topless here and you’ve always wanted to do this. Everyone else wears bikinis and nobody bats an eye. So stop worrying and let’s go." Crystal puts her foot down and gets in the car.

Jen knows she is defeated so she uncovers her breasts and gets in the car topless putting her back to the seat. She loves the feeling of the leather on her bare torso. It feels so much better without those bikini straps getting in the way. Jen smiles as she realizes that it’s actually better this way.

"You know I actually like this. I’ve never been in a car topless before." Jen says confidently as she leans back and puts her arms behind her head as she thrusts her chest out and feels the cool wind as it goes past her bare nipples.

Jen looks at her friend as they drive away from the beach and go through the town. Now that she has been topless almost all day Jen starts to feel really relaxed and doesn’t even care as they drive by and countless people can see her bare breasts and soft pink nipples. She almost forgets that she doesn’t have a top on.

"Are you hungry for some dinner?"

"Sure, can we stop by your place and have something?"

"I don’t have anything to eat hon. would you like to stop by and get something?"

"Some fast food would be nice. Can we use the drive thru?"

"Nope, I thought we would just sit and eat it there."

"Crystal! I’m not dressed for that. I’m topless! This isn’t the beach; they won’t let me in without a shirt." Jen crosses her arms under her breasts.

"Of course they will. This is still a beach town; lots of girls eat at these places in their bikinis."

"They eat here with bare breasts?" Jen points at her small breasts with her perky nipples.

"Maybe not but you’ll be a trend setter again."

"Well it’s not any worse than anything else I’ve done today."

They pull up to the restaurant which is a small burger joint and they get out of the car. One of them wearing a two piece bikini and one bare from the waist up with just some brief jean shorts on with bare feet. Jen looks around to see if anyone is watching her as she walks towards the entrance.

Jen thinks about how excited she is to go topless into a real restaurant this time. This is someplace that is not near the beach so it isn’t normal for a girl to come in wearing what she’s got on. Jen feels a bit more nervous being topless when wearing her shorts since going topless in the bikini is normal where it’s not every day you see a topless girl just wearing shorts going around town. She figures its better that she’s topless than bottomless though. Jen would freak out if anyone in there saw her pussy. She doesn’t mind her nipples being exposed.

When they get to the door Jen gets a little scared because she sees the small sign on the door that says "No Shirt, No Shoes, No Service." She turns towards Crystal and covers her breasts with her hands.

"See I told you they wouldn’t let me in without a top on.”

Crystal just rolls her eyes. "Those places put up those signs all the time. It’s just their policy. Nobody here is going to actually bother you about what you’re wearing."

"You mean what I’m *not* wearing." Jen uncovers her bare white tits to prove her point.

"Well I’m hungry so you can either come in and eat with me or stay out here with your bare titties and wait till I’m done and maybe ill grab you something. You are always talking about finally being able to go topless in public well now you are topless so just go with it."

Jen looks down and can feel her stomach rumbling as she puts her hand on it. Her desire for food overcomes her fleeting desire to cover her breasts. Besides Crystal is right Jen does love being topless in public!

Not wanting to bother with her scant top just to grab a bite to eat she hurries and opens the door and walks brazenly inside. Again Jen feels the cold air from inside hit her body as she enters. Her nipples are like rocks once again.

"Wow, your nipples sure do get hard fast." Crystal looks at her friend and sees her pink nipples stick out from her small breasts like daggers.

"Imagine what it would be like in the frozen food section at the grocery store!"

Jen places her nipples between her fingers and rubs them and sure enough they feel quite hard.

"Maybe I will have to try that sometime."

Crystal thinks about all the interesting ways that could work out as she walks with Jen further into the restaurant.

As she walks towards the counter the light hits her and the white of her breasts really stand out from the rest of her tanned body. She looks down and really notices this and realizes how out of place she looks but she likes it because she’s always wanted to be able to go topless to places she normally wouldn’t.

When Jen gets to the counter she waits for the person to come take their order. Soon a guy walks up and does a double take as he sees a topless girl standing in front of him. He can’t believe his eyes and his jaw just drops. He is amazed by how small and firm her breasts look and he loves her tan lines. He quickly regains his composure though.

"Ma’am, are you okay? Where's your top?"

"Oh yes I am, we just came from the beach, I took my top off to work on my tan. I hope its okay that I’m topless in here. If it’s a problem we can go somewhere else." Jen goes to cover her breasts.

The guy quickly tries to calm her before she leaves and he is denied his chance to serve a goddess. "Oh no it’s fine, ma’am. We get lots of beachgoers here, we don’t have any rules about shirts or shoes or things like that despite the sign on the door which we had to put there despite our lack of a dress code... Many guys come in shirtless and barefoot and a lot of girls come in wearing bikinis although I have to say you’re the first to come in here without a top on. I just thought since you were topless you were in some sort of trouble, especially since you don’t look like you usually go topless." The guy pointed to her tan lines.

"You’re right I don’t usually go topless until now but that’s why I’m going topless so I can work on my tan. I don’t want these tan lines on my breasts." Jen uncovers her breasts and lets the guy look at them.

"Wow, that’s a relief. Most girls wouldn’t be caught dead in here topless unless they were in some sort of trouble."

"You don’t need to worry about little old me I’m just here to get my....meal" Jen winks at him and shakes her breasts at him teasingly.

"Very well Ma'am, what would you like?"

"A couple of burgers and some fries with two cokes. You can call me Jen."

"Right away Ma'am.....uh Jen." The cashier was still trying to get used to a topless chick in his place.

"What’s your name?" Jen leans on the counter smiling at the guy with her breasts hanging bare just mere feet from his face.

"My name is Jake." He totals up her order. "The total comes to $8.75" Jake looks at Jen as she is still leaning on the counter, her lovely tan topless body glowing in the soft lights on the ceiling.

"Wow, what a discount." Jen hands Jake the money.

"Well you’re special customers; we don’t usually get such pleasant people in here." Jake handed her the change and receipt with her cups. Inside one of the cups was a paper. Jen pulled out the paper and read it. The paper had Jake's number on it,

"That’s my number, what’s yours?"

Jen writes her number down on another paper he gave her and she hands it back to him.

"I’m going to have to keep that handy for later." Jake slips the paper in his pocket. Jen takes the paper Jake gave her and sticks it in a better place, right in her bikini bottoms! Jake likes that, especially since he thinks he saw a brief hint of her pussy as she did it, for all he knew it was intentional.

"You really worked that guy over, he’s kind of cute. You should call him later." Crystal teases Jen by playing with her nipple. It’s her way of driving Jen nuts.

"Maybe I will."

Jen and Crystal go to fill their drinks as their food is put on the counter for them. They take the trays and walk to a table. Most of the people in the restaurant are beachgoers so a lot of them have swimsuits on so Jen isn’t too uncomfortable being topless in a place like this although she secretly wishes there were more clothed people here so she could push her boundaries a bit but she is already doing that since this is the first place off the beach she has been topless and most girls don’t go bare in a restaurant like this. Jen is no ordinary girl though.

Jen and Crystal sit down to eat their meal. Crystal looks at Jen and envies her sitting there topless wishing she has the courage to do that.

"How do you feel being topless here away from the beach Jen?"

"It’s a bit unusual but I like it and I’m getting very comfortable going topless, even places away from the beach now. You should try it. You did well with going topless in the snack bar and the bikini shop. We even got Kathy and Jill to try it."

"They were cool; I hope we run into them again. Maybe we will get them to go topless again with us. About me though I don’t know I mean it was cool going topless in the snack bar and the bikini shop because it was on the beach and there was other people doing it like you and Kathy and Jill but now that it’s just us and we're away from the beach it’s just a bit odd for me. I’m not like you ready to whip the top off at a moment's notice and just go bare on top for hours on end going everywhere without a car in the world that they can all see your tits."

Crystal smiles as she reaches down and slips her thong off leaving her bottomless in the seat across from Jen.

"What are you doing? You’re bottomless! Your pussy is bare inside of the restaurant!"

"So what Nobody can see it under the table and ill put my thong back on before we leave. Besides what do you care? You’re here with your tits hanging out; I want my pussy and ass to have some freedom. We all get comfortable in our own ways." Crystal flashed her pussy at Jen to show her she was really naked under the table.

"So where do you want to go tomorrow?"

"I was thinking of going to this cool amusement park they have in the city near the beach. I heard about it the other day."

"That’s awesome; we should wear our bikinis there. It will be another day of fun in the sun."

"Just make sure you remember your thong." Jen points to Crystal's naked bush under the table.

"You going to wear your bikini top there this time?"

"I don’t know; those places are usually lax about those sorts of things so I might just go topless. I’ll have to see when we get there. At most ill wear the bikini top and I can always take it off later."

"I guess that’s better than nothing." Crystal strokes her pussy under the table. She notices how wet she is and realizes that being naked in the restaurant has gotten her more excited than she thought.

The two girls finish their meal and Crystal slides her thong back on. When they get up Crystal leaves a small puddle on the seat from her juices when she was so excited while naked. Crystal figures it will be a nice souvenir for whoever comes to clean the tables. The two throw their trash away and go back out to the car. When they get in the car, Crystal immediately slides her thong off and puts it on the seat as they drive away. Jen looks over and sees Crystal's bush. Besides her bikini top, Crystal is naked from the waist down.

"Wow, you’re naked Crystal! You must be really getting into the whole bottomless thing." Jen looks at her friend.

"I try to go without the thong whenever I can; obviously I can’t go the same places bottomless that you do without a top though." Crystal looks at Jen's bare breasts.

"Since your pussy is already bare, why do you even bother with the top? It looks silly without the thong on." Jen cups her breasts in her hands.

"Besides the fact that I like the support my top offers, it allows people driving by to think I’m fully clothed when really I’m naked on the bottom. If I was topless everyone would know I had nothing on down there." Crystal spreads her legs as she continues to drive.

"That’s interesting, everyone seems to love it that I’m topless. I think it’s more sexy to be topless than fully naked because it gives people a sense of wondering what’s under the bikini down there instead of just having it all hang out and leave nothing to the imagination." Jen holds her breasts together and rubs her bare nipples.

"You are just too much, girl."

They pull into Jen's apartment and Jen hops out to go back and get her stuff out of the trunk. Crystal gets out with her not bothering to put her thong back on. Jen sees her.

"Hey Crystal your bush is showing, are you worried about someone seeing you?"

"Not really, everyone here knows you go topless a lot and they’ve seen me in my tiny thong before so it’s not like there’s anything they haven’t seen before."

"I do think I should take the top off though. It’s one thing to have it on in the car but yeah I think out here it does look a little ridiculous without the thong on." Crystal unclasps her top and throws it in the car. Now she is fully naked.

Luckily we are here in the back so no one will see us from the street. Let’s get your stuff out of the trunk. They open the trunk and get Jen's towel and her beach stuff out and Crystal hands her the bikini top.

"Guess you really didn’t need that today huh?" Crystal hands the small string top to Jen. Jen looks at it and holds it up to her now almost tanned breasts.

"I guess I didn’t, maybe next time I’ll just leave it here and go topless the whole time. Seems like everything worked out better that way." Jen takes the bikini top and shoves it in her purse.

The two ladies walk in to her building and up the stairs, one of them topless in just a tiny pair of bottoms and one completely naked. When they get to her door, Jen unlocks it and walks inside. Crystal follows her in.

"Do you want anything to eat or drink?" Jen walks into the kitchen. She slides her bikini bottoms off and puts them on the chair. "I don’t need these anymore." Jen continues to walk naked to the fridge.

Crystal walks in and says "I guess I’ll have a soda." She sees Jen standing naked there and is excited. "You finally got out of those bottoms and naked like me huh?"

"Since we are here and it’s just us girls I didn’t see any sense in wearing them. I like being naked at home although I think it’s more fun being topless outside."

"You look great naked Jen but yeah I can see the appeal of going topless outside." Crystal continues to look Jen's naked body over.

"I love it that you completely shaved your bush off down there."

"Yeah it feels great not to have any hair down there. It feels like I’m really naked and from far away you can’t even tell I don’t have something on down there, especially with the tan."

Crystal notices how white Jen's ass and pussy are compared to the rest of her body, including her breasts which are now becoming tanner although they are still lighter than the rest of her.

"So what are you going to do the rest of the day?"

"Oh probably just do some errands and then go home. What are you going to do?"

"Just take a shower and watch some TV for a while and then go to bed."

"Make sure you put the thong on if you go anywhere though."

"Oh don’t worry, I will."

"I’m sure we're going to have some fun tomorrow."

"Yeah another day of us wearing our bikinis and doing crazy stuff together. Although I’m sure you’re going to just be topless and barefoot again. With as little as you wear you might as well go naked."

"I don’t think I could do that there, I’m going to be lucky just to be able to go topless. Being fully naked on those rides would be kind of pushing it."

"I’ll be lucky if I can get in wearing my thong."

"If you can’t just wear regular bikini bottoms or shorts like me."

"I think its sexy going topless and wearing the shorts sometimes, instead of the bikini bottoms. More of the bottom is hidden and there is mysteriousness to the whole thing."

"I do think I’m going to go nude under the shorts though. It’ll be fun knowing that those shorts are the only things between me and being naked."

"Then you could always just take the shorts off in the car and go naked, although unlike me you wouldn’t have a top on so everyone would know you were naked."

"I think I’ll just keep the shorts on. As much as I’d like to go naked in the car I don’t want anyone to see my pussy."

"Well I’ll see you tomorrow girl. I hope you sleep well." Crystal takes her soda and kisses Jen on the cheek before she walks out naked back to her car and drives away not even bothering to put her top or thong back on again.

Jen hops in the shower and quickly rinses off thinking about her day and realizing how hard her nipples are and how moist her pussy is because her clit is just throbbing from the excitement of her day. Never has she been topless that long and in so many places in one day. Jen vows never to put a top on again for the rest of her time off unless absolutely necessary.

When Jen gets out she doesn’t bother to put any clothes on she just dries off and plops herself down on the couch to watch some TV. After a few hours of watching TV she gets up and goes into the bedroom to get some sleep for her big day tomorrow.

To Be Continued

 

[PacoFear]

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[ShirtlessMike05]

What did you mean by that? Thats a strange response.

 

[KillerMuffin]

OMG? Does your character literally say Oh Em Gee? Textspeak is just zomg. It's prose, not a cellphone. Don't abbreviate words. If you're going to write English, commit.

YMMV. The reading public's doesn't, but WTH?

tl;dr: Spell it out.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

OMG? Does your character literally say Oh Em Gee? Textspeak is just zomg. It's prose, not a cellphone. Don't abbreviate words. If you're going to write English, commit.

YMMV. The reading public's doesn't, but WTH?

tl;dr: Spell it out.

Youre right, i've seen people use this textspeak in other stories on here but yeah its kind of crude so I could always change it and write everything out. I simply thought it looked more exciting that way and sort of expresses the reaction the character has better.

Im grateful for all the spelling and grammar suggestions I was just hoping that I could get some feedback on the story as well.

 

[RedJohnny]

I'll actually defend Mike on this one. I've seen a couple of movies where a teenage character actually says, "Oh Em Gee." I don't think it's as rare as we might hope in the real world, and its use in a story provides a great deal of character information about the speaker.

Mike, I think people have told you that they generally like the story, but the reason you keep getting spelling and grammar suggestions is that the LIT in LitErotica stands for literature. The people who are here are people who actually like the written word and the craft of writing stories well.

In a world of spellchecking software, having unintentionally misspelled words is just the height of laziness. Aside from that, your greatest grammatical sins are your aversion to punctuation and your unbelievable attraction to the run-on sentence. Those kinds of errors actually cause people to stop reading, and if you fix them it will go a long way towards improving your writing.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I'll actually defend Mike on this one. I've seen a couple of movies where a teenage character actually says, "Oh Em Gee." I don't think it's as rare as we might hope in the real world, and its use in a story provides a great deal of character information about the speaker.

The character is supposed to be teenage (even though she is 18) so I wanted her to sound realistic even though she might not always say things that are the best written in the world. I wanted to give alot of insight into what the character is like and what she is thinking.

Mike, I think people have told you that they generally like the story, but the reason you keep getting spelling and grammar suggestions is that the LIT in LitErotica stands for literature. The people who are here are people who actually like the written word and the craft of writing stories well.

Im glad they like the story I was really hoping they would. This is actually the first full story ive written for this website and the version of it here isnt actually the final one I submitted to the website that got posted recently so theres some changes in it. I do want it to look good for those people who look for all the little spelling and grammar things.

In a world of spellchecking software, having unintentionally misspelled words is just the height of laziness. Aside from that, your greatest grammatical sins are your aversion to punctuation and your unbelievable attraction to the run-on sentence. Those kinds of errors actually cause people to stop reading, and if you fix them it will go a long way towards improving your writing.

Once I completed the story I actually did use some spell checking software, at first it was really rough and crude because I wanted to flesh out the story and make sure it was good and then I went back to fix all the little spelling and grammar things. I think the version that actually ended up on the site is much better with the spelling and grammar.

Ive always had some difficulty with the punctuation. The run on sentence is actually my tendency to just keep having ideas and wanting to keep the conversation or details going when I really should just continue the story.

The last thing I want to do is drive readers away. I wanted a full story but also something that wouldnt take people forever to read too.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

There is one part of my story that I want to resolve in a future chapter but im unsure how to do it. I want to explain why the character Jen doesnt like to have her pussy exposed. Ive had several ideas but most of them involve something that happened to her when she was younger (i.e under 18 ) and we're not supposed to write anything depicting sexual acts with anyone under the age of 18.

Of course I dont consider these ideas sexual since she didnt actually have sex with anyone but since they involve her pussy and being naked or exposed im still worried the moderators here will still consider that sexual and wont let me put it in the story. I could always say it happened after she turned 18 but I cant think of something that would have happened recently enough to make her that nervous about showing her pussy. I wanted it to be something that has been there a while that shes had to deal with.

I was trying to think of some accident or embarassing incident that caused Jen to be scared of exposing her pussy in public. I did this because I wanted something to explain and resolve later and I wanted an excuse why Jen loves going topless but doesnt just end up going all the way and getting naked then just staying fully naked most of the time.

I do want to eventually resolve the issue and have her go naked occasionally in certain circumstances even though most of the time I still want her to remain topless because well thats her thing. Any suggestions you have would be great.

 

[RedJohnny]

If the incident was completely non-sexual (like someone teased her for something or she saw someone else in some way that made her embarassed about being nude), then that's one thing - and probably not a big deal. If we're talking psychological issues associated with molestation or something similar, then at most I'd suggest that you imply something and provide vague details. Even if the site were to permit you to describe underage activities, I wouldn't recommend trying to go into explicit detail for a backstory item like that. Writing something like that is very difficult and very few men have the experience to write something like that from the female perspective in a believable and sensitive manner. So, if you were to include something like that, even if it got past the editors, you would be writing something that would potentially turn a lot of readers off.

You don't have to come up with a backstory for that. There's a reason a lot of us don't run around naked every chance we get - we're insecure about how we look and clothing provides something of a shield - even something as little as a g-string, since what matters is how the wearer feels about it. Readers are likely to accept that she just doesn't like the idea of going "the full monty" without any traumatic childhood incident. If you really feel like you need an explanation, I'd suggest you come up with something like a religious background or some embarrassing but non-sexual incident that makes her reluctant to be completely nude in public, but, obviously, it's up to you.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

If the incident was completely non-sexual (like someone teased her for something or she saw someone else in some way that made her embarassed about being nude), then that's one thing - and probably not a big deal. If we're talking psychological issues associated with molestation or something similar, then at most I'd suggest that you imply something and provide vague details.

I want to make the incident non-sexual since the character isnt supposed to have alot of sexual experience....yet anyways. More on the lines of something embarassing happened to her involving nudity. Im trying to steer clear of the whole psychological issue thing. Im not a big fan of molestation stories to begin with and I dont intend for my character to have ever been involved in that sort of thing, especially with something that happened to her while she was underage. I dont write those kinds of stories.

Even if the site were to permit you to describe underage activities, I wouldn't recommend trying to go into explicit detail for a backstory item like that.

I dont want to make a big backstory about what happened to her I simply want to be able to explain a reason for why she is so embarassed to be naked at some point. Right now its just part of the story and I dont want to explain it yet. Im just thinking ahead.

Writing something like that is very difficult and very few men have the experience to write something like that from the female perspective in a believable and sensitive manner.

I like to pretty much keep the story a sort of non-sexial exhibitionist kind of thing. Later on I might add a bit of sex in there but right now shes just a carefree girl that likes to go topless and have fun. I dont want to get too deep into her emotions or feelings I just want to express them as she goes about her daily life. I wouldnt be too good at writing about really deep emotional stuff involving women anyways.

You don't have to come up with a backstory for that. There's a reason a lot of us don't run around naked every chance we get - we're insecure about how we look and clothing provides something of a shield - even something as little as a g-string, since what matters is how the wearer feels about it.

I just thought the story would be more interesting of there was some reason behind why she doesnt like to expose her pussy in public besides the usual insecurities about looks and stuff like that. The character Jen for the most part is happy about how she looks and she thinks she has a great pussy and totally doesnt mind showing it off in private and around some close friends but she just doesnt want to flaunt it in public around total strangers. The interesting thing is she can wear almost anything on the bottom, even down to a tiny g-string and it doesnt bother her, its just when shes totally bottomless that she gets a bit nervous. I like to have her wear minimal clothing in the story and do different things with it and then sometime down the line deal with the whole nudity thing and then she could go nude occasionally in different circumstances. In some situations she can wear normal clothing like everyone else but yeah she doesnt wear it to sheild herself (besides her lower area of course) but more so when its practical to do so, although her ideas of when its "practical" are different than alot of people's and if given a choice she would rather go topless and wear something skimpy. She looks good in almost anything.

Readers are likely to accept that she just doesn't like the idea of going "the full monty" without any traumatic childhood incident. If you really feel like you need an explanation, I'd suggest you come up with something like a religious background or some embarrassing but non-sexual incident that makes her reluctant to be completely nude in public, but, obviously, it's up to you.

My whole idea was that whatever happened was somewhat traumatic for her at the time, not necessarily something traumatic in general. Basically shes dealt with the issue over time but the lingering nervousness of being naked is still there. I did have an interesting idea about her running into her parents at some point and being either naked or topless, probably topless and having them be like totally surprised by it and she has to explain to them about it and has to explain to her friends about her childhood being religious or just kind of conservative or whatever. I didnt necessarily intend for that to have anything to do with the embarassing incident of her being afraid to go naked but thought it might be a interesting plot device that could potentially lead into that or just kind of be connected somehow. Obviously she is comfortable with her body overall and most of her life has had a desire to wear less clothing but just hasnt necessarily had the opportunity until recently.

Mike

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

I can usually go on for pages with helpful, constructive feedback but I'm a little pressed for time so I'm going to say what no one else is saying -- you're a very, very bad writer. Now. I have no idea what you'll be like in a year or seven. But this is just awful, awful writing.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I can usually go on for pages with helpful, constructive feedback but I'm a little pressed for time so I'm going to say what no one else is saying -- you're a very, very bad writer. Now. I have no idea what you'll be like in a year or seven. But this is just awful, awful writing.

Well if you dont like my writing you dont have to read it. There are alot of people here who do like my writing and at least the ones who dont like some part about it try to give me helpful hints on how to change it.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

Im actually trying to write a shorter more revised version of the story that is easier to read and doesnt repeat alot of things over and over again but without taking away any part of the story that the readers here already like. I really would like to know which parts people think should go and which should stay so I can kind of balance it out a bit. I do like long stories but I dont want them so long that they turn the reader off.

 

[PacoFear]

Mike,

I really think you should post this to Lit's main site. You'll get more readers and they'll be able to vote and leave you comments on your story. You can still have the discussion here by providing us with a link to the story on the main site.

You're kind of circumventing Lit's review process by repeatedly posting your stories here in the forum. If you don't know, stories submitted to the main website are checked over for minimum grammar and adherence to the site's assorted content limitations, e.g., no underage sex or bestiality. If everyone starts posting their stories here like you are, it's going to make Laurel and Manu's lives ten times harder. I, for one, would like to see this site continue. I'm sure you would too.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

My story IS posted on the main site. Its in the exhibitionist and voyeur section under Topless Jen Ch 1. The stories I posted here are sort of rough drafts of it not what I actually posted there. Thats the more complete version. I just wanted some input about it before I posted on the main site.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Well if you dont like my writing you dont have to read it. There are alot of people here who do like my writing and at least the ones who dont like some part about it try to give me helpful hints on how to change it.

If you don't like my posts you don't have to read them.

Your writing is too awful to be helped by a few helpful hints from people who are trying to be nice. As I say, you may write well one day, but it isn't going to be today. Or tomorrow. You haven't mastered basic rules of grammar and narrative structure. Some kind member telling you that you need a better adjective for "boobs" really isn't going to do your ability to wordsmith any good.

And "a lot" is two words.

Stop posting stories and asking for feedback. It won't help, I swear to fucking Christ. What you need to do --- is read. And try some on line writing exercises. You're not ready for a full narrative. Not by a long shot. That's my advice. And you should listen to me, because I drive a nice car.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

If you don't like my posts you don't have to read them.

Your writing is too awful to be helped by a few helpful hints from people who are trying to be nice. As I say, you may write well one day, but it isn't going to be today. Or tomorrow. You haven't mastered basic rules of grammar and narrative structure. Some kind member telling you that you need a better adjective for "boobs" really isn't going to do your ability to wordsmith any good.

And "a lot" is two words.

Stop posting stories and asking for feedback. It won't help, I swear to fucking Christ. What you need to do --- is read. And try some on line writing exercises. You're not ready for a full narrative. Not by a long shot. That's my advice. And you should listen to me, because I drive a nice car.

I read everybody's posts here. This is my first real crack at a story like this so there is bound to be some narrative and grammar issues. Thats why I post here and get advice from people so I can fix things because the story ends up on the website looking bad. I would much rather it look bad in some forum than on the main site where everyone can see it.

Obviously you have some passing interest in my stories otherwise you wouldnt waste your time writing all these posts about how you dont like my grammar and narrative skills. Im not the only guy who writes bad stuff and so far most people I hear from on here like what I write so if you dont like it then youre probably in the minority.

Lots of people have "nice cars" but it doesnt make them experts on anything.

 

[PacoFear]

My story IS posted on the main site. Its in the exhibitionist and voyeur section under Topless Jen Ch 1. The stories I posted here are sort of rough drafts of it not what I actually posted there. Thats the more complete version. I just wanted some input about it before I posted on the main site.

I don't think you're following what I'm saying. You can post your draft portions to the main site, get feedback from main-site readers as well as here on the forum (by posting a LINK to your story), THEN edit your story on the main site.

If you really feel you need someone to look over your drafts before you post them, there's also the Editor's Forum. Wander on over and ask nicely; a volunteer editor there should be happy clean up your draft.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Obviously you have some passing interest in my stories otherwise you wouldnt waste your time writing all these posts about how you dont like my grammar and narrative skills. Im not the only guy who writes bad stuff and so far most people I hear from on

No, I have a passing interest in the rise and celebration of mediocrity and the people who champion it. You're all kind of fascinating to me.

Is your blood red like ours?

 

[RedJohnny]

Tough Love

Mike -

Although Dixon's comments are harsh (possibly to the point of being unproductive, but sometimes tough love looks that way), the technical quality of your writing needs a lot of work.

Some people may read what you've written and say nice things - and there are positive things about it - but the fundamental issue is that your writing contains numerous errors in terms of spelling, grammar, punctuation and sentence structure, and those problems are offputting to many readers.

I had a teacher in high school who would flunk a paper in which there was a single grammatical error, unless you could find support for what you did in a grammar text. While Literotica is not that harsh, you need to master the tools of your craft if you want to be a good writer.

Every word you choose and every aspect of the way that you tell the story contributes to the readers' experience on both the conscious and subconscious levels. The previous discussion about the use of "OMG" is a good example. By choosing to use that expression, you tell us volumes about the age and mentality of your character - things you don't need to explain because "her" diction has told us, instead.

People don't generally speak in grammatically perfect English, and reading a character who does would feel strange. So it's acceptable to use incorrect grammar to make things sound more realistic or to demonstrate a character's cultural background, but if it looks like you don't know the rules of grammar, then when you break them people can't tell if you're doing so intentionally to make a point or simply because you don't know any better.

That's not to say that plot isn't important - a piece can be technically correct and still be a bad story. And a good plot and compelling characters can overcome a lot of technical flaws, but sentences like this:

Most of the people in the restaurant are beachgoers so a lot of them have swimsuits on so Jen isn’t too uncomfortable being topless in a place like this although she secretly wishes there were more clothed people here so she could push her boundaries a bit but she is already doing that since this is the first place off the beach she has been topless and most girls don’t go bare in a restaurant like this. ​

are just painful to read. This is an example of really bad writing, and there are a lot of sentences like that. Take a minute and read that out loud.

This is something you do consistently throughout the story - you keep adding explanation after explanation in a single sentence without any punctuation so the sentence just keeps going and going and going and the readers don't have any idea where it's going to stop or why all of these ideas are compounded into a single narrative sentence.

You seem to feel this need to explain things directly to the reader, rather than using the plot and your characters to communicate things.

You deserve credit for taking on a story like this and sticking with it. Writing something this long takes a lot of effort, and when people criticize something you have put that much effort into, it's like someone calling your baby ugly. Unfortunately, the truth is that right now, your story is not well written. It has potential and it could become a very well written story, but it needs a lot of work.

You've said that you want comments and that you want to make your story better. The first step is to improve the technical quality of your writing.

Good luck!