Looking for an editor.

[hotbabydoll]

I have tried to find an editor through the VE program, but I can't get anyone I contact to respond back to my requests. So I thought I would try here.

My story is around 7500 words and hetero in content. This is my second story I have written and want to submit to Lit. I completed my first story without an editor, but I want to have the "second set of eyes" for this new one. I not looking for someone to re-write my story, but to help/suggest ways to make it better or point out mistakes/plot issues.

If you want to check out my first story, you can find it here: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1223733&page=submissions

Thanks,

Jane

 

[PacoFear]

Hi hbd,

I skimmed your first two stories and thought they were pretty darn well put together for first efforts. There's things I'd fiddle with though.

Alas, my wife and I are doing an off-the-grid back-to-nature weekend. If you don't get help before Monday, I'd be happy to lend a hand.

Call me a back-up plan.

Best,

-PF

 

[AsylumSeeker]

PM me, I'll return my email address, if you're interesteed.

 

[hotbabydoll]

Thanks to all. I just got an editor.

Jane

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Thanks to all. I just got an editor.

Jane

She just got an editor. How convenient, lol.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Thanks to all. I just got an editor.

Jane

Let's KICK-IT!

 

[PacoFear]

Thanks to all. I just got an editor.

Jane

Glad you found a dance partner.

Best of luck,

-PF

She just got an editor. How convenient, lol.

Don't fret, AS. There are plenty more songs to come.