Recommendations for 1st time lesbian stories

[mtwain4u]

Looking for recommendations as to the most intoxicatingly erotic first time lesbian stories here on Lit. Extra weight should be given to those that are feminine (not butch) and especially to those where you slowly slide into the sex. In other words, bonus points if you could read the story without knowing within the first couple of paragraphs that it's an erotic story.

Open to novellas as well, particularly period pieces.

Thanks for your input!

 

[soflabbwlvr]

Looking for recommendations as to the most intoxicatingly erotic first time lesbian stories here on Lit. Extra weight should be given to those that are feminine (not butch) and especially to those where you slowly slide into the sex. In other words, bonus points if you could read the story without knowing within the first couple of paragraphs that it's an erotic story.

Open to novellas as well, particularly period pieces.

Thanks for your input!

I read one the other day that I liked, called For My Fortieth Birthday http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=486553

 

[mtwain4u]

I read one the other day that I liked, called For My Fortieth Birthday http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=486553

Thanks for that. Please keep them coming.

 

[Stella_Omega]

What is the attraction, I wonder? I'm asking because those scenarios don't do a thing for me... never did... I find I can't read into them far enough to get to the sex!

When the author goes out of their way to tell me how feminine the ladies are, I anticipate a soft-focus coy cut-away to the bedroom curtains in the window.

Maybe I'm wrong? Do any of the stories you guys enjoy-- include real hot sweaty sex between the ladies?

 

[mtwain4u]

I don't have any objection to describing the characters femininity, I just prefer it when it is done more - to use your word - coyly. I'm more inclined to enjoy a story that stays away from "she was a hot blonde sporting 38D's and an ass to die for". Okay, she's a knockout, but that's not drawing me in.

 

[cloudy]

Try any of Colleen Thomas' stories.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I don't have any objection to describing the characters femininity, I just prefer it when it is done more - to use your word - coyly. I'm more inclined to enjoy a story that stays away from "she was a hot blonde sporting 38D's and an ass to die for". Okay, she's a knockout, but that's not drawing me in.

Well, that's just bad writing.

 

[theravenfox]

I've got a couple audio stories that many have told me they enjoyed. If you're interested in a lesbian audio, give any of the following a try.

Dancing With You ~ An early work but still a fan favorite. Seduction at a party.
The Officer And The Naked Girl ~ Two female voices in this story. It's not a first time, but one of the girls (Meadow) is very innocent nonetheless.
Mohana ~ a true story, retold to the best of my ability. It was Mohana's first time with a woman.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Here is a nice, raunchy first-time lesbian story with nothing coy about it. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=400519
It is in the incest category, because it is an aunt and niece.

ETA: Here's another. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=202184 And another. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=422720 I've written quite a few of these.

 

[mtwain4u]

I've got a couple audio stories that many have told me they enjoyed. If you're interested in a lesbian audio, give any of the following a try.
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Thanks, RF. I'll give them a try

 

[mtwain4u]

Thanks, BL. Anyone else with some suggestions?

 

[mtwain4u]

quick bump to see if anyone else wants to chime in?

 

[girlsmiley]

Hi

I'm just new here. This is my first reply actually. I read the 'Lost in Texas' series by Evil Alpaca.

I thought the series was really good. I gave it 5 stars. Hope you enjoy.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Hello, Smiley, and welcome to Literotica and to the AH. We are always glad to see more readers.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Raymond Chandler said it best, WRITE SCENES NO ONE ELSE HAS DONE.

Such scenes aint on this thread, and they aint on LIT.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Raymond Chandler said it best, WRITE SCENES NO ONE ELSE HAS DONE.

Such scenes aint on this thread, and they aint on LIT.

People have been fucking since the dawn of time, and they have been writing about it alomost as long. It would be impossible to find a truly original scene.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

People have been fucking since the dawn of time, and they have been writing about it alomost as long. It would be impossible to find a truly original scene.

Not true.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Quote:
Originally Posted by Boxlicker101
People have been fucking since the dawn of time, and they have been writing about it alomost as long. It would be impossible to find a truly original scene.

Not true.

I like to think I have more imagination than most, with such stories as Lust of the Mummies and Grave Lovers and those about Stanley Sprocket and some others, but I don't think even they are fully original.

 

[girlsmiley]

Hello, Smiley, and welcome to Literotica and to the AH. We are always glad to see more readers.

Thanks. I've enjoyed what I've read so far.

I have a story but I'm not sure that I'm a good enough writer to be on here. Too young. Not very experienced when it comes to putting pen to paper, you know what I'm saying? I think the stories here are far more advanced than anything I think I'm capable of.

See how we go I guess

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Thanks. I've enjoyed what I've read so far.

I have a story but I'm not sure that I'm a good enough writer to be on here. Too young. Not very experienced when it comes to putting pen to paper, you know what I'm saying? I think the stories here are far more advanced than anything I think I'm capable of.

See how we go I guess

Thats funny!

Learn how to write a real story first. Then work on learning how to write an entertaining story. And when all is said and done, distill sex down to its essense, and use it to decorate your quality story.

 

[girlsmiley]

Thats funny!

Learn how to write a real story first. Then work on learning how to write an entertaining story. And when all is said and done, distill sex down to its essense, and use it to decorate your quality story.

Sorry dude, funny? Learn how to write a real story? Entertaining story?

That was kinda my point. I don't know if my writing skills are up to scratch. The story is very real, and very entertaining, I guess I need an editor more than anything.

Thanks

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Sorry dude, funny? Learn how to write a real story? Entertaining story?

That was kinda my point. I don't know if my writing skills are up to scratch. The story is very real, and very entertaining, I guess I need an editor more than anything.

Thanks

Maybe. Maybe you need exposure to enough excellent stories to get the idea of what a story is all about. Then go from there.

There are battalions of hack writers on LIT who imagine theyre editors, but arent. Read stories by undisputed masters of the craft, then go to work.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

http://london.sonoma.edu/Writings/GodLaughs/steak.html

Here ya go.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Thanks. I've enjoyed what I've read so far.

I have a story but I'm not sure that I'm a good enough writer to be on here. Too young. Not very experienced when it comes to putting pen to paper, you know what I'm saying? I think the stories here are far more advanced than anything I think I'm capable of.

See how we go I guess

If you need an editor, and the story isn't too long, I can take a look at it. Email it to me as an attachment.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Sorry dude, funny? Learn how to write a real story? Entertaining story?

That was kinda my point. I don't know if my writing skills are up to scratch. The story is very real, and very entertaining, I guess I need an editor more than anything.

Thanks

Like everything else, we learn to write by writing, figuring out what worked, trying to understand why, and doing it again.