Editor for LW story. Help in plot details

[chilleywilley]

My stories generally have few grammar or spelling errors entering the editing process, but I need as second opinion on plotting, clarity, and continuity. This is a real problem to me as I tend to have intricate plots, and generally avoid the more trite conventions. The editor I have been working with proof reads for spelling and grammar, and is good at that, but no help on the content side.

If you are interested, look over my submissions (2) and let me know if you are interested.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=858445&page=submissions

Thanks for your time

Chilleywilley

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... let me know if you are interested. ...

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[chilleywilley]

Thanks for the tip

I'm new to this.
Chilleywilley

 

[Geeky_lover]

What's LW?

I'm not sure if that' Loving Wives or something radically different..

I'm willing to help you if you're willing to help me (assuming LW = loving wives).

The previous responder is right, turning on PM is better.

TTYL,
-- Chris

 

[_Lynn_]

What's LW?

I'm not sure if that' Loving Wives or something radically different..

I'm willing to help you if you're willing to help me (assuming LW = loving wives).

The previous responder is right, turning on PM is better.

TTYL,
-- Chris

You're correct in the assumption LW = Loving Wives.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

You're correct in the assumption LW = Loving Wives.

Location, location, location! LW in Vegas usually equates to Lost Wages, lol (sort of)