First time audio, would like suggestions..

[TheLeanansidhe]

Good evening, all you incredibly talented folks!

I submitted my first audio and after sitting on pins and needles for over a week, I was *very* happy to see that it was posted on the 26th. I've gotten some very kind feedback via email, as well as three comments on the link itself, and I'd love to do more.. but before I get too much further on this path, I'd like some suggestions on areas for improvement/how to keep my audience's interest. I've been writing erotica for a while, and I feel like I've got the hang of that most of the time, but audio (especially spontaneous audio) is a new medium for me.

Anyone have any thoughts/suggestions for me? I really appreciate it!

 

[jcxfarrell]

incredible work

 

[TheLeanansidhe]

Mmm.. thank you.

 

[preggolover]

Listening to it right now, getting so hard, any chance of a pregnancy related story

 

[TheLeanansidhe]

Listening to it right now, getting so hard, any chance of a pregnancy related story

Hrm, I.. wouldn't even really know where to start with that- no experience whatsoever to cull from. Do you have any suggestions on what you'd look for in such a story?

 

[PacoFear]

Oh my, your audio certainly had the intended effect on me. Frankly, it's the best I've ever heard.

If you really want some feedback, I'll give it a go.

A small suggestion: it sounds like you could get a little further from the microphone. Hearing your breathing is hot and very welcome, but it overloaded the mic a couple of times. It's a fine line.

A larger, structural suggestion: for my money, you didn't really get going until about 3:26 with, "My fingers are nice but just not the same." The next few seconds are genius. Your delivery of "C'mere" at about 3:38 was fantastic. All that goodness over three minutes into your piece got me to thinking. Audio is such an immediate medium that you might structure this best as a medias in res, leaping directly into that invitation at around 3:26 to hook the listener, then slipping in, here and there, the fact that this is all being done at the instruction of your master.

You've got a great voice, a naughty streak wider that Kansas, and the talent and guts to use both. Well done all around.

-PF

 

[TheLeanansidhe]

Oh my, your audio certainly had the intended effect on me. Frankly, it's the best I've ever heard.

Wow- *thank* you! That's so kind of you to say!

A small suggestion: it sounds like you could get a little further from the microphone.

Noted.. I'm definitely still getting the hang of how far away to bend the headset.

The next few seconds are genius. Your delivery of "C'mere" at about 3:38 was fantastic.

Mmm.. again, thank you. As I said in the OP, I'm much more comfortable with the written word.. off-the-cuff work is still new, and I'm so glad that you think so highly of my first attempt.

Audio is such an immediate medium that you might structure this best as a medias in res,

:: nodding :: ::scribbling notes:: Fabulous suggestion.. I absolutely 'get' what you're saying.

You've got a great voice, a naughty streak wider that Kansas, and the talent and guts to use both. Well done all around.

:: That is perhaps one of the nicest things anyone's ever said to me. I must, of course, give some of the credit to my Master, who saw the raw talent in me and decided to dig it out.

I truly appreciate you taking the time to give me such helpful suggestions.. I hope you keep an eye out for my future submissions!

 

[gregg4]

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mmmm i know that voice, its kept me warm on many cold wet nights,
nothing better!!

 

[prop69]

AUdio

Good evening, all you incredibly talented folks!

I submitted my first audio and after sitting on pins and needles for over a week, I was *very* happy to see that it was posted on the 26th. I've gotten some very kind feedback via email, as well as three comments on the link itself, and I'd love to do more.. but before I get too much further on this path, I'd like some suggestions on areas for improvement/how to keep my audience's interest. I've been writing erotica for a while, and I feel like I've got the hang of that most of the time, but audio (especially spontaneous audio) is a new medium for me.

Anyone have any thoughts/suggestions for me? I really appreciate it!

Audio was excellent. Even better if you added a full length pic like your Avatar for us to view while we are listening to the audio. A pic would add so much to the enjoyment.

 

[D_K_Moon]

You have a nice voice that lends itself well to the audio medium. As a previous poster suggesed, back away from the mic a bit to keep it from popping.

There was really no story to review here, I suspect most of it was done off the cuff so to speak. I would be interested in hearing you narrate a story, I think it would be quite interesting.

 

[Blue_shoes1980]

Well, if you'd like some input from the female side, I'd have to say that your audio was fabulous! It was worth listening to twice, and it certainly sounded like you were 'into' it.

And... thank you.

~Tori

 

[HowMayIPleaseU]

Hey girl! I haven't listened to your audio yet, but I plan to. Just wanted to say I'm so proud of you for jumping in with both feet and welcome to the audio arena. It's loads of fun, isn't it?

For the popping, a suggestion I received when I started recording stories was to try moving the microphone either just above or just below your mouth instead of directly in front of it. Makes a real difference with those popping p's.

 

[TheMysticMan]

Wow I am sooo hard for you. That is amazing, look forward to more.