lickjen writes again

[lickjen]

i am brand in here, and have not written any poetry in 5 years

turn the world and back

as moist as cool spring rain
with heat of winters fire
just a touch of pain
awakens the desire
desires open hunger
open hunger
wild, untamed
all is to be claimed
open to the yearning
drowning in the feast
energised unknowing
freedom in release

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Hello and welcome are you looking for critique or just doing your own thing?

 

[lickjen]

hi

just saw there was a poetry section, and what do you know i started writing

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Good for you glad to have you aboard I'm Annie one of the few Brits around here

 

[WA_cop]

i am brand in here, and have not written any poetry in 5 years

turn the world and back

as moist as cool spring rain
with heat of winters fire
just a touch of pain
awakens the desire
desires open hunger
open hunger
wild, untamed
all is to be claimed
open to the yearning
drowning in the feast
energised unknowing
freedom in release

Jen!

You have normal socially acceptable talents!?!?

 

[lickjen]

hmmm, this domestic godess has a few talents......

 

[WA_cop]

hmmm, this domestic godess has a few talents......

Yeah but being able to suck a golf ball through ten feet of garden hose is not the type of thing that comes up at the dinner table....

 

[lickjen]

suppose that depends where you go for dinner