Story: Ravaged on the Roadside

[omegaxypher]

(October 26th, 2009 Update)
WARNING: contains a werewolf, rape and other acts of violence.

Finished most of the rewrite, just working on the proofread at the moment. Below is the whole story redone. It is very different from the original but i think overall it is a vast improvement in quality. As of this point it is still a incomplete work missing small details and probably littered with tense errors and typos. But I am eager to see what other people think of it so far. Feel free to tell me what you think and please point out any errors I have made in the first 14 paragraphs, i have already overlooked them and would appreciate if anyone else could find something i missed.

Thank you and enjoy this rough revision.

 

[omegaxypher]

Victoria curses as her sedan finally gives up the struggle and sputters to a slow stop. She pulls the dead heap over with its last moments of momentum. She strikes the steering wheel in anger with her forehead making the car honk its horn making her jump in surprise. Brushing back her black hair with a manicured hand she looks at the empty fuel gauge marker with disdain cursing her happy passing of that last gas station. Turning the car off, with a sigh, Victoria looks out the window into the night at the forest. The full moon lets her see that it is all dense woods as far as her vision permits, with the cut line in the trees of the road marking the path to civilization. She reaches for her cell phone but it lights up saying “looking for service”

She groans and crosses her arms over her ample breasts with a deep sigh as her bleak situation sets in. A great camping trip with friends was just ruined by her horrible miscalculation of distance. But they always did like to go out deep into the woods as far as the roads could take them and then ever further. She weighs her options of sitting in the car and waiting for help, but it has been over an hour and she was the only car going or coming to the camp site. The walk to the closest gas station is nearly a two hour walk in itself but she has hiked distances far greater than this. She rubs her legs feeling the thick blue denim under her finger tips as she wonders how cold it could really be outside if she were to walk.

Half an hour of indecision passes, and she finally throws open the car door with a growl of frustration at the journey ahead of her. The night air is not that bad she muses to herself trying to make herself feel better. But the forest at night makes a chill run up her spine making her doubt come fresh to her mind Making her way around to the back of the car she clicks the button on her keys to pop the trunk. She grabs the red fuel container, feeling its weightlessness makes her seethe with anger at her own lack of preparation for such an emergency. Her parents always took care of the little problems in her life. Now on her own and out of college, Victoria has learned many hard lessons over the short course of her independence. She locks the car and makes her way for the gas station feeling more than a little worried about her decision the moment the car is behind her watching whips of fog curling around the tires.

***

The werewolf sniffs deeply at the chilled air picking up the woman’s fragrant scent. After being drawn to the road by the loud blaring noise he only heard a moment ago, he watches the girl walk cautiously down the road with the subtle bumps of gooseflesh on her crossed arms. Its easy prey, he could pounce right now and the woman would not even get two steps to the strange thing she just stepped out of. His muscles flex under the thick raven black fur making it move and shift to his rippling body in waves. Licking his white fangs he ponders another meal or just letting her pass on through. The girl is lucky he is not hungry anymore though after already feeding on another of her kind, a male that was a great deal fattier than hard muscle. His hunger was quite sated at this time and gives her body a brief scan sizing her up. Something else was nagging him as his eyes roam over her body, a feeling he rarely indulges he recalls. It bothers him and he growls in frustration as he flexes his claws in the soft earth digging in old thoughts, human thoughts long buried. The girl turns to the noise with a start jumping into the middle of the road shouting “who’s there”

***

Her heart jumps in her chest at the sound of a growl in the dark forest. Victoria scans the forest franticly with her eyes breathing sharply. She backs towards the car slowly not wanting to make any sudden movements fearing a predator might be watching her. Dread grips her heart like an iron vice as every step brings her closer to her only shelter panic gnaws at her nerves with every moment she is in the open. There is a snap of a dead stick in the forest, much closer than the growl she heard only moments ago. Whatever is out there was moving towards her and she could not see it despite the light of the full moon. Panic wins over her body as adrenalin kicks her into motion as she bolts for the car with as much speed as her legs will allow. Boots hammering onto concrete she hears the creature roar and give chase. She screams in fear and her legs move even faster than she thought possible hearing the heavy thud of large paws behind her.

***

The woman quickly scans the forest with a growing look of concern. Her body emanates with stink of fear that his keen nostrils pick up its intoxicating scent. Stealthily he creeps along the edge of the forest using the darkness to his advantage while getting closer to his prey. He watches her every move with interest as he analyses her with an unskilled eye for mating. His own heart is beating with anticipation as he looks her over each curve to him is a promise of pleasure as he leans forward to gaze at her with a silent longing. But the silence suddenly breaks with the snap of wood under his leading hand. The sharp noise startles the beauty and she darts away like a frightened deer. Roaring in frustration he charges for the female with feral speed. The concrete is hard on his pads as he leaps from his hiding place. The need in his loins pulls at his instincts to avoid such a strange surface he feels though that he must have her at all cost. Her taught rear is taunting him as she dashes away from him and being so close to the scent of her only drives his hunger on more furiously. She is a quick woman but his speed is greater as the distance closes swiftly. She is an arms length in only a few long bounds on his all fours and with a single swipe of his hand, sweeps her legs out from under her sending her legs out sideways as she falls with a thud to the hard cement.

***

Suddenly Victoria’s world spins around her as her left leg is smacked by a massive blow to her knee. Pain shoots up her leg as she lands in a heap on the cement making her bones ache from the impact. Her hands save her head from a rougher landing and keeping her wits sharp, she rolls onto her back and sees the feral face of the monster licking its lips at her. She screams as it lunges for her and in response Victoria kicks for its face with a stiff leg. It deftly snares her foot in its jaw, painfully biting down on her thick hiking boot with a snarl. Fighting for her life she gives the feral creature two more kicks to the face with her free foot and manages to break free of its death grip. Turning over onto her hands and knees she ignores the pain in her legs and forces herself into a stagger on her feet. She manages to limp a few steps towards the car when rending claws bite into her lower back and down her rear in agonizing pain forcing out a cry of agony. The back of her pants are ripped open violently, exposing her backside and thighs to the cold wind. Victoria ignores the pain in her leg and picks up speed desperately making for the only thing that will save her from this horrible death.

***

His yips with victory but the female suddenly rolls over quickly recovering from her fall. He lunges for her with jaws wide and catches a hard soled boot in the mouth sending a wave of pain up his face. He bites down on it in feral aggression and snarls at the screaming woman. She responds with two more swift kicks from the other foot making him see stars. He staggers backwards with the taste of blood in his mouth and a torn nostril filling his senses with the smell of his own blood. With his hackles up in rage he gives his head a shake and growls seeing his quarry limping away feebly. Lunging with both hands claws outstretched he reaches for that round ass of hers and rakes her lower back. She howls in pain as his talons shred her garments from her ass in one quick pull. Satisfied with his rebuke for her kicks she is running full speed again like a spurred horse. He pauses to lick her blood from a claw just before he gives chase with a howl of delight at her exposed backside. The wind is in his ears again as he gave her a decent head start knowing that even if she does get into that metal thing he would just tear it apart to reach her.

***

The sound of claws on stone is not far behind her, she does not dare to look back. Her legs and rump burns with the red gouges of claws marring her creamy flesh. She fishes with one hand into the front pocket of what is left of her pants for her keys. The car grows larger as she gets closer the monster’s savage howl chills her blood as her mind stutters on the realization of what is attacking her. Her panicked fingers fumble the keys button and they fall to the ground with a clatter. There is no flash of lights registering that it was open, terror creeps up her spine. She still dashes for the car because the thing behind her is no animal her mind is etches with the face of her assailant. It was a face of a wolf but intelligent eyes were staring at her, it was grinning before she kicked it in the mouth moments ago. Reaching the front of the car she breaths out a sigh of defeat and turns to face her attacker. Her fears are confirmed as the werewolf stops short of a few feet in front of her. No movie could have prepared her for what was standing in front of her now. It was standing slightly hunched over in front her panting a little. But her apprising gaze made the monster rise to its full height only adding to the intimidation. It was easily seven feet tall and every inch of it spoke of raw power. Its black fur was thick and in some places tangled with only Victoria could hope was only mud. She backs up until the back of her bare legs touch the car her salvation is now just nothing more than a grave marker.

***

The metal trinkets fall the ground as her rockets past them. Part of his mind registers their meaning and he knows that it was a good thing that she lost them. But his mind quickly focuses back on to the female in front of him still running at full tilt. The fear coming of her is more potent that before making him tingle with excitement as he watches her tight rump bounces and flexes as each boot strikes the pavement. The female suddenly stops and turns abruptly to face him. The chase was over, he won his prize and after the run he was good and ready to fuck her. The woman eyes him with terror and he stands to his full height letting her see his strength as he twitches his muscles. Her eyes grow wide as he towers over her as she backs away as he advances towards her flexing his hands as he looks her up and down with an unbearable hunger for her body. She crawls onto the metal thing and starts to blabber nonsense. But his mind cannot comprehend words anymore. Aching with need he feels his loins harden with desire for this female. The woman notices the change in the nether region and her eyes widen in horror as she sees his swelling member. Her eyes fill with tears and she babbles louder to him his mind finally registers that she is pleading with him. With a sinister grin reaches for her and she kicks at his hands but he gets a firm hold of her legs and spreads her wide open to him. A little strap of fabric hides her mound from view in a way so teasing it only makes him ache even more for her.

***

The werewolf advances on her with a strange look in his eyes. Something about this feels absolutely wrong to Victoria. There is a different kind of menace about the brute as it advances on her. Getting in arms reach of her, she retreats onto the car in a backwards crawl. She begs the monster to not hurt her but it doesn’t even blink to her plea. Her eyes roam down as she notices something move between its legs. Her body stiffens with shock as her eyes widen in surprise. Victoria first lays eyes on the werewolf’s’ penis, and her stomach rolls at the sight of it. The pink flesh stands in stark contrast to his black fur. Its size is overwhelming to Victoria she has never seen anything so big on a man before. Tears roll down her eyes as she comes to realize that the monster doesn’t want to slay her. Fearfully she begs more furiously this time making the werewolf’s ears flatten. A slight glimmer of intelligence glimmers at her words. He only grins wickedly at her making her nauseous as the man wolf reaches for her. Victoria kicks at his hand furiously trying to keep the creature at bay. But its powerful hands quickly seize both her legs and forces them open wide.

She cries out as pain shoots through her muscles as he pries her open. Shame fills her cheeks red as the monster eyes her sex with an unmistakable look of lust. Moving her hands to cover her modesty while looking away from the monster she sobs in fear. Curling his lip into a growl from her denial his hands leave her legs as course palms grab her arms forcing them above her head with a violent jerk on her limbs. The werewolf’s bestial face lowers to her cheek dangerously close, he breathes hotly onto her flesh. The smell of rotten flesh issues out of his mouth and makes her gag. She whimpers pathetically to herself trying to pray to any god willing to whisk her away from this nightmare. A rough tongue presses hard against her neck the heat of it is almost unbearable against her skin. The wolf man drags his muscle up the side of her face gradually. Victoria squeals in disgust as its rough muscle rakes her neck and cheek with methodically slow pace. Her squeal breaks into a gasp of shock as something even hotter than the monsters tongue brushes over the mound between her legs. Daring a glance she steals a look between her legs to see the werewolf’s member sliding back and forth over her pink g-string. The grotesque appendage looks like it could almost be a persons arm. Victoria fears the worst and snaps her legs tight the werewolf lets out a groan of approval at her action. Wincing from her mistake she tries to work her knees under the brutes belly to buck him away from her vulnerable womanhood.

***

Growling he watches in disapproval as she covers herself with her hands. Reaching down he grabs them both firmly with his own and forces them over her head against the cold metal surface with a powerful jerk robbing her of any further struggle against his wishes. Lowering his head close to her face he breathes in her exotic scent. The smell of her flesh makes him salivate with hunger as he presses the flat of his tongue against her neck and drags it up the side of her cheek. The taste is not at all what he was expecting when his tongue retracts into his mouth. It is covered in false scents and a dusty powder only the hint of her true flavor lays deeply hidden. The closeness to her brings his shaft tantalizingly close to her womanhood. Gently he lowers his member and brushes it against her sex. She gasps as his member slides between her covered lips roughly as he strokes his member back and forth against the soft garments. The feeling of the silk undergarment is wonderful against his throbbing tool. Her thighs come together like a trap on his member ensnaring him like a vice.

He lets out a deep groan of pleasure as her legs squeeze the base of his shaft. As his head clears he feels knees dig painfully into his belly. Quickly, he pins down her legs with his immense weight making her grimace in pain from her move. Grinning lustfully he gives the woman a powerful preview thrust in between her soft thighs as she watches in wide eyed awe. Pushing with such force all the way up against her legs he feels his balls smack wonderfully against her rump. The female arches her back in surprise bringing his attention back to her luscious orbs still encased in her many infuriating garments. Using one hand to hold down both hers by the wrists he uses his free hand to grip the top garment containing her glorious breasts. Struggling against him, he quickly rips the top off her ample frame. She whimpers and writhes from side to side in protest as he gazes at her chest. Her tits bounce freely mesmerizing him with their erotic dance from her struggles. Letting go of her arms his hands grip their own soft mound each and give them a firm squeeze.

***

While she thought her knees would help protect her. Instead the werewolf just thrusts his massive cock in between her thighs. The massive shaft rockets up her body towards her chest. Its pulsing head looks almost human in shape but the features of the head are more rigid and pronounced making it almost look like a spear. The veins along its length pulse as she gauges its thickness at about as big as her forearm. Suddenly she feels fuzzy something impact hard against her rump and it makes her jump. The werewolf’s huge balls just bounced off her ass. Abruptly the wolf grabs her tank top in one hand. Victoria struggles against the creature trying to keep some of her dignity but the were-man pulls so fast she hardly feels her bra and top come off. Her breasts bounce free to the brute’s eyes as he watches them jiggle with hunger. Victoria whimpers and wriggles under his gaze as she feels the weight come off her wrists. Both his hands start to grope her chest roughly like a pair of stress balls. Grimacing from the cruel manipulation she tries to force the brutal hands away from her tender mounds but the monster is just too strong for her. Rough palms scrape over her sensitive nipples making her gasp as they are forced into hard buds from the werewolf’s handling. Victoria cries in humiliation feeling helpless against her attacker as she is fondled like a piece of meat.

***

He ignores the annoying cries of the female as he bends in close to her chest. She wriggles and cries in fear as his maw come close to her exposed chest. Her hands grip his snout trying to keep it away. But he has no care about how hard she does not want him to play with her. Breathing heavily on her belly he drags his long tongue from the base of her ribs, between the cleft of her breasts and finally flicking the tip at the base of her collar bone. The lick brings her full and wonderful taste into his mouth and be pauses for a moment to sample her like a fine wine. Slowly he dips back down for more lashing his tongue over her nipples and in between her tits repeatedly. She tries to force his head away but he licks at her hands and arms making her draw them back in fear. Each lick brings less and less of her flavor as he scrapes her skin clean.

He gives her breast one slow and drawn out lick before pulling the abused nipple into his mouth and slurping hard on it. The female gasps and tightens her legs together brining a quick burst of pleasure from his shaft. He thrusts brutally into her legs in response letting out a growl of pleasure. An idea flares in his mind giving him a sadistic grin. The female sees is and dread etches onto her face as he grabs both her hands. Slowly he places her dainty fingers against his shaft. She tries to pull them away but a threatening growl makes grip him for dear life. Carefully he takes a few thrusts into her legs as her hand strokes the head of his cock. The feeling of her gripping him in both hands and her legs wrapped tightly around the base of his member is exquisite. The look of humiliation on her face as he pumps his cock in her hands only adds to his feeling of dominance over his new bitch. Every thrust of his cock slams his sac into her pussy making the females legs tighten in shock. He growls in delight watching denial etch her face with every pump of his loins.

***

Victoria whimpers and writhes watching the werewolf’s dangerous maw descend towards her chest. Her hands dart out to prevent the monster from doing what ever it intends to do to her. She can’t tell if it is going to eat her or rape her with the look in its eyes. His head is too strong and she feels its searing breath on her body. Shaking with fear she waits in horror for the werewolf to strike. Suddenly there is a searing heat below her breasts and Victoria cries out in terror. But it was no bite as the creature drags its hot tongue in between her breasts and finally ending the lick before it touches her neck. Its rough the entire way like a fine grain sand paper, and in its wake the monsters powerful muscle leaves behind a thick trail of drool. Its tongue is strong enough to force the air from her chest as it passes between the cleft of her breasts. Slowly the were-man pulls away from her and hangs over top of her a moment. She tries to squirm away, but the werewolf is back at her chest with its ravenous licks. The werewolf is rough with everything it does to her and the strong tongue is no different as each flick of its powerful oral muscle slaps her tits from side to side like a pair of speed bags.

Her nipples are raked every time by the flat of the broad torture device as it scours her hard nubs with every pass. Victoria tries to push his head away from her abused rack but he just licks her hands and arms as well like a over affectionate puppy. His tongue takes a long stroke on a single breast making her teeth clench painfully from its sensitivity. She watches as its rough surface pulls her nipple up towards the werewolf’s maw. And suddenly the monster clamps down on Victoria’s breast and suckles her. She gasps as raw pleasure radiates from her nipple and her sex responds with a faint tingle. Her legs tighten together in denial feeling pleasure from this monsters attack. The werewolf emits a deep growl of pleasure as the hard cock between her legs throbs between her legs. It looks her in eyes and Victoria sees the creature smile at her.

Fear fills her as she sees the look on its face. It gently takes both her hands and forces them down to his throbbing member. She feels its hot flesh touch her palm and she jerks her hands away. But the brute growls with menace as its lips curl back in a clear threat to her. She puts her hands quickly back onto his tool and lets out a choked sob. Slowly the wolf begins to pump his rod between her legs as she strokes his smooth shaft with hands. Its member is coated with thick pre-cum that makes her mind scream out in revulsion. Victoria can only hope that if she can get it to cum in her hands it will leave her be. The werewolf starts to thrust into her hands and between her legs slowly. Her mind tries to take to her another place but the creature’s balls keep striking her sex sending a double shock of pain as well as pleasure up her spine. Victoria closes her eyes tight against the feeling but her body responds to the attention as her lips start to moisten from every slap of fur on her flesh.

***

Panting he bucks harder and harder into her legs and hands as the female whimpers and gasps with every strike of his furry bag against her lips. He drools down onto her tits as he imagines how she tastes between her legs. His thrusts grow more urgent at the thought and his balls start to ache from the constant striking against her sex. She shakes her head from side to side as her body moistens under the assault against womanhood. He feels the fur of his loins start to dampen from her juices. He abruptly stops thrusting into her hands as he pauses to sniff the air. The scent of her arousal is picked up by his keen senses letting him know that his mate is ready to receive him. She must have sensed his intentions because she starts to rub his sensitive head with her hands while rocking her legs back and forth on him. He was done with her limbs though as his hands slide down her sides and over her taught rear.

The bitch whines in fear as claws stroke gently along the cleft of her ass and over her tight pucker. Her hands have stopped moving, paralyzed by his actions she only watches his face with terror as claws graze her nether lips. He strokes his claws back and forth over the soft fabric tracing the outline of her pussy with his blunt nails. She babbles to him again but now a small part of him in the back of his mind understands. She is pleading with him to stop and leave her alone. He growls at the request and in response he hooks the pink undergarment under his thumb and jerks it to the side. The other hand slides its middle digit inside her damp tunnel to the knuckle. She cries out at him and reaches down to stop his hands. But her legs are still pinned closed and she can only feebly reach for the intruding fingers but she can only feebly grasp at his hands. Slowly he works the digit around inside her feeling the tightness around his finger as she squeezes him. He growls in approval and removes the intruding finger with a squelching sound. Bringing to his face he smells the scent of her delicious sex before licking the digit. She watches him in revulsion as he takes satisfaction in her taste.

***

Victoria tries to think of disgusting things to stop her body from betraying her. But every slap of the werewolf’s mighty loins makes her wetter and wetter. She grimaces in disgust with herself and feels sick to her stomach. Feeling his hard shaft in both hands she tries to tell herself the damage that the were-man is going to do to her if she does not get him to cum here and now. Abruptly he stops humping into her hands she opens an eye to look at him. He breathes deep in the air with half lidded eyes as if he just scented a tasty burger. Victoria knows what he must be whiffing she can feel her juices cooling in the slight breeze penetrating the forest. Dread washes over and she strokes the werewolf harder and tries to work her thighs over his cock with her hips. But he paws are moving from her sides. She sobs in fear from what the monster is going to do her as its hard claws rake over her ass and slide into her cleft. Carefully he traces his digits up her crack making her cringe and tense with every centimeter they move. She gasps as the hard nails dip into her tiny pucker they feel like tiny shards of glass against her sensitive ass. But his hands keep moving up to the moist triangle of her pink g-string. Her breathing is already heavy with anxiety as he traces her sex with a single talon. The touch of his claw sends electric shocks of pleasure up her spine that she makes her eyes snap shut in refusal. Victoria looks to her attacker and pleads with him to stop she is trying anything to get this monster to release her. But the bastard grins at her with pearl white fangs and growls at her.

She feels him pull away her panties exposing her sensitive lips to the midnight air. Mercilessly he drives a finger inside her and Victoria cries out in shock. The single digit alone is large enough to make her sex ache from such a sudden entry. She tries to reach for his hands but her fingers only tangle with his making him twist his finger inside her painfully. She sobs feeling her wetness on the werewolf’s knuckles as he pulls his finger away. She watches with mouth agape as the werewolf smells then licks his finger clean of her juice. The look on his face is unmistakable, the monster wants more. The weight finally comes off her legs and feeling comes back to them with a violent flare of pain as muscles get fresh blood from after so much pressure of a 400 pound brute leaning on them. But the respite is short lived as the were-man grabs her legs under both knees and pries her legs open wide. Her cheeks flush red as the creature eyes her modesty with hunger. Her heart hammers inside her chest as the werewolf’s powerful tongue licks his lips as he slowly lowers himself to her mound. Victoria cannot stand the thought of getting oral from such a monster. She struggles and kicks against him trying to turn her body over and get away. But he just growls and violently pushes her knees up against her chest. It knocks the wind out of her with a loud wheeze escaping her throat. But the brute pushes them back even more until her knees are touching the hood of the car on either side of her head. Folded like a pretzel with her womanhood pointed at her rapist Victoria sobs deeply in defeat. This monster was going to use her any way he liked and she was absolutely helpless until he took everything from her.

***

The taste is far better than he could have expected. Her taste made his member throb rigid with need with the small sample from his finger. But his tool will have to wait he had to taste more from the source. Stepping back from his prey her legs straighten down limply. He reaches down with both hands placing them behind her knees and pries her open to him. With her petals spread wide the scent of her sex fills his nostrils. As he lowers his head licking his lips in preparation for the banquet before him. Her struggles become more panicked as she fights stubbornly against his desires. With a snarl he forces the bitches legs back against her chest. She squeaks from the force of him bending her but he pushes her knees further back as he rises up over her pushing her knees behind her head. She cries loudly in her trapped position but he cares not for her feelings he only wants to slake his lust on this bitch. He buries his nose into her soft nether lips and whiffs her deeply. Some of her moistness has faded but the attention from his nose brings more of her intoxicating juices from her tunnel. Lolling his tongue out slowly and licks her from the bump of her tail bone to the end of her slit of her tight pussy. She squeals like a trapped mouse and shakes her violently as he rakes her body with his oral muscle. She shudders and tightens with every lick and he appreciates every moment of it. Her taste, her smell, her fear and her humiliation is a delightful cocktail for his senses. He tires of just licking the surface of her sex and starts to slowly push his tongue into her. She cries out as his muscle drives inside her tight canal and pushes deep into her.

Her sex clenches down hard on his oral muscle giving him a difficult moment to remove it from her with a pop. He rolls his aching tongue in his mouth taking in her flavor with methodical precision before going back for more. Plunging his tongue over and over into her pussy she cries out in response every time. It is like sweet music to his pointed ears as he laps her juices up like water from a dish. Her sex starts to tighten up as her breathing becomes heavier the juices are coming faster and faster as he fucks the female with his oral muscle. He can hear her heart hammering in her chest her cries of denial give way choked to moans on groans of pleasure. He knows she is about to cum so he stops licking and looks at her flushed face. Tears roll down her face as she glares at him with hate. Watching her face he grinds his tongue against her stiff clit dragging the entire length of it across the sensitive organ. Her eyes roll and her body tenses she curses him and tries to move her slit way from his attentions. But his licks hit the mark every time as her back arches a little more and her heart jackhammers a little faster. One last long lick makes his bitch breathe catch in her lungs as her body twitches and jerks under his weight. It takes a few moments to end but when it passes her sobs come back even harder from the violation.

***

Victoria winces as she feels the werewolf’s dry nose grind into her womanhood as he breathes onto her sensitive lips. The werewolf moves his snout down lower and she gasps as his tongue scorches the crack of her ass. The bastard slowly drags his thick tongue between the cleft of her ass dragging its way up to her sex. The rough muscle passes over her anus with agonizing pressure as Victoria grimaces feeling every taste bud that rakes over her virgin asshole. Her body tingles as his oral muscle scrape the bottom of her entrance. It moves so slow over her tunnel she almost turns blue from holding her breath from the overwhelming sensation of being licked but such a powerful muscle. Normal men done come with equipment like this werewolf his tools are precise and accurate and all larger in every way. But the worst comes when his tongue moves higher up to her clit. Her mind shatters into tiny fragments as his tongue strikes the rough muscle pulls her hood back as the rest trailing it assaults the exposed head of her clit. The stimulation is a savage mix of pain and pleasure in such quantity a noise escapes her throat she can barely comprehend. Her mind swims from the sensation and then she feels the heat of his back at her tail bone. Every lick is a rollercoaster of agonizing pleasure as the tongue passes over her ass and pussy over and over. Deep down she hates this nightmarish ride because she knows that the monster is still going to penetrate her with that behemoth cock between its legs. But her body is riding high on the moment and she is finding it hard to find the thoughts to argue.

Victoria cries out in a mix of pain and pleasure as the werewolf suddenly pushes its tongue into her sex. It pushes deep into her and she clenches her tunnel hard on the intruder. She gasps as it pulls out of her clenching pussy with a wet pop. Her breathing comes in gasps as her womanhood aches from the entry. And abruptly his oral resumes with more fury than before. Victoria is literally being tongue fucked by the werewolf as it laps inside her. Her eyes roll into the back of her skull as all thought of rape and werewolf fades from her conscious. All she feels is a tsunami of pleasure washing over her with wave after wave. Deeper the muscle plunges exploring her most intimate depths that have never been touched before by a man. Her hands move to her breasts and squeeze them tightly while she listens to the squelching sound of her juices being fished out of her with every lap. Her breaths come faster as she feels a building pressure deep inside aching to get out. But then it all stops and she is empty for too long. Her pussy throbs with need and her mind cries out in lust. She opens her eyes to see the werewolf staring at her. The world comes crashing in on her at that moment, she was getting off on her rapists mouth. Fresh tears fill her vision and she barely feels the last stroke of its muscle on her clit. The orgasm comes anyway but it is hollow and without joy. The werewolf grins in satisfaction while Victoria curses at it with pure hate.

***

He lets go of her legs and lets her ass drop back onto the metal surface with a thud. One hand seizes the bitch’s neck while the other takes his rigid dick in the other. She kicks and struggles against him but nothing she can do even hurts him. She struggles to get air with both her hands fighting the one at her as he strokes his swollen cock head against the tight slit of her sex feeling the warmth of her soft lips against him. Slowly he aims for her entrance and applies pressure making her struggles double in response to his massive tool probing at her tiny hole. With his tip buried into her entrance he pins her body down with his palm on her midsection forcing her hips still as he starts to apply pressure with his own hips. All she can do is kick at him pathetically while letting out a choked scream in defiance as he slowly opens her. Moments pass by as her lips part wide to his relentless pressure when finally his thick tool buries its head deep inside. He instantly starts to hammer into her womanhood brutally once inside letting out a groan of pleasure as he feeds inch after inch of his member into her.

She reaches down with her hands to his cock to stop the savage assault on her pussy. But both his paws snare hers and force them above her head. She cries out between gasps of air with his choke hold allowing her to breathe. But her airway is cut off again from a vicious bite down onto her neck. Holding her throat tightly between his jaws he rams his cock into her with abandon. Every savage thrust brings his hips closer to hers as more of his length is engulfed by her tight pussy. Her muscles spasm around his throbbing shaft making him growl deeply in pleasure. His cock start to batter its way into her womb making her body convulse against him every time he collides. Without warning her last barrier gives way as his cock sheathes inside her completely with a triumphant thud as his balls smash into her rear end. She stiffens and writhes under him letting out a gurgle of agony as he pierces her. But his brief pause ends as he starts to pump his cock into her ravaged womb.

***

The werewolf releases Victoria’s legs allowing her to uncurl from her pretzel position. She tries to take in a breath from her unrestricted lungs but his is back on her in a flash. He wraps a clawed hand tightly around her throat cutting off her windpipe with callous disregard. She grabs at his hand trying to breathe in what little air she can in ragged gulps. Victoria kicks furiously at him struggling to get free from the were-man but his hand is like steel noose around her neck. There is pressure against her nether lips the monster is going to rape her while she struggles for air. She kicks and bucks her hips against the intruding rod. But the attempt to dislodge his massive member from her entrance is dashed but a powerful hand pressing down on her midsection. Searing pain radiates from her sex forcing her to make a choice, air or her fragile womanhood. The pain is only getting worse with her attempts to gain purchase of precious air with her hands a failing plan as stars fill her vision. She desperately reaches down to protect her over stretching pussy. But his paws move in a flash like the before and seize both her wrists pinning them above her head.

She manages to steal a few desperate gasps of the cold night air. But the werewolf’s massive jaws clamp down on her throat. His gurgles her last gulp of air as he bites down on her tender neck. The sharp fangs of the brute pinching down on her soft flesh is unbearable and panic quickly sets it as she struggles in his jaws. Searing pain explodes inside her sex as the werewolf violently enters her. There is too much inside her and the bastard was ramming more and more of his solid cock into her poor tunnel. Her muscles shudder and rip under the assault and Victoria can barley find the strength to move with her lack of air. More and more he smashes his tool into her agonized body as tears cloud her vision. Even through the brutality of the werewolf’s rape, her body climaxes violently adding to the agony of his attack. Tenderized and torn muscles clamp down on the thick rod rapidly sending white hot arcs of pain up her spine in rapid bursts. The monster pushes roughly into the barrier to her womb with reckless hunger. But her cervix shatters in a sudden thrust as he fills her completely as its furry nuts smash into her ass cheeks. Victoria arches her back in pure and total agony as the werewolf finally fills her to his limit. She fades in and out of consciousness from the incredible pain in her abdomen but the bastard is pulling his member back for more.


***

He relaxes his jaw hearing the females heart slow letting her take a few gulps of air while he basks in the feeling of her tight pussy squeeze his entire length. His loins are painfully tight with need to release inside his bitch. Her delightful squeals of pain and cries of mercy are faded whimpers as her head rolls limply from side to side. Her mental presence is needed as he starts to keenly feel every bump and ridge inside the female with a growing sensitivity. His jaws disengage from her neck as he starts to thrust with longer and more brutal thrusts. Panting heavily while his cock starts to swell painfully inside her making every push feel tighter her eyes flutter as her mind crawls back into the realm of awareness. Finally his body can’t hold back any longer as the last push of his member is the most savage as he strains to hilt his bitch before cum rockets up his shaft. He howls as the first large burst erupts from his aching cock head. The woman suddenly joins in his chorus as he rapidly fires into her being roused awake from his orgasm. Every volley of semen is feels more pleasurable than the last making his eyes roll in raw pleasure.

He feels his hot seed surge past his member and flood over her swollen lips down the crack of her ass. With a feral grin he knows his bitch is full and pulls his cock out of her stuffed sex and fires the last of his load onto her belly and tits. Panting heavily from spending himself on her body he looks over the woman at the aftermath of his lust. She half turns to the side clutching her belly and sobbing trying to look away from him. The damage stands out on her white flesh like hot brands from the toll of his lust. Her backside is red with blood from the many cuts marring her creamy flesh from his brutal claws ripping at her garments. Her neck is purple where his teeth pinched down on her jugular to hold her still. Her sex is red and swollen as his seed spills out from her body and down her ass onto the car. Licking his fangs in satisfaction he feels a different kind of hunger start to gnaw at his mind. But a sound perks his pointed ears making his fur prickle on his back and thinks better of it as he darts off into the woods giving one final stare at the broken woman before dashing off into the forest. He feels a pang of regret letting her live knowing in the back of his mind he just created another of his kin by his lustful violation.

***

For a long moment her life was blissful darkness as her mind swam away from the brutality of her situation. But the werewolf’s violent drilling inside her was dragging her mind back to reality. She tries to dive deeper away from the scene but slowly her mind becomes painfully aware of her body. Victoria’s eyes fly wide open with the werewolf’s primal howl piercing her skull and suddenly she is back in the moment with the monster. Heat fills her body with painful force making her cry out as she become acutely aware that the creature is hilted inside her and draining its loins inside her womb. Pressure builds in her womb with every throb of the huge tool inside her making her abdomen ache with fresh pain. She writhes against the monster trying desperately to get free from his pumping member feeling like she is going to burst. But the pressure ebbs away as her feels the hot seed gush down and all over her ass cheeks. She feels the massive member finally depart from her sex with a loud pop as it leaves her. The hot seed on her chest and belly are hardly noticed by Victoria, she only feels the relief of being left empty by the werewolf. It was finally over for her, the creature releases its hold on her wrists and she immediately clutches her aching belly and rolls to the side. She wishes for it to leave her but the monster stays hovering over her with still hungry eyes. And then suddenly it is gone and there is a blinding light washing over her. Victoria assumes she is dead for a moment but it is something far worse.

The car pulls over to the side of the road and two people in park ranger uniforms approach her. She sobs in a mix of relief and humiliation as they look at her with concerned expressions. One offers her a blanket and she eagerly takes it as they hold her close and tell her that everything is going to be ok. But to Victoria the words are hollow and without meaning. She was just raped by a monster that left her body a ruined mess. She asks them to take her to the hospital feeling the pain keenly in her body from the vicious attack. She more flops into the back of the truck than gets into it. Once again she finds comfort being curled into a ball. All she can do is tell herself that it is over and that everything will be ok. But she will never look at a forest with the same sense of appreciation or joy again.

 

[Saucyminx]

You need to remove all the references to girl or little girl. I was bored so I went through and did a little preliminary editing for you--cleaned up your grammar and spelling issues. Pm me or post some contact info and I'll send it to you as a word document so you can see what I changed.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Been trying to get this little bit of smut off the ground. Feel free to take a look see and let me know what you gentlemen and ladies think. The last two times i have attempted to submit this story it tells me there was underage content. Pretty damn confused about that, but if there is some please point it out because i am missing it.

I know I'm not a gentleman and many have told me I'm not a lady, but I'll give my two cents anyway.

First, I suspect you may be having problems, not with underage, but with bestiality. Yeah, I know you've got a werewolf by the tail but when you use words like 'wolf' and 'animal' the geiger counter goes crazy.

The site is hypersensitive - their right, they pay the rent - and, without changing your story, you could change some nouns to be blatantly obvious this is 'non-human' rather than doggy sex.

Second, you need a good edit. Both copy edit - there are a load of typos and fast typing glitches - and also it needs a bit more structure.

You start great with a good hook but I think the chase is a bit underwhelming - the contrast between werewolf lust and innocent virgin fear could be more dramatised. The conclusion is a bit running out of steam. She's been violated by a monster - and yet... and yet?

Alhough I'm not usually a fan of present tense for stories, I understand why you use it here. Others will no doubt jump down my throat, but I felt you could have used the tense to be much more dramatic and scary.

Overall, I reckon you've got a pretty impressive story that deserves your loving attention to polish up.

Good luck.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

You need to remove all the references to girl or little girl. I was bored so I went through and did a little preliminary editing for you--cleaned up your grammar and spelling issues. Pm me or post some contact info and I'll send it to you as a word document so you can see what I changed.

You're wrong, surely.

I quote, "now on her own and a year out of college".

The author continually refers to 'the woman' and I can't find a single reference to 'little girl'. The references to her own car and independence destroy any misapprehension that she is under age.

 

[Saucyminx]

You're wrong, surely.

I quote, "now on her own and a year out of college".

The author continually refers to 'the woman' and I can't find a single reference to 'little girl'. The references to her own car and independence destroy any misapprehension that she is under age.

He licks his fangs thinking about how tight the little girl will be for something as big as him

Guess you just missed it.

 

[omegaxypher]

Well now, that makes sense. I figured her age was established and it was more of a comparison to how the werewolf saw her. oh well, removed and improved on.

Added more to the chase to make it a little more interesting and dramatic.

I will try to make the two sides of view much more distinct and different.

I was not satisfied with the conclusion either, but i was eager to get some feedback on the story so i jumped the gun.

I will fire you a PM Saucy to see your edit and make the appropriate changes.

thanks for all the help

(update: Oct 21 2009)

Rewrite is taking far longer than anticipated. But the time spent I feel is worth it in the end, expect the rewrite soon.

 

[omegaxypher]

Rewrite is up on the second post. Feel free to have a look, its still a little rough towards the end but I feel it is getting there.