I have written my first story and now I need somebody to look it over. It's a 4400-word story, US English. It's a nerd-meets-stripper and they fall in love story. (You may think it's hack, but it happened to me.) I hope to put it in the mature category.
I think I (and Word) have a pretty good handle on spelling and grammar. What I need is someone to READ it and help me with the story's flow, how to flesh out the characters, how to make the story more appealing. I like a lot of sex in my sex stories, but I would also like my characters to be at least 2-and-a-half dimensional.
PM me and I'll email you the story.
I think I (and Word) have a pretty good handle on spelling and grammar. What I need is someone to READ it and help me with the story's flow, how to flesh out the characters, how to make the story more appealing. I like a lot of sex in my sex stories, but I would also like my characters to be at least 2-and-a-half dimensional.
PM me and I'll email you the story.
