A New Story - Beginning of a Series

Julian

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I am hoping to take this through years, jumping back & forth like the show "Quantum Leap" but with one main/central character and her explicit & raunchy episodes in life's journey.

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Ashly's Adventures Ch. 01 by Julian©

Chapter 01 – The Wedding (2004)

Ashly was just the kind of girl every man dreamt of, except for one thing: she loved sex. She drank it in like a fish in the ocean. She has more curves than the autobahn and makes supermodels look sickly. Her breast stick out too far, and her ass was made for power-fucking while on her back or on her hands and knees, something a man couldn't help but to bounce off every time he made contact with it or pumped down into her sweet, tight, closely shaved almost-bald-and-constantly-wet pussy.

Her life had been the adventures men read about in Letters to Penthouse and she was more obscene than the nastiest porn starlet around. Life, like sex, had few limits or taboos, and at her friends' wedding, she knew she'd make another adventure occur. Her escort, a tall, hulking gent named Dave, was cheerfully moving about with her in his rented tuxedo. His grey vest, tails and striped trousers reminded her of the Ask Jeeves logo from the internet. And he couldn't help staring at her ample curves wrapped up in a Grecian style gown, tapered at the waist, flowing to her feet in spiked heels, the slit on the leg showing creamy skin and a wonderful muscle tone from swimming and dancing. She alluded to having danced on a pole or stage, teasing Dave, making sure to grind gently against the handsome man when the bridal party was called out for the march into the center of the dance hall.

Dave had trouble not staring at Ashly. Her gown had dipped low in the back, showing off her spine as well as the curves, making her skin glow under the romantically dimmed lights. The dress cut low at the front, and her natural figure kept the breast high, the cleavage a noticeable item, her body swaying like maracas in a samba singers' hands. As they moved closer for the dance, spinning her gently into his arms, Dave whispered, "Ashly, you look great. But ... what are you wearing to keep your boobs so high?"

Ashly blushed, her coloration almost unnoticeable in the room, dancing close, keeping her arm around Dave and grinding gently against his belly, making his trousers tent gently with inner excitement.

"Actually", she purred, pressing herself as close as humanly possible on the dance floor, "I'm only wearing pasties. And those barely cover my nipples. The harder they get the more likely every man will see I am braless under this gown."

Still dancing, Dave gulped hard, gasping under his breath. Then Ashly moved tighter, hugging him and letting him feel the 38 double-D's barely contained in her gown. She whispered, "Oh, and I also forgot my panties too."

Stock-still, Dave stood, watching Ashly move and sway to the gentle beat of the music, and then turn, rolling into the crowd of other bridesmaid's, walking off for the toast with the bride and groom. Dave finally moved slowly, but after her, when his cock calmed down and he was able to move without poking anyone with his blunt spear. His eyes blurred, burning as he noticed her amazing figure encased and wiggling like a stripper on stage, shaking, and he wondered, whose attention was she trying to get?

A glass of champagne later, and Dave and Ashly were wiggling and moving to a disco beat, enjoying themselves immensely. He moved, spinning her, then bringing her back as often as possible, making sure she landed square against his body. And every time it happened, she groped his neck and arms, amazed at his biceps, purring softly, grinding her pelvis against his, and trying to encourage another hard-on. As the song ended, and the band announced a break, Dave took Ashly by the hand, walking them past the bar, and getting a red wine and beer for their thirst.

The DJ came on, and the kids poured onto the dance floor, wiggling and grinding, dancing and spinning like mad creatures. Many of the adults watched, giggled and even joined in with the pulsing madness of the wild unfettered motions, the gyrating and wanton, but (somehow still) innocent displays done by the teenagers.

As Dave sipped his beer, Ashly leaned close to him, whispering, "I'd love to suck your cock right now."

"Read the rest here and feedback or comments would be appreciated."

Blessings,



Julian


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:D Okay, it looks great, but I had to crack up on your very first line:

"Ashly was just the kind of girl every man dreamt of, except for one thing: she loved sex."

Really?! :D:D
 
Thank you

:D Okay, it looks great, but I had to crack up on your very first line:

"Ashly was just the kind of girl every man dreamt of, except for one thing: she loved sex."

Really?! :D:D

Maybe I should have underlined the word loved - it's a nudge against an old bruise on my soul and a unresolved (but dead) marriage from a bit back. Don't forget when you find your dream this is what you get:

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Thank you & blessings,



Julian
 
Failure has two faces on Lit...
1) Stories that are less than 750 words... yours has 713

and

2) Stories that don't have any plot, character development or point... like yours.
 
Hmm ...

Jenny,

Thank you for the criticisms; they are appreciated. I was wondering if I should have posted the whole story here instead of a portion, as what is above is only part of the story.

http://i35.tinypic.com/2ag2p02.jpg

If I need to do that instead of leading people through the bulletin board into the main link at Literotica I shall.

Take care & smile,



Julian
 
Jenny,

Thank you for the criticisms; they are appreciated. I was wondering if I should have posted the whole story here instead of a portion, as what is above is only part of the story.

http://i35.tinypic.com/2ag2p02.jpg

If I need to do that instead of leading people through the bulletin board into the main link at Literotica I shall.

Take care & smile,

Julian

That was a portion? You needed to say so. Also, we don't nomally have stories posted here at all... just links to stories posted on lit. What I said was absolutly correct. What you did post is too short to qualify as a story, it lacks enough characterization to allow the reader to empathize and the plot either makes not sense or is entirely missing.

You have to give us enough to work on. If the story isn't even posted on this site we aren't interested at all.
 
And that's why ...

I thank you.

Thank you Jenny.

Blessings,



Julian
 
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