Haiku Lovers

[Mac2383]

Share one of your haikus...
They can be sexual, but they don't have to be.....

she said
oh yes
just like that!

 

[Safe_Bet]

Not mine, but my favorite one (by Basho)

No one travels
Along this way but I,
This autumn evening.

 

[LadynStFreknBed]

Share one of your haikus...
They can be sexual, but they don't have to be.....

she said
oh yes
just like that!

Well, this isn't really a haiku, so...

Could haiku technically be erotic?
Maybe if you get off on bestiality? LOL

 

[Mac2383]

Well, this isn't really a haiku, so...

Could haiku technically be erotic?
Maybe if you get off on bestiality? LOL

What kind of beast is this?

naked on the grass
ever so gently
she makes it pop!

 

[jat123]

goddesses and eternity...

He trembled when they touched him…
her sweet lips were of another world…

 

[SumLightCat]

it is not haiku
to follow every old rule
walk down the green path
break your haiku now

 

[bflagsst]

The mavis will sing,
mauger the death of her mate,
you maun remember.


I'll turn you in, dear,
when your innominates go,
turn you in, gently.


With each fell berry,
I'd come to recall, your hair
on my pillow strewn.

 

[butters]

i am an old tree
a xylopyrography
the sear of hot love

 

[butters]

phone wires black with birds shooting the breeze,
ruffling feathers

 

[butters]

high in the tree tops
birds prattle and whistle -
one eye on the cat

 

[vrosej10]

A strong wind and sunlight kiss my naked flesh,
I am seared with pleasure.

 

[vrosej10]

The mavis will sing,
mauger the death of her mate,
you maun remember.


I'll turn you in, dear,
when your innominates go,
turn you in, gently.


With each fell berry,
I'd come to recall, your hair
on my pillow strewn.

Raspberries bled,
Into your milky white navel.
I licked the nectar...

 

[LoveIsAllYouNeed]

delete

 

[bluerains]

inside

live shifts
metal changes
breathing ajusts

 

[vrosej10]

sly lovers
creep beyond the shrubbery
I see them anyway

 

[LoveIsAllYouNeed]

delete

 

[vrosej10]

Wankers seek release
Through tawdry pieces of prose
Yank the meat faster.

outraged onlookers
vent their spleen enraged
whilst secretly aroused

 

[LoveIsAllYouNeed]

delete

 

[vrosej10]

Technicolour dreams,
Wankers' imagination
Leaves a gooey mess.

masturbation fantasies;
sex with anyone you fancy
anytime

 

[LoveIsAllYouNeed]

delete

 

[CharleyH]

Share one of your haikus...
They can be sexual, but they don't have to be.....

she said
oh yes
just like that!

I LOVE HAIKUS! But for the sake of learning ..how do I write one?

 

[bflagsst]

I LOVE HAIKUS! But for the sake of learning ..how do I write one?

I don't know really, I think the Haiku got lost in translation. We just go by syllables,

5 - I ate some ketchup
7 - and it wasn't very good
5 - I like tomatoes

It's supposed to have something to do with nature and link to folktales in some way, but I'm not very scholarly, maybe wikipedia knows.

 

[LoveIsAllYouNeed]

It's supposed to have something to do with nature and link to folktales in some way, but I'm not very scholarly, maybe wikipedia knows.

Wiki has a very good article on the style and history of haiku, for those interested in a crash course.

The 5-7-5 syllable count is traditional, as is some reference to nature.

 

[vrosej10]

sitting on a curb
overflowing drains
speed the flowers past

 

[bflagsst]

A bird's kind of song
sits on A-sides of singles
nothin' to arty