Why was my story denied

juggernut

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I don't get it, I followed all the rules, I think its long enough. (to start with), here are some stats about it

Incest story
everyone is over 18
Deepest thread is 4 (but about half of them are halfway done)
all consensual (their is one scene where you feel up your sleeping sister, but she moans your name before hand so it follows the have to enjoy it rule and ive seen sleep stories before)

If I had to guess Id say it was one of the following reasons

Its closed off so only I can write it for now

I started mapping out where the story was going to go so some branches are labled with
(COMING SOON) but it goes no deeper then the next thread. Its just to give me some structure

In the story their is no physical description or details as to what the girls look like, but I wanted that to be left to the readers imagination

Their is no actual sex yet (ala actual Penetration) but Ive seen plenty of stories with only like 3 threads and barley out of foreplay,

WHY DID I GET REJECTED!!!

Heres the map of the story

In the beginning you choose between 5 girls
Mom
Sister
Aunt & Cousin
Girlfriend

Then each girl gives you 2 choices, for 2 different kinds of foreplay (handjob v. blowjob)

from their each of those choices will have 1 or 2 different ways to initiate intercourse

then from their it breaks into various types of fetishes (anal, bondage, threeway)

Its kind of like a dating sim. And by the end of it I want to make sure no matter what you chose you will get laid.
 
It would help if you had actually provided the link to the story, so that we can read it and tell you if there's something wrong.
 
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