Glove Slap '09
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UnderYourSpell
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What time is now lol?
CharleyH
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Yes. At the designated time, I will post the challenge and the amount of time you have to complete it. Until then, I guess you just tremble in your shoes - lol.
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CharleyH
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Glad you could make it! Well, I don't know what time it is where you are, but it is about 5pm here, so an hour to go!
CharleyH
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*giggles* tremble in your knickers, then!
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CharleyH
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I'm not wearing knickers.
Oop. TMI.
Ah ha, so, you are duelling with a pistol after all!
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At the moment, simply limbering up with some sabre rattling. When Champ shows up is when I'll actually draw the weapon.Ah ha, so, you are duelling with a pistol after all!
Voluntarily or not, probably.
champagne1982
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Good thing I've looked in. I was imagining 12 Mountain. Whew. Not that Teezed couldn't use a head start and all.
Gilbert Grappé is of noble mein
especially when he's pantyless
his torso bent in a forward lean
and lifts the hem of his kilt no less
disturbing than a prairie moon
that eclisped shines bloody red
he should quiver in the Kansas noon
as we lay together after being poetically bled...
Gawd, I hate pressure.
Gilbert Grappé is of noble mein
especially when he's pantyless
his torso bent in a forward lean
and lifts the hem of his kilt no less
disturbing than a prairie moon
that eclisped shines bloody red
he should quiver in the Kansas noon
as we lay together after being poetically bled...
Gawd, I hate pressure.
Tzara
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You're going to give me a head start?!
Oh. You mean start first.
Tzara's Toro Blues
I'm just a lawnmower, baby,
Pull my cord, I'll cut your grass.
I'm just a lawnmower, baby,
Pull my cord, I'll cut your grass.
If you let it grow a little longer,
You'll knock me flat out on my ass.
Oh yeah, a kilt is pretty breezy,
When you've got a lawn to mow.
Yes, a kilt is pretty breezy.
It gets drafty down below.
But wherever your lawn needs a'mowin'
My engine's always free to go.
I'm just a lawnmower, baby,
Pull my cord, I'll cut your grass.
I'm just a lawnmower, baby,
Pull my cord, I'll cut your grass.
This time I'll trim it really short, baby,
To cut back on your sass.
champagne1982
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Tzara
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Of course.
CharleyH
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Today's challenge is to write an erotic poem revolving around bondage, in the sexual, BDSM context. The form to be used is of your own choosing, but there is a catch. The form you choose must reflect the content of the poem and of the overall bondage theme as a greater metaphor.
You have 45 minutes to complete the poem and send it to me as a Private Message.
(And please include the name of the form you use.)
You have 45 minutes to complete the poem and send it to me as a Private Message.
(And please include the name of the form you use.)
UnderYourSpell
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I'm going to cook dinner don't start without me although what I am supposed to do is beyond me. Who's silly idea was this? oh yes I remember a certain thread starter gave me a hefty shove grrrrrrrrr
CharleyH
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Don't worry. You only need to critique. You will have 24 hours to do so once the poets finish their poems.
You and others will need to decide, in your opinion, which of the two poems better responds to the theme; which of the poems better incorporates the form chosen with the theme; and which of the poems is a better poem overall. The poem that you consider being better in at least two of those three criteria will be your pick to win.
Form reflecting content... so you can use a rondeau, and keep repeating a command, and the repetition in form resembles the repetitve nature of domination and submission? I'm not going to write a poem, I'm interested in form reflecting content though. Might be too limiting, or not clear enough, how can the appearance of words resemble a theme or context or metaphor?
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CharleyH
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Simply. The better question is how a form can add or detract so much.
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Well, considering I thought that I was going to start writing now rather than an hour ago, I did finish about 3 minutes earlier than my high noon.
The boys on Boot Hill are rolling in their pine boxes and gettin' tangled in their shrouds... alas.
p.s. I don't think 45 minutes was long enough to research a form and then write a poem... or maybe I was too concerned with content... I dunno. Count or not. Mine's in.
The boys on Boot Hill are rolling in their pine boxes and gettin' tangled in their shrouds... alas.
p.s. I don't think 45 minutes was long enough to research a form and then write a poem... or maybe I was too concerned with content... I dunno. Count or not. Mine's in.
