The Search For Mecca OOC

Serowyn

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Humanity had lived blissfully ignorant of other species for what seemed like an eternity. It wasn’t until they began expansion far out in the deep reaches of space past their own galaxy and began colonizing other earth-like planets that they found out they weren’t alone. Not only that the other species they met, known as the Dendrens were adamant that humanity was a plague which needed to be destroyed and so declared war on the far inferior Terran army. Humanity was not the pushover the Dendrens perceived though and soon found that exterminating them would be a tedious task. They were winning however and slowly forced the humans back. Not all units made it onto recovery ships in time and were left stranded on abandoned planets with enemy troops. Unit 346 missed their recovery ship and were left on Terra 12 a planet vastly larger than earth with only one settlement. An old resource facility originally planned to be the base of operations for the planet before the war came and it was, like the planet, abandoned.

However for Unit 346 nicknamed the Redcoats it is the only place of refuge where they might survive as enemy ground troops and the jungle planets natural elements throw constant blockades in their way. Most have perished on the journey but six have survived and they must depend on each other if they want it to remain that way and make it to resource base New Mecca.

Currently the survivors are located two hundred miles away from the base. Their first goal is to get through those two hundred miles alive.


OOC: So basically looking for five other players though that number can grow or shrink depending on interest. It’s not going to be all action all the time it’s more about the relationships between each of the soldiers as they make their way to New Mecca. I think the story should be a community effort with all of us getting a say in how things go down. Anyone interested please either PM me or post a character app which follows at least the basic template of my character below. No rambo’s or super soldiers please everyone should be realistic and only have a couple weapons on them. Ranks are up to each person, whoever picks the highest rank naturally will be the leader and don’t be afraid to pick something unique other than just a soldier. There are lots of field positions people can choose from, no limitations there.

The Dendrens: The basic vision I have for these are tall lanky creatures proportioned like humans only averaging between 6-8 feet some reaching 11 feet in height. They wear suits that hide their skin mostly for protective reasons against different climates and wear masks hiding their faces and also providing them with the ability to breathe on hostile planets ecosystems.

Don’t be shy to post comments on how I could improve this story and any aspect within it so long as the basic storyline stays the same.

Name: Clara Cane
Age: 24
Rank: Corporal (Medic)

Appearance: Dark brown hair which when hanging down reaches her shoulders but is always kept tied in a bun behind her head to keep it out of her face and blue eyes. She has a pale complexion. She stands at 5’6” and isn’t over fit.

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Personality: Very professional she is very dedicated to her craft as a surgeon and takes every injury seriously. Most of the time she has no time for socializing even when not in battle which can make her seem stand-offish and a bit of a shrew but when someone gets to know her they find her generally passionate for human life and caring, even pleasant. She isn’t violent by nature but knows when she needs to fight, she is very defensive of other people and is for the most part a fairly selfless person. She is mentally and emotionally tough and has at times been compared to a robot for her efficiency as a surgeon and expressionless features during work. Though she’s been deteriorating mentally which she chalks up to fatigue and stress but she hides it from everyone.

History: Born on a space ship her father was a military surgeon who held high regard among the ranks. Her formal years were spent on the same ship learning her fathers trade, although he never meant for her to enter the military. She was enrolled in a medical school on Mars where she graduated in the top 3% of her class and spent five years as a surgeon on Mars before being conscripted like everyone else into the military. After two months of boot camp to learn basic combat she was sent into the ranks serving in the 346th as their surgeon.

Her time has not been easy having many die beside her with her hands stained with their blood, after losing almost the entire platoon she began to lose confidence in her ability and their chances of survival but has remained adamant in her duties ready to help whenever called upon. In recent days as the small group has waited holed up in a dank cave she has had hallucinations, sometimes voices of people who had died in their platoon others were foreign languages she couldn’t understand. Sometimes she would see things and after blinking those images would disappear, she has told herself that she was just tired but the persistence of these hallucinations has her worried about her mental health. She has yet to tell anyone of these visions and has no plans to.

Equipment: Pistol with ten clips, Field Medical Kit, bootknife.
 
Name: Zoe Fairchild
Age: 22
Rank: Specialist - Reconnaissance/Spotter
Appearance: Her short auburn hair falls to just at the base of her neck, short enough to not get snagged on anything and short enough to make for a bit more comfortable time when she wears her helmet. She stands at 5'7" with athletic physique that is forced upon those in her position in the field.

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Personality: She doesn't usually stick around for a long enough conversation to divulge much about herself, but when she does she reveals a someone confident in their abilities. "It isn't arrogance if it's true," is the phrase that sometimes accompanies the looks that come when she talks about the shots she can make. She's used to being out in the field alone with nothing but her rifle and a few days rations, and can occasionally have a bit of a tough time working closely with others. She enjoys joking with the few friends she has made in her unit and might be described as 'cheerful' every so often.

History: She was born on one of the several based that occupy the surface and catacombed interior of the moon. It was soon apparent that the restless child sought bigger and better places. As the youngest of three brothers her tomboyish nature comes through clearly. Her mother and grandfather both were in the military and often told their new generation stories from their days in the service and it was little surprise when she and her siblings joined as soon as they were able. After the months of boot she was slated for recon/marksman training, which she took to naturally as the solitary nature of the role suited her well. The fact that she was a damned decent shot hardly hindered her, though she usually leaves the long shots to the unit's designated sniper.

Two of her brothers died in the first wave of the Dendren attack, so it is little wonder that she takes this war very personally. Though she consistently tells herself there was nothing she could have even attempted, a smaller part nags that she could have saved them had she been there for the first skirmish. She has taken her unit's current isolation fairly well, though under the facade the thought of dying out on this conquered world scratches at her psyche.

Equipment: Assault rifle fitted for long range firing and several clips of ammo, trench knife, pistol with a few clips of ammo, a pair of binoculars and various other personal effects.
 
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Terrific app :). Please anyone else want to join? One or two more people and I think we can start.
 
Name: Jack “Pot Shot” Traven
Male
Age: 28
Height: 6’0”
Weight: 180
Skin tone: Tan
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Black
Rank: Gunnery Sergeant
Sniper
Weapons and Equipment:
  • Modified medium rail gun - range 1800 meters before round starts losing accuracy and stopping power. At 2000 meters, round has no stopping power. 10 round magazine, three extra magazines available. Covered in adaptive camo skin. When fired, sounds like a twig snapping.
  • Personal handgun – 8 round magazine, three extra magazines available; uses 10mm rounds. Holster is covered in adaptive camo
  • 12” combat knife
  • Combat pack capable of carrying 30 lbs of equipment; covered in adaptive camo
  • 9 grenades – 3 frag, 3 flash, 3 concussion (kept in easily accessible pockets on combat pack)
  • Personal survival kit – includes first aid kit, matches, lighter, canteen, water-purification tabs, infra-red beacon, and Swiss Army knife equivalent. Inside combat pack.
  • Adaptive camo suit

Bio: Jack didn’t get his nickname “Pot Shot” for his shooting abilities, which are considerable, but for his often sarcastic “pot shots” at those he interacts with. Unless specifically told to do something and how to do it, Jack will do things his way, which typically does not go over very well with higher ranks. As a sniper, Jack is a firm believer in the one shot, one kill philosophy, and if he can get more than one kill with only one shot—which has only happened twice during his 7 year career—he’d be quite happy. Typically stealthy, he does not like making much noise, as noise is a sniper’s bane (that is, when the sniper makes the noise, anything else helps him escape notice).
 
I was wondering about the culture of the Dendrens, mainly with regards to their military. Are they the type to panic and lose all coordination when their commanding officer is killed, or do they just keep on coming without regard? Also, is it possible to ID a Dendren officer visually?

I ask this because as a sniper, Jack's primary target in any combat situation would be the guy giving the orders with the intention of throwing the enemy into disarray.
 
Originally I was going to make Dendrens identical to humans but that would seem too uninspired so I made them much taller almost giantish. I've been looking for pictures on the internet of an alien species to act as a Dendren for visualization purposes but am not having luck. I think they would have different looks to the regular troops, how that appearance would be I don't know but yes there would be a difference.
 
What effect does the rather sudden death of a commanding officer have on the troops?
 
Well that would come down to the individual I kinda picture them like the Sith if the leader dies the next eager one takes the mantle and I could see them being semi-cannibalistic, killing each other to promote themselves. I don't think it would hurt their morale.
 
Excellent how you related them to the Sith. That is something I can easily understand. :D
 
No objection, your honor.

Why don't you two go ahead and interact for a while, maybe head towards a large meadow of some sorts with Dendren on your tail.
 
And pause action. I shall now do Jack's post. Stand by. ;)

$#%@! BS! :mad: I seem to be experiencing some technical difficulties on my end. This is going to take awhile to straighten out, on the order of at least two hours. So, yeah...continue to stand by.
 
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*walks in with bruised knuckles, holding a wrench in greasy, dirty hands, grease stains on his clothes, disheveled hair, looking about nervously*

I..i..is it f..f...fixed? L..l..looks l..l..like it.
 
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Not with anything in particular. I was just slow in responding to your fixing of things.
 
You two are awesome, sorry my last post was short i didn't want to control Zoe.
 
My fixing...? Oh the computer. Yeah, I didn't figure out what caused the problem, but it seemed to have fixed itself, after a fashion.
 
You two are awesome, sorry my last post was short i didn't want to control Zoe.

No worries! I don't mind someone doing something with my characters if it's minor little things like patching them up.

My fixing...? Oh the computer. Yeah, I didn't figure out what caused the problem, but it seemed to have fixed itself, after a fashion.

Computers have a way of doing that, heh. Mildy frustrating.
 
Lol I wish my praise meant something. I'm a slouch of a writer compared to you two.
 
Ah, give it time, Serowyn, you'll improve. Especially if you have us around to inspire you. ;)

I'd love to stay and chat, but it's getting late here and I must be off. Good night.
 
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