The 10th Annual Literotica Award Nominations: Most Original Sex Scene

[Laurel]

In this category, please nominate the sex scene in a Literotica story that you found to be most creatively done. Please include:

- a one sentence to three paragraph snippet of the creative sex scene (please do not quote more than one sentence to three paragraphs)
- the title of the story
- the author of the story
(a link to the story satisfies the bottom two requirements)

Story must be currently on Literotica, and must have been submitted during the year 2008. One nomination per member, please. If multiple nominations are made by a member, only the first listed will count.

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[michchick98]

From Candy Shop by Kimbalee:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=356156

"She was more than happy to oblige his request. She scrambled backwards, hopped onto the desk, and stretched her bent legs apart in the air. He had a thought, and decided to go for it. Seeing that it was still there, he picked up his lollypop that had been placed on the edge of the desk. He ran it inside his mouth to wet it, pulled it out with a "pop," and then spread her pussy lips apart.

John ran it up and down her slit, causing her to gasp. He licked it again, and then teased her clit with it. Circling around it a few times, he paused before pushing it down and into her about an inch. John thrust it in and out a few times while circling her clit with the thumb of his other hand. Emm's legs shook, suspended in the air, and he chuckled at the sight of it.

"Ahhh," she groaned as he quickened the pace moving it further inside. He then bent down and licked the entire area he had just covered in blue raspberry. She tasted great, and he was really getting into it. Emm went wild, thrashing about on the desk. He could get used to reactions like this."

 

[SweetPrettyAss]

I want to nominate the story "Grave Lovers" by Boxlicker101. Inside a cemetery, on top of the grave of the woman's late husband was really a strange location.

I was holding the light on her and, as soon as she started, I was reminded of my other reason, besides making an accommodation for a lady friend, for being willing to accompany Samantha on the night's escapade. She was wearing a long-sleeved blouse, and nothing under it. After she placed her garment on top of the comforter and faced me, I admired the provocative jut of her breasts and, after her jeans had also been stripped down and off, I admired all of her voluptuous body. Sam hadn't been wearing any panties either, and she lay down on the comforter, spread her legs and raised her arms, offering herself to me.

Despite the eerie location, it was an offer I could not refuse. With no hesitation, I shucked off my own shirt, turned off the light and lay down beside her. After putting the flashlight where I was sure I could find it again, I cupped my hand under one of Samantha's luscious breasts and started licking her nipple. Even though I couldn't see anything, I knew where all the parts were on her body, especially the most interesting ones. A very sensuous woman, Sam immediately expressed her pleasure from what I was doing, and cooed even more loudly when she felt me switch my attentions to the other lovely globe.

For several immensely enjoyable minutes, I licked her adorable nubbins, feeling them growing erect from my ministrations, and feeling her upper body start to squirm under me. The crickets and the wind in the tree branches above us were soothing, and I almost forgot where we were. My mouth did not forget where it was, and I opened it wide to draw one of Samantha's luscious breasts inside. While my lips formed a seal, I sucked on the delightful flesh, and my tongue continued caressing her nipple and areola. Once again, I alternated between the gorgeous twins, while the movements of Sam's body under me became more strenuous. She writhed so much in her delight that she thrust a breast up into my mouth every time I opened it and moved from one to the other.

 

[Tricialen]

Caught By the Tide
Caught By the Tide chapter 2
evanslily


We're on a small rocky ledge with the sea all around us--"


Okay, okay--you're killing me, woman!" he gasped at last, and suddenly, his fingers were there too, helping me push away the fabric until his cock sprang into my hand, firm and thick. "Fuck, I can't believe I'm helping you do this."

We were really going to do this? On this slab of granite, to the accompaniment of the crashing waves? It wasn't that I'd been joking about wanting him--God only knew how turned on I was, how much I was longing to feel him inside me. But the practicalities of having sex up here were dawning on me fast... How exactly were we going to manage it? Because at least one of us was surely going to end up with bruised and battered knees. Caught between a rock and a hard place, as it were...

 

[PrincessErin]

I would like to nominate a scene from Grace Under Pressure Ch. 1 by rachlou.

"By the time they fell in through her kitchen door, both of them were drenched. Water dripped all over the terracotta tiles as Grace turned to face Tom, suddenly aware that she was in a very compromising position.

Before she had time to suggest that he ought to go back next door, he pulled her into his arms hungrily. His hands swept down her back and grabbed her backside roughly. As his mouth plundered hers, Grace felt her doubts being firmly crushed by the wave of desire that swept through her body."

 

[evanslily]

Caught By the Tide
Caught By the Tide chapter 2
evanslily


We're on a small rocky ledge with the sea all around us--"


Okay, okay--you're killing me, woman!" he gasped at last, and suddenly, his fingers were there too, helping me push away the fabric until his cock sprang into my hand, firm and thick. "Fuck, I can't believe I'm helping you do this."

We were really going to do this? On this slab of granite, to the accompaniment of the crashing waves? It wasn't that I'd been joking about wanting him--God only knew how turned on I was, how much I was longing to feel him inside me. But the practicalities of having sex up here were dawning on me fast... How exactly were we going to manage it? Because at least one of us was surely going to end up with bruised and battered knees. Caught between a rock and a hard place, as it were...

Aw, thanks Tricialen, but I don't think that particular chapter's eligible. It was submitted during 2007...

Thanks for the nomination though

 

[wcdixon]

Seven Days
Soular
After a few more minutes of fucking slowly, Nic was ready to pound the hell out of her tight ass. He quickly pushed her further onto the bed so he could crawl behind her. He pressed her back down until she was sturdy on her hands and knees.

"Spread your legs," he growled at her. Victoria promptly obeyed. Nic stared in awe at her body from behind. His manhood was still buried inside her ass, and seeing her legs spread so far apart from behind lit him on fire. Her small little waist that flared out to beautiful wide hips and a perfect ass...was causing his balls to tighten already. 'Fuck,' he thought to himself.

Nic roughly jerked her hands out from under her. He quickly pinned her face to the mattress by holding one hand tightly around her neck, while his other hand locked her tiny wrists behind her back. This was the perfect position, Nic thought with an evil grin on his face. She would have to take whatever he gave her. And give it...he did.

 

[pastramirye5522]

Love in an Elevator by Selena Kitt. This takes the short story to new levels of creative in a tight, hot piece, just like it should be.


"See if you can make me come in thirty seconds." She winked over her shoulder at him as her slippery fingers opened herself to him. Trevor unzipped his trousers.

"Can I—?" His cock nudged her fingers. "Really?"

She reached back, guiding him in. "Is this what you want?"

"Oh fuck..." He pressed forward, grabbing her hips. "God, you feel good."

She arched, grasping the rail. "So do you." Her hips danced, round and round. His fingers searched out her clit, rubbing fast.

"Fifteen seconds..." Kelly murmured, glancing at her watch.

 

[lmind]

Can I nominate my own story? I really just want more readers and feedback:

Three on One
by lmind

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=362539

(the man-tied-down-while-girl-gives-play-by-play sex scene)

For a moment, they stood in silent stalemate, until Victoria finally said something, "What if we go behind the couch? We'll be in the room, but we won't watch."

Thinking about it, Cindy unconsciously rubbed her own exposed stomach and abs, "But she could still let him go..."

"Not if she tells us everything she's doing," Victoria let the idea sink in a bit before elaborating, "Marie, you have to promise to keep talking. We promise not to watch if you tell us everything that's happening. Everything! We'll be right on the other side of the couch the whole time. But if you stop talking, then we'll assume he is escaping, and we'll be there in, like, two seconds. So don't stop talking! And tell us everything! Deal?"
...

 

[Guest]

who else?

Hi, its Gabby, and here’s my nomination for:


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LITEROTICA’S MOST ORIGINAL SEX SCENE for 2008[/size]​

It comes from the wonderful story:

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In Uniform…In Mom

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Written by:[size=+2] scouries[/size]​

The scene starts with Billy’s mother laying out his long dead fathers Marine Corps uniform… on page 3:

"Try it on honey," my mother said when I arrived in the bedroom.

"Really?"

"Please...for mommy, you're my Marine now," my mother pled.

"The last time I tried it on I looked like a clown," I answered as I looked at the dress Marine uniform mom held in her hand. "It was way too big," I laughed as I remembered the day four or five years before when I'd snuck into mom's room and found dad's old uniform in a plastic garment bag at the back of her closet. Of how I'd tried it on and then wondered if I'd ever grow into the man my dad had been.

"You've grown Bobby, it won't be too big for you now," mom promised softly as she slipped her free hand under the towel around my waist and grasped my penis in her palm…..

And ends (much later) with Billy wearing his Grandfathers uniform:

“So it was close to two thirty in the afternoon before mom had a chance to help me into my grandfathers dress uniform.

"You look so handsome in your uniform Daddy. I love you so much Daddy," she whispered as she moved into my arms.

"I love you Cindy, my beautiful little Cindy, my lovely daughter," I answered as I pulled her against me. I'd never called her by her first name like that before.

"I've missed you so much daddy," my mother cooed as she pressed her curves into me. We kissed. I felt my grandfather's presence in the room. I knew mom did too.

"Make love to her for me Bobby... for all of us," I suddenly heard in my grandfather's deep voice echoing inside my head.

"Yes grandpa," I whispered back.

"Daddy?" my mother questioned as she looked into my eyes.

"I'm here honey... daddy's here," I said as I engulfed my daughter... my wife... my mother ... my lover...the woman who was going to bear my children.

"Jack too?"

"Yes, I'm here too," I answered for my dad...

And here’s what some of the readers said:

MASTERFUL: I have long written my own incest stories of all types, and read countless ones on literotica - yours was an incredible piece of work, combining the erotic and the relationship aspects, and the generational ones as well - fantastic job, I now find myself making sure I read all your work

It was gripping all the way through. And I was gripping, too, as my own son was reading this with me, but no need to tell you what I was gripping! I have read almost all of your stories, now, although I have not commented on most of them. But I have always given the maximum marks.

WOW! You are an amazing writer. You give a little humor with sexuality. I'm not just talking about this story I mean ALL of your stories. It shouldn't be just about sex, a good story has to have a good story line and you know that! I am such a fan! Please continue giving us great stories! Maybe continue this one.

DELIGHT: Brought a tear to the eyes in my face and the end of my cock at the same time! Great erotic literature

GREAT STORY: don't usually read or like incest fiction, but this was the most incredibly erotic fiction, incest or not, that I have read on this site. You are extremely talented.

He is…

Gabrielle L.

 

[michchick98]

Hi, its Gabby, and here’s my nomination for:


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LITEROTICA’S MOST ORIGINAL SEX SCENE for 2008[/size]​

Um, inflate-a-date? Did you read the rules of the thread before you posted your nomination?

From the very first post on this thread, posted by Laurel herself:

In this category, please nominate the sex scene in a Literotica story that you found to be most creatively done. Please include:

- a one sentence to three paragraph snippet of the creative sex scene (please do not quote more than one sentence to three paragraphs)
- the title of the story
- the author of the story
(a link to the story satisfies the bottom two requirements)

Story must be currently on Literotica, and must have been submitted during the year 2008. One nomination per member, please. If multiple nominations are made by a member, only the first listed will count.

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So which part of that did you miss?

 

[sarahhh]

One sentence snippet from the most original sex scene:

"Try it on honey," my mother said when I arrived in the bedroom.

Story: In Uniform...In Mom
Author: scouries

We're not talking about him putting on lingerie or some such thing, which one might expect in a fucking porn incest story. No indeed, we are talking about him putting on his long dead father's Marine Corp uniform. Brilliant, simply brilliant.

 

[kriskross70]

Love in an Elevator by Selena Kitt. This takes the short story to new levels of creative in a tight, hot piece, just like it should be.


"See if you can make me come in thirty seconds." She winked over her shoulder at him as her slippery fingers opened herself to him. Trevor unzipped his trousers.

"Can I—?" His cock nudged her fingers. "Really?"

She reached back, guiding him in. "Is this what you want?"

"Oh fuck..." He pressed forward, grabbing her hips. "God, you feel good."

She arched, grasping the rail. "So do you." Her hips danced, round and round. His fingers searched out her clit, rubbing fast.

"Fifteen seconds..." Kelly murmured, glancing at her watch.

I love this story.

 

[scouries]

in uniform...

Thank you Gabby !

Thank you sarahhh !

How truly kind each of you are…

I’d also just like to take this opportunity to also nominate for LITEROTICA’S MOST ORIGINAL SEX SCENE for 2008 the wonderful scene in the story:

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that starts on page three with the words:

"Try it on honey," my mother said when I arrived in the bedroom.

"Really?"

"Please...for mommy, you're my Marine now," my mother pled.


Yes, I know, I’m the author but so what? I know what the readers really thought of this scene. Seventy-two readers actually sent me a uniform of some sort (police, firefighter, army, navy, air force, etc.) that they asked me to put on and then make love with Gabby and then send it back! Seventy two of them! I tell ya, it cost me a fortune shipping back those scourian stained uniforms. Mind you gabby loved it!

for LITEROTICA’S MOST ORIGINAL SEX SCENE for 2008, I, james r scouries, proudly nominate:

In Uniform… In Mom
by scouries

 

[e33boom]

vote for Submerged by Erotic Aubrey

This gets my vote for the inventive use of a chin strap-dildo. Anytime a domme can use a usually submissve tool and turn it into a hot scene- well, it sure worked for me. Thanks Aubrey.

 

[Anna_Malia75]

In honor of Valentine's Day, I nominate this entry from last year's contest: You Think Making Love is Easy? by marshtickledkitty. I thought that the scene with the cat was great:

"Goddamn it, Ted! Can't you do something about this fucking cat?" I sat up and pulled away from him, wrapping my arms around my nakedness.

"Do you always swear like a fishwife when you get tipsy?" he asked.

"Uh, no, I don't, Ted," I bristled. "I usually only fucking swear when I'm pissed off."

"Well, I can't say I like it much, darlin'."

"I can't say I'm liking you much right now, Ted."​

 

[live2read]

Without a doubt

I defy anyone to find a more original scene than the threesome in this story. I've been reading here for about five years and I've never read any scene more inventive. Oh, and the story's pretty good, too.

Undercover Rock
by litchipking