A Little Mental Stimulation

LockDownBadBoy

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This may not be the right place for this. If not I'm sorry, but this narration was prompted by a woman I found in the BDSM Thread and I hope you all enjoy reading it:devil:
 
Story

You like it hard and rough and I am ready to give it to you. I come into the bedroom and find you just how I positioned you before my shower. You are on your belly with your ass up in the air as high as you can get it. What a beautiful sight, your cheeks spread wide, your puckering brown hole showing, your pussy glistening. I can see how aroused you are, your juices running down your inner thighs. It turns me on to know that you are so wanton and ready to do anything I want. When I left you this way I had told you to keep your face buried in the pillow. You don't know I am standing there until you feel a sharp pleasurable sting on your ass cheek accompanied with the resound smack of my hand. Your body jerks and you moan loudly into the pillow. I smile. You feel the bed move and know that I am behind you. I reach out with one thick finger and run it up and down your wet slit gathering some of your juices. You feel my digit slide up your slit and press against your anus. I don't push it inside, but tease you. You try to capture my probing finger by raising your ass even higher but I don't let you. You are not ready! On the nightstand is a collection of vibrators and fake cocks. I pick up a short red vibrator and you hear the hum as I turn it on. You have no clue which one I will use on you. Is it big and thick or small and slim? Your body tenses with the first contact as I press the plastic tip against your clit. I let the length of the small vibrator glide along your clitoris and then move it up along your gash until it presses against your backdoor. With on swift motion I shove the pulsing shaft all the way into your ass. You scream out in pleasure/pain as you strive to grow accustom to the device assaulting your rear. I hold your cheeks together and tell you, "take it!" You relax after a moment and the vibrator stays deep in your ass. I pick up a large black dildo it is lifelike with huge veins along its length and a big fat circumcised head. I spread your pussy lips apart and place the cockhead against your wet hole. I can't shove it in fast because you just can't handle the thickness, but slowly your pussy opens up. Inch after in disappears inside you. You feel like you are being split open and you love it! The assault on your ass and cunt brings on an immediate climax. "Yes, yes, yes," your muffled voice repeats. I'm enjoying making you cum and I am hard. My big cock pulses with the thought of how I am going to use and abuse you. I like to make my pleasure last though, so I move off the bed telling you, "Cupcake, you're not even have fucked yet! I want you to stay there with the vibrator in your ass and the fake cock up your cunt until I get back. Let your imagination run wild because you will never be able to picture everything I am going to do to you!"
 
This is not the forum for posting story threads. By all means write, and publish it on Lit, and even post a link in our Shameless Plug thread, but it is not the place to publish writing. There are a number of forums here designed to help out and give feedback on your writing if that is what you are seeking.:rose:

Catalina:catroar:
 
Give a new guy a break.

Didn't you see that I am a virgin? If you blast all your users for making a mistake this place will dry up like the Mohave Desert. Sorry!!!
 
Didn't you see that I am a virgin? If you blast all your users for making a mistake this place will dry up like the Mohave Desert. Sorry!!!
Sorry, but you need to relax dude! Didn't you see that two posters actually liked what you wrote?

And if you'd taken the time to get to know the forums, you would see that storys aren't posted here.

And as for drying up, now that won't happen, it's a very active forum.
 
Yep, what ShyGuy said. FYI, if I had blasted you, I would not do so with a rose...they are much too beautiful to be wasted in such a way...and you would definately not still be posting in your thread here as it would be moved to where it is more appropriate. It may be difficult to believe, but the forum has been around a long time so it is not so flimsy as to dry up if one person takes misplaced offence when a moderator gives you some helpful advice as to where you might get more satisfaction.:rose::rose:

Catalina:catroar:
 
My Appologies to all!

Being new to this whole thing I can overreact. I am learning.

What is it they say in Hollywood, "they only love you when you are on top."
 
A helpful hint from me, while writing online you need to create text breaks that are actually shorter than regular paragraphs. What you have above is what I call a WALLOTEXT and therefore, it's very difficult to read.

:rose:
 
Great Advice From All

Thank you for the info. Really do want to make my stories easy to read and post them in the correct thread. This leaning experience has been a blast. :D
 
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