Story Help

[kinkycapitalcpl]

Sorry about the boring title ... didn't know what to put there.

I've recently finished a story but I haven't posted it yet. I've never posted a story, any where, and I'm wondering if someone would be kind enough to look it over to help with any glaring errors I've made. The story involves MFMF full swap if that helps eliminate volunteers.

Thanks in advance.

 

[Iamcanadian28]

Sorry about the boring title ... didn't know what to put there.

I've recently finished a story but I haven't posted it yet. I've never posted a story, any where, and I'm wondering if someone would be kind enough to look it over to help with any glaring errors I've made. The story involves MFMF full swap if that helps eliminate volunteers.

Thanks in advance.

If you'r lookingfor somebody to review your story, you would be better off to post it in the editor's forum. They have a lot of helpful peole who frequent that area who could be ofhelp. Be sure to let them know the approximate length and subject matter of the story.

 

[kinkycapitalcpl]

oh shoot ... boy did I screw that up! not off to a good start, thanks I'll look there.

 

[Amritatouch]

Have you posted yet??