Bean Counter By Creamer

[ttvttp]

I just found this to be the worst story I have ever read. Though it was very well written. But it made me feel sick to my stomach. I was just angry and started hating the narrator. Though I have to give this story five fingers out of a full fist. Just wondering if anyone else has read this story and what they thought of it.

 

[desertslave]

I rather like it. Yes, the narrator is a pig. He cheerfully admits it. But under the circumstances, I can't say I can blame him. He's devious, and the story is written with a wicked sense of humor, which I appreciate. I think it's a very HUMAN story, although probably more a matter of what some folks wish they could do, in those circumstances.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

I just found this to be the worst story I have ever read. Though it was very well written. But it made me feel sick to my stomach. I was just angry and started hating the narrator. Though I have to give this story five fingers out of a full fist. Just wondering if anyone else has read this story and what they thought of it.

I totally agree with you. I read some chapters getting very sickened and then realized. The guy is writing mysogynist porn to get inadequates to pay him money for writing about degrading and abusing women. There is nothing positive to say about his writing except he gets women-haters to pay him money. Lit should ban this abuse of the system.

 

[ttvttp]

I think it should be posted though I am probably the biggest proponet of free speech there is. But I feel cock of ages is different and the other is different. I just think this guy has had some really bad relationships and so has created this awful story. I just think its ok to be posted I just think maybe there should be a warning like on fanfiction sites for mature stories.

 

[desertslave]

You're on an adult site, how much more warning do you need? It doesn't break any of the posting rules so why should it be singled out? Incest stories squick me, but I just don't read them. This story is in Nonconsent, so that should be sufficient warning. (Lord knows there are far more extreme stories sitting in that category.)

I think it's a clever "cautionary tale." And, just to be clear, I was a cheating wife for a while (though my ex cheated first), so I did my fair share of wincing throughout the chapters. It still entertained and amused me.

Think about something like the War of the Roses. THAT was sheer vindictiveness, Bean Counter is reasonably tame in comparison. And, if you read the entire story, you would learn that our "anti-hero" actually HELPS his wife out in the long run. He gets the jerk-ass lover out of her life, and helps her to be more accepting of her own sexuality. It wasn't a fairy tale, but it was a much better ending than I expected early in the book.

 

[ttvttp]

I was just saying a warning over removing the story. And yes I did read the whole story and while he did remove him I dont know what happened to her other than it seems he might still be having sex with his ex sister in law. And so far I have read alot of non consensual stories I have not read any as vindictive and this one.

 

[Creamer]

From Creamer

I find it amusing that on a site that is full of horribly violent non-consensual porn people find my psychological take on the subject "sickening". I'm actually quite gratified about that. It's easy to build sympathy for the victim in a straight-up torture piece -- not my cup of tea -- but subject the same character to intensely emotional psychological torture and people get all squeamish.

For the record, I'm not a misogynist (Bill might be, under the circumstances) and I've been happily, faithfully married for over a dozen years to the same wonderful woman. I've never been divorced or cheated on. Bean Counter is the product of my twisted imagination, nothing more. And it was designed to look at sex in a complicated (if fanciful) situation. It's also generated almost 200,000 hits on the first chapter alone, so I have to count it as a success.

And for those of you who take issue with the fact that I'm selling copies of the complete story (not to mention a non-fiction book and two erotic anthologies) on my website, please keep in mind that I've essentially given away the majority of my work and have this service only for those fans who are interested enough to part with a little dough or who want to tip me for my work. And rest assured that there will be a lot more where that came from in the future.

Thanks for reading my stuff!

Creamer

 

[kromen]

Clearly not the worst story on this site. The subject matter may be a little macabre, but it was well-written, fantasy fluff. A good story is designed to play with emotions.

 

[derrensmiths]

HI!!
I just read one story as I'm in hurry.
I like very much the gift of both to each other.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

I just found this to be the worst story I have ever read. Though it was very well written. But it made me feel sick to my stomach. I was just angry and started hating the narrator. Though I have to give this story five fingers out of a full fist. Just wondering if anyone else has read this story and what they thought of it.

Don't you think it a bit egotistic of you to drag a story into this forum with to ridicule without either the authors permission or knowlege?

Later today I shall look to see if YOU have written anything and drag them into the forum and treat you equally. I hope you enjoy it.

EDIT: As I suspected you have not had the guts to write and post anything on this site. Now crawl back in your hole. I find this an offensive invasion of this author.

 

[michchick98]

Um...has anyone noticed the date on the original post? Just curious.

 

[sr71plt]

Yeah. Can you imagine being puffed up about it for a year and a half--enough so to get others puffed up about it too?