First story, Lesbian+BDSM category, 6k words

[delicate_yielding]

Hi,

This is my first post, so I hope I'm doing it correctly. I'm looking for an editor for my first story, which is a BDSM story between two women. I'd like someone who's willing to make content suggestions as well as grammar/spelling edits (I've been through the text a couple of times so it should be free of anything egregious). Someone who enjoys, reads, and has edited in this category would be preferred. I feel like I'm making a lot of demands, so I'll stop there . Any help would be appreciated. PM me or reply if you're interested.

Thanks

 

[Intercontinental]

Hi
English graduate happy to help

 

[delicate_yielding]

Oops, forgot about this thread D:
I found an editor, so my story will be up soon.
Thanks for the offer though

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Very Good

Oops, forgot about this thread D:
I found an editor, so my story will be up soon.
Thanks for the offer though

Great descriptions, good job at building the heat. Had me wanting more. Was lucky to have been so fortunate!