Story: Adventures of Druuna

[Gunde]

Fan-Fiction based on erotic comic novels of Serpieri, about the voluptuous Druuna who is trying to survive in a very harsh sci-fi world.
There are two different story-lines here, one that is closer to the books, and another which is more standard post-apocalyptic in tone.
The first story-line will be a rewriting of at least the first album, since I disliked the dialogue at times and since it’s nice to see which alternatives one can come up with while writing/reading it.
The second, general post-apocalyptic story-line is caused by the fact that the only really good such story, one which got me interested in chyoo, seems pretty dead right now, and I miss it.
So far, I’m about 15 pages into the first book (2-3 pages per thread so far, but things will get more detailed), with three alternative developments having been added so far.
The P-A version is taking two different routes as of yet, but I hope to add two more sooner or later.
All in all, there’s 17 threads so far.

 

[Torg]

The second, general post-apocalyptic story-line is caused by the fact that the only really good such story, one which got me interested in chyoo, seems pretty dead right now, and I miss it.

Which one?

 

[Gunde]

Adventures of Anya, added a thread to it right before christmas, but it still hasn't been approved or denied. I PM:ed you about it a while back.

 

[Torg]

Adventures of Anya, added a thread to it right before christmas, but it still hasn't been approved or denied. I PM:ed you about it a while back.

Oh. Did I say that there wasn't enough time since you'd submitted it to do anything? If so, let me know if you want to edit that story (or anyone else for that matter, but first dibs to Gunde).

 

[Gunde]

Oh. Did I say that there wasn't enough time since you'd submitted it to do anything? If so, let me know if you want to edit that story (or anyone else for that matter, but first dibs to Gunde).

Yes, you did. And yes, I would gladly take over editing it.

 

[carnivorous cow]

I've recently been writing some threads in this story. Is it still alive? There doesn't seem to be much interest in it.

 

[moonblack]

I've recently been writing some threads in this story. Is it still alive? There doesn't seem to be much interest in it.

I don;t know about the others, but I read most of your new threads. They are pretty good, by the way.

 

[Gunde]

I've recently been writing some threads in this story. Is it still alive? There doesn't seem to be much interest in it.

And there never has been. So the additions from you and tease are pretty sweet for me as an editor, getting to approve up to a dozen threads a day instead of one or two over the span of an entire year.
I'll start adding to your threads soon, I hope. And thanks for your work so far

 

[carnivorous cow]

Okay, cool. There's probably not as much interest because I'm not piling on sex like a madman.

 

[moonblack]

I can't speak about the other readers, but I like the way things are going in your threads. Though I can't help but wonder how would things go if Druuna choses to try and join the Courtesan's Guild... Hopefully some day you'll get to that as well.

 

[Gunde]

Okay, cool. There's probably not as much interest because I'm not piling on sex like a madman.

Plus it probably being the wrong genre. Even getting a sci-fi/fantasy story into the top twenty for number of views in a month more or less means getting it on the frontpage during at least fifteen of those thirty days.
Unless it's Aaralon's discoveries, which has the advantages of being big, having been around for ages and being equipped with a very strategic title.

 

[carnivorous cow]

Well, the story did get 293 views this month. It's only the second day of the month.

 

[Gunde]

Yep. And that's pretty much thanks to you. You wouldn't mind adding another forty or fifty threads this month, would you?

 

[carnivorous cow]

That might be a bit much. But I'll probably write a fair number.

 

[carnivorous cow]

There you go, seven new threads.

 

[Gunde]

 

[carnivorous cow]

Once someone writes the next sex scene I'll send Druuna into the mall. I might just have her or I may just bypass the sex if I get really impatient.

 

[Gunde]

No need to be impatient, three threads have been added.

 

[carnivorous cow]

Great job! I'm currently adding a bit of action to the story, through a number of battles. The wrong choices can be fatal!

 

[Gunde]

I've noticed. You killed Druuna! You bastard!

 

[RicoLouis]

Don't worry she will be back during the next episode as if nothing happened.

 

[Gunde]

New guidelines: "I'll approve anything other than a portrayal of Satan and Saddam Hussein as gay lovers"

 

[carnivorous cow]

Nope, I did not kill her. They player does by rushing in instead of thinking. Druuna isn't a berserker, she can't just charge people! She's a thinker.

 

[carnivorous cow]

Also, Druuna is now tied for third place for the SciFi/Fantasy longest thread. It's tied with Adventures of Anya at 40 threads.

 

[carnivorous cow]

Well the stories now up to 47 threads. Hopefully more people will start writing soon, it's a bit frustrating to do all this work on my own.