Hi:
I have been thinking of writing this story a long time...I am a little worried that it won't be accepted because it has a unique 'Color Purple' style that might be viewed as being badly written. Do you think I will have a problem? If I can't tell it with this voice, the story is not worth writing.
Here is some of it:
HOW THEY TRAINED ME
CHAPTER ONE: Meeting Mr Wilson
Well I been reading here what has happens to other women like me getting turned into sex slaves so I guess this is good a place as any to confess all the things I had to do and all the things they did to me.
I guess I got admit I weren’t totally taken advantage of by Him. I always been attracted to men a lot older than me and I guess I did have a fantasy of just be take care of and only have to do sexy things. I think if it were just Him it would been easier but all the other men were really scary kind of. I bet I ain’t the only girl out there who got herself into a lot of trouble when she was 18.
At least it was scary to me maybe some other girls wouldn’t be scared being given to other men but He always made it so I never know what was gone happen to me. First time He told me He had a friend who was very important and could get me a lot of work. He always call it work but I guess I don’t need tell you what work I had to do.
First time meeting Mr. Wilson I never knew what was gone happen. He just say to take a shower and make sure I shave real good because Mr. Wilson would get mad if he found any hair. He had all my clothes picked out for me to and there weren’t nothing I was gone say about it. When I ask where the underwear was I got that dirty look from Him so I just shut up and put on the halter top and mini skirt and we got in the car and drove for a long time.
Well I am five foot nothing and He is six foot and I felt really really small when we got to the motel and He made me knock and Mr Wilson opened the door and Mr Wilson was even older and taller than He was. He behind me and Mr Wilson in front and I was like not going anywhere between them and they looking down at me and talking about me. And he told me to just be respectful of Mr Wilson and call him sir and let him do anything he wanted and that just what happened. He told me to be a good girl and shake Mr Wilsons hand and Mr Wilson just grabbed my hand real hard and hold it and squeezed and told me he might be able to get me a lot of work but I’d have to be a good little girl and do everything he say. He just turned me around so he could see front and back and just spinned me around like I were a little toy to him and wouldn’t let go of my hand .
I seen the he had a video cam on a tripod set up by the bed and he led me over there and told me to sit on the bed. I knew I was gone have to do things but I just got real scared. This were before the internet and Mr Wilson say to me that he know a lot of men who I could work for but they want to see what I look like first so he was gone make a tape and mail it to the mens. I were so nervous I didn’t no what to say but he say to me isn’t that nice of Mr Wilson and I knew I had to say yes and then he say I should thank Mr Wilson and so there I am all scared and saying thank you.
Well then I was just sitting there and Mr Wilson opens this suitcase with all these sex toys and clothes he and Mr Wilson start talking about what I should wear. They both looking and they pulling out all these thongs and slutty bras and things and I am just dying inside thinking I gone have to wear next to nothing and they gone make a tape and send it to men I don’t even know. I no you not gone believe me but I always been really really shy and aint one of them girls who can go naked and not be scared. No matter how many times I had to do it I always got so nervous cause I’ll tell you when you are all alone and naked with some man he can do anything he wants to you.
Well Mr Wilson pulls out this white string bikini top that had like just enough material to cover my nipples and they laughing at how small my tits are and Mr. Wilson gets the matching thong and I just about died when he handed it to me and told me to go to the bathroom and change and he slapped my ass and told me to hurry up and they both laugh.
Well I closed the bathroom door and tried to hear what they were saying about me but they were just talking in whispers and I guess I were taking too long cause he yelled “Emma Lou you got 30 seconds to get your sexy lil ass out here or else!”
Well I freaked and started changing as fast I could and just about started crying cause all the strings were tangled up and I knew he were gone be mad. The top weren’t too bad but the bottoms were just this little triangle that weren’t never gone cover my pussy. I mean it covered it, but it were so narrow and tight it just slipped between my pussy lips everytime I thought I had it covered. I just kept stalling and hoping I didn’t have to really do this.
Well then he yells to me to stop keeping Mr Wilson waiting and I took a deep breath and opened the door and he were standing right there arms crossed like when he is mad at me and Mr Wilson had the camera pointed at me. He say “Emma Lou didn’t I tell you 30 seconds?” and I just kind of tried to cover up cause I knew what was going to happen now that I got him mad. He said “Don’t you dare cover up young lady! Hands behind your back!”
Well he walk away from me and I were standing at the door of the bathroom like an idiot and he points to a spot right in front of him and yelled “Get over here NOW!” and I know when he like this I better do things quick so I rushed over there and looked at him and he say “Don’t look at me look at Mr Wilson” so I turn to him and he is recording the whole thing and I just wanted to die of embarrassment.
Well he said “HANDS ON HEAD!” and I been trained so many times to obey that I just did it and stood there with my hands on my head just hoping he didn’t give me a nipple pinch which he would do if I were really bad. He walked behind me and threatened “Do I have to give you a nipple pinch young lady?”
I started crying and told him no I would be good I promise.
Well Mr Wilson walked over to me and was real nice and leaned down and got right in my face and said “You’re just nervous aren’t you?” and I said yes and he said “Give me a kiss like a good girl” and I did and Mr Wilson told him it was all ok so he let me take my hands off my head.
Mr Wilson grabbed my hand again and took me to the bed and he sat down and made me sit on his leg and he just bounced me up and down on his leg and He asked Mr Wilson if he was all set and Mr Wilson said yes. And I really got scared all over again because He asked Mr Wilson when he would be bringing me back and Mr Wilson said he wasn’t sure yet and He just shook Mr Wilson’s hand and said “Well just keep her for the night” and Mr Wilson said “Thanks buddy, call you in the morning” and He left me there all alone with Mr. Wilson.
I have been thinking of writing this story a long time...I am a little worried that it won't be accepted because it has a unique 'Color Purple' style that might be viewed as being badly written. Do you think I will have a problem? If I can't tell it with this voice, the story is not worth writing.
Here is some of it:
HOW THEY TRAINED ME
CHAPTER ONE: Meeting Mr Wilson
Well I been reading here what has happens to other women like me getting turned into sex slaves so I guess this is good a place as any to confess all the things I had to do and all the things they did to me.
I guess I got admit I weren’t totally taken advantage of by Him. I always been attracted to men a lot older than me and I guess I did have a fantasy of just be take care of and only have to do sexy things. I think if it were just Him it would been easier but all the other men were really scary kind of. I bet I ain’t the only girl out there who got herself into a lot of trouble when she was 18.
At least it was scary to me maybe some other girls wouldn’t be scared being given to other men but He always made it so I never know what was gone happen to me. First time He told me He had a friend who was very important and could get me a lot of work. He always call it work but I guess I don’t need tell you what work I had to do.
First time meeting Mr. Wilson I never knew what was gone happen. He just say to take a shower and make sure I shave real good because Mr. Wilson would get mad if he found any hair. He had all my clothes picked out for me to and there weren’t nothing I was gone say about it. When I ask where the underwear was I got that dirty look from Him so I just shut up and put on the halter top and mini skirt and we got in the car and drove for a long time.
Well I am five foot nothing and He is six foot and I felt really really small when we got to the motel and He made me knock and Mr Wilson opened the door and Mr Wilson was even older and taller than He was. He behind me and Mr Wilson in front and I was like not going anywhere between them and they looking down at me and talking about me. And he told me to just be respectful of Mr Wilson and call him sir and let him do anything he wanted and that just what happened. He told me to be a good girl and shake Mr Wilsons hand and Mr Wilson just grabbed my hand real hard and hold it and squeezed and told me he might be able to get me a lot of work but I’d have to be a good little girl and do everything he say. He just turned me around so he could see front and back and just spinned me around like I were a little toy to him and wouldn’t let go of my hand .
I seen the he had a video cam on a tripod set up by the bed and he led me over there and told me to sit on the bed. I knew I was gone have to do things but I just got real scared. This were before the internet and Mr Wilson say to me that he know a lot of men who I could work for but they want to see what I look like first so he was gone make a tape and mail it to the mens. I were so nervous I didn’t no what to say but he say to me isn’t that nice of Mr Wilson and I knew I had to say yes and then he say I should thank Mr Wilson and so there I am all scared and saying thank you.
Well then I was just sitting there and Mr Wilson opens this suitcase with all these sex toys and clothes he and Mr Wilson start talking about what I should wear. They both looking and they pulling out all these thongs and slutty bras and things and I am just dying inside thinking I gone have to wear next to nothing and they gone make a tape and send it to men I don’t even know. I no you not gone believe me but I always been really really shy and aint one of them girls who can go naked and not be scared. No matter how many times I had to do it I always got so nervous cause I’ll tell you when you are all alone and naked with some man he can do anything he wants to you.
Well Mr Wilson pulls out this white string bikini top that had like just enough material to cover my nipples and they laughing at how small my tits are and Mr. Wilson gets the matching thong and I just about died when he handed it to me and told me to go to the bathroom and change and he slapped my ass and told me to hurry up and they both laugh.
Well I closed the bathroom door and tried to hear what they were saying about me but they were just talking in whispers and I guess I were taking too long cause he yelled “Emma Lou you got 30 seconds to get your sexy lil ass out here or else!”
Well I freaked and started changing as fast I could and just about started crying cause all the strings were tangled up and I knew he were gone be mad. The top weren’t too bad but the bottoms were just this little triangle that weren’t never gone cover my pussy. I mean it covered it, but it were so narrow and tight it just slipped between my pussy lips everytime I thought I had it covered. I just kept stalling and hoping I didn’t have to really do this.
Well then he yells to me to stop keeping Mr Wilson waiting and I took a deep breath and opened the door and he were standing right there arms crossed like when he is mad at me and Mr Wilson had the camera pointed at me. He say “Emma Lou didn’t I tell you 30 seconds?” and I just kind of tried to cover up cause I knew what was going to happen now that I got him mad. He said “Don’t you dare cover up young lady! Hands behind your back!”
Well he walk away from me and I were standing at the door of the bathroom like an idiot and he points to a spot right in front of him and yelled “Get over here NOW!” and I know when he like this I better do things quick so I rushed over there and looked at him and he say “Don’t look at me look at Mr Wilson” so I turn to him and he is recording the whole thing and I just wanted to die of embarrassment.
Well he said “HANDS ON HEAD!” and I been trained so many times to obey that I just did it and stood there with my hands on my head just hoping he didn’t give me a nipple pinch which he would do if I were really bad. He walked behind me and threatened “Do I have to give you a nipple pinch young lady?”
I started crying and told him no I would be good I promise.
Well Mr Wilson walked over to me and was real nice and leaned down and got right in my face and said “You’re just nervous aren’t you?” and I said yes and he said “Give me a kiss like a good girl” and I did and Mr Wilson told him it was all ok so he let me take my hands off my head.
Mr Wilson grabbed my hand again and took me to the bed and he sat down and made me sit on his leg and he just bounced me up and down on his leg and He asked Mr Wilson if he was all set and Mr Wilson said yes. And I really got scared all over again because He asked Mr Wilson when he would be bringing me back and Mr Wilson said he wasn’t sure yet and He just shook Mr Wilson’s hand and said “Well just keep her for the night” and Mr Wilson said “Thanks buddy, call you in the morning” and He left me there all alone with Mr. Wilson.
