something i have been wanting to see...

[nergis]

i've always been interested in stories about a husband deflowering his wife on their wedding night... by force. haven't seen many of these, but would be interested in seeing more, if a writer has extra time on his or her hands. i love the idea of possession and it's very hot from the man's point of view... like the idea that he's so full of lust he can't wait any longer... so he rapes her.

anyway, it would be fun to see.
nergis

 

[emap]

Not to say it is a bad idea, actually would be interesting to see how someone figured out why a woman gets raped by her husband on their wedding day.

The reason nobody has done this is simply because the groom always gets laid on his wedding day. Women say yes to marrying just to get in bed with him without pissing off parents.

Not all women of course, though the whole god says you must not sleep with anyone your not married to sorta pushes the younger kids into getting married just to get some. The pretty religious ones of course, the seriously religious don't enjoy sex, the not and not so religious just hop in bed with whoever they want.

 

[Lalah]

Well I can see it working. The girl is very religious and wanted to wait until marriage, but she got no sexual education before and get nervous and scared, almost hysterical. The husband decides it's time to teach her about it.

Maybe she'll cum very hard at the end, maybe she'll want her husband keep dominating her, or maybe she won't like it at all.

 

[questing_maiden]

what about...

what about arranged marriages... when the woman isn't consulted?

 

[Lalah]

That can certainly work too, although it would be hard to explain if it's happening in most present day societies.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

{An arranged marriage} can certainly work too, although it would be hard to explain if it's happening in most present day societies.

It happens all the time in certain communities; certainly there are many arranged marriages in the Moslem communities in the west. Some other religions practice it also, de facto in not de jure. For example the Amish almost always marry among their own; Hassids almost always have marriages organised by a marriage broker. I am sure there are other similar instances, not least among the Royal families in Europe.

 

[Lalah]

It happens all the time in certain communities; certainly there are many arranged marriages in the Moslem communities in the west. Some other religions practice it also, de facto in not de jure. For example the Amish almost always marry among their own; Hassids almost always have marriages organised by a marriage broker. I am sure there are other similar instances, not least among the Royal families in Europe.

True, which is why I said most present societies, not all. But, I have a hard time seeing an Amish raping his new wife. I suppose, (and sorry for the stereotype) it would be more plausible in a a Middle East type society. What with all the terrorism and all, their fanatics seem more violent than Amish do, although I actually know nothing about either.

Personally, what I would like to read is a story about the head of two corporate empires having their kids marry, maybe as a goodwill gesture before a merger. Maybe the daughter's side is on the point of bankruptcy, and only the merger can save them. The son of the savior company had his eyes on the girl for a long time but she spurned his advances, maybe publicly, and now he's using his dad to get what he wanted. She doesn't marry, merger doesn't go through.

 

[emap]

Well arranged marriages are not that rare honestly, a few groups come to mind right off who do it for something besides religious reasons, and religious reasons. Mafia families and ranchers actually.

Ranchers do it so their son/daughter has more land, though it's not terribly arranged since they generally have known each other since they could walk anyway.

Not to mention there was a website where you could arrange to marry a young woman for money, which isn't exactly a new thing, but good grief it basically was here's my 16 year old virgin daughter, pay us money and take her off our hands. I suppose i should say, it was for religious reasons, the ones I glanced at they all said you have to be this religion, one said you had to get to know her and her parents and if everybody was happy you married her. I looked at more than one.

Anyway Lalah I kinda have to point out, daughters and sons of big company CEO's are well, Paris Hilton, and I can't think of a son at the moment. No way Paris is still a virgin, even if there was not a video to prove it. I'm sure you have heard money is the root of all evil, sorta true, though the free time you have with all that money is. When you don't have to work to support yourself, you start looking for things to do, sex being an early and often choice.

In other words your idea there wouldn't work. However going back to groups that do arranged marriages, perhaps we have an Amish couple deeply in debt, the guy who loaned them the money said he would take out half if he could marry their oldest daughter.

Alternate thought, supposing we have a mafia family trying to make nice with another, so they arrange a marriage the daughter being married is a nun and has no interest in knowing a man that way.

 

[Lalah]

Of course it could work. There's many big corporations, but there's only a handful of Paris Hilton. For each of her kind there is probably ten old fashioned families with more conservative childrens.

Many old families, especially in europe but probably over here too, are old money families. These guys have corporate empires too, and you never hear about them, never even realise they exist.

 

[Brushstroker]

Another possible scenario

A woman desires to take up residence in another country but cannot do so as she is not a citizen of that country. She solves her problem by finding a likely husband through a dating agency - and uses all her wiles to hook him. After the wedding, he finds her with her suitcases packed about to leave him. He takes his revenge.

 

[nergis]

exactly

A woman desires to take up residence in another country but cannot do so as she is not a citizen of that country. She solves her problem by finding a likely husband through a dating agency - and uses all her wiles to hook him. After the wedding, he finds her with her suitcases packed about to leave him. He takes his revenge.

this is exactly the sort of thing i meant. another idea might be that she was under the impression that this was just a business arrangement, and he is not. a very possessive attitude toward her would also be good.

you all have good ideas

nergis

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... perhaps we have an Amish couple deeply in debt ...

That simply cannot happen - buy what you can afford to pay for - neither a borrower nor a lender be.

 

[Lalah]

A woman desires to take up residence in another country but cannot do so as she is not a citizen of that country. She solves her problem by finding a likely husband through a dating agency - and uses all her wiles to hook him. After the wedding, he finds her with her suitcases packed about to leave him. He takes his revenge.

The problem with this is I think you need to prove you've been married for a while (something like 6 months I think) before you can apply for citizenship, and they may come snooping around after the fact for a follow up, so leaving straight away doesn't work.

But the idea of her thinking it was just a business arrangement would work. They get married and have to spend the night in a wedding suite for the pictures, paper trail, etc. She's all "I'm tired and going to seep, you can have the couch." and he's "Oh no, we just got married and I intend to have some of that ass tonight."

 

[Brushstroker]

Re citizenship

Depends on the country, Lalah. The story probably wouldn't work if set in the USA because of the current laws. Not so in other parts of the world. I actually knew a woman who paid a guy to marry her in order to gain a certain citizenship. In case you are wondering, there wasn't a rape scene at the end of that wedding day because I know for a fact that they just parted amicably. A good, done deal! Both parties happy!

 

[subwannabe]

Maybe the girl is really gorgeous with a knock out body but is deeply religious and against sex just for the purpose of sex and is a missionary position only girl. She believes sex is for having children only and also believes strongly in committing to her vows of for better or for worse. The guy is a real horndog who just has to pop this woman so he dates her, talks her into getting married, and then rapes her on the wedding night. She has to be his forever because she is too religious to break her vows.

 

[emap]

Snoopy your silly it can happen, I mean look at how many homes are being reposessed in the US right now. Market falls out things suddenly get alot more expensive than they were.

Sub there is a problem with your idea, a religious woman generally when she gets married is looking to have kids so wedding night sex would happen. Brings to mind a friend who had religious parents, she had sex often, but always protected since her parents would kill her if she started a family before marriage. Her words though I beleive it, her dad was one of those last person you want to make mad types.

 

[submisive_slut_wife]

there is nothing to say the story has to be set in the modern day. it could be set a few hundred years ago when things were different and showing a bit of ancal was naughty
that could give you more posiblitys

 

[whalee]

there is nothing to say the story has to be set in the modern day. it could be set a few hundred years ago when things were different and showing a bit of ancal was naughty
that could give you more posiblitys

Excellent point, Miss. Good insight.

 

[Brushstroker]

Historic possibilities

Yes - the story set in the past - Europe in the Middle Ages or ancient Rome, even - opens up a whole wealth of new ideas. For example, a lustful lord wins the hand of marriage of a reluctant damsel (by jousting, or card play or by some devious plot) and then has his wicked way with her. And the erotic story of a statesman, who already has several wives, might be enhanced by having his Favourite Wife assist him with the deflowering of his new, young and unwilling wife. Grist for the mill!
Good thinking, Slut Wife.

 

[subwannabe]

I guess my point was that even though they probably would be having sex on their wedding night, it wouldn't be the kind of sex she had invisioned. She had told him they had to wait until they got married to have sex. He really wanted to pop this babe, especially liking the idea that he could do it for the rest of his life. She wanted no part of a "perverted" sex life but he didn't give a shit about what she wanted so he tricked her into marrying him and basically "rapes" her on the wedding night, forcing her to suck his cock and take him up her ass as well as many other things. She is totally shocked and hates it but she has already made her vows of for better or for worse so she realizes that she has no choice but to live with it.

 

[submisive_slut_wife]

it could start out as non consentual because shes scared and religous and dosent' know anything about her body or a mans body. he can be strong and forcefull but when he starts sliding his fingers inside her and playing with her she starts to lose all her inhabitions

 

[emap]

Ah heck I'm too old and slutty, I didn't even think of that.

You two subs got a great thought going there.

Historical like can be lots of fun. Think about it this way, 4-500 years ago, anyone beyond a peasant sent their daughters to be a nun until they could find a husband for her. Which of course happened without her permission, anybody who came along and said I want your daughter here's a bag of coin ended up with her as a wife.

Now here's the fun part, what the church doesn't want anyone to mention, most of the nuns of the time, spent time knowing each other biblically. So perhaps we have a lords daughter who is the prize of a joust, she doesn't want to marry because she is only interested in women. So when it comes time for the after marriage sex she doesn't want to, but he of course isn't taking no for an answer.

 

[nergis]

Great Ideas!

Great ideas so far; there are many more options available than those I had thought of myself.

So... any writers want to give it a shot?

nergis

 

[emap]

Oh not me I am so not able to start on anything else. Maybe sometime next decade if I am very lucky.

 

[mjl2010]

Snoopy your silly it can happen, I mean look at how many homes are being reposessed in the US right now. Market falls out things suddenly get alot more expensive than they were.

Sub there is a problem with your idea, a religious woman generally when she gets married is looking to have kids so wedding night sex would happen. Brings to mind a friend who had religious parents, she had sex often, but always protected since her parents would kill her if she started a family before marriage. Her words though I beleive it, her dad was one of those last person you want to make mad types.

You miss Snoopers point Emap. The Amish don't borrow money. If you don't have the money to buy something, you do without.

MJL