I have three stories currently posted on this site (not including one pending, and one poem) and all have received what I'd consider to be a generous amount of feedback and support except for my entry in the 2008 Earth Day Competition, "A Land Far, Far Away."
It's part 3 of a continuing series and seeing the response I got on my previous two postings, I thought this one would blow the other two out of the water. I consider it and its second half (as yet unposted) to be my best work to date, but statistics say otherwise. Those who have read the Black's Magic series (much to my pride and deep appreciation) have seen fit to give the various installments fours and fives. "A Land Far, Far Away" continues this trend, having an average vote of 4.78, but only 9 people have voted
So, I'd like some honest feedback. Is it the pairing? Is it the category? Is it the length of the story? Why isn't this installment doing as well as the previous two?
Constructive criticism is welcome, but flames are not.
Read and review: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=358907
Please and thank you,
theMaven
It's part 3 of a continuing series and seeing the response I got on my previous two postings, I thought this one would blow the other two out of the water. I consider it and its second half (as yet unposted) to be my best work to date, but statistics say otherwise. Those who have read the Black's Magic series (much to my pride and deep appreciation) have seen fit to give the various installments fours and fives. "A Land Far, Far Away" continues this trend, having an average vote of 4.78, but only 9 people have voted
So, I'd like some honest feedback. Is it the pairing? Is it the category? Is it the length of the story? Why isn't this installment doing as well as the previous two?
Constructive criticism is welcome, but flames are not.
Read and review: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=358907
Please and thank you,
theMaven
