Sweet Maggie Ch. 4 has posted...

[LaJovena]

...and I would really appreciate any feedback. Here's the link to the story:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=357807

Thanks!

LaJovena

 

[ANiceGuy]

good use dialogue.

Great story, sure kept me interested now I have to read the first three chapters...

 

[LaJovena]

Great story, sure kept me interested now I have to read the first three chapters...

Thank you! Ratings go up and down, but right now, this chapter has one of the highest scores I've earned. I'm hoping it will, indeed, inspire readers to read the other chapters (and it makes more sense if you read the chapters in order, hehe). Hope you enjoy!