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when I was a child I had a fever.
My hands felt just like two balloons.
 
BOSTONFICTIONWRITER said:
Zany, now why are you trying to stir up shit when there is nothing in my post to stir?

Darksideofinsanity, thank you so much for the wealth your information on the Sioux nation. It is very helpful, not really, well, not at all, but thank you anyway.

Now, as far as the personal attacks, which is the only things that you post, especially about me, I won't dignify them with a response.

Really, anyone who pees in his saddle should not be calling someone else crazy.

For the record, I meant no harm in what I wrote. I stand by what I wrote. I meant it all as humor. Now, if you miscreants cannot take a joke and don't have a sense of humor, then that is your problem and not mine.

Please put me on your ignore list if my posting here bothers you so much.

Have a pissy day.
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I wasn't trying to stir up anything, BFW. My comment was only intended to point out what other see in your words. To you, those words are supposed to be funny, but what others see are threats and insults. Maybe what you say works better face-to-face, but in text form, it comes across as an angry rant.

This is not an attack on you. I am not trying to anger or upset you. I'm only being honest.
 
Good morning, worm, your honor,
the crown will plainly show,
the prisoner who now stands before you,
was caught red-handed showing feelings.
Showing feelings of an almost human nature.
This will not do.
 
So ya
Thought ya
Might like to go to the show.
To feel the warm thrill of confusion
That space cadet glow.
Tell me is something eluding you, sunshine?
Is this not what you expected to see?
If you wanna find out what's behind these cold eyes
You'll just have to claw your way through this disguise.
 
You little shit you're in it, now
I hope they throw away the key.
Yer should have talked to me more often
Than you did, but no! You had to go
Your own way, have you broken any
Homes up lately?
Just five minutes, Worm your honor,
Him and me, alone
 
Did you ever wonder
why we had to run for shelter
when the promise of a brave new world
unfurled beneath a clear blue sky
 
Don't be surprised when a crack in the ice
Appears under your feet.
You slip out of your depth and out of your mind
With your fear flowing out behind you
As you claw the thin ice.
 
Hush now baby, baby, dont you cry.
Mother's gonna make all your nightmares come true.
Mother's gonna put all her fears into you.
Mother's gonna keep you right here under her wing.
She wont let you fly, but she might let you sing.
Mama will keep baby cozy and warm.
Ooooh baby ooooh baby oooooh baby,
Of course mama'll help to build the wall.
 
So,
So you think you can tell
Heaven from hell,
Blue skies from pain?
Can you tell a green field
from a cold steel rail?
A smile from a veil?
Do you think you can tell?
 
Did they get you to trade
Your heroes for ghosts?
Hot ashes for trees?
Hot air for a cool breeze?
Cold comfort for change?
Did you exchange
A walk on part in a war
For a lead role in a cage?
 
I am just a new boy,
Stranger in this town.
Where are all the good times?
Who's gonna show this stranger around?
Ooooh, I need a dirty woman.
Ooooh, I need a dirty girl.
 
Hey you, out there beyond the wall,
Breaking bottles in the hall,
Can you help me?
Hey you, don't tell me there's no hope at all
Together we stand, divided we fall.
 
sarahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Yes, LITEROTICA’S greatest living author is back! Out today, an entry in Lit’s EARTH DAY contest,

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Leave It To Beaver
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Extraordinary!!!! You’ll love it.

Read it, then vote, then comment.

jrs
 
strange e-mail...

It’s funny sometimes how life unfolds. After making my comments on the PILOTS story (quite serious comments and questions by the way), imagine my surprise when I opened this e-mail today. Coincidence or sent by an AHer? Who knows? Or cares? Interestingly the plot and events described in the story “The Mechanic’s Big Tool” were based on a true story one of my friends told me – yes embellished, the location changed, the wealth of the person cuckolded changed, but the story was essentially the same and yes, the sex actually did work this way.

Which raises the possibility that the gay encounter described by the PILOT could be a true story, could be normal behavior. Who knows? Still, like the guy who e-mailed me, it ‘just is not believable for me’. Surprising how someone normally so serious about his work and ready at the drop of the hat to analyze other people’s works, isn’t comfortable discussing his own.


Friday, March 28, 2008 2:33:36 AM

This message contains feedback for: scouries
About the submission: The Mechanic's Big Tool
This feedback was sent by: xxxxx

Comments:

I think a good story has the element of being real or something that could or can happen. Your story has a good theme but just is not believable for me. Real sex does not work this way as you would know if you had any experience


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jrs
 
fontainebleu?

...you must be one of those rich republicans freddie to stay at the fontainebleu.

85 degrees, sunny, a nice breeze, topless ladies everywhere on South Beach today my good man.

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Yes, LITEROTICA’S most prolific author is back! Out today, this moving story is an entry in Lit’s EARTH DAY contest,

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Earth Day, Sioux Indian Style Ch. 01
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It got a big happy bow wow from scouries. Read it, then vote, then comment.

jrs
 
I hate Republican presidents

Actually, if Laurel was ever to release my essays, Why I Hate Republican Presidents, you'd know that I'm not a Republican.

The time we had stayed there, at the Fountainbleau was off season and they were getting ready to make over the entire hotel. We got a good rate. Yet, if memory serves me correctly, it was still expensive. Nonetheless, it was one of the best vacations I ever had.

Thank you, Scouries, for hyping my Earth Day story. It's a long one, about 20,000 words. I hope you will hype the next seven chapters, as well (lol).

I see that I displeased the darksideoflunacy by mentioning that my host has a totem pole in his front yard. I didn't know it was forbidden for anyone but west coast indians to possess a totem pole. I wonder what the penalty is for my 'fictional' characters to have one.

...and then he bashes my story with a low score.

Let it be known, I've never bashed another writer's story.

Now, you posted your little hissy fit message darksideoflunacy to show everyone who reads my story what a maladjusted lonely old man you truly are.

Nonetheless, I thank you for the support of your vote and for taking the time to write a comment.
 
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