What is the meaning of an erotic, yet poetic word?

[CharleyH]

Penis isn't so attractive poetically, and neither is cunt. What poetic words (NOT DESCRIPTIONS) do you use for pussy, cock, nipples, orgasm et al?

 

[WickedEve]

Manhood or member? God, no.
If I write a "dirty" poem, then it's cock. Cock is a fun word.
I've used cock in a poem and pussy and tits. Not all in the same poem, though. That would just be obscene.

 

[Liar]

I think cunt and cock can be attractive, poetically. Depends on which effect you're after. I'd rather write cunt than pussy, which sounds a bit silly unless in a erotic romance context.

If I write about genitalia at all, that is. They're much more fun to insinuate. Cause everybody knows they're there anyway.

 

[champagne1982]

Penis isn't so attractive poetically, and neither is cunt. What poetic words (NOT DESCRIPTIONS) do you use for pussy, cock, nipples, orgasm et al?

Mons, mound, cock, phallus ... these are seeming erotic in a serious, love poemy sense...

prick cunt tit ass dick wang vag pussy quim quiff yoni shaft clit.

A rose by any other name would smell as sweet?

 

[WickedEve]

I think cunt and cock can be attractive, poetically. Depends on which effect you're after. I'd rather write cunt than pussy, which sounds a bit silly unless in a erotic romance context.

If I write about genitalia at all, that is. They're much more fun to insinuate. Cause everybody knows they're there anyway.

Yeah, we know they're there. Let's just not speak of such vulgarities. Let's ignore them the same way we ignore the crazy auntie.

And then he parted the her dirty drapes with his broomstick... yeah, that's how I'm going to write about it.

 

[Guest]

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[Angeline]

Me too, though often I use cock/cunt in a non-erotic sense.

I think it depends on the poet too. Here on Lit, I've found Annaswirly-girly, usally in her Seattle alt to use the coarse language and it's a real turn on then the same with Eve too. Champ usually shocks the hell out of me (gets a rise too) when I read a poem and she uses un-pretty sex words. I couldn't imagine a poem by Denis using anything softcore that would not be as interesting to me. I'd like to see an Ange poem that had a little pussy in it to decide or just want Ange say to pussy.

Your wish is my command.

Amenity Pussy

tippity tap tip tap
triptrap down silent hall
strutting oozing
confidence turns a doorknob
leans in

*snap*

couple in the tub
lost in hubub
hot and unaware

leaves the pair her card
strolls into bar
and sits with long legs crossed
silky pegs dangling shiny shoe

sips the peaty single
eyes amused
no plan to mingle

then clicking one last

*snap*

while Bobby dips his head
Cole Porter says goodnight

the city is a velvet sweep of jazz
lights blinking flatted fifths
the limo cradles her

back in the office
six-pack Sam turns music on
lights candles pours her drink
sets Baccarat precisely to the left

she sweeps in takes the drink
and before he can think of what
to say she sits and swallows
sighs and smiles and says

"OK Sam, strip."

(while at the Carlyle
young woman in a robe
is sated gleaming clean

Someone was here!
She left a card.)


Amenity Pussy,
Pleasure Queen.

 

[unpredictablebijou]

*edits out incredibly inappropriate comments about total lust and travelling to Maine*

 

[Angeline]

*edits out incredibly inappropriate comments about total lust and travelling to Maine*

*kisses you and hands you a bowl of fresh chicken broth*

 

[unpredictablebijou]

*kisses you and hands you a bowl of fresh chicken broth*

Mmmmm. I do love people who can cook things.

I'm married to a Jew, you know. I know how horny and kinky You Chosen People are. Love that about y'all.

I was going to just say that I really agree with everything Jamison said up there, and I'm finding this thread very helpful since I do struggle with not using the same terms over and over. (although dirty curtains and broomstick made me Lol.)

But then I saw this one poem and got all distracted.

*wanders off, fanning self*

bj

 

[Angeline]

Mmmmm. I do love people who can cook things.

I'm married to a Jew, you know. I know how horny and kinky You Chosen People are. Love that about y'all.

I was going to just say that I really agree with everything Jamison said up there, and I'm finding this thread very helpful since I do struggle with not using the same terms over and over. (although dirty curtains and broomstick made me Lol.)

But then I saw this one poem and got all distracted.

*wanders off, fanning self*

bj

Heh. I never really answered but of course any words work in the right context. If you want to write something raunchy, you have to use the right words, which generally are (listening, Jami-san?) cock, dick, pussy, fuck, lick, slurp and so on.

How many Jews are you married to? I'm a Gemini, so ee has at least two. Everyone is crazy, I know, but I do relate to Italians, Greeks, Turks, the Mediteranian peoples seem kinky crazy the same way my tribe is. Except, we're the funniest. To me.

 

[The_Fool]

I refuse to write either erotic poetry or poetic erotica....so there....

 

[champagne1982]

I refuse to write either erotic poetry or poetic erotica....so there....

you jester... does your nose grow when you tell big whoppers like this? and then apologize... and then tell a tale... and then-- oh lordy... it's a fuckin fool's nose

 

[unpredictablebijou]

you jester... does your nose grow when you tell big whoppers like this? and then apologize... and then tell a tale... and then-- oh lordy... it's a fuckin fool's nose

Hi Champie. I hope your family gathering is being as kind as possible, darlin'.

We need to invent a drink at the Bistro called the Fool's Nose. Ideas, anyone?

As to words, I like cock.

the word, I mean. It's a nice basic, sorta poetic yet strong word. Powerful, positive, makes an impact. I wish there were more words like it.

bj

 

[Angeline]

I refuse to write either erotic poetry or poetic erotica....so there....

Ahahahahahaha. What Champ said. You big liar.

 

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[Liar]

Yeah, we know they're there. Let's just not speak of such vulgarities. Let's ignore them the same way we ignore the crazy auntie.

And then he parted the her dirty drapes with his broomstick... yeah, that's how I'm going to write about it.

when he turned around
he knocked two small
porcelain figurines
and a pencil sharpener
off her desk

or

he had a big erect cock


well, you do your thing