First Poetry on Literotica

[looking4smile]

my first poetry on literotica

not understanding why
i have these feelings in my mind
i'm lost inside your cosmic eyes
forever. could you tell me why?

so let's continue it further. add yours. it'll be great!

 

[eagleyez]

Why whitecaps, why boatslap,
Why dramamine, when fuscia birds standstill, that
Hover above storms.

Mad men on both sides of the fence,
Melody of riot and the words of oxygen-
Headed for the atmosphere...

 

[unpredictablebijou]

The clouds press bellies
tight to the ground now
thick flakes slant off the roof
whip south in billowed gusts
it will drift across the roads
where open fields are sketched
with lines of running deer
and black crowds of coyotes

the edges of the river
are narrowed by pale snow borders
every shade a variation
on blue and grey

the painting in the window
as night falls is black ink
against cornflower blue
snow thick as fog
crowds and tumbles
in the yellow porchlight

 

[Senna Jawa]

my first poetry on literotica

not understanding why
i have these feelings in my mind
i'm lost inside your cosmic eyes
forever. could you tell me why?

so let's continue it further. add yours. it'll be great!

feelings in my mind
thoughts in my heart
i am so fucked up
​

 

[unpredictablebijou]

comfort me with apples
for i am sick of love

like dark chocolate and wine
he mixes in my mouth
fills my blood with bliss

his left hand is under my head

in pose after pose,
we ride this surf
tasting salt, tasting fruit
the time between our feasts
is the time between
the waves of the sea
always, and never

i rose up to open to my beloved
and my hands dropped with myrrh
and my fingers with sweet smelling myrrh
upon the handles of the lock

they say
stolen food tastes best
our hungry bellies meet
in stolen common time
music for the meal
this drumbeat
this sweet wine

 

[PandoraGlitters]

Drowning
in the deep waters
that muscle the surf
beneath the cornea
of your eyes
where the light plays,
I break through the lens
sink deeper in darkness
beneath the ciliary
led down only by
the tension wires
of optic nerve into the network
into the hardwiring
into the brainstem.

I am reborn in the word hidden
under your tongue,
your secret name.

 

[SweetMerry]

the waves slap the shore
gently
like a lover who really doesn't mean it

terns scream
skimming the tide
in search of the next living meal

sand passes through my fingers
faster and faster I build
tiny castles that can not defend this shore

 

[unpredictablebijou]

Does the smoke she weaves toward him
travel across those great plains
as far as religion, far as Buddha
close as their two hands?
This plain of table, valley of the coffee cup, a storm
brewing on the cloth expanse between them.
What are the measurements
what is the weather
when his bed is closer in dreams
than he is when he lies next to her, his world, her world.
His hand is the dune on this desert of white sheets.
Do they still somehow strobe toward each other
on some dark space
within, above?
She knows
how a bed becomes a desert, how two
are one when the earth's curve bulges
between them, how a table, a floor
stretches like prairie, rutted with their silence
and the waving smoke, the wheat of expectation.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

If I think of you on this day
will you come to me
or only drift away with clouds
of sullen silence?
Patterns in the sky are all
that are left
of a love that never soared
but only flutters to earth
leaves tattered beneath my feet.

 

[secretgarden07]

A smirk so jejune screams I bemuse you
as we walk about the dark night
wondering whether the
new year will be good to you.

You, who so needs hope now
as fate beckons and doors
slam closed too soon.

 

[FifthFlower]

my first poetry on literotica

not understanding why
i have these feelings in my mind
i'm lost inside your cosmic eyes
forever. could you tell me why?

so let's continue it further. add yours. it'll be great!

perhaps someday you'll find
my smile is how you realize
there's goodness in both you and i
and more than this i hope you'll find

 

[looking4smile]

perhaps someday you'll find
my smile is how you realize
there's goodness in both you and i
and more than this i hope you'll find

nice one

others are also good..

 

[bisexualsmoker]

This is my first poetry on Literotica

Think of it as a curse she's given me
That she won't be forgotten ever
none shall equal the splendor
none shall quite twist the emotions
forever and forever
lost in a raging snarly sea
her always up above
like a laughing,menacing moon
always after the twilight
always heavier than the blackness
there is no other

 

[Eluard]

This is my first poetry on Literotica

Think of it as a curse she's given me
That she won't be forgotten ever
none shall equal the splendor
none shall quite twist the emotions
forever and forever
lost in a raging snarly sea
her always up above
like a laughing, menacing moon
always after the twilight
always heavier than the blackness
there is no other

Nice!

 

[twelveoone]

This is my first poetry on Literotica

Think of it as a curse she's given me
That she won't be forgotten ever
none shall equal the splendor
none shall quite twist the emotions
forever and forever
lost in a raging snarly sea
her always up above
like a laughing,menacing moon
always after the twilight
always heavier than the blackness
there is no other

certainly not your first ever, to good for that .

this second forever could either be part of forever and forever in which case it would earn a , or it could be forever lost in a... very nice play there. Very nice.

I'm not sure if raging snarly sea or heavier than the blackness couldn't be better done. I do like the overall feel of this.

Keep it up.

 

[twelveoone]

feelings in my mind
thoughts in my heart
i am so fucked up
​

so very unlike you, a parody? or just a simple play of inversions with a summing statement? The audience pointer....ROFL

Oh, I forgot another ignorer