A question of Incest

[Lalah]

I'm working on my first incest story. It's going along nicely, and I have a second part mostly in mind, but I get stuck after that.

The story is about a brother and sister finding comfort with each others. There is a definite and realistic (as far as incest goes) possibility for the father, and then even the mother, to join in, but I'm not sure.

Would this diminish the comfort, closeness and complicity the brother and sister have? What do you think? Would you like to keep reading about the close relationship of the brother and sister, or would you rather read about them eventually loosening the bond somewhat but then share it with the rest of the family by letting them join in?

Writing this post has already helped me clear my thoughts on the subject and I'm leaning in a direction, but I'd like to hear your ideas and interests too. Maybe there's something I haven't considered.

 

[emap]

Honestly I am going ICK at the mere idea of that. I'll try and not let my own personal preference on that particular area affect what I am going to say after this though.

OK first off, usually best to use the KISS method. Not to say no way should you add mom and dad, it is easy enough to include the two of them, depending on how you write the story. Easiest method is to use 3rd person and mom listens in on them and gets horny cause dad isn't home enough for her desires.

Of course if you cannot find an easy way to include one or both don't, mainly because the more you force the issue the less fun it will be to read.

At this point though KISS is going to rear it's ugly head again. If you can add mom and/or dad easily great, the problem lays in keeping it adhering to KISS and including the third and/or fourth person. Mainly because the more people included in something the harder it is to keep simple and easy. Read a gangbang story sometime and you probably will see what I mean.

As for should you, I don't know depends on how well you can do it. If say i was talking about addng more people to a story I am working on or in a sequel pretty sure everyone would be screaming no and probably coming to cut our power. That's just me talking about it though so if you think you can do it do it.

 

[Lalah]

I don't know what that KISS thing is, but like I said, adding the parents could work in the story without feeling forced.

What I'm really more curious about is if people are more interested in an incest story with two persons being a couple and al it entails, or in a with two sibling developping an incestuous swingers relationship with their parents.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

From Personal Experience With Comments...

I don't know what that KISS thing is, but like I said, adding the parents could work in the story without feeling forced.

What I'm really more curious about is if people are more interested in an incest story with two persons being a couple and al it entails, or in a with two sibling developping an incestuous swingers relationship with their parents.

I write in this cat and according to some, the brother/sister is overdone. Some readers want the whole family involved. Check out these chapters of my Family Fitness Night series, a slowly evolving series that will culminate (eventually) in the entitled promise.

In this series the brother/sister hook up in first 3 chapters. Then in chapter 4 the parents, separately, discover their kids and wonder how they'll break the news to the other. But they're individually so aroused by what they'd seen, they have the best sex in years.

So I build slowly. Father "comforts" daughter, son takes on his mom, and in chapter nine the family assembles for a breakfast that turns into a fuck-fest. And the series continues to build as the characters overcome their inhibitions and will end up in a family fitness night as promised in the title.

Not sure if this is "therapy" or an ad for my stories, maybe it's both.

But, since the opportunity exists:

Ch. 1 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=348130

Ch. 2 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=348131

Ch. 3 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=348132

Ch. 4 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=349131

Ch. 5 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=349642

 

[Lalah]

Damn! Is there something you haven't written?

My planned story too has the parents finding out seperately, and it does rejuvenate their sex life, but I don't know yet if they'll take the next step. I'm hesitating. Sometimes I lean toward yes, sometimes I lean toward no. There doesn't seem to be a concensus on this yet.

 

[JRaven]

Lalah,
I have to agree with emap. KISS. Keep It Simple, Stupid.
(That's an expression and by no means an indication of your intellect!)
If your story centers around the closeness of the brother and sister, then leave it at that.

The very first story I posted on Lit was a mom/son story. Part two continued that, but added dad/daughter. Part three is written but not posted. It took a wild left turn. Part four was thought of, but not even written and included son and sister finally getting together. Two years later, I still get asked about part three about every other month in feedback.

Which leads to what AsylumSeeker had mentioned. There are vocal readers that will want you to continue the story and make it one big family affair. And besides the swapping arrangement you mentioned, some will even expect you to get dad/son and mom/daughter together.

Write what you feel is right. But remember, sooner or later you'll get feedback asking you to extend it far beyond what you expected, anticipated, or wanted.

Jenny

 

[emap]

What she said, don't feel offended, in my case I tend to go with a KISYI method. I say it to myself semi often, Keep It Simple You Idiot. Doesn't always work though I tend to not get to many it sucked feedbacks so I suppose it works well enough.

 

[Jenniferx]

I feel that it depends on how long and complex your story is. I have read some short stories in which it starts out with a bro/sis and seems like the whole family gets involved over 2 days. That is so highly unrealistic. Now if your story is a multi-parter spread over a longer period of time, then the possibility of more involvement with more family members is more realistic. A story I am working on has two sisters involved and over time, the dad and the mom become involved as well, but that is over a period of time as the sisters mature in their relationship as well.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I feel that it depends on how long and complex your story is. I have read some short stories in which it starts out with a bro/sis and seems like the whole family gets involved over 2 days. That is so highly unrealistic. Now if your story is a multi-parter spread over a longer period of time, then the possibility of more involvement with more family members is more realistic. A story I am working on has two sisters involved and over time, the dad and the mom become involved as well, but that is over a period of time as the sisters mature in their relationship as well.

I agree with JenX. It takes time for a family to "cum" together, as I've done in my Family Fitness series. I posted Ch. 9 today and that's when the family "event" occurs. And the characters express shock and confusion in the aftermath, as I'd imagine the players would (but it's hard to be 'realistic' when writing in the incest cat to begin with).

We'll see what happens. Although I think I write better than some, the earlier chapters still lack the rating of "H" because they don't realize what I'm building up to. Sigh. I'd suggest you build up to the finale, not jump into the "family" pool blindly with both feet.

Something tells me I'll be seeing your work before anyone else <LOL>

 

[blue_moonshine]

A question of incest

There was a children's book written a long time ago and my memory isn't what it used to be. The book was about 4 - 6 orphaned children that lived in an abandoned railroad box car and their survival while hiding in an adult world. There were no parents but eventually an older rich man got involved with the children. This might me an angle to look at where the incest is between brother/sister and not involve any parents. You would be able to develope your characters and not end a story after 3 chapters.

 

[Fantasies_only]

I'm working on my first incest story. It's going along nicely, and I have a second part mostly in mind, but I get stuck after that.

The story is about a brother and sister finding comfort with each others. There is a definite and realistic (as far as incest goes) possibility for the father, and then even the mother, to join in, but I'm not sure.

Would this diminish the comfort, closeness and complicity the brother and sister have? What do you think? Would you like to keep reading about the close relationship of the brother and sister, or would you rather read about them eventually loosening the bond somewhat but then share it with the rest of the family by letting them join in?

Writing this post has already helped me clear my thoughts on the subject and I'm leaning in a direction, but I'd like to hear your ideas and interests too. Maybe there's something I haven't considered.

I may be in a minority, but I don't think the mother's part has to go beyond fantasy and teasing.
Some of the best stories are like that, such as The Secret To My Success with Michael J. Fox (semi sexy aunt).
The father's part shouldn't go beyond masturbatory fantasies and sexual tension with the mother, while he's dreaming about his own daughter.

Lalah, I see you took my advice and wrote a brother/sister story with more realistic romantic themes.
Glad I could help.

Oh, I thought this was you:
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=572444

By the way, have you ever seen Ujin's Sukura Diaries?
As a child (2 years old) Urara (the collector's set explains it's a pun for the Japanese way of saying "OO-LA-LA!") had an infatuation with her older cousin.
Being cousin by marriage (didn't remember him at first) and not by blood, her schoolgirl crush would always surface in the form of pleas for marriage.
As she got older, she realized that she actually did love him, but when her cousin grew up (just 18), he didn't even remember her when he moved to the big city (Tokyo).

Caution, Urara is 16 which is an adult in Japan (some nude scenes between the two, one drunken rape scene, and more flirtatious teasing than you can shake a stick at).

 

[Fantasies_only]

Lalah,
I have to agree with emap. KISS. Keep It Simple, Stupid.
(That's an expression and by no means an indication of your intellect!)
If your story centers around the closeness of the brother and sister, then leave it at that.

Jenny

I thought you were kidding!
KISS principle, not to be confused with kisekae (paper dressup game) or KiSS (small "i").

 

[Lalah]

Well I'm about halfway done with my story and I think the plot is realistic. I have decided for now that the mother will find out and be reluctantly supportive of their decision, but they will have to keep it a secret from the father.

 

[vividimaginings]

Well I'm about halfway done with my story and I think the plot is realistic. I have decided for now that the mother will find out and be reluctantly supportive of their decision, but they will have to keep it a secret from the father.

I think that works. I have been wanting to read a story in many parts that starts with siblings and than leads to a whole family getting involved, starting with knowledge of the act, acceptance of the act and than participation in the act. eg Bro/sis start, than mom finds out, is disgusted, than bro/sis cajole her and she allows it, than they seduce her. Same sort of thing than happens with dad and it can continue from there.

 

[vividimaginings]

I write in this cat and according to some, the brother/sister is overdone. Some readers want the whole family involved. Check out these chapters of my Family Fitness Night series, a slowly evolving series that will culminate (eventually) in the entitled promise.

In this series the brother/sister hook up in first 3 chapters. Then in chapter 4 the parents, separately, discover their kids and wonder how they'll break the news to the other. But they're individually so aroused by what they'd seen, they have the best sex in years.

So I build slowly. Father "comforts" daughter, son takes on his mom, and in chapter nine the family assembles for a breakfast that turns into a fuck-fest. And the series continues to build as the characters overcome their inhibitions and will end up in a family fitness night as promised in the title.

Not sure if this is "therapy" or an ad for my stories, maybe it's both.

But, since the opportunity exists:

Ch. 1 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=348130

Ch. 2 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=348131

Ch. 3 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=348132

Ch. 4 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=349131

Ch. 5 - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=349642

I have read those asylumseeker and they are great. Keep up the good work!!

 

[NDorado]

I say write your story the way it's coming to you and then put it aside and read the draft later and see if it feels natural to you. You'll probably be able to tell if it works or doesn't. Sometimes you just have to put your words down on paper to test out plot ideas.

 

[BlackSnake]

I'm working on my first incest story. It's going along nicely, and I have a second part mostly in mind, but I get stuck after that.

The story is about a brother and sister finding comfort with each others. There is a definite and realistic (as far as incest goes) possibility for the father, and then even the mother, to join in, but I'm not sure.

Would this diminish the comfort, closeness and complicity the brother and sister have? What do you think? Would you like to keep reading about the close relationship of the brother and sister, or would you rather read about them eventually loosening the bond somewhat but then share it with the rest of the family by letting them join in?

Writing this post has already helped me clear my thoughts on the subject and I'm leaning in a direction, but I'd like to hear your ideas and interests too. Maybe there's something I haven't considered.

My thoughts are to have the brother and sister remain close. The brother and sister then talk about their fantasies. Sister seduces father and son seduces mother. Only the brother and sister are aware. The father and mother rekindle their sex life as a result. I'd say that the attitudes of incest would become more liberal, but the surface family structure should stay intact.

 

[age_matters]

I'm working on my first incest story. It's going along nicely, and I have a second part mostly in mind, but I get stuck after that.

The story is about a brother and sister finding comfort with each others. There is a definite and realistic (as far as incest goes) possibility for the father, and then even the mother, to join in, but I'm not sure.

Would this diminish the comfort, closeness and complicity the brother and sister have? What do you think? Would you like to keep reading about the close relationship of the brother and sister, or would you rather read about them eventually loosening the bond somewhat but then share it with the rest of the family by letting them join in?

Writing this post has already helped me clear my thoughts on the subject and I'm leaning in a direction, but I'd like to hear your ideas and interests too. Maybe there's something I haven't considered.

1) parents are angry but can do nothing other than letting them do what they are doing...

2) parents are turned on and join in - i think that's highly unlikely.

3) parents are a little turned on and improves their sex life... but do not join in..

i like number 3...

and i agree with others to keep it simple... having the whole family in doesn't work for me...

 

[Lalah]

Thanks for all the suggestions. Look like my story has just gone up. Here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=354662

I'm still interested in this thread. With the first part up you'll get a better idea of my predicament with the parents. At first I had planned for the mother to be more understanding of the two, but now I think the father would be the one.

 

[age_matters]

good story...

awaiting chapter 2

 

[ole_grouch_1124]

Thanks for all the suggestions. Look like my story has just gone up. Here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=354662

I'm still interested in this thread. With the first part is up you'll get a better idea of my predicament with the parents. At first I had planned for the mother to be more understanding of the two, but now I think the father would be the one.

That was an excellent story. Can't wait for part 2.

 

[Equality2]

Thanks for the story

I enjoyed reading your story. Congratulations and keep up the good work.

 

[BlackSnake]

Thanks for all the suggestions. Look like my story has just gone up. Here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=354662

I'm still interested in this thread. With the first part up you'll get a better idea of my predicament with the parents. At first I had planned for the mother to be more understanding of the two, but now I think the father would be the one.

I loved it....