Brother Sister story... thoughts?

[Russianmafia]

my story idea centers around this brother and sister.

(Background)
Their mother took off when they were ten, and their father is a mean drunk and a workaholic who really doesn't give a damn.

Growing up, the brother spent a lot of energy looking after his sister, protecting her from their father, and from a boatload of obnouxious guys trying to take advantage of her.

(text)
The sister becomes more and more enamored of him, and falls completely in love with him.

The brother is attracted to her, but hates himself for it, and tries hard to deny it. He resists for a long time, and does a lot to destroy their relationship before he finally gives in.

 

[Carnevil9]

Sounds good. I can imagine the brother, after he gives in and has sex with his sister, torturing himself over the guilt. Maybe she seduces him again and again, until he finally comes to terms with it and they live happily ever after. Or maybe she seduces him again and again until the guilt finally drives him to jump out a window. Could work either way.

 

[DarkBee]

I think brother/sister or cousins having incest is one of the most common forms (I'm not talking about incestual rape/pedophilia here, it's all out of free will). Somtimes it happens because the parents aren't around to help them and the siblings have to find all kinds of things out on their own, including sex, other times it's just because humans, by they're very nature, are curious beings, and sex is one of the many things we want to know more about, preferably by just doing it, and when you have a brother/sister/cousin which is about your age and just as curious as you, things might go their own way...

 

[Fantasies_only]

my story idea centers around this brother and sister.

(Background)
Their mother took off when they were ten, and their father is a mean drunk and a workaholic who really doesn't give a damn.

Growing up, the brother spent a lot of energy looking after his sister, protecting her from their father, and from a boatload of obnouxious guys trying to take advantage of her.

(text)
The sister becomes more and more enamored of him, and falls completely in love with him.

The brother is attracted to her, but hates himself for it, and tries hard to deny it. He resists for a long time, and does a lot to destroy their relationship before he finally gives in.

Although this story has great potential, Literotica has a stick up its ass so far, not even child sexual fantasies are allowed let alone sensual child teasing.

To Manu:
This site claims everything (not hosted from a third party) is text with no pictures or files of an erotic or pornographic nature, and therefore is exempt from (some bill I can't remember).
This makes no sense considering the previous text.
The bill number ends with a 7, which is meant for record keeping.
I'm assuming that was a typo and the number should end with a 6, which would allow children in both softcore and hardcore sexual situations if it's kept in text form, so why is Literotica being such a stick in the mud, even from a nudist point of view?
http://literotica.com/support/2257_info.shtml

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[Russianmafia]

Although this story has great potential, Literotica has a stick up its ass so far, not even child sexual fantasies are allowed let alone sensual child teasing.

To Manu:
This site claims everything (not hosted from a third party) is text with no pictures or files of an erotic or pornographic nature, and therefore is exempt from (some bill I can't remember).
This makes no sense considering the previous text.
The bill number ends with a 7, which is meant for record keeping.
I'm assuming that was a typo and the number should end with a 6, which would allow children in both softcore and hardcore sexual situations if it's kept in text form, so why is Literotica being such a stick in the mud, even from a nudist point of view?
http://literotica.com/support/2257_info.shtml

This message is posted here in case you've missed your PMs.
This will be copied there.

That's easily fixable. Their relationship doesn't have to become sexual in any way until they both turn 18. I don't think it means that I can't use their formative years to build up to it.

But this would be my first story on this site, so I'm not sure.

 

[emap]

Actually, you can write a story about a man or woman who started having sex at like 12 and did so constantly. You simply cannot talk in more than general terms about their sexual habits until they are 18.

Now granted such a story may not be approved, though so far as I know as long as it is not explicit until 18 it can be.

Generally best to not listen to Fantasies, he has a bug up his butt about the whole underage sex thing.

You have a pretty good idea for a story there, and I hope you write it up as you intend not the way Fantasies seems to want you to. Just remember no explicit until 18 and usually best to have none until 18.

 

[Russianmafia]

Actually, you can write a story about a man or woman who started having sex at like 12 and did so constantly. You simply cannot talk in more than general terms about their sexual habits until they are 18.

Now granted such a story may not be approved, though so far as I know as long as it is not explicit until 18 it can be.

Generally best to not listen to Fantasies, he has a bug up his butt about the whole underage sex thing.

You have a pretty good idea for a story there, and I hope you write it up as you intend not the way Fantasies seems to want you to. Just remember no explicit until 18 and usually best to have none until 18.

Thank you. Looks like the story gets a thumbs up. I'm on it!

Not much of a child sex person myself. Youngest I'd consider going is maybe 16.

 

[emap]

Didn't mean to sound like I said you were.

Just Fantasies I think is that perverted.

Fantasies no offence hun, your just easy to poke fun at.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Actually, you can write a story about a man or woman who started having sex at like 12 and did so constantly. You simply cannot talk in more than general terms about their sexual habits until they are 18.

Now granted such a story may not be approved, though so far as I know as long as it is not explicit until 18 it can be.

Generally best to not listen to Fantasies, he has a bug up his butt about the whole underage sex thing.

You have a pretty good idea for a story there, and I hope you write it up as you intend not the way Fantasies seems to want you to. Just remember no explicit until 18 and usually best to have none until 18.

Russianmafia, you're in for the biggest argument of your life if you continue.
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=499503

1. A story is not a story idea. That means this isn't the right venue in which to post whole stories, hoping for feedback.

2. Spam does not simply mean advertising for pay sites. It means posting for the sole reason of soliciting visitors for another site. Don't do it; it's rude, tacky, and worst of all, it isn't a story idea.

3. Don't post email addresses or other personal information on the boards. If you want people to contact you, refer them to your profile, which already has a link to use to email you. If people cannot figure that out, it still doesn't mean you can use this boards as a personals site, or to solicit content for you own website.

4. Age limits are not negotiable. I don't care whose experience it is: yours, your friend's, your neighbor's, or that of a person you invented out of pure imagination--for the purposes of this site, all sexual activity must be between adults. Sexual activity includes masturbation, fantasy, and other solo activities. This is not a debate; arguments about the verisimilitude of this age limit will not change site policy.

5. Politeness goes a long way, especially when you are new--either to the boards, or just to this forum. People are insular and often suspicious; starting an argument with flame material or other negative tones is unlikely to draw positive attention your way.

6. Use that "report post" button! If you see something you believe is off-topic or otherwise inappropriate, please let me know. I check through here, as do others, regularly. However, I don't view every post, nor am I likely to do so in the future. Use your judgement, and if you have concerns or questions, get in touch with me. That's what I'm here for, after all.

 

[Russianmafia]

Russianmafia, you're in for the biggest argument of your life if you continue.
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=499503

Argue about what? I'm confused.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Argue about what? I'm confused.

4. Age limits are not negotiable. I don't care whose experience it is: yours, your friend's, your neighbor's, or that of a person you invented out of pure imagination--for the purposes of this site, all sexual activity must be between adults. Sexual activity includes masturbation, fantasy, and other solo activities. This is not a debate; arguments about the verisimilitude of this age limit will not change site policy.

Argument from moderator, not me.

 

[Russianmafia]

Argument from moderator, not me.

Why would I want to argue with the moderator? I have no interest in writing a pedo story.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Why would I want to argue with the moderator? I have no interest in writing a pedo story.

That's good.
I was just telling you what to look out for.

 

[FallenMorgan]

I like the idea. It would make a nice incest story with a STORYLINE. And I mean more than just mentioning that in the first few paragraphs. It's really annoying when there's a storyline that mentions all these things in the first few paragraphs, then through the rest of it, the only characters given more than a sentence of mention are the two people having sex in the end.