I love feedback!

[Torg]

Okay, here's the deal. I love feedback. I adore it. I wallow in it.

I love feedback so much, that if you rate and comment on my threads, I'll write a thread on one of your stories. This deal is good until Wednesday December 12th 2007, but I may extend it at my whim. As an added bonus, I'll give you feedback as well. One caveat: I'm not committing to write a thread for every feedback a single person writes. That could end up being a huge debt of threads if left unchecked.

Now, this has to be real feedback, commenting about one of my threads. And it must be signed with your pseudonym, for me to credit you and write on your story. Be honest, I can take criticism.

If you don't have a story, I'll add to one of your threads in someone else's story.

 

[GoodBoy741]

Fair deal. I like comments, too.

We have to sign comments to let people know who sent them, right? I'll put a GB at the end of mine.

 

[wicker]

i find a good way to leave feedback is to add a thread to the author's post you enjoyed!

 

[thesorrow07]

I think I will do that. I've been looking for some guest writers.

 

[Torg]

Someone posted an extensive comment on the 'Cowgirl' thread of Absolute Power that was unsigned. If anyone can paraphrase what you said to get credit for it, I will write you a thread.

 

[GoodBoy741]

That was me. It was not my favorite of that line of threads because it mainly felt like a continuation of the last thread. Same charcters, same setting, just another sex act. I also wasn't big on the penis modification. Still a good sex scene, just a little more going on character-wise would have been nice.

 

[Torg]

That was me. It was not my favorite of that line of threads because it mainly felt like a continuation of the last thread. Same charcters, same setting, just another sex act. I also wasn't big on the penis modification. Still a good sex scene, just a little more going on character-wise would have been nice.

I thought it might be you, since the other new comment was yours. The next one mixes it up a bit. A naughty student makes a suggestion.

 

[GoodBoy741]

That sounds good, I'm looking forward to it.

 

[Torg]

I have a festive new avatar.

 

[GoodBoy741]

I just added a pic, but I can't see it. I see it in my profile, but not next to my post.

 

[wicker]

i just had a thread denied by an editor who left NO feedback!

 

[CarterRyan]

I just posted some feedback to "Lawn Boy".

 

[Torg]

As far as I can tell, this is the list of people whom I owe threads to for this promotion:

Mysterious100
CarterRyan
GoodBoy

If I'm missing someone, let me know.

 

[GoodBoy741]

Thanks for the thread!

 

[jakelyon]

I just added a pic, but I can't see it. I see it in my profile, but not next to my post.

As I recall you need 100 posts before you can add an avatar.

 

[ImpishSeraph]

I have a problem with the feedback links. They don't show up for me. Always get the message that the page can't be displayed. I have this problem for some reason when there is a :81 following literotica and can usually delete that part to get in the page, but it is not working for me here...


If you can check out my short story in the 'come and visit with me!' thread linked below. It was my first attempt at writing.

 

[thesorrow07]

My thread I wrote to Aaralon's discoveries was denied with no explanation.

 

[Zingiber]

I have a problem with the feedback links. They don't show up for me. Always get the message that the page can't be displayed. I have this problem for some reason when there is a :81 following literotica and can usually delete that part to get in the page, but it is not working for me here...


If you can check out my short story in the 'come and visit with me!' thread linked below. It was my first attempt at writing.

The ":81" is part of the web server address for Chyoo. It's possible that you're behind some sort of a filter that doesn't believe Port 81 would host a web server. (Regular web servers are on Port 80). Literotica will tolerate deleting :81 because there's a server on Port 80 with the same content. This isn't true of Chyoo. http://www.chyoo.com will redirect to http://www.chyoo.com:81

-Z.

 

[lilguy]

you know you got a lot of good stories that can use some new threads

like Lawn boy and Jamaica resort

You should upgrade them sometime

 

[Torg]

you know you got a lot of good stories that can use some new threads

like Lawn boy and Jamaica resort

You should upgrade them sometime

My problem is inspiration. I write on stories that I'm inspired to write on, and not always my own. I'll get back to them soon. I want to find out what happens in the beauty contest (Jamaican Resort), and out in the gazebo with the mom (Lawn Boy).

 

[TJChurch]

I want to find out what happens in the beauty contest (Jamaican Resort), and out in the gazebo with the mom (Lawn Boy).

"If you want something done right, do it yourself."

 

[Torg]

"If you want something done right, do it yourself."

I will some day when I get inspired.

 

[Zingiber]

you know you got a lot of good stories that can use some new threads

like Lawn boy and Jamaica resort

You should upgrade them sometime

And Living Like Bonobos.

I can empathize with the inspiration issue. I've started out a number of plot directions that I would like to see developed but I'm not inspired to advance in a particular way.

-Z.

 

[Menoetes]

Holy crap Torg - I can't believe how many stories you've written! My writing comes in waves, I'll write constantly for a few days then take a few weeks off before I write again - you must write like a monster!! Also I pour most of my effort in to one or two stories, I couldn't imagine managing 50 stories, too much work.

I was gonna leave you feedback (despite the 'special offer' being over - I know) but now I'm spoilt for choice... too bad

 

[Menoetes]

Hey Guys...

Hello everyone,

I know this is an ancient thread but it seemed best suited to my topic...

I know I've been absent from Chyoo for several months now but I stuck my head in briefly and noticed I had feedback! So a big thanks to Torg (who signed his feedback) and anyone else who left me feedback! It's always encouraging especially on a story you've poured yourself into.

As for my writing, it comes in spurts; I write like crazy for a week or two then I'm all dried up for a few months. I haven't found a way to force it and when I try to; I feel the writing is empty and shallow. I guess I'm about due for another wave of writing some time soon but until then I'll just be checking occasionly to see what people have been creating.

Thanks for the feedback guys! It's very encouraging!!