Thanks for feedback!

[Bonniehart]

I've been receiving some feedback on my first story ever - and I'm really touched by the kind words and suggestions for improving my writing in the next one. Wow. There's some real technical knowledge out there in the community.

Thanks to everyone who commented. I appreciate the pointers - and no - nothing being taken the wrong way.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Hi Bonnie and welcome.

I thought your first story was really enjoyable but you could have made it easier to find by putting a link in your post. You are still too new here to come up on a member search.

Won't make any detailed comments here as you didn't ask for forum feedback and I see you have got Public Comments turned off in your story.

Look forward to part 2.

Elle

 

[mjl2010]

Nice elf outfit, Elfin.

It wouldn't hurt if she put a submissions link in her profile either.

MJL

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Nice elf outfit, Elfin.

It wouldn't hurt if she put a submissions link in her profile either.

MJL

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