The SCOURIES reader – for both fans and serious scholars…

[Scribbled]

This is a story that may also be especially helpful for many of Literotica’s most well known female authors, often frustrated women who toil all day to produce erotica for the masses and then thrash alone all night in unsatisfied need. Can Liz’s experiences signal some avenue of release for these lovely but often ill tempered creatures? God willing.

Now that's what I call damn funny. Although sad but true to some.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

No H on his newest.

Hmmm....let's see what these comments say, shall we?

just another idiot stupid writer
05/16/07 by Anonymous
sick...youre sick, you need medical help wimppy (sic) or just need to die for the best of all, you idiot

What a waste of time!
05/16/07 by Anonymous in Atlanta, GA
This story is nothing more than a couple of bitches who's only concerns in the world are their own gratification. Who now plot to have the husband fit the bill as "Daddy" to not one but two bastard kids. There isn't one redeeming value in any of these characters. What a waste of time to write as well as read.

When you got it as a writer?
05/16/07 by Anonymous
What, did you have your friend write you a comment? Maybe you did it yourself. Wasn't particularly well written and the subject matter was disgusting. Once again, no justice in the world and indiscretions all right because she "enjoys" it. In what universe is cheating all right? Bad enough to cuckold her husband, but to let him raise her bastard child? Let's hope someone has the stones to write a decent ending to thus story, I don't think we can count on the author to do it.

Don't hate her?
05/16/07 by Anonymous in Behing You
Just a couple of cheating conniving whores. Don't hate them? They're "normal"? you are one sick fuck, I hope one day your wife does the same to you!

What Can I Say?
05/16/07 by Anonymous in The United States
I thought this "story" sucked. The "writer" tried to ward off criticism with his lead in to the text, but he apparently failed miserably. Never fear, "writer," the comment Nazis will be here soon to chastise the rest of us for making unfavorable remarks. Then you'll feel better. You won't learn anything useful, but you'll feel better.

Oh, Well!!
05/16/07 by louguy35 in SoutheastUSA
As I have stated before, there are good wirters in the Loving Wives genre, and there are not so good writers. The story is the only way to judge. This is a bad story.

If it was a good sex story
05/16/07 by Kanga40
it may have been bearable.
Maybe thinking this story has good sex is a 'man thing', 'cause it sure did nothing for me.
The one redeeming feature it could have had, it didn't.

I try not to agree with Anon most of the time, but in this case, I'll make an exception. I usually avoid bashing people for their chosen genres, even when they are not to my taste (as is often the case with the subject matter chosen by scouries). However, since he has chosen to bash me in the past....

 

[Scribbled]

Hmmm....let's see what these comments say, shall we?

There is finally a totally accurate comment on scouries' story instead of mostly trollmania. That comment is entitled "Kudos to a genius" and is quite enlightening. "Your story had exactly the effect on your readers you intended. The mark of a great writer. You should be published. I can see a Pulitzer Prize in your future."

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

There is finally a totally accurate comment on scouries' story instead of mostly trollmania. That comment is entitled "Kudos to a genius" and is quite enlightening. "Your story had exactly the effect on your readers you intended. The mark of a great writer. You should be published. I can see a Pulitzer Prize in your future."

Patting yourself on the back again, JR? By the way, how are Sue Ellen, Bobby, and the whole Ewing family?

 

[Selena_Kitt]

There is finally a totally accurate comment on scouries' story instead of mostly trollmania. That comment is entitled "Kudos to a genius" and is quite enlightening. "Your story had exactly the effect on your readers you intended. The mark of a great writer. You should be published. I can see a Pulitzer Prize in your future."

Perhaps not a Pulitzer, but he's good enough to run for office, I'd say... at least on the Republican ticket...


And Stella, you're SPOT ON with the Andy Kaufman thing! Totally!!

BTW, Scouries... if you're Mr. Popular... how come you're so damned far down on THIS list?

 

[Stella_Omega]

There is finally a totally accurate comment on scouries' story instead of mostly trollmania. That comment is entitled "Kudos to a genius" and is quite enlightening. "Your story had exactly the effect on your readers you intended. The mark of a great writer. You should be published. I can see a Pulitzer Prize in your future."

Finally! Finally! Finally!

 

[MarshAlien]

Perhaps not a Pulitzer, but he's good enough to run for office, I'd say... at least on the Republican ticket...


And Stella, you're SPOT ON with the Andy Kaufman thing! Totally!!

BTW, Scouries... if you're Mr. Popular... how come you're so damned far down on THIS list?

That list, huh? Well, dang. No Pulitzer for me, either. What else is available? Is that contest in the M&Ms bags still going on?

 

[scouries]

Thank you sweetie!!!!

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[cloudy]

PLEASE DO NOT POST REPLIES ON THIS THREAD

There is a temporary exception for Literotica’s most acclaimed and sweetest authoress (hint - she's #2 on her sisters list).

Like we all care. Good lord...

 

[yevkassem72]

Like we all care. Good lord...

He really is self-absorbed, isn't he? Expecting everyone to follow his rules on this shamelessly self-promoting thread. Must need his ego stroked or something.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

DK and I aren't sisters, doll.

Well, not unless you count the fact that we're all sistahs, and we'll always be better than you are...

 

[Scribbled]

DK and I aren't sisters, doll.

Well, not unless you count the fact that we're all sistahs, and we'll always be better than you are...

I see you are also published. Like your sister and mostly everybody else who posted on this thread except scouries. I think scouries considers being published like you people are to be the mark of the beast rather than a mark of distinction. Oh, and the infamous Mrs. G. critiqued your book. "However, The Surrender Of Persephone lacks an uniform voice when it comes to the author's style. She seems to be going all over the place, unsure of what this story is supposed to be" and "What happens is that I feel that Ms Kitt fails to create a smooth transition from non-sexual scenes in this book."

Not to worry, scouries can help you fix your problem.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

I see you are also published. Like your sister and mostly everybody else who posted on this thread except scouries. I think scouries considers being published like you people are to be the mark of the beast rather than a mark of distinction. Oh, and the infamous Mrs. G. critiqued your book. "However, The Surrender Of Persephone lacks an uniform voice when it comes to the author's style. She seems to be going all over the place, unsure of what this story is supposed to be" and "What happens is that I feel that Ms Kitt fails to create a smooth transition from non-sexual scenes in this book."

Not to worry, scouries can help you fix your problem.

yeah... poor guy... those grapes he eats taste awful sour...

and he's still not getting paid... go figure...

 

[scouries]

yesssssssssssss

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[starrkers]

Any Top 500 All-Time Most Read Literotica author, as well as any other award winning Literotican who happens to be in the area, is cordially invited to attend. Underwear is optional.

That means I can't attend, never won a thing. Damn, and I'd had my nipples polished specially too.

 

[jomar]

I think scouries considers being published like you people are to be the mark of the beast rather than a mark of distinction.

Whaaaat? WTF and more! Explain please!

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Whaaaat? WTF and more! Explain please!

oh come on Jomar, no self-respecting author wants to be actually PAID for their writing... Scouries would rather have the (decidedly questionable, according to his various complaints!) Literotica scoring system be the end-all be-all of his world than actually have to face a royalty statement showing how well (or not) his work sold in the real world...

that would be, of course, after he was accepted by a publisher...

oh, wait, hell hasn't frozen over yet...

 

[drksideofthemoon]

That means I can't attend, never won a thing. Damn, and I'd had my nipples polished specially too.

Oh thanks, I about choked...

 

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[drksideofthemoon]

Hey Bri, how are you?

Really good...How are you?

 

[starrkers]

Oh thanks, I about choked...

*pats drkside on the back* That better? http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y286/starrcats/smilies/angel.gif

 

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[drksideofthemoon]

*pats drkside on the back* That better? http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y286/starrcats/smilies/angel.gif

Thanks...I needed that....

 

[drksideofthemoon]

I'm ducky... So are you enjoying this whole farce?

Quack, quack...Mind boggling...

 

[drksideofthemoon]

oh come on Jomar, no self-respecting author wants to be actually PAID for their writing... Scouries would rather have the (decidedly questionable, according to his various complaints!) Literotica scoring system be the end-all be-all of his world than actually have to face a royalty statement showing how well (or not) his work sold in the real world...

that would be, of course, after he was accepted by a publisher...

oh, wait, hell hasn't frozen over yet...

Well, I have no desire to be published commercially...where does that put me?