Bohemian Bar for Beta-Readers
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HaralLuhhan
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I havent had any luck yet, but you might want to put a description of your story/genre, since many people will be willing to take on some topics but not others
challenger69
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Have you found a beta reader yet?
HaralLuhhan
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Whats the issue with your story? Or did you sort it out already?
LightningSeed
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I’ll be glad to read something if anyone wants input.
Rockofmarriages
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Beta Reader request:
New work has about 15,500 words
Single work (won't be multi-chapter)
A feel good, Non-Erotic OR Romance category
Written in pages, can export to TXT, Word
This will be my 9th story on LIT
My current stories are here: https://www.literotica.com/authors/Rockofmarriages/works/stories
New work has about 15,500 words
Single work (won't be multi-chapter)
A feel good, Non-Erotic OR Romance category
Written in pages, can export to TXT, Word
This will be my 9th story on LIT
My current stories are here: https://www.literotica.com/authors/Rockofmarriages/works/stories
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IAmHerEmma
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Hello everyone.
So I used to write fiction and post under a different pen name here. But I fell off the wagon and its been a really really long time since I did some writing.
I did get back to it and its been a while since I have been writing this particular piece and I've come to 125 word pages and about 50k-ish words. I do feel this is where I want to stop this volume or maybe even end it here. I don't know.
So I'm looking for for readers who could read it and give me some feedback. I do want to post it and at this point I am looking for an editor as well and I've posted for it in the relative forum topic. But I do want some feedback from a readers perspective on what is working and what isn't.
I write about loving couples with cross dressing themes. There's some slight kink play in the story. But it is more plot than all just sex. It's an exploration story of sorts and I'm also kind of leaning it to the more romantic side of things. So yeah if there's anyone interested to give me thoughts and feedback please DM me.
So I used to write fiction and post under a different pen name here. But I fell off the wagon and its been a really really long time since I did some writing.
I did get back to it and its been a while since I have been writing this particular piece and I've come to 125 word pages and about 50k-ish words. I do feel this is where I want to stop this volume or maybe even end it here. I don't know.
So I'm looking for for readers who could read it and give me some feedback. I do want to post it and at this point I am looking for an editor as well and I've posted for it in the relative forum topic. But I do want some feedback from a readers perspective on what is working and what isn't.
I write about loving couples with cross dressing themes. There's some slight kink play in the story. But it is more plot than all just sex. It's an exploration story of sorts and I'm also kind of leaning it to the more romantic side of things. So yeah if there's anyone interested to give me thoughts and feedback please DM me.
PublishedEroticaWriter
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I'm looking for a woman to beta reader a chapter in one of my stories. I like to have a woman's perspective to make sure it sounds believable. Its very short at 911 words. I don't even know if the chapter is even worth adding. It's just about a greek Goddess causing trouble in a small town with her powers. More mischief than mayhem.
Nymphaia
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Hi there, are you still looking for some help?
I may be able to provide my time and have some relevant background experience as well.
Regards,
Nymphaia
PublishedEroticaWriter
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Yes, I am still looking for help. Your name is a strange coincidence since the story I'm working on is called Nymph.
Nymphaia
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Yes it is a VERY big coincidence! Lol who knows …perhaps it is serendipitous!
VerbalAbuse
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Synopsis for a story I wrote. Any readers?
The story opens with a flamboyant film director named Ella and her crew, including cameraman Mike, actress Gwen, makeup artist Hellen, sound technician Tony, and actor Andy, arriving in a dejected-green compact car at a quiet city square. Ella, with her striking appearance and commanding presence, quickly takes charge, introducing the new actor Andy to the team and outlining the day's shooting plan.
The central focus of their project is Gwen, who is transformed into her character, "Porsha," a streetwalker. This involves a dramatic wardrobe change where Gwen strips completely, dons new jewelry (including nipple rings and a belly button tassel), removes a wig to reveal a shaved head, and receives touch-ups from Hellen.
The filming begins with an interview-style scene where Ella, in character as an interviewer, questions Porsha about her life as a sex worker. This sequence quickly escalates into explicit sexual acts on camera, with Gwen performing various poses and actions, including stroking herself, demonstrating oral sex techniques, and allowing Ella to physically interact with her body in graphic ways. The crew, particularly Mike and Tony, react with a mix of professionalism and personal interest.
The story opens with a flamboyant film director named Ella and her crew, including cameraman Mike, actress Gwen, makeup artist Hellen, sound technician Tony, and actor Andy, arriving in a dejected-green compact car at a quiet city square. Ella, with her striking appearance and commanding presence, quickly takes charge, introducing the new actor Andy to the team and outlining the day's shooting plan.
The central focus of their project is Gwen, who is transformed into her character, "Porsha," a streetwalker. This involves a dramatic wardrobe change where Gwen strips completely, dons new jewelry (including nipple rings and a belly button tassel), removes a wig to reveal a shaved head, and receives touch-ups from Hellen.
The filming begins with an interview-style scene where Ella, in character as an interviewer, questions Porsha about her life as a sex worker. This sequence quickly escalates into explicit sexual acts on camera, with Gwen performing various poses and actions, including stroking herself, demonstrating oral sex techniques, and allowing Ella to physically interact with her body in graphic ways. The crew, particularly Mike and Tony, react with a mix of professionalism and personal interest.
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