Revenge?

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MFC is a successful married woman. Respected and confident. Her husband is also successful but seems to be teternally in her shadow. Sexually they seem fine on the surface, but there isn't a submissive bone in her body. She's never been on her knees for him ever. It would never have occured to her to do so, and he's never asked. What she is though, is loyal.

So she's beyond shocked whn she finds her husband has taken himself a mistress. A submissive. She finds out accidently and is more hurt than shattered.

She doesn't let on that she knows and life goes on while she plots her revenege. She understands that he might have needed something else sexually and that's understandable. If he had talked to her about it, perhaps an arrangement could have been made. But now all bets are off. She's mad.

She intends on revenge on her husband and mistress and she starts off by befriending the mistress.

I have a couple of ideas, but what pops into your mind for her revenge?
 
I think, the easiest route and maybe most expected would probably be to have her seduce the mistress away into being her exclusive submissive.

Another one, would be for her to find out everything this younger woman wants in life, and then bankrupt her husband by sending her to the best college to achieve her dreams.

She could also forge some documents to show that the mistress is a long lost daughter of either of them.

Anything else I could think of, would not involve befriending the mistress.
 
My main kinks are femdom and CFNM, so my revenge ideas would definitely skew that way.

If I had more info on how the husband and mistress met, that might give me some ideas.

Based on what's presented, I'd probably go with the idea that the husband and mistress work for the same company (owned by the wife?) and have been embezzling from it, with plans to leave the country together.

While investigating the mistress (under the guise of befriending her), the wife finds irrefutable proof of their crime.

The wife confronts the couple and informs them that they are now her slaves and if they refuse the new situation, they will probably spend the rest of their lives in prison.

Having no choice, the couple reluctantly agrees and the wife, now aroused and wielding tremendous leverage over the couple, uses it to constantly put them in very embarrassing and very sexual situations.

I'm a big fan of scenarios like the above where the protagonist HAS to obey the orders, no matter how outlandish.

Currently working on a CFNM story where a college student on a football scholarship gets caught cheating in a manner that could involve jail time for him and the Dean and others and to avoid this he has to "volunteer" to be the assistant for the arts teacher (for the sake of appearances)

Knowing this, the sexy artsy-fartsy arts teacher fills her "sensual" arts class with female students and insists that the student has to assist her in the role of a nude model and uses this excuse to push the student into increasingly provocative and erotic modeling sessions that push him way past his boundaries and comfort zone, but that doesn't matter; he has no choice, he has to comply with her demands.
 
So it is a BTB story, with BDSM thrown in. Just pick any of the myriad BTB scenarios.

I would find it more interesting if she did not find out after the fact, but finds his fetlife account where he discusses his dominant desires. Then she starts considering the submissive side ...
 
MFC is a successful married woman. Respected and confident. Her husband is also successful but seems to be teternally in her shadow. Sexually they seem fine on the surface, but there isn't a submissive bone in her body. She's never been on her knees for him ever. It would never have occured to her to do so, and he's never asked. What she is though, is loyal.

So she's beyond shocked whn she finds her husband has taken himself a mistress. A submissive. She finds out accidently and is more hurt than shattered.

She doesn't let on that she knows and life goes on while she plots her revenege. She understands that he might have needed something else sexually and that's understandable. If he had talked to her about it, perhaps an arrangement could have been made. But now all bets are off. She's mad.

She intends on revenge on her husband and mistress and she starts off by befriending the mistress.

I have a couple of ideas, but what pops into your mind for her revenge?

Myself, I like to take predictable story settings like this and then throw in a twist at the end.

Like have the wife and husband eventually have a spectacular confrontation over the mistress only to find out that the wife set up the whole thing to make him stand up on his own. And going forward they have a stronger marriage.
 
My thoughts definitely included her seducing the mistress. Then spreading her own wings sexually, in responce to her husband already doing so. She discovers a sex club, where she eventually brings the mistress.

Finally one night she records the mistress licking her while being hammered by a massively muscular fellow.

She sends her husband the clip. "She's mine now. Just like you."
 
I'll offer an alternative. She takes some of his money (or sells some trinket from him or her wedding ring) to do the most pointless and degrading things with.

She can obviously seduce someone. Instead, she does the most submissive thing she can think of. She buys a male escort to crawl to. With him she does everything submissive under the sun that she thinks her husband would have wanted, and many more besides that in her creativity.

Maybe she tapes it. Then she goes home. Does she tell him what she has done? Maybe not. Maybe it is just fodder in her cannon for the moment she needs it.
 
Oh that would be an interesting twist. Instead of turning the mistress into her sub, she turns the mistress into her dom, and gives her such a taste for it that the mistress starts trying it out on the husband.
 
I sympathize with the husband from personal experience. The woman who thinks she can direct her husband from a pedestal, not listening when he wants to talk about fantasies. It is not her who is taking revenge, it was him who took revenge on here for her lack of empathy.

If she believes, revenge is the way to go, she will realize it's a stab into thin air. He is long gone due to her arrogance.
 
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I sympathize with the husband from personal experience. The woman who thinks she can direct her husband from a pedestal, not listening when he wants to talk about fantasies. It is not her who is taking revenge, it was him who took revenge on here for her lack of empathy.

If she believes, revenge is the way to go, she will realize it's a stab into thin air. He is long gone due to her arrogance.
I'm sorry that you see a parallel here into your peronal life. But this is 'fiction' and she the one who was betrayed. Lack or empathy? You're reading a little too much into this, my friend. This is a snippet of a story idea.
 
The key sentence in your draft is for me:
If he had talked to her about it, perhaps an arrangement could have been made
This is where the core lies for me. Why did he not? Could he not? Did she take him for granted. Was he too weak. When you reach a waterfall you can follow the river upstream or downstream.

The idea of her revenge by demonstrating her superiority a second time via his submissive does not appeal to me at all. It is just cruel.
 
I'm with the OP on this. Reminds me of The Devil Wears Prada in the sense that a woman HAS to be that way to reach that level of success in our culture. As someone mentioned above, maybe she goes sub for someone else. A coworker or friend of her husband? Confronts him, vids? Pics? Of herself turning him into a cuck? Destroys his career, scares the mistress off? Maybe she's the daughter of a boss of his? Or the daughter of someone at a rival company? All because he couldn't talk to her.
 
Or maybe you go scorched earth. A bad ending for everyone. Her need and drive for vengeance is pushed so far she destroys her career as well just to get it
 
Here’s a revenge plot that plays on MFC's strengths—her intelligence, poise, and ability to manipulate situations without losing her composed exterior:

Psychological Dominance: MFC subtly begins asserting control over the mistress, not through aggression, but by becoming an irresistible mentor—someone the younger woman admires and trusts. MFC "accidentally" discovers the mistress's secrets (financial struggles, past mistakes) and uses them to destabilize her, all while playing the supportive friend.

Corporate Sabotage (if applicable): If the mistress is career-driven, MFC—using her influence—ensures she loses key opportunities or gets exposed for incompetence. Alternatively, if the husband’s success is tied to MFC’s reputation, she quietly undermines him professionally, letting him flounder without her support.

The Ultimate Humiliation: MFC engineers a scenario where the husband witnesses his mistress rejecting him—either because MFC "innocently" reveals his flaws or arranges for the mistress to choose someone else (perhaps even MFC herself, in a twist where the mistress develops an obsession with her).

Public Grace, Private Ruin: At a high-profile event, MFC delivers a toast that seems effusive but is laced with double meanings—only the husband and mistress recognize the humiliation. Later, she cuts him off financially, socially, or sexually, leaving him in a gilded cage of her making.

The Long Game: She waits until the mistress is deeply emotionally invested, then coldly reveals she knew all along—not with rage, but with pity, making the mistress question everything. The husband is left with a "choice": a lifetime of silent resentment from his wife or a hollow existence without her.

Bonus Twist: MFC’s revenge is so seamless that the mistress becomes her unwitting ally, turning against the husband, leaving him entirely isolated. That’s the power move.
 
Myself, I like to take predictable story settings like this and then throw in a twist at the end.

Like have the wife and husband eventually have a spectacular confrontation over the mistress only to find out that the wife set up the whole thing to make him stand up on his own. And going forward they have a stronger marriage.

The twist at the end is that they all realize they are characters in a story and the author set the whole thing up.


Has anybody done something like that?
 
Yes. Stephen King did that at the end of the Dark Tower. Probably the lousyest ending ever.
That's the one where King himself is a character in the story, right?

I have to say, that ending sounds even worse than The Stand.

--Annie
 
That's the one where King himself is a character in the story, right?
I have to say, that ending sounds even worse than The Stand.
--Annie
Yes. King really jumped the shark after Wolves of the Calla and it got ridiculous when the characters popped into our world.

In my opinion the ending of the Stand was the only way it could have ended, to completely eliminate the threat a Flagg and the growing anarchy in Vegas. It's one of those situations where the writer paints themselves in a corner by creating a villain who is ... unbeatable?
 
In my experience*, when a woman finds out that her man is cheating on her, her anger is pretty much evenly directed at both the wayward man AND the mistress. So any revenge she would plot would probably involve punishing both of them.

*not personal experience, mind you, but observations of friends and acquaintances.
 
In my experience*, when a woman finds out that her man is cheating on her, her anger is pretty much evenly directed at both the wayward man AND the mistress. So any revenge she would plot would probably involve punishing both of them.

*not personal experience, mind you, but observations of friends and acquaintances.
Revenge never gets you anything apart from a smug grin or a slap in the face if it goes wrong. Come up with a solution that works for everyone, if you want him then you have to take me as well. For instance. If that doesn’t work you slash his tyres and kidnap his new pussy.
 
The Successful Wife's vengeance could be anything from literal getting away with murder to just spitting in his face in public and getting everything in a divorce. It depends on what kind of conclusion you're doing for in "Revenge". (I'm assuming that's the story title.)

How about this: she starts dosing him with erection-preventing drugs. (They don't have to be real, luckily.) She only doses him when he's going to visit the mistress. Eventually the two break up ... and THEN she tosses him to the curb.

--Annie
 
It is not always about sex that a man wandering cock finds some place new to put his cock. What he fuck am I saying it’s always about sex!

Ok there is the younger woman, this is an ego booster for the bloke, showing he can still pull a dumb 19 year old when he is in his forties or higher. Ok what about it’s the mistress who wants something from the man, the new secretary is screwing her way to the top, and he, she thinks is the next rung on the ladder.

However the wife has been there she did climb that ladder before the new flame and as she chose this man even though she had been at the very top she knew that if she opened her legs to the right person above the wandering cock that this little fuck towy would be back in the typing pool faster than she can get her knickers off.
 
Perhaps....
The wife seduces the mistress, they share a connection... More than sex....
The wife wants her husband to find out that the mistress is hers...
She has her wedding ring made into a clit piercing and gives it to the mistress on the grounds she must never take it out.
Of course, the husband who loves cunnilingus, finds the ring during lovemaking, it is so unique, he understands the significance...
He realises, he has lost his mistress to his wife...
They have a confrontation, he confesses, and they either reconcile/ split or form some type of shared relationship...

Merely a suggestion... A novel unveiling...

I guess the heart of the story is why he felt the need to seek out a "Sub." If their relationship is so unbalanced. And, he's unhappy with their relationship. why does he not just leave???

Cagivagurl
 
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