What the Hell happened while I was gone?

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Guy gets out of school and is sent away for a few years. Author's choice; college, military, or just world traveling. Point is to be independent and have as little contact with home as possible aside from a few letters or phone calls. Plan on arrival back home is to join Dad's company and learn it with the goal of taking it over when dad retires.

When he gets back home, he can feel things are a bit different, but can't figure out just what. It'll be a couple of more weeks before he's expected at the Office. Dad's there, but acting different. Mom's appearance has changed and she seems more in control. Even Sis seems really different. And then there is the guy's HS girlfriend who has been patiently and dutifully waiting for him. [ Part of the author's role here is to describe why she waited. Culture? Devotion? ]

When he finally goes to the office, his world gets disrupted. ...

GF is just standing there grinning from ear to ear, licking her lips seductively....

Mom sends the GF off to her afternoon delight session with a client ' make him very happy and get that contract!'


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Y'all get the idea, right?


I've had bit and parts of this written out several times, but couldn't pull it all together. I know someone can.

 

[sirhugs]

way too long. Please shorten before I edit with my axe.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Let me think about this.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

^^ I may even still have bits of an old draft somewhere if you want it.

 

[Carnevil9]

I was expecting this to go more of a Body Snatchers route, with everyone taken over by pods or aliens. Pods or aliens who love having sex while in human bodies.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

I think your backstory is the interesting aspect of your outline. Show us (don't retell) this interesting part of the story, which is how the women take over and work out how 'sex sells'.
I was with one company who actually did this selling CAD software. The sales teams always consisted of a man and a woman. The woman demonstrated the software with the clients looking over their shoulders - into their cleavage.
Maybe have dad team up with GF, who sucks client under the table while dad gets the contract signed.

 

[AlinaX]

How was I supposed to work in this crazy place, seeing three women I loved (in very different ways) all blatantly selling themselves as perks for clients? And all three women were beautiful and sexy in a way they had never been. In part it was the clothes and the makeup, the former so shamelessly revealing, the latter so flawlessly applied, as if they were a Hollywood vision of what sex workers must look like. Mostly, though, was the way they exuded confidence with every movement.

I had never in my life perceived my mother as a sexual woman. Indeed, the idea of my parents having sex - with each other, let alone with anyone else - had always grossed me out, but standing in front of me was definitely a woman, and to my extreme embarrassment my cock was struggling to stand too. My baby sister had come of age too, an adult now and undeniably a woman, excitement and laughter in her eyes.

How was I supposed to work here? Seeing them, I felt both humiliated and aroused. I wanted to run away, back home to where everything made sense - but this was home. “Your role?” my mother purred, echoing my question to her. “Well, this new… arrangement, shall we say? It can get a little messy. We were thinking to hire an assistant to help with” - she grinned mischievously - “cleanup… but now that you’re here, I think we’ve found exactly the right person for the job. So tell us: How hungry are you… for success?”

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

^^ A recurring theme I used was the husband/brother/son being somewhat of an attendant, personal assistant, Man Friday to the power women. Dressing, bathing, trimming, primping, prepping them for their duties.

On the Executive floor where the above scene take place, there is a full bath suite, spa, salon, dressing room, wardrobe.

This is where he is to spend much of his time, attending to all of their special needs.

He may also be trained in business negotiations where necessary for female Execs of other companies are involved.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Okay my spin on this would be less drastic than turning these clearly smart and capable women into prostitutes for their company. Our MMC has been away, stationed overseas for the US military as an officer. Before joining, his relationship with dad was strained at best so little communication isn't hard to explain. His birth-mom passed when he was a baby and our MFC is his stepmom. She was also someone important in the company and when dad fucked up, the board of directors put her in charge. Stepmom created her own inner circle of capable women and dad has literally become a servant in his own household. The maid was fired and he is now relegated to domestic duties only. Son arrives home and sees this and dads humiliation is magnified by a factor of ten. But seeing how he was neglected by the power hungry man as a boy, he's not all that unhappy with it.

His stepmom is thrilled to see him and immediately puts him to work in the company and, smart, confident and capable, he excels. It becomes a very 'you're the man of the house now' story. Step-sis, and ex-gf can be inserted if necessary, but in my opinion, him taking his fathers place in his stepmother's bed should be the culmination of the story.

The reason I'd go step-mom instead of birth mom is due to the non-communication this story requires at first. Even if he was estranged from dad, a son wouldn't cut off his birth-mom without good reason, and if he did, he wouldn't go back.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

But back at home, he sees them in their natural state without the armor and war paint.

'You don't think we look like that all the time, do you?'

He finds out just how hard it is to keep up the personas.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Sis's turn to 'negotiate' with Mr. Johnson of Big Rods.

Mom insists Sonny watch and learn as she describes Sis's every move.

'Notice how she stands firm with her feet slightly parted and makes him walk to her. She greets him and takes his hand ... her hand on top of his (she's in control), guides him to the conference table and seats him, her hand firmly on his shoulder.'

'She sits at a chair around the corner of the table from him, part of the table between them, setting her boundaries. Note how she crosses her legs and bounces one, letting her shoe drop off her foot just slightly. As she breathes, her breasts press against her unbuttoned blouse, trying to force it open further. Her sparkling necklace dangles in her exposed deep cleavage. Note how she holds the pen with one hand and strokes the length of it with the other.'

'She's explaining the details of a $500,000 contract that will benefit our company more than his. She is being very detailed, but using language that contains subtle double entendres. Her tone of voice is businesslike and deliberate, but low, deep and seductive. Through it all, the poor sap can only mumble, bob and nod. He has no idea what she's really saying. He's just trying to figure out if she's wearing panties or not.'

 

[sirhugs]

Sis's turn to 'negotiate' with Mr. Johnson of Big Rods.

Mom insists Sonny watch and learn as she describes Sis's every move.

'Notice how she stands firm with her feet slightly parted and makes him walk to her. She greets him and takes his hand ... her hand on top of his (she's in control), guides him to the conference table and seats him, her hand firmly on his shoulder.'

'She sits at a chair around the corner of the table from him, part of the table between them, setting her boundaries. Note how she crosses her legs and bounces one, letting her shoe drop off her foot just slightly. As she breathes, her breasts press against her unbuttoned blouse, trying to force it open further. Her sparkling necklace dangles in her exposed deep cleavage. Note how she holds the pen with one hand and strokes the length of it with the other.'

'She's explaining the details of a $500,000 contract that will benefit our company more than his. She is being very detailed, but using language that contains subtle double entendres. Her tone of voice is businesslike and deliberate, but low, deep and seductive. Through it all, the poor sap can only mumble, bob and nod. He has no idea what she's really saying. He's just trying to figure out if she's wearing panties or not.'

I hope that you plan to develop this into a submitted story...it is yummy.

 

[Phatfeet]

Okay my spin on this would be less drastic than turning these clearly smart and capable women into prostitutes for their company. Our MMC has been away, stationed overseas for the US military as an officer. Before joining, his relationship with dad was strained at best so little communication isn't hard to explain. His birth-mom passed when he was a baby and our MFC is his stepmom. She was also someone important in the company and when dad fucked up, the board of directors put her in charge. Stepmom created her own inner circle of capable women and dad has literally become a servant in his own household. The maid was fired and he is now relegated to domestic duties only. Son arrives home and sees this and dads humiliation is magnified by a factor of ten. But seeing how he was neglected by the power hungry man as a boy, he's not all that unhappy with it.

His stepmom is thrilled to see him and immediately puts him to work in the company and, smart, confident and capable, he excels. It becomes a very 'you're the man of the house now' story. Step-sis, and ex-gf can be inserted if necessary, but in my opinion, him taking his fathers place in his stepmother's bed should be the culmination of the story.

The reason I'd go step-mom instead of birth mom is due to the non-communication this story requires at first. Even if he was estranged from dad, a son wouldn't cut off his birth-mom without good reason, and if he did, he wouldn't go back.

I was thinking of that as well, but maybe go in a slightly more targeted direction with it.

The company is really a front for Prostitution, but where they specialize in giving rich men their ultimate fantasies. Because these fantasies are so specific, a typical prostitute would just refuse to do them so the father finds out it must take ladies who fully understand the aspects of the business. It is not just them making $600 per hour, the fantasy company is charging these rich men $70,000 to get their long held fantasy lived out.

It might mean them being flown to Paris and having sex with the man at night on top of the Eiffel Tower.

Or maybe it is the rich man reliving when he lost his virginity by the company setting it up with a 1972 AMC Javelin in his home-town with the son's girlfriend being in a cheerleader outfit of 1972 vintage.

Those are only 2 examples, but you see what I mean. It is very detailed fantasies that they make happen, but for a very steep price. Everyone in the "company" is happy because its an insane amount of money they are making, until the undercover vice man hires the company to do a fantasy act...

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Contract is signed.

"Watch closely as they stand and he reaches out to shake her hand. She ignores it, stretches her arms upward and around his neck, pressing her body tightly to his. She gives him a deep probing kiss while toying with his hair. She breaks away, turns, takes the file from the table and walks away. He's left weak kneed, stunned, trying to regain his composure enough to walk out the door."

"This is just the beginning. They will be spending a great deal of time together as she closely and very personally manages the two year contract. The better the contract does, the further he'll get with your sister."

Sonny is equally stunned and weak kneed as he listens to his mother describe his sister's actions while trying not to be distracted by her own heaving cleavage and short hemline.