The three brothers and the slutty same-age stepmom

[John_Vandermeer]

When three young brothers —19, 20, and 21yo or so—find themselves cockteased hard by their dad’s new hot trophy wife—who at 23yo, is a girl young enough to be their dad’s new step daughter, rather than their own new stepmom—they start competing just as hard for her undivided attention and favors. It rapidly escalates, and in the process of coming out the winner, each is as willing to thoroughly cuck their dad, as they are to frame each other for being solely guilty of it! Will the new girl of the house tear the family apart? Or will the boys, and man, learn to share?

 

[000zing]

Of course, this has never been done before...

 

[sirhugs]

When three young brothers find themselves cockteased hard by their dad’s new hot trophy wife—a girl young enough to be their dad’s new step daughter, rather than their own new stepmom—they start competing just as hard for her undivided attention and favors. It rapidly escalates, and in the process of coming out the winner, each is as willing to thoroughly cuck their dad, as they are to frame each other for being solely guilty of it! Will the new girl of the house tear the family apart? Or will the boys, and man, learn to share?

by "girl" I presume you mean a young woman over 18?

 

[sirhugs]

Of course, this has never been done before...

even if it has, it can be done in many different ways, especially with multiple characters involved.

 

[John_Vandermeer]

by "girl" I presume you mean a young woman over 18?

Of course. No need to spec ages too hard, but edits added.

 

[000zing]

even if it has, it can be done in many different ways, especially with multiple characters involved.

So this is not the 'Story Ideas' forum but the 'Story Many (not so) Different Ways' forum. Who knew?
Gotcha...

 

[sirhugs]

So this is not the 'Story Ideas' forum but the 'Story Many (not so) Different Ways' forum. Who knew?
Gotcha...

the idea is to build on an idea, even if it starts out from something done before.
Remember that Shakespeare stole most of his plot ideas from prior works. It was what he brought to those ideas that was fresh which makes him the one that we remember when the earlier versions are so obscure they are virtually forgotten.

 

[000zing]

the idea is to build on an idea, even if it starts out from something done before.
Remember that Shakespeare stole most of his plot ideas from prior works. It was what he brought to those ideas that was fresh which makes him the one that we remember when the earlier versions are so obscure they are virtually forgotten.

Which this OP doesn't.

 

[sirhugs]

Which this OP doesn't.

The OP doesn't necessarily need to do that. As long as there is room for others to join in, or build a story without necessarily joining in.

Taking the OP idea, here are ten questions each of which could lead to creating a different story, which if well written, ould be fresh. My math is rusty but I think that suggests up to 100 variants just from these (slightly less because not all fit together, somewhat more because the answers may suggest multiple sub-variants:
1. Do the three brothers compete for step-mom's attention (and the chance to fuck her)?
2. Does she have sex with all three, or just one?
3. Does this lead to group sex?
4. Where does the extra-marital sex take place?
5. Is the cheating a one-off or does it become an affair or three?
6. Is there a pregnancy twist?
7.If so, who is the father?
8. Does Dad figure out what is going on?
9. If so, what does he do?
10. As asked in the OP, does it tear the house apart, or do they learn to share?

not saying these lead to the best variants, and certainly they are not the only ones, but as I created the list in under 5 minutes, I hope you get that it illustrates how Story Ideas can work well. Just need to think positively, not negatively.

 

[NuclearFairy]

The OP doesn't necessarily need to do that. As long as there is room for others to join in, or build a story without necessarily joining in.

Taking the OP idea, here are ten questions each of which could lead to creating a different story, which if well written, ould be fresh. My math is rusty but I think that suggests up to 100 variants just from these (slightly less because not all fit together, somewhat more because the answers may suggest multiple sub-variants:
1. Do the three brothers compete for step-mom's attention (and the chance to fuck her)?
2. Does she have sex with all three, or just one?
3. Does this lead to group sex?
4. Where does the extra-marital sex take place?
5. Is the cheating a one-off or does it become an affair or three?
6. Is there a pregnancy twist?
7.If so, who is the father?
8. Does Dad figure out what is going on?
9. If so, what does he do?
10. As asked in the OP, does it tear the house apart, or do they learn to share?

not saying these lead to the best variants, and certainly they are not the only ones, but as I created the list in under 5 minutes, I hope you get that it illustrates how Story Ideas can work well. Just need to think positively, not negatively.

Just as a for instance: I'm sure that there are some that think stepmom's sister should show up and seduce her away from all these competitive men.

 

[Rob_Royale]

This feels like the lead-in to a Supernatural episode. She's some sort of demon that gets off on causing strife within families and purposely sets herself up with a older guy with adult kids. Of course she's sleeping with the kids, trying to turn them against each other.

 

[KimAwakened]

The OP doesn't necessarily need to do that. As long as there is room for others to join in, or build a story without necessarily joining in.

Original postings don't need to describe an idea? Really? Methinks you're thinking a trifle too "positively".

Ok, if that's the case I'll put up a thread entitled "Boy meets girl" and then leave it blank. I'll let you and others... "join in".

 

[sirhugs]

Original postings don't need to describe an idea? Really? Methinks you're thinking a trifle too "positively".

Ok, if that's the case I'll put up a thread entitled "Boy meets girl" and then leave it blank. I'll let you and others... "join in".

blank space would be taking it further than even I do...and I do take it pretty far.
But here's a fast ten for you:
1. He thinks he is the last virgin in the world; she thinks the same- will they hook up?
2. they meet at their parents wedding to each other...next thing you know they hook up in the coat closet
3. they are both transsexual
4. she askes if he'd like to meet her tentacle monster.
5. The morning after, he discovers she is his tutor
6. the part, only to meet years later. Her son looks a lot like him.
7. A thunderstorm breaks out and they seek shelter together.
8. she falls off the balcony into his arms
9. she falls into his arms, crushing him. She survives, heartbroken
10. he takes her lingerie shopping.

 

[John_Vandermeer]

This feels like the lead-in to a Supernatural episode. She's some sort of demon that gets off on causing strife within families and purposely sets herself up with a older guy with adult kids. Of course she's sleeping with the kids, trying to turn them against each other.

Indeed, an erotic thriller turn is she is a gold digging femme fatale and the whole thing is a seduce and destroy plot. First seduces oldest brother, pretends she likes it rough and makes it look like its rape everytime dad/hubby is away. Manipulates younger brothers into murder, with the tantalizing promise of her favor. Then turns the younger brothers against each other in jealousy. When hubby finds himself sonless, he takes his own life… femme fatale is so much richer, and ready to strike again…

 

[sirhugs]

Indeed, an erotic thriller turn is she is a gold digging femme fatale and the whole thing is a seduce and destroy plot. First seduces oldest brother, pretends she likes it rough and makes it look like its rape everytime dad/hubby is away. Manipulates younger brothers into murder, with the tantalizing promise of her favor. Then turns the younger brothers against each other in jealousy. When hubby finds himself sonless, he takes his own life… femme fatale is so much richer, and ready to strike again…

don't think that would get past the Lit guidelines on violence.