monique_minx
Passionate Disgrace
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Ella Enchanted Style Idea:
Psychological conditioning so powerful that she cannot lie when commanded to speak the truth, nano tech that reinforces utter obedience - it detects when she hesitates and sends a jolt of electricity through her brain to remind her to obey and if she still resists, it sends her into a seizure. Having grown up like this, it has a powerful hold over her. She rarely has a seizure anymore.
An early experimental project for espionage, she was rejected because she was only able to lie to some questions. A forceful enough command would see her spill her guts - she was unworthy for their needs and discarded to the streets. Maybe they'd perfect the project later. Unfortunately nothing was undone, she was quickly taken advantage of by many people and finally a pimp found her. She was perfect, never turned down a single client and spread her legs whenever he told her to. Wore what he told her to. Performed when he told her to. Handed money over when he told her to.
She's his favourite whore.
Though she'd never tell him how much she despises him for what he does to her for fear of what he might compel her to do next.
Then she has a very attractive male client whose interest runs in Dominance and Sadism, she's never had a client quite like him. She's never experienced the things he has her do. What he makes her say. How he talks to her. How he makes her feel. There are rules with him, structure and understanding that's clear. Though he is so detached from her initially, she's a whore, he pays and gets what he wants and she leaves - all business...right?
It should be anyway. But she finds herself more eager when he hires her for a session, each time more thrilling than the last. She wants to stay and he always sends her away. And then he finds himself more keen to hire her, he slowly works out her secret over time. The tech and conditioning is top secret, it's not common knowledge and even her pimp doesn't know how to wield it, wield her completely. She could be so much more than she is. Her pimp is wasting her talents but this Dom will figure that out eventually.
Notes: Would require a co writer willing to write both pimp and Dom roles. I foresee it being quite psychological and intense, violent in places and humiliating and degrading in others (but I love that idea). I'd flesh out that their sessions would dabble in him teaching her to be his perfect sub strictly, like eye contact restriction, speech restriction, blindfolds, positions, fun and different types of Dominance that don't get as much air time but can still be quite intimate. Because she'd obey any command instantly, he'd have to ask her a lot of questions to find out how she actually feels, she'd also let him practically destroy her which is up to him to figure out.
I also foresee the pimp and Dom clashing eventually. At first they'd have a good business arrangement and it'd be far down the track when feelings develop between her and the Dom.
Just quickly sketched this out, might add to it or invite ideas from a potential co writer if I get one.
I was thinking my Ella creation would either reside alone or wherever her pimp would choose, having been given up for adoption as an infant which made her easily government accessible for their experiment.
I sorta see the Dom and Pimp as contrasting characters too, the pimp would be cruel but unstructured (uses her very differently too, publicly and all) and the Dom only cruel in essence that it serves a scene.
I wanted to go for somewhat, but not outrageous, future tech. And not too far off of current government/living style. Open to suggestions if you wanted to add something particular to the story though.
My idea for the psychological conditioning she would have endured would be severe end, like MKUltra trauma training with drugs and torture etc. So the nano technology acts more as a safeguard and doesn't actively need to fire except in really extreme cases (like if she was asked to shoot her best friend in the head for instance - not that she really has friends, she's quite isolated in my mind, never has opportunity to make friends, almost starved for kindness but doesn't miss it cause she doesn't know what it is - I think the Sadist Dom would capitalise on that, her response to praise would go from uncomfortable to seeking imo).
Two title ideas:
Project L.U.C.I.D. - It stands for Linguistic and Universal Command Integration Directive
Project Mnemosyne – named after the Greek goddess of memory, tying to reprogramming.
Was thinking naming it after the government project that caused the entire situation would be pretty cool.
Speech - Lying versus truths and wishes versus orders:
- If she lies when asked an imperative such as 'tell me how you feel' then it begins a cascade failure:
- If a cashier was to wish her well with 'have a nice day' then it's not an imperative and her system can ignore the wish.
- Double edged sword: if the cashier was to say jokingly 'smile for me' - her system 'could' read it as an order which makes the ambiguity a little bit of fun!
She can outwit her own system on occasion if she wants to like if she's ordered to sit down - she could perch on the edge of the chair instead of on it properly. Told to 'stay here' she doesn't have to simply freeze in place, she can turn her back etc. Being told to be quiet - she might stay unnervingly silent for hours. She can also exploit ambiguity - 'tell me what you want', she could answer 'a glass of water' because that's still honest.
But it's exhausting because she has to think her way out constantly and her unconscious brain wants her to obey so if she can't figure out how to outwit her system in mere milliseconds, it will trigger the chip. It would only come to mind in the most mundane circumstances typically, she wouldn't think it under stress. And she has been conditioned her whole life for obedience so she mostly only uses it to ensure she behaves in a societally acceptable manner.
Essentially the Dom has to teach her who she is because she never had a 'before' in terms of the conditioning, she's an unshaped canvas which, imo, creates a darker intimacy.
Her neural implant was placed at the age of around 11 to ensure teenage rebellion never occurred in order to continue her training. She never had friends, family or close attachments so she's emotionally stunted, she only had handlers and teachers. Affection usually comes in the form of exploitation so she's unprepared for the real thing.
Espionage Training:
Name: Devina - from Latin, it means 'devoted' (she has no last name, she was never given one and never sighted her birth certificate to tell anyone otherwise - a catch 22 installed by the government so no one would ever be able to trace her identity, birth family or otherwise)
Designation: Subject D-47
Age: 20
Psychological conditioning so powerful that she cannot lie when commanded to speak the truth, nano tech that reinforces utter obedience - it detects when she hesitates and sends a jolt of electricity through her brain to remind her to obey and if she still resists, it sends her into a seizure. Having grown up like this, it has a powerful hold over her. She rarely has a seizure anymore.
An early experimental project for espionage, she was rejected because she was only able to lie to some questions. A forceful enough command would see her spill her guts - she was unworthy for their needs and discarded to the streets. Maybe they'd perfect the project later. Unfortunately nothing was undone, she was quickly taken advantage of by many people and finally a pimp found her. She was perfect, never turned down a single client and spread her legs whenever he told her to. Wore what he told her to. Performed when he told her to. Handed money over when he told her to.
She's his favourite whore.
Though she'd never tell him how much she despises him for what he does to her for fear of what he might compel her to do next.
Then she has a very attractive male client whose interest runs in Dominance and Sadism, she's never had a client quite like him. She's never experienced the things he has her do. What he makes her say. How he talks to her. How he makes her feel. There are rules with him, structure and understanding that's clear. Though he is so detached from her initially, she's a whore, he pays and gets what he wants and she leaves - all business...right?
It should be anyway. But she finds herself more eager when he hires her for a session, each time more thrilling than the last. She wants to stay and he always sends her away. And then he finds himself more keen to hire her, he slowly works out her secret over time. The tech and conditioning is top secret, it's not common knowledge and even her pimp doesn't know how to wield it, wield her completely. She could be so much more than she is. Her pimp is wasting her talents but this Dom will figure that out eventually.
Notes: Would require a co writer willing to write both pimp and Dom roles. I foresee it being quite psychological and intense, violent in places and humiliating and degrading in others (but I love that idea). I'd flesh out that their sessions would dabble in him teaching her to be his perfect sub strictly, like eye contact restriction, speech restriction, blindfolds, positions, fun and different types of Dominance that don't get as much air time but can still be quite intimate. Because she'd obey any command instantly, he'd have to ask her a lot of questions to find out how she actually feels, she'd also let him practically destroy her which is up to him to figure out.
I also foresee the pimp and Dom clashing eventually. At first they'd have a good business arrangement and it'd be far down the track when feelings develop between her and the Dom.
Just quickly sketched this out, might add to it or invite ideas from a potential co writer if I get one.
I was thinking my Ella creation would either reside alone or wherever her pimp would choose, having been given up for adoption as an infant which made her easily government accessible for their experiment.
I sorta see the Dom and Pimp as contrasting characters too, the pimp would be cruel but unstructured (uses her very differently too, publicly and all) and the Dom only cruel in essence that it serves a scene.
I wanted to go for somewhat, but not outrageous, future tech. And not too far off of current government/living style. Open to suggestions if you wanted to add something particular to the story though.
My idea for the psychological conditioning she would have endured would be severe end, like MKUltra trauma training with drugs and torture etc. So the nano technology acts more as a safeguard and doesn't actively need to fire except in really extreme cases (like if she was asked to shoot her best friend in the head for instance - not that she really has friends, she's quite isolated in my mind, never has opportunity to make friends, almost starved for kindness but doesn't miss it cause she doesn't know what it is - I think the Sadist Dom would capitalise on that, her response to praise would go from uncomfortable to seeking imo).
Two title ideas:
Project L.U.C.I.D. - It stands for Linguistic and Universal Command Integration Directive
Project Mnemosyne – named after the Greek goddess of memory, tying to reprogramming.
Was thinking naming it after the government project that caused the entire situation would be pretty cool.
Speech - Lying versus truths and wishes versus orders:
- If she lies when asked an imperative such as 'tell me how you feel' then it begins a cascade failure:
- Neurological fire: blinding migraine pain spikes across her skull.
- Respiratory lock: throat tightens, making speech or breath catch.
- Muscle spasms: hands tremble, knees buckle, jaw clenches involuntarily.
- Overstimulation: ringing in the ears, blurred vision, pounding heartbeat.
- If a cashier was to wish her well with 'have a nice day' then it's not an imperative and her system can ignore the wish.
- Double edged sword: if the cashier was to say jokingly 'smile for me' - her system 'could' read it as an order which makes the ambiguity a little bit of fun!
She can outwit her own system on occasion if she wants to like if she's ordered to sit down - she could perch on the edge of the chair instead of on it properly. Told to 'stay here' she doesn't have to simply freeze in place, she can turn her back etc. Being told to be quiet - she might stay unnervingly silent for hours. She can also exploit ambiguity - 'tell me what you want', she could answer 'a glass of water' because that's still honest.
But it's exhausting because she has to think her way out constantly and her unconscious brain wants her to obey so if she can't figure out how to outwit her system in mere milliseconds, it will trigger the chip. It would only come to mind in the most mundane circumstances typically, she wouldn't think it under stress. And she has been conditioned her whole life for obedience so she mostly only uses it to ensure she behaves in a societally acceptable manner.
Essentially the Dom has to teach her who she is because she never had a 'before' in terms of the conditioning, she's an unshaped canvas which, imo, creates a darker intimacy.
Her neural implant was placed at the age of around 11 to ensure teenage rebellion never occurred in order to continue her training. She never had friends, family or close attachments so she's emotionally stunted, she only had handlers and teachers. Affection usually comes in the form of exploitation so she's unprepared for the real thing.
Espionage Training:
- Gymnastics
- Martial Arts
- Languages and accents
- Photographic memory exercises
- Surveillance
- Acting and mimicry
- Social manipulation skills - charm, seduction, blending in
- Sexual obedience training - destroy any illusion of innocence and prepare her for honeytrap roles
- Kill - only on command, she was taught how to kill quickly, quietly and cleanly (and with very clear orders so that someone begging for their life wouldn't be able to override that).
- She would have endured stress trials to ensure her conditioning held up in any situation.
Name: Devina - from Latin, it means 'devoted' (she has no last name, she was never given one and never sighted her birth certificate to tell anyone otherwise - a catch 22 installed by the government so no one would ever be able to trace her identity, birth family or otherwise)
Designation: Subject D-47
Age: 20
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but I suppose he is designed to scare kids somewhat (never seen it either). 
