Help with story Feedback

[_Creamy_]

Hey I’ve currently been working on a series that I’d love to continue and have a strong focus on story. If anyone would like to help and tell me their thoughts on it (I know my writing needs work), but I’d love to hear thoughts or discuss directly

 

[_Creamy_]

Hey I’ve currently been working on a series that I’d love to continue and have a strong focus on story. If anyone would like to help and tell me their thoughts on it (I know my writing needs work), but I’d love to hear thoughts or discuss directly

https://www.literotica.com/authors/_Creamy_/works/stories

(My works)

 

[HaralLuhhan]

Anything specific you want people to read and comment on?

 

[_Creamy_]

Anything specific you want people to read and comment on?

Really all of it, I'd really like someone to discuss the story with you you wanna PM me

 

[HaralLuhhan]

You can pm me if you want, or discuss here. I havent had a chance to read it yet.

 

[_Creamy_]

You can pm me if you want, or discuss here. I havent had a chance to read it yet.

I PMed, would love to discuss when you get the chance