M_K_Babalon
Harbinger of smut
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If you've read enough, fake it, till you make it. Figure out.
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I don't just write orgasms, I write about writing orgasms: WIWAW: Orgasms, Bang or Whimper.
I'm in the "white flashes and jerking hips" camp. But then you also have to describe how the orgasm ends: it's not just a bang, it's also the whimper at the end. This one is from one of my most recent stories:
This is exceedingly prevalent, yes.
1 ~ Hot babe Girl sees guy.
2 ~ Guy does nothing.
3 ~ Girl mounts onto guy.
4 ~ Guy provides large penis.
5 ~ Girl rides guy.
6 ~ Guy does nothing.
7 ~ Girl feeds her big tiddies to guy.
8 ~ Guy gives them a suck.
9 ~ Girl cums everywhere soaking the sheets (proving that Guy is the world's greatest lay).
10 ~ Guy cums simultaneously (because there's no way in Hades that he'd ever cum before she does, guy has perfect timing).
The guy readers all give this a 5 for its realism and hotness, but the girl readers (the real ones) back out the moment that they realize that Guy is nothing but a goddamn dildo that requires food and water. : /
Hey guys! Give us some better men, will ya?
So you want us to fake orgasms...? No one really does that, do they?If you've read enough, fake it, till you make it. Figure out.
What a lot of EmiliesThere are of course a million ways to write them, and you'll probably get a million examples here.
Ill provide one. For this one I went for less graphic, more flowery language:
With her free hand, Emily found her aching sex. Warm embers soon became a raging fire as she stoked the flames of her desire, the nerve endings of her swollen nub lit up with need like a billion candles burning.
Emily desperately tried not to rattle the bed as her fingers danced along her velvet folds, but as her passion built, that became more difficult. Her body trembled with pleasure, legs shaking, toes curled tight.
Emily buried her face in her pillow as her orgasm gripped her, trying to stifle her cries.
She sighed softly as the final waves subsided, her body now relaxed and still as she caught her breath.
That are a natural resource.What a lot of Emilies![]()
I have 'em tense up and pass out for a few minutes.
My wife has started to complain about me taking notes midway through, and asking for her input during and after. But for a while there I was getting some very useful ideas.
Are you religious?I think "OMG!" during an orgasm is BS. Personally, when I come the last person I'm thinking about is God.
Sure…Pure coincidence I assure you...![]()
My wife is probably even less religious than I am and she's screamed out "oh God" many times during our 30 year marriage.I think "OMG!" during an orgasm is BS. Personally, when I come the last person I'm thinking about is God.
How about: “Oh my fucking God!”I think "OMG!" during an orgasm is BS. Personally, when I come the last person I'm thinking about is God.
This is sublime.. best of its kind. Literary, without even mentioning once that she is having an orgasm. I bow at your feet, milady!!"She seemed far away now, falling low, and lower, as if the only way out of this was if she fell through the world, becoming the world, and all the while, little screams, like disembodied voices - some hers, some uncannily strange and wild, like the howls of she-wolves in gothic forests - and further she fell, into the dark light of this long profound silence, yes, silence, despite the howling wolves, despite the distant wailing, like a midnight dream, but no sooner had she fallen into this silence the voices would clamour again, submerging her in a trance of flaming skin, and flailing limbs, and she rolled back, and found that if she stayed still the flood would take her, and she would, miraculously, fly, soar, sing, and then the wolves howlede again, like an ancient prothalamion, wrapping her in the moistened universe of joy."
I do the occasional vocalization if I think it'll add to the hotness of the moment. But stuff like groaning, moaning, grunting, panting and the likes I just describe rather than trying to vocalize them.Here is an issue I am struggling with.
How to write an orgasm.
I've read a bunch of stories here and I've seen all sorts of variations on this. Some authors simply don't, meaning that the orgasms aren't written out at all. Some authors simply write the physical impact of the Big O on the particular character. (white flashes, thrusting/jerking hips, fluid expulsion)
Others attempt something and I've seen variations of:
AHHHHH
Ohhhhhh
HYNG
HNNG
and many other letter combinations.
...and the ever popular Oh My God!
How do you write your characters orgasms?